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Prologue:-
Ye kahani ek aise ladke ki hai jiska naam hai satya.
satya waise to bahut hi suljha hua ladka hai lekin ise ek bhayanak bimari hai jiska naam hai D.I.D.aur haan D.I.D. ka matlab dance india dance bilkul bhi nahi hai. ab aap log kuch der is bimari ke baare me sochiye tab tak mai kuch logon ke baare me bata deta hoon.. jo is kahani me aayenge.
sabse pahle is kahani ka mukhya patra aayenge
jaggi singhania-satya ke dadaji jo ab is duniya me nahi rahe.
Kokila singhania-satya ki dadi maa.
Ramesh singhania-satya ke pitaji.
hetal Varma-satya ki maa.
Suresh singhania-satya ke chacha ji.
Sunita singhania-satya ke chachi ji.
Raman singhania-Satya ka cousin bhai.
mai is kahani ko ek film ki tarah likhna chahta hoon agar aaplogo ko achha lage ya bura lage to jaroor bataiyega...
15 saal pahle ------------------------------------------
subah ke 8 baje-----
poland ki rajadhani warsaw me sthit Victoria hotel me ek paty hone wali hai. ye hotel india ke janemane billionaire jaggi singhania ki hai jo aaj apni company indeviour ka bagdor apne bade bete ramesh singhania ko soup kar company se retyre hona chahte hai. indeviour india ki ek bahut hi badi company hai jo mobile phone se lekar computer tak...automobile se lekar toy car tak sab chije banati hai inka arbo ka karobaar hai---------
ab aaiye dekhte hai is hotel me kya ghatna ho rahi hai.
Kokila apne manager se- kya kar rahe ho tum. aaj raat me party hai aur abhi tak hotel decorators nahi aaye hai. tum sab ek number ke kaamchor ho ek kaam nahi hota tum logon se.
manager kapmte hue bola-madam maine to order de diya tha pata nahi abtak kyon nahi aaye. wo log is desh ke best decorators hai. unke malik ne bola hai wo sham tak is hotel ko princess ki tarah saja denge.
kokila gusse se manager ko dekhi to manager aur dar gaya
kokila-agar sham tak ye hotel nahi saja na to kal subah tum kabra me saje hue dikhoge.
manager-sorry madam sorry madam.
koikila-mujhe sorry nahi kaam chahiye.
tab tak wahan suresh aa gaya.
suresh-maa aap chinta mat kijiye sham tak hotel decorate ho jayega. maine abhi fir se baat ki hai. wo decorator apne aadmio ko lekar aa raha hai bas aate hi wo kaam me lag jayega.
kokila-catering ka kya hua.
manager-mam wo log aa gaye hai.
kokila-drinks
manager-wo bhi ready ho gaya hai.
ramesh-mom aap fikar mat karo. mai hoon na mai karta hoon.
tab tak sunita aur hetal bhi wahan aa gayi.
sunita-mom aap chaliye dress dekh lijiye.
kokila fir sunita aur hetal ke saath ek bade se room me jati hai aur ek sofe par baith jati hai.
unke samne ek lady aati hai aur lagbhag 60-70 alag alag desing ke world se ek se ek mahange kapde dikhati hai...unme se 5 kokila apne liye pasand kar leti hai.
isi tarah aaj ka din nikalne lagta hai
idhar decoraters log bhi aa jate hai. Aaj is hotel ko achhe se sajaya jaa raha tha. aaj raat is aalishan hotel me ek alishan party hone wali thi jisme sirf gine chune amirjado ko hi bulaya gaya tha. log indeviour company ki party me shamil hone me bhi apni shaan samajhte the. india aur bahar ke deshon ke sirf gine chune jane mane bussinessman, politician, bureaucrats log dheere dheere is hotel me jama ho rahe the. shaam hote hote hotel ko achhe se saja diya gaya. Hotel ke andar sirf unhi logon ko jane diya jaa raha tha jinke pass entry pass ho. Kokila achhe se party me sab chijo par najar banaye hue thi aur unka saath hetal , suresh aur sunita de rahe the. saath hi unke 50-60 bharosemand noukar wahan moujude the.sab log achhe se kaam kar rahe the ki sunita suresh ko pakad kar ek room me le aayi.
suresh-kya baat hai room me kyon le aayi.
sunita-tumko koi sarm hai bhi ya nahi.gahde ki tarah kaam kiye jaa rahe ho.
suresh-kya matlab hai tumhara.
sunita- pichle kitne saalon se tum apne papa ka bussiness me saath de rahe ho.din raat unke aage piche ghumte ho ek wafadaar kutte ki tarah.sara mehnat tumne kiye aur tumhara dhokhebaj baap is company ka malik tere bade bhai ko bana raha hai.tum kuch karte kyon nahi.
suresh-mai kya kar sakta hoon. maine kosis to kiya na. har samaya papa ke saath raha unke kaam me hath bataya ye soch kar ki wo ekdin mujhe is company ka malik banayenge lekin mere baap ne mujhe hi dhokha diya to mai kya karu.
sunita-kuch to karo. agar aaj tumhara bhai is company ka malik ban gaya to poori jindagi tum bas is ghar ka mamooli sa noukar bankar rah jaoge.
suresh-darling mai bhi mr jaggi singhania ka khoon hoon. itni jaldi haar nahi man ne wala. bas sahi samay aur sahi mouka aane do. abhi sahi samay nahi hai in baton ka.apne dil par patthar rakh kar muskurao. dil me chupe jahar ko kuch din aur chupa ka rakho.sahi samay par ye jahar kaam aayega. aur fir suresh sunita ke gale.aur fir room se nikalkar kaam me lag gaye.
idhar jahan warsav me log hotel me party ki taiyarion me jute hue the wahi is jagah se koso door california ke ek bungalow me suresh baitha hua tha. aaj wo bahut khush tha kyonki uska aaj ek sapna poora hone wala tha aur wo sapna tha indeviour company ka malik banna. aaj jaggi bhi bahut khush the kyonki aaj wo khud se apne bete ramesh ko lane california gaye the... aur fir jaise hi jaggi apne bete ke bungalow me ghuse suresh doud kar aaya unke paav chune lekin jaggi usko gale laga liye.
jaggi-beta chalo aaj mai tujhe apni company ka bhaar tujhpar soupna chahta hoon.
suresh ke man me to khusiyon ki lahar doud gayi lekin wo apne baap ke saamne khud ko lalchi sabit nahi karna chahta tha isliye wo apni khushi ko daba kar bola-papa itni bhi kya jaldi hai. mai to abhi yahan apni company set kar hi raha hoon. agar mai is company ko chod dunga to ye doob jayega.
jaggi-beta is company ko chod de. ab mai budha hone chala hoon ab mai aur kaam nahi kar paunga.
ramesh-thik hai papa jaisi aapki marji aur fir wo apne papa jaggi ke gale lag gaya. jahan jaggi ke dil me khushi thi ki ab uska beta company sambhalega wahi ramesh ke dil me lalach aur dhokha ke bulbule umad rahe the.
fir dono baap bete california se ek private jet se chal diye poland ki rajdhani warsav ki ore. ye hawai safar bhi 8 ghante ka tha. aur sham ke 7 baje dono warsav pahuch gaye fir ek jagmagati hui silver rolls royce unke samne khadi ho gayi. dono baap bete chal diye is car me baith kar victoria hotel jahan aaj ramesh ke varsho ka sapna poora hone wala tha.
lekin kya ramesh ka sapna poora ho payega. kya vidhi ka vidhan itna saral hai ki ramesh jaise kamine, nich, lalchi aur ghatiya aadmi ko india ke itni badi company indeviour ka malik bana dega.
sayad nahi...
aur achanak se ek car aur ek petrol se bhare truck me takkar hua jor ki awaz aayi dhaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm aur truck ki itni speed thi ki break lagane ke baad bhi wo truck lagbhag 500 metre tak car ko ghasit ta chala gaya...aur fir ek ek karke 4-5 jordar dhamaka hua dhummmmmmmmmmmm dhummmmmmmmmmmmmm dhummmmmmmmm dhummmmmmmmm dhummmmmmmmmm aur car aur truck dono jalgaye. jahan ek ore ek sadak par ye hadsa hua thik usi samay hotel victoria par bhi kuch anjaan logon ne humla kar diya. lagbahg 10-15 log hathon me gun aur barood liye dhadhate hue hotel me ghus gaye...dhadd dhadd dhadd dhaddd firing karte hue hotel me ghuse aur ek ek karke 25-30 bam us hotel me fek kar farar ho gaye...dhummm dhummmm dhummmmm dhummmmmmmm dhummmmmmm karle hotel bhi fat pada...aur kuch log mare gaye kuch log ghayal hue to kuch log hi bach paye jinki kismat upar wale ne sone ke kalam se likhi thi.
Ye kahani ek aise ladke ki hai jiska naam hai satya.
satya waise to bahut hi suljha hua ladka hai lekin ise ek bhayanak bimari hai jiska naam hai D.I.D.aur haan D.I.D. ka matlab dance india dance bilkul bhi nahi hai. ab aap log kuch der is bimari ke baare me sochiye tab tak mai kuch logon ke baare me bata deta hoon.. jo is kahani me aayenge.
sabse pahle is kahani ka mukhya patra aayenge
jaggi singhania-satya ke dadaji jo ab is duniya me nahi rahe.
Kokila singhania-satya ki dadi maa.
Ramesh singhania-satya ke pitaji.
hetal Varma-satya ki maa.
Suresh singhania-satya ke chacha ji.
Sunita singhania-satya ke chachi ji.
Raman singhania-Satya ka cousin bhai.
mai is kahani ko ek film ki tarah likhna chahta hoon agar aaplogo ko achha lage ya bura lage to jaroor bataiyega...
15 saal pahle ------------------------------------------
subah ke 8 baje-----
poland ki rajadhani warsaw me sthit Victoria hotel me ek paty hone wali hai. ye hotel india ke janemane billionaire jaggi singhania ki hai jo aaj apni company indeviour ka bagdor apne bade bete ramesh singhania ko soup kar company se retyre hona chahte hai. indeviour india ki ek bahut hi badi company hai jo mobile phone se lekar computer tak...automobile se lekar toy car tak sab chije banati hai inka arbo ka karobaar hai---------
ab aaiye dekhte hai is hotel me kya ghatna ho rahi hai.
Kokila apne manager se- kya kar rahe ho tum. aaj raat me party hai aur abhi tak hotel decorators nahi aaye hai. tum sab ek number ke kaamchor ho ek kaam nahi hota tum logon se.
manager kapmte hue bola-madam maine to order de diya tha pata nahi abtak kyon nahi aaye. wo log is desh ke best decorators hai. unke malik ne bola hai wo sham tak is hotel ko princess ki tarah saja denge.
kokila gusse se manager ko dekhi to manager aur dar gaya
kokila-agar sham tak ye hotel nahi saja na to kal subah tum kabra me saje hue dikhoge.
manager-sorry madam sorry madam.
koikila-mujhe sorry nahi kaam chahiye.
tab tak wahan suresh aa gaya.
suresh-maa aap chinta mat kijiye sham tak hotel decorate ho jayega. maine abhi fir se baat ki hai. wo decorator apne aadmio ko lekar aa raha hai bas aate hi wo kaam me lag jayega.
kokila-catering ka kya hua.
manager-mam wo log aa gaye hai.
kokila-drinks
manager-wo bhi ready ho gaya hai.
ramesh-mom aap fikar mat karo. mai hoon na mai karta hoon.
tab tak sunita aur hetal bhi wahan aa gayi.
sunita-mom aap chaliye dress dekh lijiye.
kokila fir sunita aur hetal ke saath ek bade se room me jati hai aur ek sofe par baith jati hai.
unke samne ek lady aati hai aur lagbhag 60-70 alag alag desing ke world se ek se ek mahange kapde dikhati hai...unme se 5 kokila apne liye pasand kar leti hai.
isi tarah aaj ka din nikalne lagta hai
idhar decoraters log bhi aa jate hai. Aaj is hotel ko achhe se sajaya jaa raha tha. aaj raat is aalishan hotel me ek alishan party hone wali thi jisme sirf gine chune amirjado ko hi bulaya gaya tha. log indeviour company ki party me shamil hone me bhi apni shaan samajhte the. india aur bahar ke deshon ke sirf gine chune jane mane bussinessman, politician, bureaucrats log dheere dheere is hotel me jama ho rahe the. shaam hote hote hotel ko achhe se saja diya gaya. Hotel ke andar sirf unhi logon ko jane diya jaa raha tha jinke pass entry pass ho. Kokila achhe se party me sab chijo par najar banaye hue thi aur unka saath hetal , suresh aur sunita de rahe the. saath hi unke 50-60 bharosemand noukar wahan moujude the.sab log achhe se kaam kar rahe the ki sunita suresh ko pakad kar ek room me le aayi.
suresh-kya baat hai room me kyon le aayi.
sunita-tumko koi sarm hai bhi ya nahi.gahde ki tarah kaam kiye jaa rahe ho.
suresh-kya matlab hai tumhara.
sunita- pichle kitne saalon se tum apne papa ka bussiness me saath de rahe ho.din raat unke aage piche ghumte ho ek wafadaar kutte ki tarah.sara mehnat tumne kiye aur tumhara dhokhebaj baap is company ka malik tere bade bhai ko bana raha hai.tum kuch karte kyon nahi.
suresh-mai kya kar sakta hoon. maine kosis to kiya na. har samaya papa ke saath raha unke kaam me hath bataya ye soch kar ki wo ekdin mujhe is company ka malik banayenge lekin mere baap ne mujhe hi dhokha diya to mai kya karu.
sunita-kuch to karo. agar aaj tumhara bhai is company ka malik ban gaya to poori jindagi tum bas is ghar ka mamooli sa noukar bankar rah jaoge.
suresh-darling mai bhi mr jaggi singhania ka khoon hoon. itni jaldi haar nahi man ne wala. bas sahi samay aur sahi mouka aane do. abhi sahi samay nahi hai in baton ka.apne dil par patthar rakh kar muskurao. dil me chupe jahar ko kuch din aur chupa ka rakho.sahi samay par ye jahar kaam aayega. aur fir suresh sunita ke gale.aur fir room se nikalkar kaam me lag gaye.
idhar jahan warsav me log hotel me party ki taiyarion me jute hue the wahi is jagah se koso door california ke ek bungalow me suresh baitha hua tha. aaj wo bahut khush tha kyonki uska aaj ek sapna poora hone wala tha aur wo sapna tha indeviour company ka malik banna. aaj jaggi bhi bahut khush the kyonki aaj wo khud se apne bete ramesh ko lane california gaye the... aur fir jaise hi jaggi apne bete ke bungalow me ghuse suresh doud kar aaya unke paav chune lekin jaggi usko gale laga liye.
jaggi-beta chalo aaj mai tujhe apni company ka bhaar tujhpar soupna chahta hoon.
suresh ke man me to khusiyon ki lahar doud gayi lekin wo apne baap ke saamne khud ko lalchi sabit nahi karna chahta tha isliye wo apni khushi ko daba kar bola-papa itni bhi kya jaldi hai. mai to abhi yahan apni company set kar hi raha hoon. agar mai is company ko chod dunga to ye doob jayega.
jaggi-beta is company ko chod de. ab mai budha hone chala hoon ab mai aur kaam nahi kar paunga.
ramesh-thik hai papa jaisi aapki marji aur fir wo apne papa jaggi ke gale lag gaya. jahan jaggi ke dil me khushi thi ki ab uska beta company sambhalega wahi ramesh ke dil me lalach aur dhokha ke bulbule umad rahe the.
fir dono baap bete california se ek private jet se chal diye poland ki rajdhani warsav ki ore. ye hawai safar bhi 8 ghante ka tha. aur sham ke 7 baje dono warsav pahuch gaye fir ek jagmagati hui silver rolls royce unke samne khadi ho gayi. dono baap bete chal diye is car me baith kar victoria hotel jahan aaj ramesh ke varsho ka sapna poora hone wala tha.
lekin kya ramesh ka sapna poora ho payega. kya vidhi ka vidhan itna saral hai ki ramesh jaise kamine, nich, lalchi aur ghatiya aadmi ko india ke itni badi company indeviour ka malik bana dega.
sayad nahi...
aur achanak se ek car aur ek petrol se bhare truck me takkar hua jor ki awaz aayi dhaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm aur truck ki itni speed thi ki break lagane ke baad bhi wo truck lagbhag 500 metre tak car ko ghasit ta chala gaya...aur fir ek ek karke 4-5 jordar dhamaka hua dhummmmmmmmmmmm dhummmmmmmmmmmmmm dhummmmmmmmm dhummmmmmmmm dhummmmmmmmmm aur car aur truck dono jalgaye. jahan ek ore ek sadak par ye hadsa hua thik usi samay hotel victoria par bhi kuch anjaan logon ne humla kar diya. lagbahg 10-15 log hathon me gun aur barood liye dhadhate hue hotel me ghus gaye...dhadd dhadd dhadd dhaddd firing karte hue hotel me ghuse aur ek ek karke 25-30 bam us hotel me fek kar farar ho gaye...dhummm dhummmm dhummmmm dhummmmmmmm dhummmmmmm karle hotel bhi fat pada...aur kuch log mare gaye kuch log ghayal hue to kuch log hi bach paye jinki kismat upar wale ne sone ke kalam se likhi thi.