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Horror Saya. Dobara chudel ki prem kahani

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Yaar please ek din or do. Pura likh nahi pai me. Kosis kar rahi hu. Thoda or likhne ki. Kyo ki update jab tak bada nahi hota muje likhne me maza nahi aata. Sorry thoda late hota he. Par update bada hi lakhne me maza aata he.

Par is bar aap ko bhi comment deni padegi ki kise padhne me maza aata he. Shusumi reeta kamini tanya ya karishma. Inme se kise abhi padhne me maza aa raha he???..
Susumi aur reeta ko xor ke baaki sabhi character axe hain_jab ki 1st part me raziya aur Susumi bhi Behtarin character the magar 2nd part me to Main raziya aur Susumi ko skip hi kar Deta hoon...kam se Kam hamare hero ka to Khayal Kiya hota aakhir raziya hamare hero ki maa hain_us hisab se mujhe Raziya ka character bilkul axa nahin laga_hero ko jab pata CHALEGA ki uski Maa ki sexual relation hain Woh bhi uske Umar ke ladko ke saath to hamare hero ko kaisa lagega_jab ki use apni dusri Maa ka bhi relation dusro ke saath axa nahin lag raha hain jab ki use pata hain ki Woh Chudail hain aaur Yeh sab uski majburi hain... Aap Agar chahte to raziya ka character kux axa Dikha Sakte the_ek Achhe story me sirf sex Dikhana hi important nahin hota Woh sirf ek part hota_
 

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Susumi aur reeta ko xor ke baaki sabhi character axe hain_jab ki 1st part me raziya aur Susumi bhi Behtarin character the magar 2nd part me to Main raziya aur Susumi ko skip hi kar Deta hoon...kam se Kam hamare hero ka to Khayal Kiya hota aakhir raziya hamare hero ki maa hain_us hisab se mujhe Raziya ka character bilkul axa nahin laga_hero ko jab pata CHALEGA ki uski Maa ki sexual relation hain Woh bhi uske Umar ke ladko ke saath to hamare hero ko kaisa lagega_jab ki use apni dusri Maa ka bhi relation dusro ke saath axa nahin lag raha hain jab ki use pata hain ki Woh Chudail hain aaur Yeh sab uski majburi hain... Aap Agar chahte to raziya ka character kux axa Dikha Sakte the_ek Achhe story me sirf sex Dikhana hi important nahin hota Woh sirf ek part hota_
Jo me dikhana chahti hu vo bata nahi sakti. Baki horror chudel ki story he to chhal dhokha to story me banta hi he. Agar aage tak padho or aage ki story kuchh samaz pae to maza aaega. Par fir bhi sorry me meri thim badalna nahi chahti
 

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Jo me dikhana chahti hu vo bata nahi sakti. Baki horror chudel ki story he to chhal dhokha to story me banta hi he. Agar aage tak padho or aage ki story kuchh samaz pae to maza aaega. Par fir bhi sorry me meri thim badalna nahi chahti
Nahin aap apni tarha se hi likho_kyu ki aapne ppuchchhi Thi ki ( aap logon ko kaun sa character read karne me achha lag raha hain) isi liye Maine aap ko reply Kiya otherwise aap apne tarha se hi likho_
 

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Nahin aap apni tarha se hi likho_kyu ki aapne ppuchchhi Thi ki ( aap logon ko kaun sa character read karne me achha lag raha hain) isi liye Maine aap ko reply Kiya otherwise aap apne tarha se hi likho_
Thank you so much. Aaj sham tak kosis me hu ki next update de du.
 

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Me likh rahi hu dosto late hoga aaj update dene me
 

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Jo me dikhana chahti hu vo bata nahi sakti. Baki horror chudel ki story he to chhal dhokha to story me banta hi he. Agar aage tak padho or aage ki story kuchh samaz pae to maza aaega. Par fir bhi sorry me meri thim badalna nahi chahti
Aap apne hisab se lekhie. Aapki kahani ko apne tarah se lekhie. Ek writer ke nate main apki feelings samjh sakta hoon. Aap apni kahani apne tarah se likhie. Aap ki kahani unique hai. Bahut bada fan hoon. Jo kahani ko enjoy karte hai. Kahani main ghuske oh hi apki kahani ke kamukta ko samjh paenge. Sab apni opinion rakhenge kiun ki aap ki story ko sab apne tarah se enjoy karte hai . Sab ki demand same nehi hota. Unke demand se khus ho jaie kiun ki readers ke excitement hin writer ko kahani likhne ke lie utsah bhar deta hai.
Main janta hoon busy life main ek ek update dene ke lie kitna bakt lagta hai. Aap to sab kuchh achhe se likhke correction karke dete ho. Main to correction karne ke lie bakt nehi de pata. Ager apko bakt mile to mere kahani bhi padhna . Wish you all the best👍👍
 

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Reeta us martin ko chhod bhagti hui cinema hall ke bahar nikalne lagi. Uske ek hath me phone tha. Ghabrahat or gussa dono hi uske chahere pe saf zalak raha tha. Vo chila chila kar bas yahi bol rahi thi.

Reeta ; (gussa chila kar) me aa rahi hu. Use kuchh nahi hona chahiye.

????? ; (haste hue) jaldi aa jao. Muje rumhara besabri se intjar he.

Udhar shameer bhi reeta ko chila chila kar bol raha tha.

Shameer ; mat jao reeta samzo ye trep he. Reeta please.

Magar samne jo shaksh tha vo ek vampair ek mard chudel tha. Use bhi chhoti si bhi aavaj sunai de jati. Jo bat reeta ko shameer kahe raha tha. Vo us shaksh ko bhi sunai de rahi thi. Kyo ki reeta ke dono call chalu the. Reeta ne gusse me apne kan se earring ko khich ke kan se alag kar diya. Or gusse me use jamun par fek diya. Lambi falang bharte hue reeta rod par bahot tez chal rahi thi.
Reeta ko gussa is bat se aa raha tha kyo ki pahele hi chudelo ki vajah se usne apno ko kho diya tha. Bade arse ke bad koi use pyara apna sa lagne laga tha. Pyar ho gaya tha. Or use agar jan ke khatre me dekha to badle ki bhavna buri tarike se ubhar kar aa rahi thi.

???? ; (pagalpan) bjagti raho jab tak me na kahu.

Or us shaks ki aavaj ke bad use jeet ke chikhne ki aavaj bhi aai. Jese koi chij uske sharir me ghop di ho.

Jeet ; (dard se) aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa........ (Rote hue) nahi mat karo esa mat karo.

Kan me lagae phon se reeta ki ek ankh se anshu gore galo pe pahoch gaya. Or chila kar reeta bhi boli.

Reeta ; (chila kar gussa) eeee bola na me aa rahi hu. Use kuchh mat kar.

Or reeta or joro se bhagne lagi. Vo shaksh phone par reeta ko interaction deta or reeta use follow karti hui usi jagah pahoch gai jaha jeet or reeta ne 4play kiya tha. Vahi band makan. Or makan bhi esi jagah tha jaha or koi makan bhi nahi tha. Pas me kuchh fectry jo rat ke wakt band thi. Jab vo us ghar ke bahar pahochi to jeet ko usne usi makan ki chhat par latakta huaa paya. Jeet pasina pasina. Kapta huaa chahera. Pau bandhe hue hath pichhe bandhe hue or ek rassi gale me. Par uski sharit ko pakad ke vahi shaks khada tha.
Jise paheli vali female teacher ka murder karte hue CCTV footage me dekha tha. Jisne cinema hall ki 2 tikits surjit agarwal ke name se book ki thi. Reeta ko andhere raste me dekhte hi. Jeet ghabrate hue use bachane ke lie gidgidane ki bhikh mangne laga.

Jeet ; (kapte hue) muje bachalo reeta ye muje mar dalega. Ye unshan nahi shetan he shetan. Isi ne hamari miss ko mara he. Yahi katil he.

Ek shans me vo kya kya bol gaya. Vahi vo shaks reeta ko dekhte hue hasne laga.

Shaks ; (smaile) tu ise bachane aai he na??? To le bacha le.

Or jeet ko usne dhakka mar diya. Jeet ekdam se fasi ke fande se latak gaya. Reeta ne turant hi ek chakra jesi chij feki. Or gale ki rassi kat gai. Jeet niche gira. Par niche reeta thi. Jeet ko to bacha liya. Reeta bhi use sambhalte hue gir gai. Reeta khadi hui. Or hatho me do chaku. Jispar chandi ka koting tha. Vo upar jane ke lie ghar me ghusi. Or jese door khola. Dusri teacher ki lash jamin par padi thi. Pura khoon sharir se gayab. Body jese safed si pad gai ho. Magar vo vampair rode pe kud gaya. To reeta bhi lapak ke bahar aa gai. Ab kuchh faslo pe jeet ke ek taraf reeta or dusri taraf vo vampair. Jeet bichara hath pau bandhe hur jamin par pada tha.
Jeet ne sirf hatho ko aage la kar apne pau khol paya tha. Par vo gira huaa tha. Vo vampair hasne laga. Or zuk gaya. Jese reeta ke sath khel khel raha ho. Reeta samaz gai. Or dono ne ek sath race hi laga di. Dono jeet ki taraf bhagne lage. Par vo vampair tha. Vo reeta se tez hi bhag shakta tha. Reeta bhi janti thi. Bhagte hue reeta ne apne left hand ka chaku fek ke mara. Par us vampair ne use gira diya. Vo jeet pe kudne hi vala tha ki uski pitth par ek teer laga or vo jamin par gira. Vampair ke pichhe khud shameer pahoch gaya tha.
Musibat se bachne ke lie bahot pahele se hi ye taiyari shameer kar chuka tha. Usne reeta ke body parts me ek invention ki madad me chhote chhote boll jese clothing gps trecor dal diye the. Vo vampair ghayal ho kar jamin pe gira. Par apne dono hatho se reeta ka feka huaa chaku jeet ne uthaya or us vampair ki taraf chilate hue tez bhaga.

Jeet ; (josh chila kar) yaaaaaa......

Udhar reeta or shameer bhi chila kar use rokne ki kosis kar rahe the.

Shameer ; nai nai nai.

Reeta ; jeet.... Ruk jao...

Par jeet ne vo chaku jor se us vampire ke seene me bhok diya. Vo vampair vahi apne aap jal ke marne laga.

Shameer ne apna pau jamin pe patka or chilaya.

Shameer ; yaaaaa shit shit shit.

Reeta bhag ke aai or jeet ko baho me bhar liya. Jeet ro raha tha. Par shameer gusse se chila kar fir jeet pe blem dene laga.

Shameer ; (chila kar) isne jan buch kar use mara he. Sala sabut to hath aane se pahele mit gaya.

Reeta jeet ke pax me shameer se bahes karne lagi.

Reeta ; ese be faltu iljam mat do shameer. Tumne dekha nahi iski halat. Mene dekha he. Isne dar or josh me uspe hamla kiya.

Shameer ko kuchh or khel lag raha tha. Unhe vampair ko jinda pakadnaa tha. Vahi jeet ghutno par beth ke rone laga. Uski lar tak tapak gai.

Jeet ; (rote hue) usne usne hamari mam ko mar dala. Mar dala usne....
 
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Time lagega dosto photos upload nahi ho pa rahe
 
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Usi rat andhera hone ki taiyari me tha. Mumbai se bahar jungle me ek sumshan jagah pe ek kamukh avtar me deepika. Kisi mard ke sath thi. Deepika apni kadmo se thirakti hui kamar matkate hue ek mard ki taraf badh rahi thi. Uski kamar me badhi hui vo chain jo uski nabhi ko or khubshurat bana rahi thi.
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Deepika ka kamukh rup kuchh is tarah tha ki budhe me bhi jawani ka josh bhar de. Khubshurat chahere ke sath uske unnat vrax or uski halki charbi se bhari kamar jo jawani ke padav se pahele ye jahir kar rahi thi ki jawani vale khel vo bahot pahele hi khelna start kar chuki he.or isme koi shak nahi tha ki masum dikhne vale us khubshurat chahere me hawas ka bavnad chhup huaa he. Jo mard tha vo pagal khane se laya huaa ek mand budhi par jawan ladka tha. Jo dewpika ki jawani dekh kar hase hi ja raha tha. Or deepika uske pas pahoch gai.
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Deepika ; (smaile) kesa lag raha he arun???

Vo pagalo ke jese hasne laga. Or ekdam se ghum kar deepika ko dekhta he. Kyo ki pagal khane se bhagane ke pahele uska roop kuchh or tha. Or ab to deepika kuchh alag hi roop me he. Deepika ki kamukh kamar uske ubhare hue boobs. Pagal hone ke bavjud bhi use kuchh na samaz me aate hue bahot kuchh sharir me mahesus ho raha tha.

Deepika ; (smaile) kya dekh rahe ho arun???

Arun to deepika ki kamar or nabhi ko hi dekhe ja raha tha.

Arun ; tumne ahhh kapade kab badli kiye. Kya tum sach me jadu janti ho.

Deepika ; (smaile) ha arun dekho mene kese jadu se badli kiye.

Aurn ; to kya tum muje sach me rekha se mila doge??

(Rekha vo ladki hoti he jiski vajah se arun uske pyar me dhokha kha kar pagal ho gaya tha)

Deepika ; (smaile) ha agar me jesa bolungi tum vesa karoge to tum rekha ko vapas pa sakte ho. Is photo ko dhyan se dekho.

Usne vo photo diya vo uski purani girlfriend rekha ka tha.

Deepika ; (smaile) ab apni ankhe band karo.

Deepika ne adesh diya or us bechare ne apni ankhe band kar li. Use rekha ke sath bitae pal yaad aane lage. Vo ankhe band kiye hi mushkurata he.

Arun ; (ankhe band smaile) sss rekha hhhhh....

Deepika ; (smaile) ankhe kholo arun me tumhari rekha. Me tumse pyar karti hu arun muje pyar karo na arun akhe kholo arun.

Or jab usne ankhe kholi to use deepika me rekha najar aane lagi. Deepika ka kamukh badan use rekha me najar aane laga. Vo rekha samaz kar deepika ke gol gol ghumne laga.
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Deepika ; muje pyar karo na arun dekho me tumhare pas aai hu arun muje pyar karo na arun.

Arun ne deepika ko rekha samaz kar zatke se uski kamar pakad li. Or zatke se apni or khich kar baho me bhar liya. Deepika ek premika ki tarah sharmane ka natak karti he.
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pas me hi jamin par puja ka saman pada huaa tha. Ek lamba dhar dar chaku bhi. Lal sindur or kuchh fal jadi buti aadi bhi. Or rekha ke name se pagal arun ka maind wash kiya ja raha tha. Par pagal arun ne jab deeika ko kash ke jakada use ek mardana ehsas huaa. Vo bhi veer ki kalpna karti he. Vo arun ko dhakka deti he. Arun niche jamin par gir gaya.
Uski najro me to rekha thi. Jo use gira kar kamukh tarike se use dekh kar sharti ankho se dekh rahi he. Or dhire dhire apne kapde utar rahi he. Jamini par pada arun ki jindhi me sayad ese koi pal honge jise sayad yaad karte hue doharane ki kosis me ho. Arun bhi apni pant ka belt or pant ko jamin pat late late hi khol deta he. Vahi jise vo rekha samaz kar ye sab kar raha tha vo uski zango se thoda upar land ke pas beth gai. Or apne hatho se uski T-shirt utarne lagi. Vo has rahi thi.
Arun jo dekh raha tha vo to sab rekha ke sath mahesua kar raha tha. Par uske sath jo ho raha tha vo to deepika kar rahi thi. Uska tana huaa 7" ke ling pe beth kar deepika nigal gai. Uske tane hue land ko apni chut me ghusvate vakt deepika ne veer ke bade mote or varjin land ko yaad kiya. Dhire dhire uski chut me ghusta huaa vo land us pagal arun ko nahi veer ko img karte hue usne apni ankhe band kar ke jor se michi.

Deepika ; (ankhe band) dard ahhhhhhhh....

Vo upar asman ki taraf sar karti he. Or apne dono hath arun ki chest pe rakhti hui. Ek bar or upar niche hui.

Arun ; ahhh ssss rekha ssss.

Vo or jyada tez karte hue upar niche hone lagi. Anand or uttejna dono me bhar gai. Par jab bhi vo rekha bolta deepika hosh me aakar vo maza nahi le pati. Deepika ko gussa aaya. Usne bagal me puja ke sath saman dekha or hath lamba kar ke vo chaku ko ahista se apne hath me liya. Or ahista se sahelya ho vese uske gale se nikal diya. Ekdam ahista se jese jamin se pani nikla ho uske gale se khoon nikalne laga.
Deepika khadi hui or mantra ucharan karti hui puja vali jahah pe beth gai. Uske gale se nikal nare khoon me vo apna hath bhigo kar lal rang me san deti he. Or fir vahi khoon se sana hath pas me padi ek thali. Jisme chaval rakhe the. Usme dal deti he. Esa bar bar kar ke vo pure chaval lal kar deti he.
Pas me ek gudda bhi tha. Chhota sa. deepika ne usme arun ki lash se sar ke bal kate or us gudde se dage ke sath bandh diye. Mantro ucharan karne ke bad vo nangi chaval ki thali uttha kar usme se mutthi bhar ke chaval khane lagi. Or jor jor se hasti he.

Deepika ; (hasi pagalpan)(smaile) ab rekha ki bari..... Ha ha ha....
 
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