dragonslair
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Hahaha sahi hai... Chun cun kar late hai ye anyone ji kirdar pahle part me jalim.. Or ab kannu...Kannu the player
Thanks bro..Nice story bro but ek to aapke updates late aate hai aur phir short bhi.... aur uske baawjood updates me seduction bahut jyada time laga deta hai... Aur jab finally aap koi seductive update dete ho tab tak story se link break ho jaata hai... maine story ka first part bhi padha hai... mazaa aaana shuru hi hua tha aapne usko end kar diya aur ab ek nai shuruwat... I understand lead actress ek dam se slut nahi ban sakti... ek dam se kannu se nahi chipak sakti but same time story me fun rahe uska bhi intezaam karo... koi side actress laao jaise movies me item girl ya item song hota hai jisse hamara mann bhi behla rahe aur story me laga bhi rahe...
Thanks for liking my Story bro.. humne to abhi abhi likhna shuru kara hai aap to purane writer ho... Aapse apni taarif ke do shabd sun accha laga..Thanks bro..
Aap jo kah rahe ho es par bhi mera dhayan gya hai...
Or me es bare me jarur sochuga... Bhai..
Us ke pahle aap ki bhi story bahut mast hai bro... Aap ki jitni bhi tarif karu utni kam hai....
Me bhale purana hnu dost par aap ki likhne ki seli bahut khub hai....Thanks for liking my Story bro.. humne to abhi abhi likhna shuru kara hai aap to purane writer ho... Aapse apni taarif ke do shabd sun accha laga..