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Alok

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Waiting for next update bhai
 

Alok

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Sorry friends thoda jyda busy hu time ki bahut Kami hai is liye update dene me itna lag raha hai 15 Nov tak ki problem hai is beech dekhta hu kitna update de sakta hu
Ok bhai take your time
 
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Ramesh628

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Update 29

AB tak aapne padha jaha Bhanu Pratap ke yaha havan ki tyari ho chuki hai aur aaj se havan start ho rha hai jiski tyari ho chuki hai

whi dusri taraf

Mai ab puri tarah se thik ho chuka tha jisse ghar me maa papa aur Shruti kafi khush rahte the

aise aaj sab Ghar me sath hi baithe huwe the aur mai papa se bola

MAi - papa ab mai Puri tarah se thik ho gya hu to Mera man hai ki kahi chal ke ghum aate hai

Shruti - haa papa ye badhiya idea 💡 hai hain naa ( mere kahte hi chahakti hui boli)

papa - acha thik hai chalte hai kaha ghumne ka mn banaya hai tab ( haste huwe bole)

Mai - Papa up chalte hai na ghum kar aate hai aur maine jis gaav ka naam liya achanak papa ke chaunk gye
(Bhai gaanv ka kya naam hai yrr bhul gya koi batayega kya)

Papa - is gaanv me kya hai jo gaanv ghumna hai tumhe aur aisi bhi jagah koi ghumne jata hai

Mai - wo papa maine pta Kiya hai udhar aas paas bahut hi achhi jagah hai ghumne ke liye

aur maine suna hai waha bahut hi koi prachin sthal hai mera use dekhne ka man hai to mai is liye bola

KUch der tak papa shant rahe aur kuch nhi bol rhe the aur sath me maa ko bhi dekh rahe the
jaha dono ke face pe ek alag hi bechaini dikh rahi thi

Mai - kya huwa papa koi problem hai kya yu achanak aap is tarah se chup ho gye kya koi galat jagah kaa naam le liya hai maine

Papa - nhi nhi bs aise hi kuch soachne laga ( hadbada ka r bole)
koi problem nhi hai batao kab ka plan banaye ho ghumne ka

MAi - wo papa Mai soach raha tha kal nikalte hai na

Papa - thik hai tab Mai waywastha kar dunga aur tum dono chale jana

Mai - are ye kya mai aap dono ki baat kar raha tha ki sath me chalte hai aur ab aap hamare jane ki baat kar rhe hai

Papa - beta tum dono ghum aana abhi Mera kuch kaam hai idhar ham dono phir kabhi chlenge

Mai -thik hai tab mai bhi nahi jaunga ye ghumne ka plan cancel karte hai

Maa - are beta naraz kyu ho Raha hai tum dono ghum aao ham baad me kahi chalenge

mai - nhi ab mai kahi nhi ja raha hu ghumne aur ab tak aap ka koi kaam nhi tha achanak se aap ka koi kaam aa gya aise kaise jane ka man nhi tha to bata diye hote
achanak se mera man pta nhi kyu halka sa frustrate ho gya
itna sab kah ke mai uth ke chal diya piche se maa aur papa pukarte rahe aur Shruti to confused si achanak se ghumne ka plan bana aur achanak se cancel bhi ho gya

use to kuch samjh hi nhi aaya kya huwa kaha wo ghumne ko le kar khus ho rahi thi kaha wo sari Khushi bhi gayab ho gyi aur wo kuch der tak maa papa ko manati rahi ghumne jane keiye aur phir wo bhi uth ke chali gyi

Kuch der tak yu hi maa aur papa sath baithe rahe aur phir kuch der tak yu hi charcha kiye kuch phir achanak wo dono muskura ke uth gye aur papa bahar chle gye

aur aaj ka aise hi ye din beet gya aur mai aaj din bhar shant hi raha aur raat me khana khaya aur uske baad mai room me aa kar so gya

papa bhi khane ke hi time hi pahuche the aur papa ne bhi sath hi khana khaya tha aaj aur unke face pe aaj khusi jhalak rahi thi mai bs sabko ignore maar ke kha ke chala aaya tha apne room me

subah jab mai so ke utha aur Shruti ne mujhe jo aa ke batay mai sun ke Chaunk gya aur use dekhta hi raha .......

to be continue
Sandar update hai bhai
 
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Update 30

Mere soo ke uthe ke baad Shruti ne mujhe jo bataya wo ye tha

Shruti - bhaiya aap bhi jaldi se tayar ho jayiye kyuki papa ne waywastha kar diya hai
aap jaha ghumne jana chahte wha jane ke liye sab kuch waywastha karwa diye hai aur papa maa dono tayar ho chuke hai

Mai - kyyaa ! ye sb kab huwa

Shruti - wo sab mujhe nahi pata aap bhi jaldi se tyar ho jaiye aur mai bhi jaa rahi tayar hone haa nhi to

nhi to aap ke chakkar me mai bhi late ho jaungi mujhe bhi abhi tyar hona hai aur aap bhi apne kapde pack kar lijiye

uske baad Shruti jldi jaldi yaha se nikal li uske baad mai bhi kuch na soach kar nahane chal diya

aur mai nahane ke baad kuch kapdo ko ek bag me rakh ke lobby me pahuch gya jaha maa aur papa wha baithe huwe the

Mai - aap to nhi ja rhe the aise achanak kaise

Papa - kyu surprise jaisa nhi lga kya mai socha kyu na surprise hi bna du ise

mai - haa ho to gaya ( sir hila ke bola )
uske baad kuch der aise hi idhar udhar ki kuch der baate Hui aur sab kuch sabka 7 bje tak ready ho gya tha

Shruti bhi ready ho ke aa gyi aur sab apna apna saman le ja ke gadi me rakh liye gadi ko drive papa hi karne wale the kyuki tha se jane me bas 4 se 5 ghante hi lagne Wale the kyuki rasta seedhe national highway se tha jo ki aaram se nikal jata
highway 6 line bana huwa tha jispe traffic ki koi bhi problem nhi hone wali thi
ham sab raste me khoob hasi majak karte huwe nikle the aur aise hi Safar kat rha tha maine dhyan diya papa aur maa ke face pe kuch nervousness aur khusi ke bhaav aa rhe the aur ja rhe the

daily normal se jyda speed me gadi aaj chal rahi thi gadi ka kanta 100 se neeche nhi chal raha tha aur 450km ka safar me to laghbhag ka safar papa ne 3.5 ghante me 350 km gadi nikal diya aur jab papa ek restaurant ke paas roke to ham sab chauk gye

kyuki jab hamne duri dekha to chunk gye kyuki ab mushkil se ek ghante lagte yaha se aur ham sab papa ko dekhne lage

Maa - kyu ji koi itni tez gadi chalat hai kya aaram se nhi chal skte the itni bhi kya jaldi thi jo itni tez chala rhe the
mummy ki pyari si daant sun ke papa kuch bole nhi bad maa ko khud se laga kar andar ki taraf chalne ka ishara kiye uske baad hm sb restaurant me ghus gye

waha se halka fulka nashta kar ke phir se gadi me baith kar apni manjil ki taraf nikal diye highway ka 80 km ka rasta is baar 1 ghanta me khatam kiye uske baad highway se utarne ke baad single link road pe gadi utar gyi

aur aage bdhte gye aur kuch hi km chalne ke baad ab nazara badal gya tha har taraf Hariyali hi hariyali nazar aa rhi thi

ab karib half an our chalne ke baad papa ne gadi ek alag hi road par ghuma diya mai map ko dekh ke bola papa dusre road pe aa gye hm lekin unhone kuch bola nhi aur maa mujhe bas baithne ke liye bol di

gadi bs sarpat daudte huwe ja rahi thi aur lagbhag 5 km ke aas paas chlne ke baad gadi ek tirahe par pahuch gyi jaha do taraf raste gye huwe the aur dono rasto par bade bade dwar bane huwe the

GAdi ko papa ne left dwar se hote huwe aage badha diye jispe kuch dur jane ke baad rashta kuch gadbad aane lga jisse gadi 30 se 35 ke aas paas chal rhi thi

us area ko dekhne se lag rha tha jaise waha aaj kal ki mulbhut suwidhano se vanchit hai ye gaanv phir bhi prakirtik sampadaon se bhar pur dikh rha tha

Aur gadi se chalte samay hmne dekha road ko sajaya ja raha tha jiske liye bahut se log tarah tarah ke saman ki lga rahe the tabhi papa gadi rok ke kisi aadmi ko bulye aur waha 5 se 6 logo ka group hamari taraf chla jisme log gaanv ke pahnave me the

aur un logo ke paas pahuchne par papa ne mirror ko niche kar ke gaanv wale se pucha ki idhar sb road par kya kar rhe hai

papa ki baat pe koi kuch bolta tabhi un paancho me se ek aadmi jor se chillya jisse shabhi us aadmi ki taraf dekhne lge aur uski chilla kar bolne se papa bhi chaunk gye ...

whi dusri taraf
haveli me sari tayari ho chuki thi aur Sara parivar ab guruji ke samne upasthit tha aur sb bs aise hi baithe huwe the tabhi Haveli ki Malkin Shushila Devi boli

Shushila Devi - guru ji Puja kab se suru karwayenge shabhi saman ko rakhwa diya gya hai

Guru ji - itna adhir na hoiye thakurain ji tanik dhairya rakhiye aur Puja subh ghadi me hi suru hogi uski aap chinta na kariye

aur ye Puja kitni falibhut hone wali hai aap soach nhi sakti ( man me - aap jiske liye itni vykul hai aur ye anusthan kar rhi hai uski suruwat to usi ke dwara hone wali hai wo kuch hi Chan me aApke is chaukhat pe aane wala hai )

uske baad kuch huwa nhi bs sb guruji se idhar udhar ki baate hoti rhi aur tabhi haveli me ek ladka bhagte huwe aaya aur aa ke jo pariwar walo ko bataya wo sun ke pura parivar hi chakit ho gya

koi kuch bolta usse pahle hi sudhir singh us ladke ko le ke bahar ki taraf bhaage ....

..

to be continue
Sandar update hai bhai
 
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