Thriller Sangharsh
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Ab tak aapne padha ki ek taraf Toni ko Rashid dwara fatkar lagi kaam bigadne ke liye whi dusri taraf mere ghar wale kafi pareshan the mujhe le ke aur doctor bhi operation theatre se bahar aa chuke the
Ab aage
Jaise hi doctor bahar nikle papa turant unki taraf lapke
Papa - doctor sahab mera beta kaisa hai ab sab shi hai na
Doctor to phle kuch der dekhta rha aur kuch soachne lga jisse papa ghabra kar bole
Papa - kya huwa doctor shahab aap kuch bol kyu nhi rahe koi badi baat hai kya jo aap itna sankoch kar rhe hai
Doctor - nhi koi bhi ab problem ki baat nhi hai ab aapka beta khatre se bahar hai use abhi emergency warad me rhna hoga jiski nigrani ham kar rhe rahe
tabhi maa bhi un sab ki baat se unki bhi aankh khul gyi aur wo daud ke docter ke paas aai aur boli
Maa - kya huwa doctor shahab mera beta thik to hai na use kuch huwa to nhi na aur aise hi Kai sawal badhawasi me puch
whi papa unhe shant karwane lge aur doctor bola
Doctor - nhi aisi koi baat nhi hai aapka beta surakshit hai aur khatre se bahar bhi hai chinta ki baat nhi hai aap nischint rahiye
MAa - to kya ab ham dekh sakhte hai apne bete ko
Doctor - nhi aaj abhi aap andar nhi ja sakte hai abhi to bas uska operation huwa hai to aap kal mil sakte hai
Maa - mere bete ko kab tak hosh aa jayega doctor sahab
Doctor kuch der phir nhi bola aur papa ko dekhta rha phir bola
Doctor - kal tak aapke bete ko hosh aa jayega
aur aaap sir aap meri cabin me aaiye apse kuch baat karni hai
Maa - thik hai kya ham apne bete ko dekh sakte hai
jiske baad doctor kuch bola nhi aur sath aane ka ishara kar diya whi ot ke bahar jo chota sa shisha lga hota hai wo band tha use usne khol diya
ab us kaanch se andar dekha ja sakta tha andar ka haal dekh ke maa ke aankho se jhar jhar aanshu girne lge
Maa - mere bete ne kisi ka kya bigada tha jo mere laal ki aisi halat kar di hai
uske baad wo aanshu bahane lgi papa kisi tarah se unhe shant karwaye andar mere sithiti ko dekhe papa ke bhi aankh dabdaba gyi thi
jo bet aaj tak daant nhi suna tha wo aaj is tarah se hospital ke bed pe pade huwa dekh kar bs papa ke aankho me bebasi dekhi ja sakti thi
andar mai bed pe pada huwa tha mere mukh me oxygen laga huwa tha sath me muh se ek pipe bhi nikli hui thi
AUr andar computer pe meri heartbeat ki screening chla rhi thi tamam se equipment lge huwe the
kuch de tak dono whi khade mujhe dekhte rhe uske baad papa maa ko ek room me le gye aur Shruti ko bhi whi pahucha diye
unhe kuch samjha ke bed pe lita kar doctor ke cabin me pahuche papa
Doctor - baithiye sir mai tb se bs aap ka hi intzar kar rha tha
Papa - aapne mujhe kyu bulaya hai doctor shahab koi problem hai kya
Doctor - problem to kuch nhi hai sb kuch thik ho ke bhi thik nhi lg rha th
aapke bete ko tin goli lagi thi ek to peeche se lagi thi
baki do goli samne se lgi thi aur dono goli aur peeche ki goli ka jaha hot huwa hai usse heart' pe asar gya hai
do goli to ekdam paas lgi thi thoda sa aur upar neeche hota to goli heart me ghusi hoti
sab kuch achhe se ho gya bs ye samjh nhi aarha ki aap ke bete ki achet awastha ke baare me kuch nhi samjh aa rh
hamare anubhav ke anusar to hosh aa jana chahiye tha aapke bete ko 3 ya chat ghante me lekin ummid nhi dikh rhi shayad kal subah tk bhi naa aaye
Papa - kya koi major problem to nhi hai na
Doctor - nhi Aisa to abhi tk to nhi dikha lekin brain ko hamne scan kiya jisse dekh kar kuch samajh nhi aa rha
Aap ke bete ka mind ek dam shant pada huwa hai jaise use kisi baat ki chinta nhi bs wo soya pada hai
aisa jaise logo jb coma me jate hai unka brain jaisa ho jata hai waisa react kar rha hai uska brain lekin wo normal hi awstha me hai isliye kuch samajh nhi paa rhe ham sab
Papa - to kya isse kuch problem ho sakti hai
Doctor - nhi problem to nhi hogi bs uske hosh me aane ke bare me ham kuch kah nhi skte kal ki jaanch ke baad aapko batayenge
aise hi thodi der aur kuch der baat hoti rhi unke beech aur phir papa bhi room me aa gye jaha maa aur Shruti leti huwi thi
Papa - abhi tak tum soyi nhi
kyuki jaise hi papa room me enter huwe dekhe to maa pankhe ko ghoor rhi thi aur unke aane pe bhi unka dhyan nhi gya idhar
aur papa ki baat pe unka tandra bhag hui lekin kuch boli nhi aur wo phir chat ko ghoorne lgi
whi dusri taraf
gaanv me us haveli me kuch jyda hi chahal pahal dikh rhi thi
ab haveli me kafi sadasy dikh rhe the
aur haveli me safai ka kaam bhi chalu ho chuka tha un guru ji ke aaye huwe ek hafta beet chuka tha.
is beech unhone apne bete aur beti ke parivar aur apne pote aur potiyon ke bhi ghar bula liya tha
Re intro
family
Bhanu pratap singh (thakur)mukhiya
Shushila Devi dharam patni (thakurain)
Sudhir Singh bada beta
Kushum singh - sudhir ki patni
Chota beta - family ke baare me inhe nhi pata to ye hamari yani ki hero ka parivar Inka intro to jruri nhi
Neeta jo sbse choti beti
Neeta - 40 year
neeta ka pati
Rajiv - 42 year
Ravi aur sneha Sudhir
do bete betiya
Ravi 26 year
Madhu - fiance ravi
Sneha 23 year
Neeta ke bachhe
Rima - 19 saal
Ridhhi - 17 saal
AAaj inke parivar ka lagbhag har sadsya warsho baad us haal me maujud tha bs unhe bs ek hi sadsya ka no hone ka afsos tha
Ab tak aapne padha ki ek taraf Toni ko Rashid dwara fatkar lagi kaam bigadne ke liye whi dusri taraf mere ghar wale kafi pareshan the mujhe le ke aur doctor bhi operation theatre se bahar aa chuke the
Ab aage
Jaise hi doctor bahar nikle papa turant unki taraf lapke
Papa - doctor sahab mera beta kaisa hai ab sab shi hai na
Doctor to phle kuch der dekhta rha aur kuch soachne lga jisse papa ghabra kar bole
Papa - kya huwa doctor shahab aap kuch bol kyu nhi rahe koi badi baat hai kya jo aap itna sankoch kar rhe hai
Doctor - nhi koi bhi ab problem ki baat nhi hai ab aapka beta khatre se bahar hai use abhi emergency warad me rhna hoga jiski nigrani ham kar rhe rahe
tabhi maa bhi un sab ki baat se unki bhi aankh khul gyi aur wo daud ke docter ke paas aai aur boli
Maa - kya huwa doctor shahab mera beta thik to hai na use kuch huwa to nhi na aur aise hi Kai sawal badhawasi me puch
whi papa unhe shant karwane lge aur doctor bola
Doctor - nhi aisi koi baat nhi hai aapka beta surakshit hai aur khatre se bahar bhi hai chinta ki baat nhi hai aap nischint rahiye
MAa - to kya ab ham dekh sakhte hai apne bete ko
Doctor - nhi aaj abhi aap andar nhi ja sakte hai abhi to bas uska operation huwa hai to aap kal mil sakte hai
Maa - mere bete ko kab tak hosh aa jayega doctor sahab
Doctor kuch der phir nhi bola aur papa ko dekhta rha phir bola
Doctor - kal tak aapke bete ko hosh aa jayega
aur aaap sir aap meri cabin me aaiye apse kuch baat karni hai
Maa - thik hai kya ham apne bete ko dekh sakte hai
jiske baad doctor kuch bola nhi aur sath aane ka ishara kar diya whi ot ke bahar jo chota sa shisha lga hota hai wo band tha use usne khol diya
ab us kaanch se andar dekha ja sakta tha andar ka haal dekh ke maa ke aankho se jhar jhar aanshu girne lge
Maa - mere bete ne kisi ka kya bigada tha jo mere laal ki aisi halat kar di hai
uske baad wo aanshu bahane lgi papa kisi tarah se unhe shant karwaye andar mere sithiti ko dekhe papa ke bhi aankh dabdaba gyi thi
jo bet aaj tak daant nhi suna tha wo aaj is tarah se hospital ke bed pe pade huwa dekh kar bs papa ke aankho me bebasi dekhi ja sakti thi
andar mai bed pe pada huwa tha mere mukh me oxygen laga huwa tha sath me muh se ek pipe bhi nikli hui thi
AUr andar computer pe meri heartbeat ki screening chla rhi thi tamam se equipment lge huwe the
kuch de tak dono whi khade mujhe dekhte rhe uske baad papa maa ko ek room me le gye aur Shruti ko bhi whi pahucha diye
unhe kuch samjha ke bed pe lita kar doctor ke cabin me pahuche papa
Doctor - baithiye sir mai tb se bs aap ka hi intzar kar rha tha
Papa - aapne mujhe kyu bulaya hai doctor shahab koi problem hai kya
Doctor - problem to kuch nhi hai sb kuch thik ho ke bhi thik nhi lg rha th
aapke bete ko tin goli lagi thi ek to peeche se lagi thi
baki do goli samne se lgi thi aur dono goli aur peeche ki goli ka jaha hot huwa hai usse heart' pe asar gya hai
do goli to ekdam paas lgi thi thoda sa aur upar neeche hota to goli heart me ghusi hoti
sab kuch achhe se ho gya bs ye samjh nhi aarha ki aap ke bete ki achet awastha ke baare me kuch nhi samjh aa rh
hamare anubhav ke anusar to hosh aa jana chahiye tha aapke bete ko 3 ya chat ghante me lekin ummid nhi dikh rhi shayad kal subah tk bhi naa aaye
Papa - kya koi major problem to nhi hai na
Doctor - nhi Aisa to abhi tk to nhi dikha lekin brain ko hamne scan kiya jisse dekh kar kuch samajh nhi aa rha
Aap ke bete ka mind ek dam shant pada huwa hai jaise use kisi baat ki chinta nhi bs wo soya pada hai
aisa jaise logo jb coma me jate hai unka brain jaisa ho jata hai waisa react kar rha hai uska brain lekin wo normal hi awstha me hai isliye kuch samajh nhi paa rhe ham sab
Papa - to kya isse kuch problem ho sakti hai
Doctor - nhi problem to nhi hogi bs uske hosh me aane ke bare me ham kuch kah nhi skte kal ki jaanch ke baad aapko batayenge
aise hi thodi der aur kuch der baat hoti rhi unke beech aur phir papa bhi room me aa gye jaha maa aur Shruti leti huwi thi
Papa - abhi tak tum soyi nhi
kyuki jaise hi papa room me enter huwe dekhe to maa pankhe ko ghoor rhi thi aur unke aane pe bhi unka dhyan nhi gya idhar
aur papa ki baat pe unka tandra bhag hui lekin kuch boli nhi aur wo phir chat ko ghoorne lgi
whi dusri taraf
gaanv me us haveli me kuch jyda hi chahal pahal dikh rhi thi
ab haveli me kafi sadasy dikh rhe the
aur haveli me safai ka kaam bhi chalu ho chuka tha un guru ji ke aaye huwe ek hafta beet chuka tha.
is beech unhone apne bete aur beti ke parivar aur apne pote aur potiyon ke bhi ghar bula liya tha
Re intro
family
Bhanu pratap singh (thakur)mukhiya
Shushila Devi dharam patni (thakurain)
Sudhir Singh bada beta
Kushum singh - sudhir ki patni
Chota beta - family ke baare me inhe nhi pata to ye hamari yani ki hero ka parivar Inka intro to jruri nhi
Neeta jo sbse choti beti
Neeta - 40 year
neeta ka pati
Rajiv - 42 year
Ravi aur sneha Sudhir
do bete betiya
Ravi 26 year
Madhu - fiance ravi
Sneha 23 year
Neeta ke bachhe
Rima - 19 saal
Ridhhi - 17 saal
AAaj inke parivar ka lagbhag har sadsya warsho baad us haal me maujud tha bs unhe bs ek hi sadsya ka no hone ka afsos tha
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