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Rajesh sarhadi became rajesh sardardi for you it seems
Serious discussion on stories.
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Chutiyadr
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logic ke bina story to hit ho jayegi lekin writer flop ho jata hai , writer ki ijjat uski writing skills hi hoti hai , ager likhane wale ho to dhang se hi likhna khud ko likhane me maja na aaye to fir matlab hi kya hoga ...
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ye to wo exmple de raha tha ki kaise spelling me misteck hoti haiChega kya hota hai
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Guys aap sabhi se ek baat kehna chaahta hu isliye yeh thread bnaya h...
Kuch incest stories mene yaha pdhna start kii thi, jo mujhe boht pasand aai unke shuruaati daur me par dheere dheere wo stories incest se shift hokar adultery bna dii gyi aur fir hero ki behno ko kisi k sath bhi pilwa diya...
Toh kuch kahaniya aisi h jinme hero ek normal insaan tha par dheere dheere jese story aage badhi, usme shaktiyaa aa gyi.. aur 100 200 gundo ko akele hi pel diya usne...
Aur kuch kahaniya aisi h jisme hero k prati harr ladkiya attract hoti jaati h chaahe maa ho chaahe koi bhi ladki ho bss harr ladki... Aur unka koi reason bhi nahi rehta.
Toh mein yeh puchna chaahta hu ki kya logo ko bina logic waali stories zyada pasand aati h kya? Yadi aisa h toh mein bhi ek likhunga fir aur yadi aisa nahi h toh log aisi kahaniya kyu pdh rahe h fir???
Sex agar likhte ho to sex ke liye banaya gaya situation hi story hai... Fir usme ipl (i-pill) aur viyograh ( viagrah) ki jaroorat nahi.. bus dhakadhak engene chalna chaiye aur piston ghise na... Subah 6 baje se shuru ho sex aur raat ke 3 baje tak rukna nahi chahiye..
Target pahla hona chahiye ki story ke pahle ek sal me shahar ki sari ladki bhabhi aur aunty ka kapde utar chuke hone chahiye.. fir ek sahahr ka kaam khatam to dusra shahar ka kaam shuru kar sakte hain ...
Waise inoovation aur creation ki b bahut demand hoti hai in stories me like dedh fit ka lund.. 2 fit .. yahan size always matter .. kuch padhne walaon ko to 5 fit ka lund bhi demand me rahta hai taki three some me ek ke niche se dal kar muh se nikal se aur dusri wali uske muh par baith kar dhakadhak maza le rahi ho..
Next aap tarah tarah ke jagah plan kar sakte hain sex ke liye .. sealing fan par baith kar sex kar rahe hai. Aur niche use log dhundh rahe hain .. so basically sex story me logic sare wahi hoti hai jo ek ke baad ek sex scene ke ore le jaye..
Waise ye aaj tak mujhe samjh me na aaya ki ye incest adultary kaise ho jati hai... Bina adultary ke to incest bhi nahi hoga... Rahi baat kisi ke sath kisi ke sex scene ki to ek hi partner ki chudai dekh kar reader bore ho jate hain...
Baki logic aur magic wali jo story hai usme plotting hoti hai fir situation aur readers ke dher sare sawal wo bhi jo 1-2 pahunch rahe ho aap ki story me .. so I think yahan koi aane wala nahi jabtak kahani end par na aa jaye..
Gin ke 4 reader honge .. aur 2-4 wo reader honge jo chilla chilla kar kahte hai ki mujhe change chahiye aur visibility off karke pare rahte hain unhi bina logic wali kahaniyon par jise aap to bina logic ke kah rahe.. usne bhi yahan aakar 5-10 post kar diye ki nana logic aur magic wali achi story likho.. lekin muth marne ke baad jab unhe nind aati hai fir ghanta unhe samjh me aayega ki ab kya achi ya buri story padhni hai.. unka kaam ho gaye wo gaye sone..
So choice up to u... Virana chahiye ya hariyali khud decide kar lijiye
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Haa! Mene as a sarcasm kaha tha.logic ke bina story to hit ho jayegi lekin writer flop ho jata hai , writer ki ijjat uski writing skills hi hoti hai , ager likhane wale ho to dhang se hi likhna khud ko likhane me maja na aaye to fir matlab hi kya hoga ...
Mujhe bina logic waali stories pasand hi nahi.
Baat sex ki hai toh porn available hai.
Yaha toh hum plot ke liye aate hai aur halka fulka sex with strong emotions.
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Guys aap sabhi se ek baat kehna chaahta hu isliye yeh thread bnaya h...
Kuch incest stories mene yaha pdhna start kii thi, jo mujhe boht pasand aai unke shuruaati daur me par dheere dheere wo stories incest se shift hokar adultery bna dii gyi aur fir hero ki behno ko kisi k sath bhi pilwa diya...
Toh kuch kahaniya aisi h jinme hero ek normal insaan tha par dheere dheere jese story aage badhi, usme shaktiyaa aa gyi.. aur 100 200 gundo ko akele hi pel diya usne...
Aur kuch kahaniya aisi h jisme hero k prati harr ladkiya attract hoti jaati h chaahe maa ho chaahe koi bhi ladki ho bss harr ladki... Aur unka koi reason bhi nahi rehta.
Toh mein yeh puchna chaahta hu ki kya logo ko bina logic waali stories zyada pasand aati h kya? Yadi aisa h toh mein bhi ek likhunga fir aur yadi aisa nahi h toh log aisi kahaniya kyu pdh rahe h fir???
jaldi likho esi Story kai lawde lekar kadhe rahege
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Serious dick-sessionYe serious discussion chal raha hai idhar ?
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Bhai Meri Sabse pehli Or best incest story thi Dewanapan by lover of Darkness which have full logic normal to supernatural also I must prefer you once read that story although it was stopped in last don't know why someone make writer banned so in last thrilling part of story was going on but stopped due to ban on writer but story have very good potential and you will like it and may got so many points/hints for this or next storiesGuys aap sabhi se ek baat kehna chaahta hu isliye yeh thread bnaya h...
Kuch incest stories mene yaha pdhna start kii thi, jo mujhe boht pasand aai unke shuruaati daur me par dheere dheere wo stories incest se shift hokar adultery bna dii gyi aur fir hero ki behno ko kisi k sath bhi pilwa diya...
Toh kuch kahaniya aisi h jinme hero ek normal insaan tha par dheere dheere jese story aage badhi, usme shaktiyaa aa gyi.. aur 100 200 gundo ko akele hi pel diya usne...
Aur kuch kahaniya aisi h jisme hero k prati harr ladkiya attract hoti jaati h chaahe maa ho chaahe koi bhi ladki ho bss harr ladki... Aur unka koi reason bhi nahi rehta.
Toh mein yeh puchna chaahta hu ki kya logo ko bina logic waali stories zyada pasand aati h kya? Yadi aisa h toh mein bhi ek likhunga fir aur yadi aisa nahi h toh log aisi kahaniya kyu pdh rahe h fir???