Devilkkk
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bhai aap ki writting skils dekh kar bol sakta hu ki aap hi sudhanshu bhai hu.or rahi savita ki samir key paas jane ki baat tu jawani mey sabke kadam ladkhada jate hai.bhai aap ki storey mujhe bohut passand hai .khas kar apka har baat ko detail mey batane ka tarika .bhai mujhe aisa lagata hai ki shayad viraj apna hero hai hi nhi.ho sakta hai oska beta hero hu.ye sirf mari kalpana hai.ye kahani kamaal hai.or shayad es mey flashback na hu kuki kahani sure say hi staarting sey chal rahi.bhai aap sey ek request hai ki aap kabhi update na dey pai tu aap bata zaroor dey ki mey update ek haftey baad ya 2 hafte baad ya ek mahine ya 2 mahine baad dunga .bhai aap ke batane say umeed bani rahe gi key storeya abhi bhi continey hai.and best of luck this storey.