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What a nice update I just love how you are pacing the story in a certain manner
But Picchle 15 updates pehle Jo jethalal Roshan ko setup kiya tha? Wahi Rita ka kya ho chal raha hai bhai unka conclusion kab aayega??
ARE BHAI ITNI BHI KYA JALDI HAI THORA ENJOYMENT BHI JARURI HAI ENJOY KARO DHEERE DHEERE SAARE DOTS CONNECT HONGE OR SEX COMPETITION START HOGA
 
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Sex Ka Jamana Update 45





Toh Yaaro Jaisa Ki Hamne Abtak Story Me Dekha Ki Kaise Taarak Apni Hi Baat Ko Bhool Chuka Tha or Anjali Se Jhagda Karta Hai Tabhi Sabhi Ke Phone Par Bhide Ka Ek Ajeeb Sa Message Aata Hai Jise Dekh Kar Sabhi Ghabra Jaate Hai


Jethalal Ananya Ke Saath Apne Kuch Moments Share Karta Hai or Dono Ek Doosre Ke Kareeb Aa Jaate Hai

Wahi Tapu or Daya Ko Sex Karte Huye Bapuji Dekh Lete Hai or Katrina Ko Bhi Isme Shaamil Karte Hai or Tapu Katrina Ki to Bapuji Daya Ki Maarte Hai

Idhar Jethalal Ananya Ka Cleavage Dekh Kar Apna Lund Hila Raha Hota Hai Tab Ananya Jaag Jaati Hai or Fir Dono Ke Beech Jordaar Sex Hota Hai Isi Beech Ek Chhota Sa Scene Dikhta Hai Jisme Goli Ko Uski Maa Ke Sodhi Ke Saath Huye Sex Ke Baare Me Pata Chalta Hai Chaliye Ab Aage Badhte Hai





Goli Ke Liye Sab Kuch Badal Gaya Hai. Us Raat Ke Baad, Uska Apni Maa Komal Ke Saath Har Pal Ajeeb Hone Lagta Hai. Pehle Jo Pyaar Bhara Rishta Tha, Ab Usme Ek Heavy Tension Aa Gayi Hai. Goli Apni Maa Se Bilkul Alag Rehne Laga Hai, Usse Baat Karte Waqt Avoid Karta Hai Aur Jab Bhi Komal Paas Aati Hai, Woh Chup Ho Jaata Hai.




Subah Ho Chuki Hai



Komal Kitchen Mein Breakfast Bana Rahi Hoti Hai. Goli Dining Table Par Baitha Hota Hai, Lekin Woh Apni Maa Ki Taraf Dekh Nahi Paata. Komal Uske Liye Sab Kuch Pyar Se Karti Hai, Lekin Goli Ka Reaction Bilkul Cold Hota Hai.



Komal (Pyar Se):

Goli, Beta, Aaj Tera Favorite Poha Banaya Hai. Jaldi Kha Le, College Ka Time Ho Raha Hai.



Goli Sirf Ek Halka Sa Ghoorte Hue, Hmm, Kehta Hai, Bina Koi Excitement Dikhaye. Pehle Toh Woh Maa Ke Haath Ke Khane Ke Liye Kaafi Excited Hota Tha, Lekin Ab Har Cheez Mechanical Si Lagti Hai.



Komal Ko Uska Yeh Badla Hua Behavior Notice Hota Hai. Woh Thoda Pareshan Hoti Hai, Lekin Apne Aap Ko Sambhalte Hue Sochti Hai Ki Shayad Yeh Temporary Phase Hai.



Komal:

Kya Hua, Goli? Sab Theek Hai Na?



Goli Sirf Haan Mein Sir Hilata Hai, Lekin Aankhon Mein Koi Chamak Nahi Hoti. Uska Chehra Khud Ke Emotions Ko Chhupa Nahi Paata.




Goli Naasta Kar Ke College Ke Liye Nikal Jaata Hai

Society Compound Me Use Poori Tapu Sena Milti Hai Along with Ananya and Pranali


Goli Ko Chhor Kar Sabhi Ke Chehre Par Ek Alag Si Chamak Thi

Picchle Dino Hi Sabhi Ne Jordaar Sex Kiya Tha

Tapu Ne Daya Ke Saath

Sonu Ne Bhide Ke Saath

Gogi Ne Pranali Ke Saath

Tapu Ne Katrina Ke Saath

Ananya Ne Jethalal Ke Saath

Pinku Side Me Hokar Pranali Ko Dekh Raha Tha Pranali Sharmaate Huye Us Se Nazar Milane Ki Kosis Kar Rahi Thi

Sabhi College Ke Liye Nikal Jaate Hai

Doosri Taraf Jethalal Apne Flat Par Pahoch Jaata Hai or Daya Se Usko Picchli Raat Ki Saari Baat Pata Chalti Hai

Jethalal Ke Chehre Par Chamak Aa Jaati Hai or Wo Kal Raat Ki Ghatna Daya Ko Batata Hai

Daya Shocked Reh Jaati Hai

Daya : Are Waah Tapu Ke Papa Aap to Rukne Ka Naam Hi Nahi Le Rahe Ek Ke Baad Ek Nayi Chut Aapke Lund Par Ucchal Rahi Hai

Jethalal : to Tu Kaun Sa Ruk Rahi Hai

Pehle Bapuji Fir Wo Iyer or Apne Bete Se Bhi Thuk Gayi Tu to

Daya : Kya Aap Bhi Tapu Ke Papa

Jethalal : Sharma Le Sharma Le Abhi to Wo Sex Wala Competition Baaki Hi Hai

Daya : Mujhe to Bas Usi Ka Intezaar Hai Bas Tapu Ke Papa

Jethalal : Accha Ji

Daya : Haa Ji

Tabhi Poeeche Se Bapuji Aate Hai or Jethalal Ki Peeth Thap Thapate Hai

Jethalal : Are Kya Hua Bapuji

Bapuji : Apne Baap Ko Mat Sikha Chehre Dekh Kar Bata Deta Hu Kisne Kya Kiya Hai

Jethalal : Lo Aapko Bhi Pata Chal Gaya

Bapuji : or Nahi to Kya or Tujhe Bata Du Katrina Taiyaar Hai Tere Saath Suhaagraat Manane Ke Liye

Jethalal : Accha to Ye Baat Hai

Bapuji : or Pata Nahi Kyu Mujhe Kuch Ajeeb Sa Mehsus Ho Raha Hai

Jethalal : Lagta Hai Aapki Bahu Ne Aapki Jaan Nikal Di Hai

Bapuji : Are Aisi Sexy Bahu Ko Kaun Sasur Naa Chodna Chahe

or Daya Ke Gaand Par Spank Kar Dete Hai

Jethalal : Ab to Apne Ghar Me Sabhi Ne Ek Doosre Ke Saath Sex Kar Liya Hai Kyu Na Ghar Me Abse Ham Nange Hi Ghoome Taaki Jab Jiska Khara Ya Geela Ho Sex Karne Lage

Bapuji : Waah Acchi Tarqeeb Hai Beta

Daya : Kya Bapuji Aap Haa Bol Rahe Ho Agar Ko Anjaan Aadmi Aa Gaya to Kya Hoga

Bapuji : Toh Kya Tu Uske Taato Ka Paani Nikal Dena or Kya

or Sabhi Hasne Lagte Hai



Jethalal : Accha Bapuji Bohot Ho Gayi Bakchodi Ab Mai Dukaan Chalta Hu Jai Jinendra

Daya or Bapuji : Jai Jinendra



Jethalal Main Gate Ke Paas Pahochta Hi Hai Ki Uske Saamne Katrina Geele Baalo Me

Ek Sexy Bikini Me Prakat Ho Jaati Hai

Jise Itne Sexy Andaaz Me Dekh Kar Jethalal Ka Lund Ek Hi Jhatke Me Khara Ho Jaata Hai




Dono Ki Nazar Ek Doosre Se Takra Jaati Hai




Katrina Uske Saamne Khadi Hoti Hai, Ek Pyari Muskurahat Ke Saath.



Katrina (Muskurate Hue):

Hello, Mr. Jethalal! Kaise Ho Aap?



Jethalal Ka Dil Ekdum Se Tez Dhadakne Lagta Hai. Woh Ek Halki Nervous Smile Ke Saath Jawab Deta Hai.



Jethalal (Thoda Sharmaate Hue):

Ji... Main Theek Hoon. Aapko Dekhkar Toh... Mann Ekdum Garden-Garden Ho Gaya!



Katrina Hans Padti Hai, Uske Ek Pal Ke Liye Expression Thoda Flirty Ho Jaata Hai.



Katrina (Muskurate Hue):

Garden-Garden, Huh? Aapke Garden Mein Phool Toh Ache Se Khilte Honge?



Jethalal (Double Meaning Mein):

Haan Ji, Bilkul! Bas Ab Soch Raha Hoon Ek Aisa Gardener Mil Jaye, Jo Roz in Phoolon Ko Paani De... Tabhi Toh Aur Ache Se Khilenge.



Katrina Ki Aankhon Mein Ek Sharaarat Si Dikhayi Deti Hai. Uska Jawab Bhi Double Meaning Mein Hota Hai.



Katrina (Halki Muskurahat Ke Saath):

Gardener Toh Mil Hi Jayega, Lekin Paani Ka Pressure Bhi Sahi Hona Chahiye, Tabhi Phool Ache Se Khilenge.



Jethalal Ab Thoda Zyada Sharmaane Lagta Hai, Lekin Andar Hi Andar Maza Le Raha Hota Hai.



Jethalal (Muskurate Hue):

Bilkul... Agar Paani Ka Pressure Theek Ho, Toh Phool Hamesha Khilte Hi Rahenge!



Katrina Apni Aankhen Thoda Chauri Karte Hue Uske Double Meaning Ko Samajh Jaati Hai, Lekin Woh Bhi Is Playful Conversation Ka Maza Leti Hai.



Katrina (Naughty Tone Mein):

Toh Phir Aapko Kisi Din Zaroor Gardener Se Milwaungi... Aur Dekhna Chahungi Ke Aapke Garden Ke Phool Kitne Ache Khilte Hain.



Jethalal Thoda Aur Blush Karne Lagta Hai, Lekin Apne Aap Ko Sambhalte Hue Bolta Hai.



Jethalal:

Jee... Zaroor! Aap Jaise Gardener Ke Haath Lag Jaaye, Toh Garden Toh Kya, Poora Jungle Bhi Saj Jaaye!



Katrina Has Padti Hai, Lekin Uska Flirty Andaaz Barkaraar Rehta Hai.



Katrina:

Jungle Toh Sambhalna Padega, Jethalal Ji... Itna Bara Kaam Hai. Aap Ready Ho Iske Liye?



Jethalal Ka Chehra Ekdum Laal Ho Jaata Hai, Lekin Woh Apni Muskurahat Nahi Rok Paata.



Jethalal (Halki Si Sharmahat Ke Saath):

Ready Hoon Ji... Aapka Gardener Hoon Na!



Katrina Hansne Lagti Hai, Aur Dono Ke Beech Ek Playful, Flirty Conversation Chhodi Der Tak Chalti Rehti Hai. Jethalal Andar Hi Andar Katrina Ke Saath Is Lighthearted Aur Double Meaning Wali Baat-Cheet Ka Maza Le Raha Hota Hai.



Jethalal Apne Se Nikalta Hai or Use Society Compound Me Rita Dikhti Hai




Jethalal: (Thoda Casual Andaaz Mein) Arre Rita, Tum Yahan Kaise? Kahin Ja Rahi Ho?




Rita: (Thoda Surprised) Haan Jetha Bhai, Bas Thoda Kaam Tha, Soch Rahi Thi Market Ke Paas Jaaun.



Jethalal: (Thoda Mischievously, Apni Typical Style Mein) Arre Waah, Aise Kaise Market? Tum Mere Saath Dukaan Chalo. Waise Bhi, Popatlal Ke Shaadi Ke Baad Kuch Baatein Baaki Hain.



Rita: (Halki Si Haasi Ke Saath) Nahin, Jethaj Bhai, Dukaan Jaa Kar Kya Karungi Main?



Jethalal: (Thoda Zidd Se) Nahin, Tumhe Chalna Padega. Waise Bhi, Tumhara Purse Galti Se Party Me Reh Gaya Tha, Mere Paas Hai. Chalo, Wahan Dete Hain.



Rita: (Surprised) Arre, Mera Purse Aapke Paas Hai? Maine Dhyaan Hi Nahi Diya...



Jethalal: (Thoda Teasingly) Haan Haan, Maine Socha Tumhe Yaad Dilane Ka Ek Bahaana Mil Gaya.



Jethalal Rita Ko Apne Saath Dukaan Le Jaata Hai. Dono Rickshaw Mein Baith Kar Dukaan Ke Taraf Nikalte Hain. Jethalal Raaste Bhar Rita Se Baatein Karta Rehta Hai.



Jethalal: (Thoda Pyaar Se) Rita, Waise Tum Shaadi Ke Baad Se Kuch Udaas Lag Rahi Ho. Sab Theek Hai Na?



Rita: (Halki Si Muskaan Ke Saath) Nahin, Jetha Bhai, Bas Thodi Thakaan Thi. Aur Kuch Nahin.



Jethalal: (Serious Tone Mein) Rita, Tumhare Chehre Par Jo Dard Hai, Woh Main Samajh Sakta Hoon. Agar Kabhi Baat Karni Ho, Toh Tum Jaanti Ho, Main Hoon.



Rita: (Thoda Chhupane Ki Koshish Karte Hue) Nahin, Jetha Bhai, Aap Galat Samajh Rahe Hain. Main Theek Hoon.



Dukan Pe Pohonch Kar Jethalal Rita Ko Andar Bulaata Hai.



Jethalal: (Purse Nikaalte Hue) Yeh Lo, Tumhara Purse. Main to Soch Raha Tha Ki Tum Ise Lene Ke Liye Wapas Aane Ka Bahaana Banaogi, Lekin Tumne to Yaad Hi Nahin Kiya.



Rita: (Thoda Awkward) Thank You, Jetha Bhai. Shaadi Wali Raat Ko Sab Itna Jaldi-Jaldi Ho Gaya, Dhyaan Hi Nahin Raha.



Jethalal: (Halki Muskaan Ke Saath) Bas Bas, Yeh Purse Le Lo, Aur Haan, Agar Kuch Aur Yaad Aaya Toh Bata Dena. Aur Tum Kabhi Bhi Aake Baith Sakti Ho Yahan. Hum Baith Ke Chai Waali Baatein Karenge.



Rita: (Sharmate Hue) Aap Hamesha Itne Sweet Kyun Hote Ho, Jetha Bhai?



Jethalal: (Thoda Teasingly) Arre, Tumne Pehle Dhyan Nahin Kiya Kya?



Rita : Are Diya Tha Lekin Wo to Aap Sirf..khair Jaane Dijiye Mai Chalti Hu



Jethalal : Are Rita Batati to Jaao Mai to Sirf Kyaa



Rita : Baad Me Milkar Bataungi



Rita Purse Le Leti Hai Aur Jethalal Ke Saath Thodi Der Ki Baat Rita Ko Bohot Light Mehsus Karwati Hai Dono Ke Beech Halka-Phulka Mazaak Hota Hai, Lekin Unke Expressions Se Dikhta Hai Ki Dono Ek Doosre Ki Feelings Ko Samajhne Ki Koshish Kar Rahe Hain.



Scene Cut Hota Hai Ab Raat Ho Chuki Hai



Raat Ko Dinner Ke Waqt Bhi Kuch Aisa Hi Hota Hai. Komal Aur Haathi Table Par Baith Kar Dinner Kar Rahe Hote Hain, Lekin Goli Chhup Chaap Apna Khana Khata Hai.




Haathi (Haste Hue):

Arre Wah, Aaj Toh Sabzi Bohot Tasty Bani Hai! Komal, Tum Toh Kamaal Karti Ho!



Komal Muskurane Ki Koshish Karti Hai, Lekin Uski Nazar Goli Par Hoti Hai Jo Bina Koi Response Diye Sirf Apne Plate Ki Taraf Dekh Raha Hota Hai. Uska Ye Attitude Komal Ko Dukh Dene Lagta Hai.



Komal (Halke Se):

Goli, Khana Kaisa Bana Hai?



Goli Ek Pal Ke Liye Rukta Hai, Phir Bina Aankhein Milaye Bas Itna Kehta Hai:



Goli:

Thik Hai...



Komal Ko Ab Samajh Nahi Aa Raha Tha Ki Yeh Distance Kyun Badh Raha Hai. Uska Mann Karta Hai Ki Goli Se Pooche, Lekin Woh Samajh Nahi Paati Ki Kaise Baat Shuru Kare. Goli Ka Ye Alag Behavior Komal Ke Dil Ko Chubh Raha Hai, Lekin Woh Helpless Mehsoos Karti Hai.





Ek Shaam Komal Goli Ke Kamre Mein Jaati Hai. Woh Chahti Hai Ki Apne Bete Ke Saath Baith Ke Baat Kare, Lekin Goli Uske Saath Baithna Hi Nahi Chahta. Jaise Hi Komal Uske Paas Aati Hai, Goli Apne Phone Par Busy Dikhane Lagta Hai.



Komal (Dheere Se):

Goli, Tu Mujhse Baat Kyun Nahi Kar Raha Hai? Pehle Toh Tu Kabhi Aisa Nahi Karta Tha.



Goli Sirf Itna Keh Kar Tal Deta Hai:

Main Theek Hoon, Maa. Bas Padhai Ka Pressure Hai.



Lekin Komal Jaanti Hai Ki Baat Kuch Aur Hai. Uske Aur Goli Ke Beech Ek Ajeeb Sa Gap Badhta Ja Raha Hai, Aur Woh Kuch Nahi Kar Paa Rahi Hai. Har Roz Usse Lagta Hai Ki Goli Kuch Chhupa Raha Hai, Lekin Woh Apne Mann Ki Baat Bata Nahi Paata.





Usi Raat Komal Kitchen Mein Kaam Kar Rahi Hoti Hai, Jab Goli Kitchen Se Guzar Kar Nikalta Hai. Jaise Hi Komal Usse Good Night Kehti Hai, Goli Bina Jawab Diye Nikal Jaata Hai. Komal Ka Dil Ekdum Se Bhaari Ho Jaata Hai. Woh Samajh Nahi Paati Ki Apne Bete Ko Kaise Wapas Paaye.



Komal Khud Se Baat Karti Hai, Khud Ko Sambhalte Hue:

Kya Ho Gaya Hai Mere Goli Ko? Woh Mujhse Door Kyun Ho Gaya Hai... Kya Galti Meri Hai?



Scene Khatam Hota Hai Komal Ke Confused Aur Broken Expression Ke Saath, Jab Woh Khud Bhi Samajhne Ki Koshish Kar Rahi Hoti Hai Ki Yeh Sab Kyun Ho Raha Hai.



Update 45 (Maa-Beta)

to Doston Isi Ke Saath Hamara Ye Update Khatam Hota Hai Ummed Karta Hu Aapko Ye Update Pasand Aaya Hoga. Yaaro Pyaare Pyaare Comments Karo Comments Me Story Ko Discuss Karo Tabhi to Likhne Me Bhi Maza Aayega



 

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Sex Ka Jamana Update 45





Toh Yaaro Jaisa Ki Hamne Abtak Story Me Dekha Ki Kaise Taarak Apni Hi Baat Ko Bhool Chuka Tha or Anjali Se Jhagda Karta Hai Tabhi Sabhi Ke Phone Par Bhide Ka Ek Ajeeb Sa Message Aata Hai Jise Dekh Kar Sabhi Ghabra Jaate Hai


Jethalal Ananya Ke Saath Apne Kuch Moments Share Karta Hai or Dono Ek Doosre Ke Kareeb Aa Jaate Hai

Wahi Tapu or Daya Ko Sex Karte Huye Bapuji Dekh Lete Hai or Katrina Ko Bhi Isme Shaamil Karte Hai or Tapu Katrina Ki to Bapuji Daya Ki Maarte Hai


Idhar Jethalal Ananya Ka Cleavage Dekh Kar Apna Lund Hila Raha Hota Hai Tab Ananya Jaag Jaati Hai or Fir Dono Ke Beech Jordaar Sex Hota Hai Isi Beech Ek Chhota Sa Scene Dikhta Hai Jisme Goli Ko Uski Maa Ke Sodhi Ke Saath Huye Sex Ke Baare Me Pata Chalta Hai Chaliye Ab Aage Badhte Hai





Goli Ke Liye Sab Kuch Badal Gaya Hai. Us Raat Ke Baad, Uska Apni Maa Komal Ke Saath Har Pal Ajeeb Hone Lagta Hai. Pehle Jo Pyaar Bhara Rishta Tha, Ab Usme Ek Heavy Tension Aa Gayi Hai. Goli Apni Maa Se Bilkul Alag Rehne Laga Hai, Usse Baat Karte Waqt Avoid Karta Hai Aur Jab Bhi Komal Paas Aati Hai, Woh Chup Ho Jaata Hai.




Subah Ho Chuki Hai



Komal Kitchen Mein Breakfast Bana Rahi Hoti Hai. Goli Dining Table Par Baitha Hota Hai, Lekin Woh Apni Maa Ki Taraf Dekh Nahi Paata. Komal Uske Liye Sab Kuch Pyar Se Karti Hai, Lekin Goli Ka Reaction Bilkul Cold Hota Hai.



Komal (Pyar Se):

Goli, Beta, Aaj Tera Favorite Poha Banaya Hai. Jaldi Kha Le, College Ka Time Ho Raha Hai.



Goli Sirf Ek Halka Sa Ghoorte Hue, Hmm, Kehta Hai, Bina Koi Excitement Dikhaye. Pehle Toh Woh Maa Ke Haath Ke Khane Ke Liye Kaafi Excited Hota Tha, Lekin Ab Har Cheez Mechanical Si Lagti Hai.



Komal Ko Uska Yeh Badla Hua Behavior Notice Hota Hai. Woh Thoda Pareshan Hoti Hai, Lekin Apne Aap Ko Sambhalte Hue Sochti Hai Ki Shayad Yeh Temporary Phase Hai.



Komal:

Kya Hua, Goli? Sab Theek Hai Na?



Goli Sirf Haan Mein Sir Hilata Hai, Lekin Aankhon Mein Koi Chamak Nahi Hoti. Uska Chehra Khud Ke Emotions Ko Chhupa Nahi Paata.




Goli Naasta Kar Ke College Ke Liye Nikal Jaata Hai

Society Compound Me Use Poori Tapu Sena Milti Hai Along with Ananya and Pranali


Goli Ko Chhor Kar Sabhi Ke Chehre Par Ek Alag Si Chamak Thi

Picchle Dino Hi Sabhi Ne Jordaar Sex Kiya Tha

Tapu Ne Daya Ke Saath

Sonu Ne Bhide Ke Saath

Gogi Ne Pranali Ke Saath

Tapu Ne Katrina Ke Saath

Ananya Ne Jethalal Ke Saath

Pinku Side Me Hokar Pranali Ko Dekh Raha Tha Pranali Sharmaate Huye Us Se Nazar Milane Ki Kosis Kar Rahi Thi

Sabhi College Ke Liye Nikal Jaate Hai

Doosri Taraf Jethalal Apne Flat Par Pahoch Jaata Hai or Daya Se Usko Picchli Raat Ki Saari Baat Pata Chalti Hai

Jethalal Ke Chehre Par Chamak Aa Jaati Hai or Wo Kal Raat Ki Ghatna Daya Ko Batata Hai

Daya Shocked Reh Jaati Hai

Daya : Are Waah Tapu Ke Papa Aap to Rukne Ka Naam Hi Nahi Le Rahe Ek Ke Baad Ek Nayi Chut Aapke Lund Par Ucchal Rahi Hai

Jethalal : to Tu Kaun Sa Ruk Rahi Hai

Pehle Bapuji Fir Wo Iyer or Apne Bete Se Bhi Thuk Gayi Tu to

Daya : Kya Aap Bhi Tapu Ke Papa

Jethalal : Sharma Le Sharma Le Abhi to Wo Sex Wala Competition Baaki Hi Hai

Daya : Mujhe to Bas Usi Ka Intezaar Hai Bas Tapu Ke Papa

Jethalal : Accha Ji

Daya : Haa Ji

Tabhi Poeeche Se Bapuji Aate Hai or Jethalal Ki Peeth Thap Thapate Hai

Jethalal : Are Kya Hua Bapuji

Bapuji : Apne Baap Ko Mat Sikha Chehre Dekh Kar Bata Deta Hu Kisne Kya Kiya Hai

Jethalal : Lo Aapko Bhi Pata Chal Gaya

Bapuji : or Nahi to Kya or Tujhe Bata Du Katrina Taiyaar Hai Tere Saath Suhaagraat Manane Ke Liye

Jethalal : Accha to Ye Baat Hai

Bapuji : or Pata Nahi Kyu Mujhe Kuch Ajeeb Sa Mehsus Ho Raha Hai

Jethalal : Lagta Hai Aapki Bahu Ne Aapki Jaan Nikal Di Hai

Bapuji : Are Aisi Sexy Bahu Ko Kaun Sasur Naa Chodna Chahe

or Daya Ke Gaand Par Spank Kar Dete Hai

Jethalal : Ab to Apne Ghar Me Sabhi Ne Ek Doosre Ke Saath Sex Kar Liya Hai Kyu Na Ghar Me Abse Ham Nange Hi Ghoome Taaki Jab Jiska Khara Ya Geela Ho Sex Karne Lage

Bapuji : Waah Acchi Tarqeeb Hai Beta

Daya : Kya Bapuji Aap Haa Bol Rahe Ho Agar Ko Anjaan Aadmi Aa Gaya to Kya Hoga

Bapuji : Toh Kya Tu Uske Taato Ka Paani Nikal Dena or Kya

or Sabhi Hasne Lagte Hai



Jethalal : Accha Bapuji Bohot Ho Gayi Bakchodi Ab Mai Dukaan Chalta Hu Jai Jinendra

Daya or Bapuji : Jai Jinendra



Jethalal Main Gate Ke Paas Pahochta Hi Hai Ki Uske Saamne Katrina Geele Baalo Me

Ek Sexy Bikini Me Prakat Ho Jaati Hai

Jise Itne Sexy Andaaz Me Dekh Kar Jethalal Ka Lund Ek Hi Jhatke Me Khara Ho Jaata Hai




Dono Ki Nazar Ek Doosre Se Takra Jaati Hai



Katrina Uske Saamne Khadi Hoti Hai, Ek Pyari Muskurahat Ke Saath.



Katrina (Muskurate Hue):

Hello, Mr. Jethalal! Kaise Ho Aap?



Jethalal Ka Dil Ekdum Se Tez Dhadakne Lagta Hai. Woh Ek Halki Nervous Smile Ke Saath Jawab Deta Hai.



Jethalal (Thoda Sharmaate Hue):

Ji... Main Theek Hoon. Aapko Dekhkar Toh... Mann Ekdum Garden-Garden Ho Gaya!



Katrina Hans Padti Hai, Uske Ek Pal Ke Liye Expression Thoda Flirty Ho Jaata Hai.



Katrina (Muskurate Hue):

Garden-Garden, Huh? Aapke Garden Mein Phool Toh Ache Se Khilte Honge?



Jethalal (Double Meaning Mein):

Haan Ji, Bilkul! Bas Ab Soch Raha Hoon Ek Aisa Gardener Mil Jaye, Jo Roz in Phoolon Ko Paani De... Tabhi Toh Aur Ache Se Khilenge.



Katrina Ki Aankhon Mein Ek Sharaarat Si Dikhayi Deti Hai. Uska Jawab Bhi Double Meaning Mein Hota Hai.



Katrina (Halki Muskurahat Ke Saath):

Gardener Toh Mil Hi Jayega, Lekin Paani Ka Pressure Bhi Sahi Hona Chahiye, Tabhi Phool Ache Se Khilenge.



Jethalal Ab Thoda Zyada Sharmaane Lagta Hai, Lekin Andar Hi Andar Maza Le Raha Hota Hai.



Jethalal (Muskurate Hue):

Bilkul... Agar Paani Ka Pressure Theek Ho, Toh Phool Hamesha Khilte Hi Rahenge!



Katrina Apni Aankhen Thoda Chauri Karte Hue Uske Double Meaning Ko Samajh Jaati Hai, Lekin Woh Bhi Is Playful Conversation Ka Maza Leti Hai.



Katrina (Naughty Tone Mein):

Toh Phir Aapko Kisi Din Zaroor Gardener Se Milwaungi... Aur Dekhna Chahungi Ke Aapke Garden Ke Phool Kitne Ache Khilte Hain.



Jethalal Thoda Aur Blush Karne Lagta Hai, Lekin Apne Aap Ko Sambhalte Hue Bolta Hai.



Jethalal:

Jee... Zaroor! Aap Jaise Gardener Ke Haath Lag Jaaye, Toh Garden Toh Kya, Poora Jungle Bhi Saj Jaaye!



Katrina Has Padti Hai, Lekin Uska Flirty Andaaz Barkaraar Rehta Hai.



Katrina:

Jungle Toh Sambhalna Padega, Jethalal Ji... Itna Bara Kaam Hai. Aap Ready Ho Iske Liye?



Jethalal Ka Chehra Ekdum Laal Ho Jaata Hai, Lekin Woh Apni Muskurahat Nahi Rok Paata.



Jethalal (Halki Si Sharmahat Ke Saath):

Ready Hoon Ji... Aapka Gardener Hoon Na!



Katrina Hansne Lagti Hai, Aur Dono Ke Beech Ek Playful, Flirty Conversation Chhodi Der Tak Chalti Rehti Hai. Jethalal Andar Hi Andar Katrina Ke Saath Is Lighthearted Aur Double Meaning Wali Baat-Cheet Ka Maza Le Raha Hota Hai.



Jethalal Apne Se Nikalta Hai or Use Society Compound Me Rita Dikhti Hai




Jethalal: (Thoda Casual Andaaz Mein) Arre Rita, Tum Yahan Kaise? Kahin Ja Rahi Ho?



Rita: (Thoda Surprised) Haan Jetha Bhai, Bas Thoda Kaam Tha, Soch Rahi Thi Market Ke Paas Jaaun.



Jethalal: (Thoda Mischievously, Apni Typical Style Mein) Arre Waah, Aise Kaise Market? Tum Mere Saath Dukaan Chalo. Waise Bhi, Popatlal Ke Shaadi Ke Baad Kuch Baatein Baaki Hain.



Rita: (Halki Si Haasi Ke Saath) Nahin, Jethaj Bhai, Dukaan Jaa Kar Kya Karungi Main?



Jethalal: (Thoda Zidd Se) Nahin, Tumhe Chalna Padega. Waise Bhi, Tumhara Purse Galti Se Party Me Reh Gaya Tha, Mere Paas Hai. Chalo, Wahan Dete Hain.



Rita: (Surprised) Arre, Mera Purse Aapke Paas Hai? Maine Dhyaan Hi Nahi Diya...



Jethalal: (Thoda Teasingly) Haan Haan, Maine Socha Tumhe Yaad Dilane Ka Ek Bahaana Mil Gaya.



Jethalal Rita Ko Apne Saath Dukaan Le Jaata Hai. Dono Rickshaw Mein Baith Kar Dukaan Ke Taraf Nikalte Hain. Jethalal Raaste Bhar Rita Se Baatein Karta Rehta Hai.



Jethalal: (Thoda Pyaar Se) Rita, Waise Tum Shaadi Ke Baad Se Kuch Udaas Lag Rahi Ho. Sab Theek Hai Na?



Rita: (Halki Si Muskaan Ke Saath) Nahin, Jetha Bhai, Bas Thodi Thakaan Thi. Aur Kuch Nahin.



Jethalal: (Serious Tone Mein) Rita, Tumhare Chehre Par Jo Dard Hai, Woh Main Samajh Sakta Hoon. Agar Kabhi Baat Karni Ho, Toh Tum Jaanti Ho, Main Hoon.



Rita: (Thoda Chhupane Ki Koshish Karte Hue) Nahin, Jetha Bhai, Aap Galat Samajh Rahe Hain. Main Theek Hoon.



Dukan Pe Pohonch Kar Jethalal Rita Ko Andar Bulaata Hai.



Jethalal: (Purse Nikaalte Hue) Yeh Lo, Tumhara Purse. Main to Soch Raha Tha Ki Tum Ise Lene Ke Liye Wapas Aane Ka Bahaana Banaogi, Lekin Tumne to Yaad Hi Nahin Kiya.



Rita: (Thoda Awkward) Thank You, Jetha Bhai. Shaadi Wali Raat Ko Sab Itna Jaldi-Jaldi Ho Gaya, Dhyaan Hi Nahin Raha.



Jethalal: (Halki Muskaan Ke Saath) Bas Bas, Yeh Purse Le Lo, Aur Haan, Agar Kuch Aur Yaad Aaya Toh Bata Dena. Aur Tum Kabhi Bhi Aake Baith Sakti Ho Yahan. Hum Baith Ke Chai Waali Baatein Karenge.



Rita: (Sharmate Hue) Aap Hamesha Itne Sweet Kyun Hote Ho, Jetha Bhai?



Jethalal: (Thoda Teasingly) Arre, Tumne Pehle Dhyan Nahin Kiya Kya?



Rita : Are Diya Tha Lekin Wo to Aap Sirf..khair Jaane Dijiye Mai Chalti Hu



Jethalal : Are Rita Batati to Jaao Mai to Sirf Kyaa



Rita : Baad Me Milkar Bataungi



Rita Purse Le Leti Hai Aur Jethalal Ke Saath Thodi Der Ki Baat Rita Ko Bohot Light Mehsus Karwati Hai Dono Ke Beech Halka-Phulka Mazaak Hota Hai, Lekin Unke Expressions Se Dikhta Hai Ki Dono Ek Doosre Ki Feelings Ko Samajhne Ki Koshish Kar Rahe Hain.




Scene Cut Hota Hai Ab Raat Ho Chuki Hai



Raat Ko Dinner Ke Waqt Bhi Kuch Aisa Hi Hota Hai. Komal Aur Haathi Table Par Baith Kar Dinner Kar Rahe Hote Hain, Lekin Goli Chhup Chaap Apna Khana Khata Hai.




Haathi (Haste Hue):

Arre Wah, Aaj Toh Sabzi Bohot Tasty Bani Hai! Komal, Tum Toh Kamaal Karti Ho!



Komal Muskurane Ki Koshish Karti Hai, Lekin Uski Nazar Goli Par Hoti Hai Jo Bina Koi Response Diye Sirf Apne Plate Ki Taraf Dekh Raha Hota Hai. Uska Ye Attitude Komal Ko Dukh Dene Lagta Hai.



Komal (Halke Se):

Goli, Khana Kaisa Bana Hai?



Goli Ek Pal Ke Liye Rukta Hai, Phir Bina Aankhein Milaye Bas Itna Kehta Hai:



Goli:

Thik Hai...



Komal Ko Ab Samajh Nahi Aa Raha Tha Ki Yeh Distance Kyun Badh Raha Hai. Uska Mann Karta Hai Ki Goli Se Pooche, Lekin Woh Samajh Nahi Paati Ki Kaise Baat Shuru Kare. Goli Ka Ye Alag Behavior Komal Ke Dil Ko Chubh Raha Hai, Lekin Woh Helpless Mehsoos Karti Hai.





Ek Shaam Komal Goli Ke Kamre Mein Jaati Hai. Woh Chahti Hai Ki Apne Bete Ke Saath Baith Ke Baat Kare, Lekin Goli Uske Saath Baithna Hi Nahi Chahta. Jaise Hi Komal Uske Paas Aati Hai, Goli Apne Phone Par Busy Dikhane Lagta Hai.



Komal (Dheere Se):

Goli, Tu Mujhse Baat Kyun Nahi Kar Raha Hai? Pehle Toh Tu Kabhi Aisa Nahi Karta Tha.



Goli Sirf Itna Keh Kar Tal Deta Hai:

Main Theek Hoon, Maa. Bas Padhai Ka Pressure Hai.



Lekin Komal Jaanti Hai Ki Baat Kuch Aur Hai. Uske Aur Goli Ke Beech Ek Ajeeb Sa Gap Badhta Ja Raha Hai, Aur Woh Kuch Nahi Kar Paa Rahi Hai. Har Roz Usse Lagta Hai Ki Goli Kuch Chhupa Raha Hai, Lekin Woh Apne Mann Ki Baat Bata Nahi Paata.





Usi Raat Komal Kitchen Mein Kaam Kar Rahi Hoti Hai, Jab Goli Kitchen Se Guzar Kar Nikalta Hai. Jaise Hi Komal Usse Good Night Kehti Hai, Goli Bina Jawab Diye Nikal Jaata Hai. Komal Ka Dil Ekdum Se Bhaari Ho Jaata Hai. Woh Samajh Nahi Paati Ki Apne Bete Ko Kaise Wapas Paaye.



Komal Khud Se Baat Karti Hai, Khud Ko Sambhalte Hue:

Kya Ho Gaya Hai Mere Goli Ko? Woh Mujhse Door Kyun Ho Gaya Hai... Kya Galti Meri Hai?



Scene Khatam Hota Hai Komal Ke Confused Aur Broken Expression Ke Saath, Jab Woh Khud Bhi Samajhne Ki Koshish Kar Rahi Hoti Hai Ki Yeh Sab Kyun Ho Raha Hai.



Update 45 (Maa-Beta)

to Doston Isi Ke Saath Hamara Ye Update Khatam Hota Hai Ummed Karta Hu Aapko Ye Update Pasand Aaya Hoga. Yaaro Pyaare Pyaare Comments Karo Comments Me Story Ko Discuss Karo Tabhi to Likhne Me Bhi Maza Aayega
Very Nicely Written 👍🏼 Pacing Is So Good
 
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