Thriller Sangharsh

[Golu]

Update 3

Kuch new character ka arrival
introduction
Bhanu pratp singh -age 75 year
jo abhi bhi kisi se kam nahi lagte chere pe bahut hi tez dikhayi deta h
parvati singh age 65 haweli ki malkin jo abhi bhi 50 se kam ki nahi lagti
Sushil pratap singh age 48 Bhanu pratap ke Bada beta
Kushum singh Age44
Badan bahut hi bhara huwa h jo bahut hi sundar dikyi deti h
Jai parap - sushil ka bada beta age 25 year
Neha singh - jay ki biwi age 22 Dikhne me kisi heroin se kam nahi
Nitin - age 20 jai ka chota bhai
Komal - jay ki bahen age 18 kisi modal se kam nahi
Naam ke bilkul hi ulta swbhav h bahut hi jiddi aur ghar ki ladli
Virendra pratap singh - age 45 bhanu prtap ka chota beta missing
Meera singh - age 40 missing
Sushila singh Sushil pratap ki bahen age 42
Anirudh singh age 47 sushila ke pati ek bussinessman h
Priya age 19 badi beti
Nitu choti beti 18
Rohini singh age 37 shushi ki choti bahen
Jitendra singh age 41
Madhu badi beti Age 18
Kiran choti beti abhi 11th class me h
Ye h new character jinka story me role h

Dusre raste par jae par wha bhi ek sandar haweli bani huwi thi jo Bhanu pratap ka jani dusman tha
Introduction
Thakur Gajendra pratap singh age 72
Savitri Devi - jinka dehant ho chuka h
Ranvijay sing Age 49
thakur ka bada beta
Sheela singh - age 45 thakur ki badi bahu
Jaswant singh- thakur ka dusra beta age 44 isne sadi nahi ki h
Bheema singh - age 25 ranvijay ka bada beta
Birju singh singh - age 23 ranvijay ka dusra beta
Birju singh - 22 tisra beta

 

[Golu]

Update 4

Haweli ke hal.me ek sanjeeda mahu Bana huwa tha jo kisi bahut hi bade khatre ke aane se pahle santi chayi ho ya hal us haal me baithe sabhi ke chero pe dekha ja sakta h jo kafi paresan the
is asanti ko todte huwe Bhanu pratap bole
mai bhanu pratap ko BP likunga
B.P.- is bar ke mele me kaun hamare taraf se us dangal me ladne ke liye jayega

Sushi pratap ko mai Sp likunga
Sp - ha pitaji is baar ke dangal ke liye kaun jayega

Bp - ha tujhe aur tere bete ko bas apne se hi mtlb hai is ghar ki izzat ka khyal nahi h
Sp - nahi pitaji mujhe bhi chinta h is khel ke liye ki apne khandan se kaun jayega

Nitin - pitaji mujhe is khooni khel me nahi samil hona h jisme ye na pta ho ki jaan bachegi ya nahi

Parvati - tum sab se rai nahi li gayi ki kaun jayega Agar mera virendra hota to hame paresani nahi hoti
Pta nahi mera beta kaha h kis hal me hoga

Sp - ha hame bhi apne bhai ki bahut yaad aati h pta nahi kha hoga

Bp - mahul ko emotional hote dekh bolte h
hamra beta jarur hamari madad karne ke liye jarur aayega

Bp - are Sp jai nahi dikhayi de raha h kaha h

Sp - Uski ek jaruri meeting hai aaj to meeting me gaya hai
Bp - kuch soachte huwe bolte h achha chlo theek h
chlo sab ab khana kha lo

Dushri taraf thakur Gajendra ki haweli me

Haweli ke bhar ek akhade me ek danav jaisa aadmi ek bahut hi banynkar saand se lad raha tha
achanak hi us aadmi ne us saad ko utha ke patak diye aur wo saand ekdam saant hogya maidan me ek taliyon ki gadgdahat ki awaj goonj gayi

Thakur Gajendra - sabas bheema aaj hame tum par garv hai ki tum is bar ye dangal jit ke is pratapghar ka raja banaoge
Bheema Gajendra ka pota Height 6 fit 11 inch kisi danav se kam nahi bahut hi nirdayi
Birju - wah bhaiya is bar to aap ke samne aane par sabki peesab hi nikal jayegi
*height 6 fit 4 inch bahut hi krur apne bhai ki trah

Ranvijay - is bar ham us Bp ko bataenge ki hamse dusmni lene ka kya anjam hota h
us ki ghar ki sabhi aurto ko nanga nachaenge tab sale ko uski aukat dikhyenge

Isi tarah mahol me ek rakshi tahaki se watawarnd goonj utha

Chlte hai hero ki taraf kya ho raha h waha

Ajay aur sita baat karte huwe apne apne kheto pe pahuch gaye sita apne khet ki taraf chali gayi aur ajay apne khet ki taraf chal diya

Khet ke suru me do kamre bane huwe the ek kamre me tubel laga huwa tha aur kheti karne ke hatiyar rakhe huwe the
aur dusre kamre me ek charpi padi thi aur kuch anaj rakha huwa tha jaha sone ki waywstha thi

Ajay khet me pahuch ke ramu kaka ko aawaj lagaya
Ajay - are kaka kaha ho
Dusri taraf se

Ramu kaka - ha beta mai ghobi ke kyariyon me ghobhi ke pedo ko mitti de raha hu
( 1 bighe me sabji lagi huwi thi aur 1 bighe me ganne lage huwe the baki je 3 bighe me gehu aur saso boya huwa tha )
kuki ye November ka mahina hai to kheto me yahi sab hoga


Note - Dangal ka mela pratapghar ke shiv mandir me hota hai dangal jitne ke baad baad jo koi shiv ka trishul jo jamin me aadhe se jayda gada huwa hai usko nikalega wahi pratapghar ka raja banta h kai salo se koi is trishul ko koi nikal nahi paaya is liye sab apne apne hisab gavo me hukum chalta hai pichli bar ye trisul Bhanupratap ke pita ne nikala tha

Ajay - aur kaka kaise h aap
kaka - theek hu ajay beta bas khet pani dene laya ho gaya h
Ajay - kisme pani dena h kaka
Kaka - ganne me pani dena ha jo lagbhag tayar ho gaya h iske baad pani nahi dena padega
Ajay - chaliye kaka mai tubel start kar deta hu aur mai tubel start kar diya
Uske baad kaka khetO me pani dekhne lage
mai kaka se bola kaka mai jar nadi hokar aata hu
Kaka - jaldi aana beta malkin jannengi aap us taraf gaye the to gussa hongi

Mai - theek h kaka jaldi laut aaunga
aur mai us taraf chal diya
hamre gaon ke last ek kone par jangal hai aur dusri taraf nadi jati h
Mai wha 10 min me pahuch jata hu
jaha ka watawarn kafi madhur tha yaha aane par meri kuch yaade taza ho jati thi mai hab 8 saal ka tha ti apne papa ke sath yaha ghumne aaya karta jaha aane se mujhe bahut hi sukun milta tha jaise mai papa ke pas aa gaya hu
Kuch der time bitane ke baad mai khet pe aa gaya aur dekha ganne me paani bhai gaya h to tubel jakar band kar diya
Aur kaka se bola
Mai - achha kaka ab ghar chlte h agar kuch chiye ho to aaj ghar pe aa jaiyega

Kaka- nahi beta abhi kuch nahi chahiye jab jarurat hogi bata doonga

 

[Crocodile]

It’s all up to u , readers are here to read , if u not disappoint again u will get good response and reviews but on starting u have to prepare ur self for less readers and reviews after that as u continue story regularly readers will increase, plot of your story is very good so readers are ready make sure yourself that are u ready properly

 

[Crocodile]

Update 4

Haweli ke hal.me ek sanjeeda mahu Bana huwa tha jo kisi bahut hi bade khatre ke aane se pahle santi chayi ho ya hal us haal me baithe sabhi ke chero pe dekha ja sakta h jo kafi paresan the
is asanti ko todte huwe Bhanu pratap bole
mai bhanu pratap ko BP likunga
B.P.- is bar ke mele me kaun hamare taraf se us dangal me ladne ke liye jayega

Sushi pratap ko mai Sp likunga
Sp - ha pitaji is baar ke dangal ke liye kaun jayega

Bp - ha tujhe aur tere bete ko bas apne se hi mtlb hai is ghar ki izzat ka khyal nahi h
Sp - nahi pitaji mujhe bhi chinta h is khel ke liye ki apne khandan se kaun jayega

Nitin - pitaji mujhe is khooni khel me nahi samil hona h jisme ye na pta ho ki jaan bachegi ya nahi

Parvati - tum sab se rai nahi li gayi ki kaun jayega Agar mera virendra hota to hame paresani nahi hoti
Pta nahi mera beta kaha h kis hal me hoga

Sp - ha hame bhi apne bhai ki bahut yaad aati h pta nahi kha hoga

Bp - mahul ko emotional hote dekh bolte h
hamra beta jarur hamari madad karne ke liye jarur aayega

Bp - are Sp jai nahi dikhayi de raha h kaha h

Sp - Uski ek jaruri meeting hai aaj to meeting me gaya hai
Bp - kuch soachte huwe bolte h achha chlo theek h
chlo sab ab khana kha lo

Dushri taraf thakur Gajendra ki haweli me

Haweli ke bhar ek akhade me ek danav jaisa aadmi ek bahut hi banynkar saand se lad raha tha
achanak hi us aadmi ne us saad ko utha ke patak diye aur wo saand ekdam saant hogya maidan me ek taliyon ki gadgdahat ki awaj goonj gayi

Thakur Gajendra - sabas bheema aaj hame tum par garv hai ki tum is bar ye dangal jit ke is pratapghar ka raja banaoge
Bheema Gajendra ka pota Height 6 fit 11 inch kisi danav se kam nahi bahut hi nirdayi
Birju - wah bhaiya is bar to aap ke samne aane par sabki peesab hi nikal jayegi
*height 6 fit 4 inch bahut hi krur apne bhai ki trah

Ranvijay - is bar ham us Bp ko bataenge ki hamse dusmni lene ka kya anjam hota h
us ki ghar ki sabhi aurto ko nanga nachaenge tab sale ko uski aukat dikhyenge

Isi tarah mahol me ek rakshi tahaki se watawarnd goonj utha

Chlte hai hero ki taraf kya ho raha h waha

Ajay aur sita baat karte huwe apne apne kheto pe pahuch gaye sita apne khet ki taraf chali gayi aur ajay apne khet ki taraf chal diya

Khet ke suru me do kamre bane huwe the ek kamre me tubel laga huwa tha aur kheti karne ke hatiyar rakhe huwe the
aur dusre kamre me ek charpi padi thi aur kuch anaj rakha huwa tha jaha sone ki waywstha thi

Ajay khet me pahuch ke ramu kaka ko aawaj lagaya
Ajay - are kaka kaha ho
Dusri taraf se

Ramu kaka - ha beta mai ghobi ke kyariyon me ghobhi ke pedo ko mitti de raha hu
( 1 bighe me sabji lagi huwi thi aur 1 bighe me ganne lage huwe the baki je 3 bighe me gehu aur saso boya huwa tha )
kuki ye November ka mahina hai to kheto me yahi sab hoga


Note - Dangal ka mela pratapghar ke shiv mandir me hota hai dangal jitne ke baad baad jo koi shiv ka trishul jo jamin me aadhe se jayda gada huwa hai usko nikalega wahi pratapghar ka raja banta h kai salo se koi is trishul ko koi nikal nahi paaya is liye sab apne apne hisab gavo me hukum chalta hai pichli bar ye trisul Bhanupratap ke pita ne nikala tha

Ajay - aur kaka kaise h aap
kaka - theek hu ajay beta bas khet pani dene laya ho gaya h
Ajay - kisme pani dena h kaka
Kaka - ganne me pani dena ha jo lagbhag tayar ho gaya h iske baad pani nahi dena padega
Ajay - chaliye kaka mai tubel start kar deta hu aur mai tubel start kar diya
Uske baad kaka khetO me pani dekhne lage
mai kaka se bola kaka mai jar nadi hokar aata hu
Kaka - jaldi aana beta malkin jannengi aap us taraf gaye the to gussa hongi

Mai - theek h kaka jaldi laut aaunga
aur mai us taraf chal diya
hamre gaon ke last ek kone par jangal hai aur dusri taraf nadi jati h
Mai wha 10 min me pahuch jata hu
jaha ka watawarn kafi madhur tha yaha aane par meri kuch yaade taza ho jati thi mai hab 8 saal ka tha ti apne papa ke sath yaha ghumne aaya karta jaha aane se mujhe bahut hi sukun milta tha jaise mai papa ke pas aa gaya hu
Kuch der time bitane ke baad mai khet pe aa gaya aur dekha ganne me paani bhai gaya h to tubel jakar band kar diya
Aur kaka se bola
Mai - achha kaka ab ghar chlte h agar kuch chiye ho to aaj ghar pe aa jaiyega

Kaka- nahi beta abhi kuch nahi chahiye jab jarurat hogi bata doonga

It’s looks different then before of ur updates , as Ajay and his father living in delhi and his mother is. Teacher , u didn’t mentioned before that they have land for agriculture , please read once again or clear my doubts

 

[Golu]

It’s looks different then before of ur updates , as Ajay and his father living in delhi and his mother is. Teacher , u didn’t mentioned before that they have land for agriculture , please read once again or clear my doubts

Nhi bhai same hai shayad aap ko yaad nhi h but mai abhi tak update rakha hu aur bas beech se 10 update delete ho gye the isiye dobara nhi story post kiya but soacha ki un 10 12 update ko phir se likh dunga bs different usme ho sakta hai baki ke sab update sam hi rahenge

 

[Crocodile]

Bhai sabhi updates hai yaha par so ek baar padhlo bcoz ajay school mai hai cricket competition cha raha tha , Ajay k baap ka hotel ka business hai iss liye bol raha hu

 

[Crocodile]

Update 3

Ab thodha hero ke bare me jaan le aap sab hamara hero bilkul gora hai sundar chehra neeli aankhe aur upar se 6 fit ke aas paas ki lambai

Jo ki uski khubshurti aur badha rahi thi use dekh ke koi bhi ladki uspe diwani ho jaye

Lekin hamare hero to thahre sadhu unhe khul kud se fursat hi nahi milti jo ladkiyio me interested rahe

Padhai to ek normal student ki trah favorite game cricket jise khelne ke liye hamesa se apni class bunk maar deta hai

Jiske liye use ghar aane par qchhi khasi si dant pad jati hai apni pyari maa ki lekin jaisa bhi ho wo apne maa baap ka dulara beta hai

Ab story pe aate hai
Hamare hero ki class 12 ki aaj pahli class thi aur wo tayar ho ke school chal diya

Jaha uske do best friend uska rashte me intzar kar rahe the jinka naam
Vishal purohit aur Ankit chaudhry tha
Wo dono uske hi muhlle ke ladke the

Dono padhne me bhi achhe the aur wo bhi iski trah khel inhe pasand tha lekin dono ki girlfriend thi thii apni hi classmate

Swati aur Puja naam hai dono ka
Hamara hero apne kamare me tayar ho raha tha tabhi use maa ki aawaj aai

Maa - are beta Ajay itni der se kya kar raha hai school nahi jana kya aaj phle din hi chutti marne ke chakar me hai

Mai - bas maa abhi aya 2 min me (chilla kar)
Maa - theek hai aa jao maine dono ka khana laga diya hai

Uske baad mai neeche aaya aur dining table pe baith gaya jaha shrShr pahle se se thi thi

Mai - aur gudiya aaj to tumhara pahla din hai aur tum bhi entermedinte me aq gayi agar school me koi dikkat ho mujhe btana

Shruti - are bhaiya aap chinta na kare mai sab dekh lungi

Maa - ( daan kar) pahle khana khao dono hamesa pta nahi kitni baat rahti hai khatab hi nahi hoti

Uske baad ham dono ne khana khaya aur apne school chal diye mai to paidal hi school jata tha apne dosto ke sath aur Shruti pados ki aunty ki ladki ke sath Activa le ke jati thi

Mai kuch dur chala tha ki mere dono dost dikh gaye aur mai waha un dono ke paas khade log ko dekh ke chauk gaya

To be continue

Check it

 

[Jaat boy]

Awesome bhai

 

[Jaat boy]

Waiting for next

 

[Golu]

Sorry bhai log galti se idhar post ho gya
Tha idhar iski new thread me post h