Serious discussion on stories.

[Aakash.]

Kis baat ki koshish karu ?

Filhaal to kahaniyan padhne ,likhne aur office me busy rehta hoo . Jab kahaniya khatm ho jayegi tab review likhne ki koshish me man lagayenge

Romantic kahani hai aapki ​

 

[Innocent_devil]

Romantic kahani hai aapki ​

Romantic ke sath sath magical bhi hai

 

[Dynamic2]

Guys aap sabhi se ek baat kehna chaahta hu isliye yeh thread bnaya h...
Kuch incest stories mene yaha pdhna start kii thi, jo mujhe boht pasand aai unke shuruaati daur me par dheere dheere wo stories incest se shift hokar adultery bna dii gyi aur fir hero ki behno ko kisi k sath bhi pilwa diya...
Toh kuch kahaniya aisi h jinme hero ek normal insaan tha par dheere dheere jese story aage badhi, usme shaktiyaa aa gyi.. aur 100 200 gundo ko akele hi pel diya usne...
Aur kuch kahaniya aisi h jisme hero k prati harr ladkiya attract hoti jaati h chaahe maa ho chaahe koi bhi ladki ho bss harr ladki... Aur unka koi reason bhi nahi rehta.
Toh mein yeh puchna chaahta hu ki kya logo ko bina logic waali stories zyada pasand aati h kya? Yadi aisa h toh mein bhi ek likhunga fir aur yadi aisa nahi h toh log aisi kahaniya kyu pdh rahe h fir???

Muje to real type story pasand he jis me maa bete ko aasani se chut na de aur loda bhi normal naki gadhe jesa jo posible na ho.
Jis me sab emotional ho naki maa bahan randi hi ban Jai hero ki

 

[Ashish120]

 

[Aakash.]

Kaamchor ​

 

[abnne13]

Guys aap sabhi se ek baat kehna chaahta hu isliye yeh thread bnaya h...
Kuch incest stories mene yaha pdhna start kii thi, jo mujhe boht pasand aai unke shuruaati daur me par dheere dheere wo stories incest se shift hokar adultery bna dii gyi aur fir hero ki behno ko kisi k sath bhi pilwa diya...
Toh kuch kahaniya aisi h jinme hero ek normal insaan tha par dheere dheere jese story aage badhi, usme shaktiyaa aa gyi.. aur 100 200 gundo ko akele hi pel diya usne...
Aur kuch kahaniya aisi h jisme hero k prati harr ladkiya attract hoti jaati h chaahe maa ho chaahe koi bhi ladki ho bss harr ladki... Aur unka koi reason bhi nahi rehta.
Toh mein yeh puchna chaahta hu ki kya logo ko bina logic waali stories zyada pasand aati h kya? Yadi aisa h toh mein bhi ek likhunga fir aur yadi aisa nahi h toh log aisi kahaniya kyu pdh rahe h fir???

Nice Thread. I shall reply in English, as I am more comfortable in English. You make a valid point. Should a story be logical. Unfortunately if it is only logical then it will not be appealing to readers.

The average length of the Indian penis is 13.71 cms or 5.398 inches (you can google). Now show me one story where the man's penis is 5.5 inches. It is always 7 or 8 inches or even more. So every story has an element of fiction rather than facts.

Of course, it is the skill of the story teller to weave fiction into facts.

In my own story (which is a true experience) , I have had readers asking me to add cuckold and gang-bangs in the story. Now, this is the dilemma. Should I be logical or illogical? You decide.....

 

[abnne13]

आप से पूर्ण रूप से सहमत हूँ ऐसी कहानियों को पढ़ कर मैं बोर हो जाता हूँ पर एक बात आपको भी समझनी पड़ेगी अभी जो लेखक हैं वो नए हैं उन्होंने लिखना शुरू किया है हम लोगों को उन्हें सपोर्ट करना चाहिए और अपनी बात कहनी चाहिए कि वो कहाँ पर गलत कर रहे हैं लेकिन इस तरीके से कि उन्हे बुरा भी ना लगे.

sharif, beautifully explained. You are right. New writers should be encouraged in diplomatic way.

 

[abnne13]

Dunno bro i was always a silent reader but yes if i guess anything i will surely comment about that

Nub, Wish readers would comment about stories written. Writing a story with passion, takes hours. Unfortunately readers do not have the time to even take a minute to comment. Though some do "Like" using the emoji.

 

[abnne13]

Yadi sirf sex hona chahiye...
Toh lagta h mere se wesi nahi likhi jaegi..

Werewolf, I have not read your stories, but sex has to be an integral part of every story here. This is an Adult Site and readers here are looking for a heavy does of sex. How you weave it into the story, depends on your flair and skill in story telling.

 

[ASannd123]

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Ye story bich main kqy u atk gayi bhai ky dusri froum per complete hai ya Riwter bhcih main chod diya hai 1 yer ho gya Riwter online nhi hai