MaxMan
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Horror Saya. Dobara chudel ki prem kahani
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Mene story ko ek webseries ki tarah pesh ki hai. Story ke har kirdar se alag alag wakt par leed karwai hai. Magar muje kuchh wakt se na Likes mil rahe hai na hi review. Koi comments nahi aa rahi. Agar support nahi hoga to me aage kese likhungi.
Ek bar ke update likhne me kitni plotting hoti hai. Seen ke lie photos jutane padte hai. Skript taiyar karni padti hai. Aur fir koi comments nahi aati to bahot dukh hota hai.
Yaar support milne se maind khush hoga. Tabhi to badhiya badhiya thoughts aaenge. Aur badhiya consept banenge. Tabhi to ek shandar story banegi.
Luser
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Hlw ... Mam big famm....
Mujhe aapke story bahut pasand aaye ...aap ek kusal lekhak hai ...mere khayal se aapko insict story likhna chahye ...like hate story with horror aspects....
MAHASIVH KE KRIPA AAP PER BANE RHEE
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Lot of thanks ki aap ne comments ki. Par ese hi muje apne updates par support chahiye. Me puri kosis kar rahi hu ki kahani ke end ko bhi puri tarah se explain kar ke likh saku. Story ab 10% jitni hi bachi hai. Par uske bhi updateds bahot bade hai. Abhi bhi pura karne me kafi time lagega. Aap please mere updates par ese hi comments karte rahiyega. Aur please ho sake to Likes bhi dijiyega lot of thanks.
MaxMan
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Apki bat shi h me sehmat hu ise me ummid krunga ki apko acha review mile or apka confidence boost ho
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spritemathews
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Okay toh mujhe ab ek silent reader se bhar aana padega toh main point to point jaata hu
1st main aapki stories bhaut pasand karta hu aapki meri police wali biwi and saya dobara acchi h main kabhi khul kr samne nahi aata pr main aapki story ko ek accha presentation samjhta hu joh sex se jyada acche se present hua hain.
2nd ek baat yeh hain ki maine iss story 1st part nahi padha lekin iske bawajood mujhe 2nd part read karne mein dikkat nahi h yeh ek bhauth badhiya khoobi h aapki writer
3rd main samjhta aap ek achi writer hain pr aapne itni alag alag jagah scene khol rkhe ki yeh dikkat create karega like ek jagah veer ka(my fav) ek siggi wiggi ek kamini ek deepika itni alag sect. Ki readers yaad nahi rkh payenge ya comfortable
4th personal maine shuru se veer ko main character manna hain ofcourse female lead hain but ya veer is imp. Pr jeet au shamir ko overvalued kiya jaarha h aur mujhe veer ka part jyada dekhna hain . Shayad isliye jeet aur shamir mujhe itne main nahi lgte hain pr read karta hu bcoz of your work
( Aap joh kar rhi ho sab badhiya hain change mtt karo aur na story band karo story badhiya hain ) agar need hue mai wapis active hoke apna personal joh personal mujhe feel hota hain bta dunga
Good job
1st main aapki stories bhaut pasand karta hu aapki meri police wali biwi and saya dobara acchi h main kabhi khul kr samne nahi aata pr main aapki story ko ek accha presentation samjhta hu joh sex se jyada acche se present hua hain.
2nd ek baat yeh hain ki maine iss story 1st part nahi padha lekin iske bawajood mujhe 2nd part read karne mein dikkat nahi h yeh ek bhauth badhiya khoobi h aapki writer
3rd main samjhta aap ek achi writer hain pr aapne itni alag alag jagah scene khol rkhe ki yeh dikkat create karega like ek jagah veer ka(my fav) ek siggi wiggi ek kamini ek deepika itni alag sect. Ki readers yaad nahi rkh payenge ya comfortable
4th personal maine shuru se veer ko main character manna hain ofcourse female lead hain but ya veer is imp. Pr jeet au shamir ko overvalued kiya jaarha h aur mujhe veer ka part jyada dekhna hain . Shayad isliye jeet aur shamir mujhe itne main nahi lgte hain pr read karta hu bcoz of your work
( Aap joh kar rhi ho sab badhiya hain change mtt karo aur na story band karo story badhiya hain ) agar need hue mai wapis active hoke apna personal joh personal mujhe feel hota hain bta dunga
Good job
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Thankyou very very much spritemathews. Muje intjar raheta hai aap ke review ka
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Thankyou very very much ki aap samne aae. Apne review ke jariye meri kai khamiyon ki muje janakari di. Me kosis karungi ki in sab bato par gor karu.Okay toh mujhe ab ek silent reader se bhar aana padega toh main point to point jaata hu
1st main aapki stories bhaut pasand karta hu aapki meri police wali biwi and saya dobara acchi h main kabhi khul kr samne nahi aata pr main aapki story ko ek accha presentation samjhta hu joh sex se jyada acche se present hua hain.
2nd ek baat yeh hain ki maine iss story 1st part nahi padha lekin iske bawajood mujhe 2nd part read karne mein dikkat nahi h yeh ek bhauth badhiya khoobi h aapki writer
3rd main samjhta aap ek achi writer hain pr aapne itni alag alag jagah scene khol rkhe ki yeh dikkat create karega like ek jagah veer ka(my fav) ek siggi wiggi ek kamini ek deepika itni alag sect. Ki readers yaad nahi rkh payenge ya comfortable
4th personal maine shuru se veer ko main character manna hain ofcourse female lead hain but ya veer is imp. Pr jeet au shamir ko overvalued kiya jaarha h aur mujhe veer ka part jyada dekhna hain . Shayad isliye jeet aur shamir mujhe itne main nahi lgte hain pr read karta hu bcoz of your work
( Aap joh kar rhi ho sab badhiya hain change mtt karo aur na story band karo story badhiya hain ) agar need hue mai wapis active hoke apna personal joh personal mujhe feel hota hain bta dunga
Good job
Aap sab ko muje support karna hoga kyo ki muje Likes dene vale comments karne vale redars bahot hi kam hai. Jaha kai story ke ek ek post ko bhar bhar ke Likes milte hai. Vaha mere kai post to khali rahe jati hai. Aur fir ek writer kesa feel karega jab uske ek hi page par dusra update dega. Vo bhi ek update se dusre updates ke bich 14, 15 din ka time ho chuka ho.
Esa ehsas hota hai ki meri story koi padh nahi raha hai. Log story par bat karenge likes karenge to lagega ki ha koi meri story ko padand kar raha hai. Moral jyada high hoga. Aur us se aage likhne me bhi maza aaega. Thankyou so much ki aap samne aae aur ek bahetarin review diya. Umid hai ki ese hi aap aage bhi mera sath nibhaenge.