First part jaise taise finish karne ke baad ab iski second part shuru karne ki zaroorat hai kya? My first suggestion would be to take this forward only if you have time to finish it properly. Nahi to yeh story bhi abruptly end ho jayegi. My second suggestion would be that if you don't want parallels to be drawn with banarsi paanwala then keep the storyline different from it. Which means jalim is out and kanika can seek new partners that too without the knowledge of kunal. My third and last suggestion would be to take criticism constructively. Not everyone here is here to just criticise and sabotage your story.
With this said I congratulate your for another story. Your best story in my opinion was roshni part 2. Asha hai ki yeh story usse behtar hogi.
for new story
