Incest Sangeeta

[Frieren]

Ye kahani, sangeeta ki safar ko dikhayegi... Kaise ek bholi bhaali madhyam warg(middle class) ki aurat samaaj ke banaye gaye niyamo ko na chahte huye bhi taar taar kar baithi aur kis tarah uske vyavhaar me parivartan aana shuru hua... Ki baat iss hadd tak pahuch gayi jaha use apne jeevan ka sabse mahatvapurn faisla lena pada...

Jiss faisle ke ek taraf kuaa tha to dusri taraf khaai.. Aur use unme se kisi ek ko apnana tha.

Lekin kya ye faisla uska dimaag lega? Ya fir uska dill? Ya fir uski hawas? ... Inhi baaton ko janne ke liye chalte hai sangeeta ke iss safar par....

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[Iron Man]

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Ab tak--


Pichhle adhyaay me aapne padha ki sangeeta aur Rahul ka ambala ke rahasmay ghatnaon ki kadi me aagman ho chuka hai.

Raaste me Rahul ki mulaqat apni junior Fatima se huyi jo ki usse bas ek class niche 11th me padhti hai. Uska ek bhai bhi hai jo ki CBI officer hai.

Aakhir me sangeeta ke phone pe ek baar firse kisi anjaan shaqs ka message aaya jiska pata Rahul ko lag chuka hai kyunki usne apni maa sangeeta ke phone ko hack kar rakha tha.

Kyu kis liye iske jawab filhal to kisi ke pass nhi hai. Chaliye fir chalte hai in sawalo ko janne ke liye dobara iss safar par.


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*Thak Thak Thak Thak*

"Sangeeta? Sangeeta?"

*kaun disha me leke chala re Batohiya kaun disha me*

Darwaze pe kisi ke pukarne ki awaaz sunkar Sangeeta ki need khuli. Uth kar dekhi to use pata chala uske phone par kisi ka call bhi aa raha tha.

"Hmm? Neha ka call? Neha kyu call kar rahi hai?"

Samay dekhne par pata chala ki dopahar ke 2 baj chuke the. Darwaze par shayad Rupa thi jo awaaz laga rahi thi.

Sangeeta saree pehankar darwaza kholi, samne dekhi to Rupa saj dhaj ke taiyar khadi thi.



Rupa- Uff kya kar rahi thi Sangeeta!?, pata hai main aur Neha 10 minute se darwaza khat khata rahe hai. Neha ne tumko 3-4 baar call bhi kiya hai, kyu sahi keh rahi hu na?

Rupa Neha se apni baat me sehmati leti hai, jo ki Rupa ke saath hi aayi thi.

"Ohh sorry, wo pata nhi itni der neend kaise lagi reh gayi. Aao andar baitho" Sangeeta apni aankhe malte huye boli.

"Baithne ka abhi waqt nhi hai!.. Hum dono Mall ja rahe shopping karne, aate waqt restaurant se sabhi ke liye khana bhi le lenge, tum bhi chalo na humare saath" Rupa Sangeeta ka haath pakad kar boli.

"Hmm thik hai, thodi der ruko fresh hokar aati hu" Der to sach me ho gayi thi, 2 baj chuke the aur ab tak kisi ne khana nhi khaya tha.

Rahul bhi bhukha hoga ye soch kar Sangeeta khud ko man hi man kosne lagti hai isme, (uff main Aaram karne ke chakkar me sab kuch gadbad hi kar deti.) Sangeeta khud se man hi man boli.

Sangeeta jaldi se fresh hokar ek blue color ki saree aur sleeveless blouse pehan li. Hamesha ki tarah halka touch up karne ke baad teeno Room se nikal gaye.



"Rahul aur Ashish nhi dikh rahe?" Sangeeta raaste me puchti hai.

Neha- Ashish to shayad so raha hai, use kayi baar call ki thi but wo recieve hi nhi kiya. Aur Rahul ko nhi uthayi kyunki Raat bhar wo jaag hi raha tha isiliye mujhe sahi nhi laga.

"Ohh sahi kiya, waise hum log ja kaha rahe hai?" Sangeeta soch kar boli.

Rupa- Pehle to hum dono ne decide kiya tha ki campus ke bahar jaate hai Lekin fir wapas aane me deri ho jaati isiliye entrance par jo mall aur resturent humne subah dekha tha wahi jaane ka decision liya.

"Hmm sahi kiya" Sangeeta bhi apni sehmati deti hai.

Dopahar ka waqt tha isiliye niche jyada log dikh bhi nhi rahe the. Aur jo bhi dikh rahe the, wo shayad koi jaruri samaan lene ke liye hi nikle the.

Aasmaan se kaale baadal hat chuke the Lekin suraj abhi bhi safed badalon ke piche nukka chuppi khel raha tha jiss wajah se vatavaran kaafi thanda aur suhana tha.

Thodi hi der me sabhi log entrance par pahuch gaye. "Mera khyaal hai ki sabse pehle hum log Mall chalte hai fir jaate waqt khana pack karwa lenge?" Rupa kehti hai.

"Hmm thik hai, par shopping itni jaruri hai abhi!?" Sangeeta kehti hai.

"Babu mosay har Ladki ka sringaar hota hai shopping, use kaise chor sakti huhu. Bas thodi der ghum lete hai, kuch achha mila to lenge nhi to wapas chalenge. Waise bhi aise jagah hamesha thodi ghumne aayenge....hahaha" Rupa has kar kehti hai. Jis par neha aur sangeeta bhi hasne lagte hai.

Mall me enter karne ke baad sabhi Ladies section me chale jaate hai. Jaha Rupa apne liye kuch makeup ke samaan dekh rahi thi to wahi Neha salwaar suit aur leggings dekh rahi thi. Insab se alag Sangeeta ko kuch lena to tha nhi isiliye samay bitane ke liye wo saree dekh rahi thi.

"Sangeeta!..Sangeeta!!" Rupa pukarti hai Sangeeta ko. Jise sunkar Sangeeta uske pass chali jaati hai.

"Hmm bolo! Kya hua Rupa?" Sangeeta dekhti hai Rupa ne apne haath me ek Lip gloss liya hua tha.

"Sangeeta ye dekho! Ye tum par bahut achha lagega!!" Rupa ek night suit Sangeeta ko dikhati hai.

"Ye!?" Sangeeta hairaan hokar uss Night dress ko dekhti hai.

"Haa, ye tum par bahut achha lagega. Trust me"

"Hmm.. But main aise dress nhi pehanti hu Rupa, ye aaj kal ke bachho ke liye hai." Sangeeta uss dress ko achhe se dekh kar kehti hai.

"Ek baar aap try kar ke to dekho, aaj kal ye common hai aur sach kahu to tum bhi abhi young hi ho, pls try it Sangeeta" Rupa excited hokar kehti hai.

Sangeeta ko samajh nhi aa raha tha ki ab wo Rupa ko kaise kahe ki aise dress me use comfortable feel nhi hota hai.

"Rupa, ye mujh par achha nhi lagega. Aur fir ye uncomfortable bhi hai tum samajh rahi hona mera matlab!?" Sangeeta use kehti hai .

Darasal wo night suit T-shirt aur pajama tha. Aurr Sangeeta apne badan ke kataav ko achhe se janti thi Isiliye wo mana kar rahi thi.

"Uncomfortable?.. Lekin aunty ise pehan kar bahar thodi jana hai?, Mam sahi keh rahi hai ye aap par bahut achha lagega. I know aapne kabhi try nhi kiya hai ise, but meri mom bhi ye pehanti hai and she looks good" Neha dono ki baatein sunkar beech me tapak kar kehti hai.

"Neha sahi keh rahi hai, ek baar try karke dekho kya pata tumhe bhi pasand aaye!?" Rupa kehti hai.

(Uff pakka ye dress mujhe tight hogi hamesha ki tarah) Sangeeta dress ko dekh kar man hi man kehti hai.

"Achha thik hai, ab itna tum dono keh rahi ho to Le leti hu. Lekin iske alawa aur kuch nhi." Sangeeta aakhir me haar maan kar Rupa ki baat maan hi leti hai.

"Ye huyi na baat!! Tum bas ek mahine mere saath raho puri tarah change kar dungi main tumhe...Hahah" Rupa khushi se kehti hai.

"Fir to mujhe tum dono se dur hi rehna hoga.. Hahah" Sangeeta bhi has kar kehti hai.

"Aaj raat to Rahul ke hosh udd jayenge tumhe iss dress me dekh kar, uski shakl dekhne layak hogi... Hahaha" Rupa majaak me kehti hai.

"Hahaha, He will be shocked definitely" Neha bhi haste huye uss dress ko hand bucket me daal leti hai.

"Ha Ha, bechara bolega ki humne uski TV serial wali Maa ko Filmo ki heroine wali Maa me badal diya.. Hahaha" Rupa tease karke kehti hai.

"Hahaha, mujhe bhi nhi pata wo kaise react karega" (bas ummid karti hu wo Apne papa ki tarah Naraz na ho jaaye- udaas man se Sangeeta khud se kehti hai)

"Neha tumne kya liya hai?" Rupa puchti hai.

"K-kuch khaas nhi bas salwaar kameez li hu, wo ghar par kuch kapde chhut gaye hai isiliye...ch-chaliye billing kara lete hai" Ye keh kar Neha turant apni najre niche karke aage badh kar Billing karane chali jaati.



Rupa ko thoda ajeeb lagta hai lekin wo jaahir nhi karti.

Thodi hi der me sabhi bill pay karke Mall se nikal jaate hai. Sangeeta waqt dekhti hai to 1/2 ghante lag gaye the unhe Mall me. Isiliye teeno bina deri kiye Restaurant se khana pack karwa kar wapas Room ke liye nikal jaate hai.

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6 saal pehle..

Location - Ambala


Shiv- Ab aap log ja sakte hai, CBI yaha se iss case ko handle karegi.

Inspector- Ji wo thik hai, Lekin ye humare Area me huyi hai to kuch file to bnani hi hogi hume. Ab aap hume ye bhi nhi jatayenge ki kis karan se inki death huyi ya ek sucide tha, to hum file me kya daalenge fir!?

Inspector jo ki uss ilaake ke incharge the wo shivraj chauhaan se ye baat kehte hai, Murder/sucide location par jaha Mr. Jasuja desh ke mashhoor patrakaar me se ek ki laash mili thi unki apni car me.

"Chinta mat kijiye, iski ek report file aapke thane me pahucha di jayegi." Shiv unke kandhe par haath rakh kar kehta hai.

"Ab aap keh rahe hai to hume kya aapatti hogi Sir, bas dhyaan rakhiyega ki humare thaane ka naam khraab na ho." Inspector vinti ke lehje me shivraj se kehta hai.

Thaanedaar 40-45 umar ka lag raha tha, uske baal aur daadi halke safed ho chuke the aur to aur uska pet bhi nikla hua tha.

"Jii chinta mat kijiye, isme aapki koi galti nhi hai. Murder ya sucide kahi bhi kabhi bhi ho sakta hai aur isme sirf un logo ki galti hai jinhone ye kaam kiya hai. Aapke thaane ka naam khraab nhi hoga viswas rakhiye" Shiv unhe aswasan dilata hai.

Thanedaar ko shiv ki baaton par pura bharosa tha isiliye wo bina kuch kahe apne saathiyo ke saath nikal jata hai.

Unke jaane ke baad shiv wapas Laash ke pass aata hai jo abhi bhi car me padi huyi thi.

Raat ke kareeb 9 ya 9:30 ho rahe the uss waqt, ye kaafi jyada remote area tha isiliye ab tak kisi ko iski khabar nhi lagi thi. 2-3 local aadmi hi thodi dur se dekh rahe the baaki media ko abhi tak iss baat ki koi khabar nhi thi.

Chaand ki roshni Nadi me behte huye pani me jagmaga rahi thi jisse aaspass ke najadeek jagah me halki chandni roshni thi. Nadi ke aas pass kewal kachhi sadak thi aur fir unse dur khet khaliyan.

Shiv apne subordinate ke saath uss car ki talashi le raha tha. Jaha uska subordinate 25-27 ka naujavaan najar aa raha tha.

"Lagta nhi hai jor jabardasti se ise maara gaya hai. Car me bhi kuch nhi najar aa raha jisse kuch pata chale!. Tumne forensic team ko call kiya ya nhi abhi tak!?" Shiv kehta hai.

"Yes sir, aapke baad maine unhe hi sabse pehle maine call kiya hai. Dr. James apni team ke saath aa rahe honge kuch hi der me." Mohan kehta hai jo ki subordinate tha.

"Hmm.. Tumhe fir forensic report ka hi wait karna hoga. Ye itne dino se gayab the aur achanak inki laash mili hai, isiliye mujhe nhi lagta ye sucide hai kisi bhi najariye. Aur dekho inhone normal T-shirt aur pant pehan rakhi hai, it means agar inka kidnap hua hoga to inke ghar ke aas pass se hua hoga." Shiv Mr. Jasuja ki Shirt aur pant ki taraf ishara karke kehta hai.

"Yes sir, but kya aapko nhi lagta hum log bahut jaldi conclusion par pahuch rahe hai?... Mr. Jasuja ka apni ex-wife Radhika se bhi Alimony ko lekar court me case chal raha hai. Ho sakta hai uske kuch karan hua ho, hum sabhi ko malum hai Mr. Jasuja is quite rich too?" Mohan sawal karta hai.

Shiv jasuja ki car ke gate ko band kar deta hai aur sochte huye kehta hai "Personally main kahu to ye meri guts hai aur kuch nhi, kyunki main hamesha apni guts par hi case proceed karta hu iss wajah se Meri soch ye kehti hai ye ek murder hai, aur iska reason kahi na kahi Government ke saath connected hai. Baaki jaisa ki tum jante ho main ab CBI officer nhi hu. Isiliye tum jaise chahe waise iss case ko continue kar sakte ho, Aaj mera aakhri din tha Ek CBI officer ke taur par Aur ye aakhri case." Shiv ki awaaz me halki udaasi thi jo saaf jhalak rahi thi.



Mohan bhi shiv ke jaane se thoda udaas najar aata hai. " Aapke jaane se sir jo feel ho raha hai mujhe wo main bata bhi nhi sakta, pichhle 4 saalon me aapke saath maine jitne bhi cases aur mission kiye hai sabhi Ab ek yaad ban kar reh jayenge. Mujhe kabhi nhi laga tha ki CBI jaise job me kabhi koi emotional connection hota hoga! Lekin jis tarah aapne mujhe guide kiya hai aur seekhaya hai wo shayad ek bada bhai hi kar sakta hai. Thanks a lot, main waada karta hu sir main aapki hi tarah ek kaabil officer banunga."

Ye baat sach thi, shiv office ke har staff ko apni family hi manta tha. Yahi karan tha ki wo jyada dangerous mission par akele hi kaam karta tha. Lekin ab sab bas ek yaadein reh jayegi shayad inlogo se kabhi baat ho jaaye par wo office me ek saath baith kar hasi majaak karna wo pal shayad hi kabhi wapas mil payega.

"Ab bas kar yaar, tum to mujhe emotional hi kar doge... Hahaha. Chalo lagta hai forensic team bhi aa gayi hai, main ab chalta hu. Hmm...Bas ek salah dunga, Akele kabhi kisi case par kaam mat karna. Chahe wo kitna bhi muskil ya personal kyu na ho!, kyunki har insaan ki koi kamjori hoti hai aur wo kab kaise samne aa jaye iska koi thikana nhi" Shiv use jaate jaate bhi ek asaan lekin jaruri salaah dete huye jata hai jo usne apni puri CBI ki journey me seekha tha.

"Jee jaisa aap kahe, main iss baat ka bilkul dhyaan rakhunga." Mohan apne maayus chehre par ek jhuthi muskaan lakar kehta hai.

Isi beech Forensic team se 2-3 car aa chuki thi, jisme se Desh ke sabse bade Surgeon Mr. James Robert beech wali car se nikalte hai.

James bhi *gyaansagar* ke prodigy reh chuke the apne jamane me. Unhone shivraj se pehle ye Mukaam haasil kiya tha jisse ye spasht tha ki unki umar shivraj se jyada thi.

"Mr. Shiv!?, what a coincidence. Aakhir humari Mulaqat ho hi gayi, kyu hai na?" James *hii* karte huye shiv se kehta hai. Uske chehre se khushi saaf jhalak rahi thi.

Shiv Mohan ko wahi chorkar muskurate huye James ki taraf badhta hai. "Yes sir, Nice to meet u. Lagta hai aaj kismat bhi meharbaan hai jo aapse mulaqat ho gayi."

"Hahaha.. Kismat? Uspar mujhe viswas nhi. Lekin aapse mil kar kaafi achha laga, Kaafi suna hu aapke baare. Aapke pass forensic ki bhi achhi khaasi knowledge hai aur fir Aapke college ke uss final Round ko koi kaise bhul sakta hai. Wo David ke saath jo fight huyi thi ab tak ka best finale tha. Main tabse Aapka fan ban gaya hu!" James haath milakar kehte hai.

"Hahaha.. Wo sab to purani baatein hai sir!, waise bhi aapse jyada knowledge forensic ke mamle me mera ho hi nhi sakta. Taarif ke liye shukriya Lekin main iske layak nhi hu jitna aap sabhi sochte hai." Shiv muskura kar kehta hai.

James ki najar tab tak Mr. Jasuja ki car par padti hai jaha Mohan talaashi le raha tha. Jise dekh kar wo thoda hairaan hota hai. "Ahh, ye Mr. Jasuja hai kya?" James sawal karta hai.

"Haa wahi hai! Aapko Mohan ne inform nhi kiya tha kya?" Shiv puchta hai.

"Nhi! Usne kaha yaha ek dead body mili hai bas. Khair.... koi baat nhi, Ek maut hi hai jo sabko barabar najro me taulti hai. Chaliye fir chalta hu, fir kabhi aapse mulaqat hogi. Aur haa ek khufiya baat, main bhi iss election me aap hi ko vote karunga..hahaha " James gale lag kar haste huye kehta hai.

"Jarur! Hahaha" Shiv bhi haste huye vida lekar apni car me baithkar Nikal jata hai.
Shiv ke jaane ke baad, James aur uski team kaam me lag jaati hai.

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(Ummid karta hu Mr. Jasuja ne isme shayad mere kuch sawalo ke jawab diye ho. Aakhir itne din aap the kaha??) Shiv khud se kehta hai. Uske haath me ek chip thi jispar halka khoon laga hua tha. Shiv use niharte huye apni soch me dooba hua tha.

Wo use wapas apni pocket me rakh leta hai aur apni ungliyo par lage khoon ke chote chote boondo ko apni jeans se poch deta hai. Aur fir teji se apni car ko bhagate huye wo raasta badal kar ek sunsaan pade Road ki taraf Nikal jata hai.

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Aaj ke liye bas itna hi.. Ummid karungi maja aaya hoga..

Dhanyavaad.

Shandar update

 

[sumimaster]

Nice thoughts... Let's see what happen next...

Also I saw *tambu ki aag* story and understand that writer loses it's interest when his/her expectations can't meet up.

I know, I'm immature in story writing but I'm trying my best. Hope soon I will find out how can i attract readers.

I don't want to end this story with some illogical or out of the box plot. So I'm gonna stick with my style.

Thanks for ur kind response and sorry for my grammatical error and english

You are doing the same treatment to your story forget about reviews and just focus on your writing will get best readers later on…also the forum lacks good reviewers because writers don’t like to read and review in other writers story…no reader can give a good review rather than a fellow writer…so to get a review you should also give reviews on other story writers….

 

[आवारा बादल]

Update-10(Ahasaas)





Ab tak---

Pichhle adhyaay ke ant me apne padha ki desh ke jaane maane CBI officer *shivaraaj chauhaan* apne pad se istifa de dete hai aur Rajneeti ki taraf apna kadam badhane ka Nirnay lete hai!

Desh me iss waqt kaafi Atanki humle hone ki saajish Rachi ja rahi hai jiske piche ka karan kisi ko nhi pata!

6 saal pehle aisa kya hua tha Desh me jiska vartmaan ke panno par jikr tak nhi hai?

Ab aage---

6 years ago...



Headquarters se nikal kar shiv apni personal car se ghar ja raha tha, uske dimaag me iss waqt kaafi sawal chal rahe the jiska jawab uske pass iss waqt nhi tha...



Use apne decision par khud doubt bhi ho raha tha, Wo bhale bahar walon ke samne apne emotion jarur sambhal leta tha lekin wo khud se kitna hi jhuth bol sakta tha....



Kya maine sahi decision liya hai?... Kahi sab kuch thik karne ke chakkar me sab kuch barbaad na ho jaaye!?



Uske sawal kayi the lekin inn sawaalon ke jawab sirf waqt ke saath hi pata chal sakte the..



*Beep~Beep*



Shiv ke phone par kisi ka message aata hai... Wo bagal wali seat se apna phone utha leta hai jis par *shruti* naam ki kisi ladki ka message hota hai...



[Kaha ho?... Tumne khana to kha liya na?, free hokar call karna!. ]



Shruti ka message padh kar shiv ke chehre par halki muskaan aa jaati hai... Wo apni car side me rok kar shruti ko call lagata hai...




Call ek ring me hi pick ho jati hai...



[Shruti(halki awaaz me) ~ Hi!...]





Shiv~ Hi!... Kya kar rahi ho!?





[Shruti~ umm.. Waise to tumse baat kar rahi hu, tum batao tum kya kar rahe ho..]



Shiv(smiles) ~ umm, main bhi waise tumse baat kar raha hu! Lekin iss waqt ghar ja raha hu!



[Shruti(smiles) ~ Maarungi!!... Meri copy mat kiya karo!!]



Shiv~ ---!!



[Shruti~ Shhh... Listen Main bhi abhi office se nikal rahi hu!, can we meet somewhere!??]



Shiv~ Sure!! But kaha!!?



[Shruti~ it's already evening!... Umm Tum kaha ho waise?]



Shiv~ Yahi city bridge ke pass!



[Shruti~ Okk.. Fir *Ambika resturent* me milte hai, I know tumne kuch subah se khaya tak nhi hoga kaam ke chakkar me!!.. Waha Bagal me park bhi hai to thoda ghum bhi lenge isi bahane..]



Shiv{smiles) ~ Sure, I'm on the way mam!!...



[Shruti(giggles)~ I'm waiting, don't be late dear..]



Call ends*



Shruti se baat karke shiv apni saari tension bhul sa gaya tha, wo turant hi apni car teji se chalate huye 10 minute me destination par pahuch jata hai..



Parking lot me apni car park kar ke shiv resturent me shruti ko dhundne lagta hai, jaha corner wali seat par use wo dikhayi deti hai...




Wo muskurate huye shruti ke samne wali seat par baith jata hai.... Seat ki arrangement se hume pata chalta hai ki ye koi family restaurant nhi balki couple ya date type resturent jyada hai..



Yaha har table par keval 2 seats thi, jaha shiv aur shruti ki table last and in the corner thi...



Shiv ko dekh kar shruti ke chehre par bhi smile aa gayi thi jo saaf jhalak rahi thi... Kuch second tak to dono bas ek dusre ko dekhte hi reh gaye...





"Excuse me sir! "



Waiter ki awaaz sunkar dono hosh me aate hai, shiv aur shruti dono sharmate huye apni najre ek dusre se churane lagte hai..



Waiter bhi dono ko blush karta dekh kar muskurane lagta hai... "Sorry for that sir, apko kuch order karna hai kya?! "



Shiv~ um-mm... 2 cold coffee and plain Sandwich!..



Shiv najro se shruti se order confirm karta hai jispar shruti haa me apna sir hilati hai...



Waiter order lekar waha se muskurate huye nikal jata hai...



Shruti(relax) ~ pheww... Umm, Kaisa raha din aap ka Mr.!



Shiv~ tum to janti hi ho, resign kar diya hu aaj... But apne decision par confidence nhi aa raha hai mujhe!



Shruti~ wait wait wait... Tumhe Confidence nhi aa raha hai!?.. Ye koi aur kehta to main samajh bhi sakti thi shiv!, but tum?



Shiv window se dhalte huye suraj ko dekhta hai... "I don't know shruti, ye decision bahut muskil tha mere liye. Aage kya hoga kaise hoga mujhe nhi pata. Life me ye dusri baar hai jab mujhe dar lag raha ki aage chalkar mujhe iss decision par regret na karna pare! "



Shiv ko apne haatho par shruti ka haath mehsus hota hai.. Shruti dono haatho se uske haath ko thaam leti hai...



Shruti(smiles) ~ Listen shiv, ye mat socho ki kya hoga kya nhi.. Balki ye socho jo hoga achhe ke liye hi hoga, aur fir main hu na tumhare saath life ke har mod par har utaar chadhaav par... Haa Main politics ke baare me kuch nhi janti but main itna jarur janti hu ki tumse behtar iss kaam ko koi nhi kar sakta hai!



Shiv ko shruti ki baaton se thoda hausala jarur milta hai lekin sirf baaton se uski pareshaani khatm nhi hone wali thi...



Thodi hi der me order serve ho jata hai aur dono idhar udhar ki baatein karte huye nashta karne lagte hai...



Kareeb 15 minute baad dono Resturent se nikal kar park me ghumne chale aate hai jo bas 50-60 mitre ki duri par hi tha...





Shaam ka waqt tha isiliye park kaafi bhara hua tha, jyadatar iss waqt couple hi park me najar aa rahe the...



Dono chalte chalte bheed se dur wali jagah par pahuch jaate hai... Jaha jyada log nhi the aur jo the wo aapas me hi busy the..



Shruti ko sabhi couple ko dekh kar sharm aa rahi thi Lekin fir bhi badi himmat se use shiv ki baahein ko thaam liya aur apna sir shiv ke kandhe par rakhkar shiv ko smile pass karti hai... Dono ko abhi iss couple wali cheejon ki aadat nhi huyi thi isiliye shiv bhi thoda sharma jata hai...



Shruti~ shiv.. Waise tumne hamaare baare me kya socha hai?. Mera matlab aage ab kya??



Shiv(smiles) ~ Ummm.. Aage kya?... Mere dil ke saath saath ab meri property par bhi tumhari Najar pad gayi hai kya??



Shiv ki baat sunkar shruti Naraj hone ka natak karte huye apna muh foola leti hai aur gusse me uski kamar par chikoti kaat leti hai...



Shiv(screams) ~ Ahhn!!?... Oucchhh, kamini!!



Shruti(laughs) ~ fufufu... Ab bologe!!.. Bolo!!??!



Shiv apna haath uske haath se churakar shruti ko kamar se pakad leta hai!



Shiv~ Matlab tumhe meri property me hissa nhi chahiye?



Shruti(smiles) ~ Hissa?.. Tumhari property?... Fufufu achha majaak kar lete ho tum bhi!



Shiv~ Majaak?.. Kyu?



Shruti~ kyunki jo mera hai wo sirf mera hai aur jo tumhara hai wo bhi sirf mera hai!... Samjhe!!.. Fufufu..



Shiv(laughs) ~ Matlab biwi nhi Malkin milne wali hai mujhe!.. Hahaha!!..



Dono ki baato ke beech me hi Shiv ko uske ek colleague ka call aata hai... Jise shiv to nhi receive karna chahta tha lekin shruti use recieve karne kehti hai...



[Hello sir!!... We get a important clue in jasuja missing case!]



Shiv(shocked)~ WHATT!!... Kya mila hai??



[Sir... His dead body!!!... Aap jaldi aaiye!!]



Shiv ek najar shruti ko dekhta hai jo use hi dekh rahi thi... Shruti bhi situation ko samajhti hai aur shiv ko jaane ki permission de deti hai.



Shiv~ Thik hai main aa raha hu, whatsApp par apni location share karo tum!



[Yes sir!!... Jaldi aaye, kyunki yaha ki local police Humari baat nhi maan rahi hai.. ]



Shiv ~ Thik hai main aa raha hu!, tum log unse ulajhna mat!!



Call ends*



Shruti(smiles) ~ Pehle hi keh rahi hu, maafi mangane ki koi jarurat nhi hai... It's ur duty! And I understand, jao but Be careful.. Ohkk!?



Shiv(smiles) ~ Kitni samajhdaar ho tum!



Shruti~ Muskurao kam Mr... Waise ye jasuja?... Wahi famous News Reporter hai na? Jo kuch waqt pehle Achanak gayab ho gaya tha?



Shiv~ Hmm..!



Shruti~ Apna Jara jyada dhyaan rakhna, Don't be careless aur Heropanti to bilkul nhi!!



Shiv(laughs) ~ yes Mam! Aur kuch!??



Shruti~ Nhi Mr.! Waise Tum aise haste huye jyada achhe lagte ho... Serious look me dekh kar mujhe school ke teachers ki yaad aa jati hai.. Hahaha..


Shruti~ Ahhnn!


Shiv shruti ko hug kar leta hai!



Shruti ek pal ke liye chaunk jati hai lekin fir use ek sukoon sa milta hai shiv ki baahon me, wo apne haatho se shiv ki back ko sehlane lagti hai... Uske boobs shiv ke seene me dab gaye the, shiv ko bhi iss baat ka ahasaas hota hai lekin wo iss waqt shruti ke pyaar me doob chuka tha. Use insab se koi matlab nhi tha



Shruti ka chehra bhi sharam se halka gulabi ho jata hai, ye dono ke beech pehli dafa nhi tha Lekin shruti ko har baar ek alag sa ahasaas hota tha... Wo aaj tak kabhi kisi Mard ke itne kareeb nhi gayi thi, use shiv ke dil ki dhadkan apne jism me mehsoos ho rahi thi... Wo kisi bel ke ped ki tarah shiv se lipat chuki thi..



Shiv shruti ko apni baahon se azaad karke uske sir par halka chum kar use bas niharne lagta hai...



Shiv(Smiles)~ Sunday ko milte hai!...



Shruti(blushes) ~ um-mm... Haa Sunday ko milte hai...



Shiv~ can i drop u home??..



Shruti~ Nhi uski jarurat nhi hai!... Main scooty se aayi hu! ..



Shiv~ Ohh!..


Shruti(smiles)~ Hmm.. Lekin Parking lot tak chal sakte hai saath me!



Shiv~ Ab to umar bhar saath chalna hai jee!



Shiv muskurate huye uska haath thaam leta hai aur dono saath me park se Nikal jaate hai..

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Present


Raat ke 11 baje...



Train me iss waqt sabhi sone ki taiyariya kar rahe the... Saari boggy interconnected thi isiliye koi bhi ek boggy se dusri boggy me ja sakta tha...



Rupa ne situation ko dekhte huye saare khidki aur darwaze apni boggy ke band kar diye the, waise bhi ye train ab seedha Ambala me hi rukne wali thi to kisi ke aane ka sawal hi nhi tha...



Jaha sabhi couches me log sone ja rahe the wahi sangeeta ke couch me sabhi ki aankho se filahaal neend gayab thi, subah se lekar abhi tak Ashish aankhe faad kar Rupa ko hi dekhe ja raha tha... Uski bra wali blouse me moti badi badi choochiya uska saand ko bhadkane wala laal lipstick aur uski navel jo ki uski pardarshi saree me saaf najar aa rahi thi ye sab Ashish ke hosh uda chuki thi...




Ashish to subah se najane kitni baar Rupa ke samne khud ko cool dude jaisa dikhane ke liye usse flirt karne ki koshish kar raha tha. Lekin Rupa to iss khel ki ustaad thi, use Ashish ki harkato par hasi hi aa rahi thi!



Wahi Rahul ko ab tak yakeen nhi ho raha tha ki aisi teacher bhala koi hoti bhi hai??.. Wo bhi gyaansagar jaise prestigious Academy me?...



Uske Rupa ko lekar sawal kayi the Lekin wo iss waqt apni maa sangeeta par jyada dhyaan dena chahta tha...



Yaha Sangeeta ki jodi bhi Rupa aur Neha ke saath khoob jam rahi thi, Teeno ladkiya aapas me khoob hasi Majaak, idhar udhar ki baatein aur chugliya kar rahi thi...



Har couch 2- tier tha isiliye ek hi compartment me sabhi log so sakte the... Sabhi ne dinner karke apna apna bed laga liya tha..




Jaha sangeeta aur Rahul dono upar wali aamne samne ki berth le liye the wahi niche wali dono berth par Ashish aur Rupa the.. Rupa thik sangeeta ke niche wali berth choose ki thi...



Insab se alag Neha samne wale section me upar wali berth choose ki thi...



Couch ki baaki sabhi compartment ki light off thi siway iske, iss compartment me bhi sirf ek light jal rahi thi jo ki jarurat jitni roshni de rahi thi... Aisa nhi tha ki baaki light khraab thi, unhe bas Neha ne band kar diya tha kyunki use light ON me neend nhi aati thi...



Ashish kaafi der se lete lete kuch soch raha tha... Jise Neha Notice karti hai...



Neha~ Energy king!??.. Kya hua tujhe? , kis khyaal me khoya hua hai!..



Ashish~ Huh!? (Apne khyaalo se bahar aata hai), yaar! Wo main soch raha tha kal subah hum log Ambala pahuch jaayenge... Aur fir competition ka tension aur pata nhi kya kya hoga waha!



Neha(laughs) ~ Haa to!??.. Tujhe waha bhi Aaram karna hai kya.. Hahaha!



Ashish(muh bna kar) ~ Has lo Has lo, Yaad rakhna mera bhi din aayega!!



Neha~ Tera bhi din aayega matlab!??.. Tu Kut----



Neha isse aage kuch bolti ki use yaad aata hai uske saath Sangeeta aunty aur Rupa mam bhi safar kar rahi hai...



Rahul, Rupa aur sangeeta ye dekh kar hasne lagte hai...



Rahul~ Arey Tum log ladna choro, waise Ashish koi idea hai!?.. Kuch game jaisa kuch!..



Neha~ Yayy!.. But khel boring ho jayega? kyunki raat ho gayi hai neend aane lagegi sabhi ko to man nhi lagega utna!



Rahul~ Hmm.. To fir kya kare!?



Neha~ Ashish hai na!... Ye koi kahani sunayega!! Waise bhi ye bhoot wali story badhiya sunata hai!.



Ashish~ Hahaha.. Ghost stories is my speciality! Kaho to shuru ho jau!?



Sangeeta~ Nahi!.. Nahi!.. Nahi.. Mujhe insab se dar lagta hai! Wo bhi raat ke time to aur jyada!



Rupa(laughs) ~ Tension mat lo, it's just a story!.. Aur waise bhi train me hai humlog!




Sangeeta~ Nahi! Rupa!... Mujhe sach me horror stories pasand nhi hai!



Neha(smiles) ~ koi baat nhi aunty, Rehne dete hai! I know sabko kisi na kisi cheej ka phobia hota hai!.. Jaise mujhe Height ka phobia hai!, So i understand ur feeling! Guys better hoga ki hum log so jaate hai...



Ashish iss baat se kaafi Naraz ho jata hai kyunki sabse excited wahi tha iss waqt, Lekin wo aunty ki respect bhi bahut karta tha isiliye wo bhi Haa me apna sir hila deta hai!..



Rupa~ *sigh*.. Hmm.. thik hai chalo so jaate hai fir!



Neha~ Mam, lights off kar dijiyega!



Rupa compartment aur couch ki last lights off kar deti hai aur agle hi pal pura couch andhere me doob jata hai!



Jaha sabhi log aankhe band karke so rahe the wahi Rahul mobile ki Torch se koi Book read kar raha tha, sangeeta bhi apne bete ko padhta hua dekh kar muskurate huye apni aankhe band karke so jati hai!!



Thodi hi der me Rahul ki bhi aankh lagne lagti hai isiliye wo bhi torch band karke so jata hai..



Raat ke kareeb 2 baje, sangeeta ki aankh khulti hai!... Shayad usne jyada hi paani pee liya tha isiliye use bathroom jana tha..



Sangeeta uth kar dekhti hai to sabhi so rahe the, wo ahiste niche utarti hai taaki uski wajah se kisi ki neend na khul jaaye.. Andhera kaafi tha isiliye wo apni phone ki torch jala leti hai...



Couch ki sirf ek side me bathroom bana hua tha, jo ki Sangeeta ke compartment ke opposite direction me tha!... Sangeeta apni aankhe malte huye uss taraf chali jati hai, Bathroom me Light jal rahi thi aur bathroom kaafi saaf bhi tha... Sangeeta bina deri kiye andar jakar bathroom lock kar leti hai!



Sangeet~ uff lagta hai jyada pani pee li thi sote waqt... Phew, ab jakar Rahat mili..



Fresh hokar Sangeeta bathroom me bane besin me apna chehra dhone lagti hai...




THUD! THUD!



Darwaze par kisi ke knock karne ki awaaz Sangeeta ko sunayi deti hai...



Sangeeta~ Main hu andar!.. Bagal wale me chale jao!



Sangeeta ke kehne ke baad Darwaze par dastak band ho jati hai!..



Thodi der baad jab fresh hokar Sangeeta bathroom se nikalti hai to use yaad aata hai ki Bathroom ke bahar kuch der pehle koi tha.. "Umm kaun ho sakta hai!? "



Sangeeta bagal wale bathroom me check karti hai, Lekin sabhi Bathroom khule huye the aur Pani ki ek boond bhi Najar nhi aa rahi thi jisse ye pata chale ki koi fresh hokar gaya ho pehle...



Sangeeta~ Umm lagta hai jyada hi neend me hu.. Jakar so jati hu!



Wo apne phone ki Torch jalakar jab bathroom se nikal kar pehle compartment me ghusti hai, Use kisi ke chalne ki aahat sunayi deti hai... Wo piche mud kar dekhti hai Lekin piche koi nhi tha...



Sangeeta~ uff, sar dard ki dawai leni padegi... Lagta hai!





Couch ke exit door se kareeb hone ke karan, use patriyon par daud rahi train ki awaaz saaf sunai de rahi thi!




Wo fir sidhe mud kar jaise hi samne dekhti hai waha ek kaala saya Najar aata hai, jo ki thik Sangeeta aur baakiyo ke compartment ke piche khada tha...



Aisa lag raha tha ki uss saaye ne Black jacket aur black Mask pehan rakha ho... Lekin sabse hairani ki baat ye thi ki uss saaye ke haath me Gun thi..



Sangeeta(shocked) ~ Ahhnn...



Wo apne kadam piche karti hai uski aankhe puri tarah fail gayi thi... Mobile ke torch se wo uska chehra dekhne ki koshish karti hai, lekin dono ki beech ki duri kaafi jyada thi!!




Rahul iss baat se Anjaan gehri neend me soya hua tha, Rupa jo Uski dekh rekh ke liye aayi thi wo bhi Neend me doob chuki thi...



Wo Anjaan saksh Sangeeta ke taraf jaise hi ek kadam badhata hai.... Sangeeta hadbada jaati hai..



Sangeeta~ Aahhn!!!



Uske haath se phone Chut jata hai aur wo Dham se piche ki Or gir jaati hai!



Sangeeta(screams) ~ RAAAHHULLLL!!!!!! RAAHULLL!!



Sangeeta ki cheekh se Sabhi log neend se jaag jaate hai... Rahul apni maa ki chillane ki awaaz sunkar Hadbadate huye seedha upar wali berth se niche kood jata hai, Rupa bhi Sangeeta ki cheekh se puri tarah ghabra jaati hai...



Rahul girta padta jaise taise Apni maa ke pass pahuchta hai!



Rahul~ Maa!.. kya hua!!????



Sangeeta kuch bolne ki Halat me nhi thi, She was terrified by that appearance... Uski aankho ki putliya abhi bhi dar se idhar udhar ho rahi thi...




Uska pura badan khauf se kaanp raha tha, Rupa couch ki saari Lights ON kar deti hai! Achanak use Sangeeta ka phone Najar aata hai jo ki farsh par gira hua tha... Uski Torch abhi bhi jal rahi thi, Rupa use Rahul ko de deti hai!..



Rupa~ Sangeeta!!...kya hua hai??



Sangeeta iss waqt kuch kehne ke halat me nhi thi, wo bas shock hokar Rahul ke thik piche dekh rahi thi... Jaha iss waqt koi najar nhi aa raha tha, Rahul bhi piche mud kar dekhta hai Lekin use koi Najar nhi aata!



Rahul~ Mam thoda jagah dijiyega!



Rupa halka side hat jati hai, Aur Rahul apni maa ko godh me utha leta hai...



Rahul~ Neha-Ashish Ek baar saare bathroom check karo aur Mam aap mere saath aaiye!



Sangeeta iss waqt bilkul hosh me nhi thi, Rahul sambhalkar use apne compartment ki niche wali birth par baithata hai!...



Rahul~ Ek glass pani dijiyega Mam!



Rupa apni bag se bottle nikalkar plastic wale glass me pani deti hai, Sangeeta ke haath kaanp rahe the isiliye Rahul apne haatho se Sangeeta ko pani pilata hai!



Neha~ Waha kuch nhi tha Rahul!



Ashish~ Haa yaar, waha aisa kuch nhi tha!



Rahul~ Ye darwaze ko check kiya?.. Khula hai ya band!



Ashish~ Nahi! Wait abhi karta hu!..



Rahul~ Nahi tum yahi ruko!, main dekh kar aata hu!



Sangeeta(scream) ~ R--RAHUL!!... Waha mat jao beta!, waa--waaha koi hai!!..



Sangeeta achanak chuppi todkar Rahul ka haath pakad leti hai!...



Rahul~ Main hu na Maa! Aap daro mat!.. Tum log yahi rehna main just aaya!



Rahul apna Haath churakar piche dekhne chala jaata hai!



Sangeeta~ Neha Rupa Ashish!!!!! tum log use kyu nhi rokte ho!?



Neha~ Aunty, kuch nhi hoga use!.. Wo aa jayega.. Ashish ek kaam karo tum bhi Rahul ke piche jao!



Neha ki baat maankar Ashish Rahul ke piche chala jata hai..



Sangeeta ghabrayi huyi bas Rahul ke aane ka intezaar kar rahi thi!



Rahul~ Gate Lock hai andar se!.. Everything is fine!



Ashish~ Hmm.. Lekin aunty aap itni jor se chillayi kyu?, Aap hume bata sakti hai if u are comfortable with that!



Sangeeta~ w-woo! Pata nhi shayad maine kisi ka shadow jaisa dekha yaha!.. Isiliye main dar gayi thi!



Rupa~ Really!??... Isiliye tum itni jor se chillayi!??



Rahul~ Mam!... Maa ko ye bhoot wagera sab se bahut dar lagta hai, so ye reason ho sakta hai ki Achanak kuch dikh gaya ho!



Rupa~ REALLY!?, Tum kuch chupa to nhi rahi hona Sangeeta?



Sangeeta~ *gulp*.. N-Nhi!.. Main aisa kyu karungi!?



Neha~ Mam Rahul sahi keh raha hai shayad Aunty ke mind me Horror story wali baat abhi bhi chal rahi hogi!.. Isiliye unhone aisa feel kiya, kyunki gate to band hai already to bahar se koi aa hi nhi sakta aur it's 2023 , ghost jaise cheezen nhi hoti hai!



Rahul ~ Hmm, Let it go!... Ab sab thik hai na? That's matter!



Sangeeta(najre churati hai) ~ Hmm!



Rahul~ Fir chalo sab so jao! And yeah ab lights off nhi hogi!.. Neha tum mera eye cover pehankat so jao!, waise bhi thodi der me subah ho hi jayegi! So it's better ki sabhi thoda Aaram le!



Neha~ Hmm.. I understand!..



Neha Sangeeta ki peeth ko sehlate huye calm karti hai... "Aunty ise ek bura sapna samajh kar bhul jaiye, ghost jaise cheej nhi hoti hai! Ye sab bas ek illusion tha aapka!! "



Rupa chup chaap puri ghatna ko dekh rahi thi uske chehre par jarur tanaav jarur najar aa raha tha Lekin Rupa jaisi aurat ke chehre par yakeen karna Muskil tha ki wo kan kya soch rahi hogi!




Kuch hi der me sabhi apne apne berth par sone chale jaate hai aur isi beech rupa bathroom karne chali jaati hai, Lekin Sangeeta jisne ye puri ghatna ka sach chupa liya tha use neend hi nhi aa rahi thi!



Ab ye puri ghatna sirf uska ek matra brahm tha jaisa Neha ne kaha! Ya isme koi sachai bhi thi! Koi nhi janta!!



Rahul(smiles) ~ Mom ab aap aise mujhe dekhogi to main sharm se dub jaunga!



Sangeeta~ Huh!?... N-Nhi main tumhe nhi dekh rahi thi!



Rahul(laugh lightly) ~ Achha Achha thik hai!.. Lekin ab aap so jaiye!



Sangeeta~ --!!



Rahul~ Shhh!! So jaiye matlab so jaiye, nhi to kal headache rahega aapko!... Main jaag raha hu, isiliye aap tension free hokar so jaiye!



Sangeeta~ Lekin bet---



Rahul~ kaha na maine!!.. Main aapko lekar aaya hu to aap meri jimmedaari hai puri tarah se!



Ashish~ Don't worry Aunty, we all are here!.. Aap Aaram kijiye!!



Sangeeta~ Umm.. Thik hai! , Good night!



Sangeeta jor dene par karwat badal kar sone ka Natak karti hai.



Rahul~ Mom!.. U can Trust me! Everything is fine!



Sangeeta ke andar shak to rehta hai ki usne jo dekha wo kya tha!... Achanak wo kaha gayab ho gaya? And etc! Lekin Rahul ki baat sunkar wo safe mehsoos karti hai!




Kuch der me hi use jyada Mental stress ke karan jaldi hi Neend aa jati hai.



Rupa bhi kuch der me Bathroom se aakar so jati hai.



Kuch der tak Rahul aise hi phone par random web series dekhne lagta hai Lekin jab use lagta hai ki sabhi so chuke hai tab Rahul ahishte se apni pant ki jeb se phone nikalta hai aur use apne Laptop se connect kar Leta hai...


Jaha hume phone ki screen ki light jalti hai aur hume uss phone ki wallpaper dikhayi deti hai, jispar Sangeeta aur Rahul ki tasveer thi!!




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Aaj ke liye itna hi, hope u all like it! See ya..



Dhanyavaad

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Update-11 ( Dastak)





Ab tak---

Pichle adhyaay me aapne padha, shiv aur shruti ke beech chal rahi dilkash pyaar ki kahani. Saath hi Ambala ki taraf ja rahi train me Sangeeta ka kisi ke saaye se bhaybheet hona.


Ab aage----

Subah ke 9 baje, Jagah- Ambala.....



"Sangeeta utho- Sangeeta!?... "

Kisi ke jagane se meri aankh khuli, samne dekhi to Rupa thi.

Rupa- Yaar chalo jaldi! Hum Ambala pahuch chuke hai!!

Rupa apna purse pack kar rahi thi, jo bhi cheejen usne use ke liye nikali thi use wapas daal rahi thi.

"Rahul kaha hai Rupa!?. Dikh nhi raha kahi mujhe! "

Main aankhe malte huye Rupa se sawal puchi.

Rupa- Wo aur Ashish saara samaan nikal rahe hai, Neha fresh hone bathroom me gayi hai. Chalo jaldi tum bhi fresh ho jao!

"Hmm thik hai "

Pata nhi itni jaldi subah kaise ho gayi, Thodi der pehle hi to soyi thi main! Lekin Aisa lag raha tha jaise waqt bahut teji se guzar gaya ho!

Main fir jaldi se bathroom me fresh hokar Ready ho gayi. Rahul aur Ashish ne sabhi samaan ko utaar diya tha, Mere sar me thoda headache tha Raat ko lekar isiliye maine sir dard ki dawa Leli thi.

Rahul- Maa!, ab to aap thik mehsoos kar rahi hona!?

Mujhe train se utarte huye dekh kar Rahul mere pass chinta me aakar khada ho gaya.

"Haa Rahul ab main thik hu, Bas thoda sir dard kar raha hai. Thoda aur aaram karne ki jarurat hai! "

Rahul- Thik hai Maa, aap bus me so jana. Waise bhi Competition wali jagah yaha se 80-90 km dur hai, to atleast 1.50-2 ghante ka waqt jarur milega aapko!

Rahul muskurate huye kehta hai Hamesha ki tarah, main bhi muskura kar haa me apna sir hila deti hu.



Train se utarkar mujhe pata chalta hai ki kaafi log pehle hi Nikal chuke hai aur bas ek Last bus Bachi thi jo humara wait kar rahi thi, pure 6 saalon baad main wapas iss shamshaan ghaat aayi thi yaha ki hawa se Lekar Roshni me bhi wo cheekh wo dard aur wo Lachari mujhe aaj bhi mehsoos ho rahi thi. Lekin iss waqt mujhe insab par bina dhyaan diye apne bete ke competition par focus karna hai, bas 1.1-5 mahine ki baat hai fir iss jagah ki parchaai bhi main apne bete par padne nhi dungi.

Ambala ka mausam iss waqt jordaar baarish wala lag raha tha bijliya joro shoro se chamak aur garaj rahi thi, aise mausam me jyada der bahar theherna thik nhi tha Isiliye hum log jaldi jaldi bus me chadh gaye!



Baad me hume pata chalta hai ki sirf 5 hi seat bachi thi bus me keval(bus ka ratio 3:2 ka tha) jaha aage me hi 2nd row ke baad 3 seat khaali thi aur piche alag alag jagah 1-1 seat khaali thi 2 seat wali row me. Shayad Academy walo ne student ke hisaab se hi Bus book kiya tha. Kyunki iss bus ki capacity 50 logo ki thi aur hum pure log 250 ke aaspaas the.

Main Rahul ke piche piche uske saath baithne ja rahi thi ki usi waqt Rupa mera haath khich kar Apne bagal me baitha leti hai.

Rupa- Sangeeta piche kaha ja rahi hai!?

"Wo Rah--

Rupa(muskurayi)- Wo bachha nhi hai Sangeeta! Dekho yaha Neha bhi, tum bhi humare saath hi baith jao na!

Rupa apne bagal me ishara karti hai jaha Neha already baithi huyi thi aur headphones lagakar koi kitaab padh rahi thi, uska chehra kuch maayus sa lag raha tha Najane kis wajah se.

Ab Rupa ne itne pyaar se request ki thi isiliye use mana nhi kar sakti thi, kuch hi der me bus chalu ho gayi aur hum sab log station se nikal gaye.

Main piche mud kar dekhi to pata chala ki Ashish headphones lagakar so gaya tha, shayad Raat me wo bhi meri wajah se pareshan ho gaya ho. Wahi Rahul kisi ladki ke bagal me baitha hua tha, uss ladki ka chehra to mujhe najar nhi aa raha tha kyunki wo window seat par baithi thi jiske karan aage wali seat se uska chehra chipa hua tha Lekin usne ek gulabi colour ki suit pehni huyi thi.


Hamesha ki tarah Rahul iss waqt bhi ek kitaab haath me lekar padh raha tha.



Kisi ke kandhe par haath rakhne se main wapas aage mudi to dekhi Rupa thi.

Rupa- Uski chinta ho rahi hai kya tumhe!?

Rupa ne Rahul ki taraf dekh kar ishara kiya.

"Na-Nahi wo bas--

Rupa- Don't worry He is fine, Raat bhar jaagne ke babjood wo subah puri tarah Fresh hai, usne khud mujhe uthaya hai sabse pehle. Waise bhi aaj kal ke bachho ko raat me jaagne ki aadat hoti hai.

" Hmm thik keh rahi ho tum! Lekin bechara meri wajah se bahut pareshaan hoga, mujhe pata hai wo mujhe pareshaan dekh kar khud bhi pareshaan ho jata hai bhale hi bahar se dikhaye nhi Lekin andar hi andar uske dimaag me kaafi kuch chal raha hoga! "

Meri baat sunkar Neha hasne lagti hai. Neha- Aunty Lagta hai aapko nhi pata, Lekin wo kabhi pareshaan nhi hota. Wo jarur aapke baare me soch raha hoga Lekin pareshaan nhi hoga wo bilkul. Uska dhyaan hamesha question par rehta hai!


Neha ki baat kaafi uljhane wali thi jo mujhe to nhi samajh aayi... "Matlab main samjhi nhi kuch? "

Neha muskurate huye boli "Mere kehne ka matlab hai ki wo kisi sawal ke jawab dhundne me pareshaan nhi hota hai, hum log aksar sawal par vichaar karne ki jagah jawab dhundne me hi waqt Laga dete jo hume pata nhi hota isiliye hume pareshaani hoti hai Lekin wo sirf sawal par dhyaan deta hai yani wo cheej jo use sawal me dikh rahi hai"

"Tumhe nhi lagta Ye jyada deep knowledge ho gaya Neha, itni gheri baatein hume samajh nhi aane wali.. Hahaha" Rupa haste huye Neha ko kehti hai, Mera confused chehra dekh kar Neha bhi hasne lagti hai. Waise baat to mujhe sach me samajh nhi aayi thi Lekin friends ek dusre ko behtar jaante hai, isiliye Neha ki baat maan kar main bhi Relax ho gayi.

Insab ke beech pata nhi kab Rupa ek teacher se humari saheli ban gayi pata hi nhi chala. Ek pal ke liye bhi kabhi aisa nhi laga ki wo humse kabhi nhi mili ho, Her communication skill is out of anyone league!




Neha fir kitaab me busy thi to Rupa phone me, tab mujhe yaad aaya ki raat ko mere haath se phone gir gaya tha. Main ghabara kar jaldi se apna purse check ki to wo purse me hi se nikla, shayad Raat me kisi ne gira hua dekh kar Rakh diya hoga.

Main bhi sabhi ki tarah apna bluetooth lagakar gaana sunte huye thodi der ke liye aaram karne lagi Lekin raat ka hadsa hi kuch aisa tha jiski thakan ki wajah se najane kab meri aankh lagi mujhe pata hi nhi chala.

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Subah ke 9 baje, Jagah- Ambala

Jis waqt Sangeeta aur Rahul iss seher me aaye the usi waqt yaha seher ke ek kone me, Ramesh Sunsaan padi factory me chair par baith kar kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha Akele.

Bahar ka mausam pehle se hi khraab tha lekin uske baavjood iss waqt Ramesh ka mood usse kayi jyada khraab lag raha tha.

Hamesha ki tarah Ramesh ne civil dress pehni th Lekin uske haath me pistol thi aur uske chehre par gussa, uski aankhe laal ho chuki thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki wo apne daant peeshte huye apne dushman ka intezaar kar raha tha.

"Aa gaye Ramesh!, Swagat hai dobara apne bhai ke adde par! " Ek sawle Rang ka aadmi dhoti aur kurta pehnkar factory ke piche wale gate se Andar aate huye kehta hai.

Wo akela nhi tha uske saath 10-12 hatte katte aadmi aur bhi the jinke haatho me Revolver thi.

"Behan ke lode, chal jaldi idhar aa. Aaj mera dimaag sanak gaya hai, tere pure khandan ki gaand me baans karunga! " Ramesh khishiyaate huye kehta hai.

Wo aadmi Ramesh ke gusse par haste huye samne lagi kursi par baith jata hai aur apne revolver ko dono ke bich me rakhe table par rakh deta hai. "Bahut udd raha, kya baat hai! Kahi kisi ne teri biwi ki bur to nhi faad di... Hahahaha"

Ramesh ka para aur chadh jata hai " Malkhaan dekh mera dimaag abhi bilkul sanka hua hai, sach keh raha hu jo bhi main puchunga uska sidhe sidhe jawab dena. Nhi to teri khopdi me 6 ki 6 goliya maarunga! "

"Tu!?... Hahaha, Tu mujhe maarega? Hahaha! , Achha Chal puch le, ye teri aakhri eeksha samajh kar main pura kar deta hu! Kyunki tu ab zinda to yaha se jane wala nhi hai! " Malkhaan kehta hai.

Ramesh seedha puchta hai " Tune jhuth kyu kaha? Ki Sarfaraz ne khud apni car ka Bomb blast karaya hai! "

" hahaha, jhuth!??... Maine sach hi kaha hai!, usne khud apni car ka bomblast karaya hai!.. Ab wo baad me mar jayega to tu uske liye mujh par shkk karega tu RANDI KI AULAAD!! " Malkhaan gusse me kehta hai.

Ye sunkar Ramesh ka gussa satve Aasmaan me chadh gaya! "Haramjaade, gaddari karta hai mujhse!! " Ramesh apna aapa kho kar apni kursi ko piche ki taraf laat maar kar khada ho jata hai.

Lekin Malkhaan hase ja raha tha Ramesh par. " Bahut ho gaya ab tera, tujhe faltu me upar wale logo ke karan jhel raha tha Lekin ab nhi. Aaj to teri maiyyat nikalunga main, jaldi bata tune jhuth kyu bola!? " Ramesh usko apna revolver dikha kar kaha.

"Hahaha, chutiya hai kya tu?... Tu janta nhi tu kiske ilaake me khada hai! Yaha meri marji ke bina ek patta bhi nhi hil sakta! " Malkhaan gurrate huye bol pada.

Ramesh muskuraya- ilaaka?.. Tu janta hai tu kiske samne baitha hai!, tu iss ilaake ka malik hoga Lekin main pure seher ko apne laude par rakhta hu Madarchod!

Isse pehle Malkhaan kuch samajhta, uske antar pantar sab uske sir par revolver taan dete hai!

Ramesh- chal ab bata, tujhe ye kehne ke liye shivraj chauhaan ne kaha tha na!?? Taki main gumraah ho jau!! Saale!! tune gaddari kyu ki mujhse!

"Hahaha! To ye hoti hai paise ki takat!! Saalon ka rishta bas chand paiso me beek gaya!.(Malkhaan ka chehra murjha jata hai) Ja jo karna hai kar le LEKIN! main iss baare me kuch nhi batane wala hu. Mujhe maar kar kuch nhi badalne wala hai, wo iss pure dogli duniya ko teri aur un logo ki sachhai dikhane aa raha hai!"

THHUDDDD!!!

Ramesh gusse me jor se ek laat table par maarta hai jo aage Malkhaan ke seene me lagti hai. Malkhaan kursi ke saath jameen par gir jata aur uski revolver bhi table se gir kar dur feka jaati hai. "Arghhhhhhh!!! " Malkhaan jor se cheekhta hai.

" Kaha tha tujhse! Mera maatha mat khraab kar, Lekin nhi! Lagta hai usne tere andar bhi imaandaaree ka kida daal diya hai! Thuuuu!!! " Ramesh malkhaan ke chehre par thukte huye kehta hai. Malkhaan ke aadmi jo ab Ramesh ke saath the wo Malkhaan ko charo taraf se gher lete hai.

Unn sabhi Logo ka chehra khamosh tha, wo sabhi apne Malik ko dard se tadapte dekh rahe the Lekin uski madad karne ki jagah uske upar bandook taan kar khade the. Ye wahi maalik tha jisne ek waqt in logo ko Revolver chalana sikhaaya tha! Lekin aaj kismat badal chuki thi!

Sabhi ke haath kaanp rahe the Lekin koi bhi apni bandook niche nhi kar raha tha.

"Hahh Ahh(dard se karhate huye) , saalo isi din ke liye tum logo ko apna chamcha bnaya tha kya! Aankho me aankhe daalkar goli maar yaaraaa aahhh! " Malkhaan apne saathiyo ko dekh kar muskurate huye bola.

Ramesh ko samajh aa chuka tha Malkhaan kuch nhi ugalne wala hai.

" Teri bahaduri ki main daat deta hu Malkhaan! Lekin tune koi chara nhi chora mere liye! Lekin chinta mat karna tere jaane ke baad main teri biwi, bachee aur uss shivraj ko bhi tere pass jald hi ek-ek karke bhej dunga" Ramesh apne aankhe badi karte huye pagal ki tarah uske chehre ke kareeb jakar kehta hai.

Ramesh uth kar fir khada ho jata hai, aur uske chehre par jordaar Laat khich kar maarta hai.


"Arggghh! "

" Malik...

Malkhaan ke sabhi chamche apne maalik ki cheekh sunkar ek saath chillate hai.

Ramesh ye dekh kar hasne lagta hai. "Hahahaha, kya bhaichara hai tum logo me matlab!!.. Chal chal!!! Ab mera waqt khoti mat kar!" Ramesh ek chamche ki peeth par apna gun sehlate huye kehta hai.

"CHAL CHAL!! jaldi se iska game baja daal! Isse pehle ki tum logo ki biwi ko mere aadmi milkar na baja de! " Ramesh fir kehta hai unn logo ke kaan ke kareeb aakar.

Malkhaan sab samajh jata hai Ramesh ki baat sunkar, Ramesh ne inn logo ki biwi ka kidnap kiya hai.

Wo gusse me uth kar Ramesh ko pakadne jata hai, Lekin usse pehle uske khud ke chamche use dhakel kar wapas niche gira dete hai!

Malkhaan gusse me aag babula ho chuka tha use samajh nhi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare, uske chamcho ki aankhe gusse aur dard ki wajah se laal aur Nam pad gayi thi.

Ramesh- Chala na behanchod!!! Apni biwiyo ka nanga naach dekhne ka intezaar hai kya!!???


BANG!! BANG!! BANG!! × 4 Times.


"Hahaha!!... Hahaha!! " Pure sannate pade factory me sirf Ramesh ki shaitani hasi goonj rahi thi. Ramesh haste haste taaliya baja raha tha unke chamcho ke liye.

"Ohh hoo!, kyaa dosti nibhaai hai tum logo ne. Ha!??... Apne Malik ko apne haatho aise dardnaak maut dedi. Waaahh! Muje aise hi log pasand hai! Hahaha!! "

Ramesh haste huye unn logo par taane kasta hai jo apna sar jhuka kar aankho me aansu liye khade the. Unki aankho ke samne unka Malik Malkhaan apni bebasi byaan karte huye mar chuka tha.

Thodi der ki khamoshi ke baad unme se ek aadmi kaanpti huyi awaaz me puchta hai- kya hum inki laash ko apne kasbe me Le ja sakte hai! Antim sanskaar ke liye!??

Ramesh uski baat sunkar jor jor se hasne lagta hai.. "Hahaha! Kya kaha ANTIM SANSKAAR!??? Suar ka kabse Antim sanskaar hone laga!??? Umm waise Saale ne wafadari to dikhayi hai!.. Shit!! Iske liye main iski Laash ko kamsekam jala jarur sakta hu! "

Sabhi ye sunkar bas ek tak Ramesh ko dekhne lagte hai.

"Aise kya dekh rahe ho!? Main itna bhi dil ka bura nhi hu! Hahaha! Waise ye oil refinery ki factory thi na? To iss factory me aage lagna badi baat nhi hogi! Hai na?? Hahaha!! "



Malkhaan ke aadmi aaj apne jeevan me pehli baar shaitaan ka chehra dekh rahe the, Ramesh ke chehre ki khushi dekh kar unki rooh tak kaanp rahi thi ki ye wahi saksh ha! Jispar pure seher ki jimmedaaree hai!?


"KYAAA REEE!! Aise kyu dekh raha mujhe(Ramesh un logo ke kareeb aakar kehta hai) gaand me khujli ho rahi hai kya tum logo ki?... Chal nikal yaha se! Ghar par teri biwi sahi salamat pahuch gayi hogi! Dekh Itna dayaalu hu! Lekin Pata nhi fir bhi tum log kaanp kyu rahe ho! Hahaha, shukr karo ki iss criminal ko maarne ka credit maine nhi liya! Nhi to tum logo ko bhi maarna padta Media ke liye! Hahaha... Ab chup chaap pyaare bachhe kee tarah yaha se nikal! Nhi to ek ek ki laash bicha dunga!. "

Ramesh gurrate huye kehta hai. Jise dekh kar wo log ghabara kar apne maalik ki laash ko uss darinde ke pass chorkar factory ke piche wale darwaze se nikal jate hai.


Unke jaane ke baad Ramesh gusse me uss laash ki aankho me 2-3 goliya aur maarta hal.

"Tu kya samajh raha hai Shivraj! Tu iss tarah jeet jaayega!??. Dekhta hu kab tak nukka chuppi ka khel khelta hai tu! Iss baar tera wo haal karunga na ki tu jinda reh kar bhi hamesha ke liye mar jaayega! Teri rooh ko beech sadak par nanga karke suli par chadaunga, bas mil jaaye mujhe ek baar tu SHIVRAJ!!!! " Ramesh Malkhaan ki laash par pair rakh kar jor se chillata hai.

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Aaj ke liye itna, ummid karti hu achha laga hoga...

Dhanyavaad!

Note:- Main iss waqt forum ki sabse lokpriy kahani padh rahi hu taaki apni lekhni aur sudhaar saku, isiliye update ab thodi jaldi aayenge Lekin chote chote. To thoda adjust kijiyega. Par viswaas rakhiye har update vistrit (detailed) hoga pehle se bhi jyada.

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[Frieren]

You are doing the same treatment to your story forget about reviews and just focus on your writing will get best readers later on…also the forum lacks good reviewers because writers don’t like to read and review in other writers story…no reader can give a good review rather than a fellow writer…so to get a review you should also give reviews on other story writers….

Main last year me hun and ye last month hai course ka. Isiliye ye month as expected kaafi busy hai.. Iss month ko tolerate kijiye uske baad college over hone par update fast ho jayenge.

Internal ho chuka hai and external shuru hone wala hai.

Just a request.

 

[king1969]

Take your time

 

[sumimaster]

Main last year me hun and ye last month hai course ka. Isiliye ye month as expected kaafi busy hai.. Iss month ko tolerate kijiye uske baad college over hone par update fast ho jayenge.

Internal ho chuka hai and external shuru hone wala hai.

Just a request.

Ok finish your external with great performance best of luck

 

[dhparikh]

Main last year me hun and ye last month hai course ka. Isiliye ye month as expected kaafi busy hai.. Iss month ko tolerate kijiye uske baad college over hone par update fast ho jayenge.

Internal ho chuka hai and external shuru hone wala hai.

Just a request.

Beast of luck ...
Intezaar rahega...

 

[Gokb]

Waiting for your update

 

[parkas]

Main last year me hun and ye last month hai course ka. Isiliye ye month as expected kaafi busy hai.. Iss month ko tolerate kijiye uske baad college over hone par update fast ho jayenge.

Internal ho chuka hai and external shuru hone wala hai.

Just a request.

Best of luck your exam....
intezaar rahega next update ka Frieren ji