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Thanks bro aaj se update de duga..Story update de pate ho ya nehin, lekin aapna health update dete rehna bhai. GET WELL SOON
great update
Very nice
Slow transformation of kanika is going on. Waiting to see what happens next.
Good going..Pls update quick
accha update hai.. last 2 udpate mein kanika ka man badal raha dheere-2
Hood
Bohot hi badhiya update bhai
Ab chudai krwa hi do kanika ki
Bhut badiya intresting likhte ho aap Anyone ji update का intzar rahega
Please update
Great going, seduction is the key.
Pata nehi bhai, dua hain k aysi koi badi bat na ho. Phir bhi, Get Well Soon Anyone Bhai
कोई बात नही भाई
अभी अपना ख्याल रखो,
जब पूरी तरह से ठीक हो जाओ, तब अपडेट देना शुरू कर दिजीएगा ।
Get well soon
Pl take care
Get Well Soon Bro.Tc
Please take good care bro......
We wait.
Koi baat nahi bhai...take care...Thik hoke aisi 2-3 aur badhiya story likh lene
Hmm nice update i think roni bhai is kunal's friend since he is suddenly out of story.. but lets see wat the writer have in his pandora's box..
Bahut khubsurat likh rahe hai aap
nice update.
update postbahut khoob, ekdom mast aur jabardast update
ate hi todha sa nice update.. Jyada aacha update to nahi.. Par ummeed se kam bhi nahi..Update 44
Bhavna to apne ghar chali jati hai lekin kanika ke man me bahut sare tufan chod jati hai...
Kanika jalim ke ese sbhav ke karan bhi na khush hi thi..
Aaj use aacha nahi lag raha tha..
Jalim bhi ye soch kar khush tha ki kanika ko aaj us ne dekha tak nahi.. To kanika ka bhi mu dekhne layak tha...
Edhar jalim bhavna ke pass ane par khush sa tha.. Use lagne laga tha ki bhavna us ke niche ane ko betab hai...
Vo bhavna ko pahle bhogne ki sochta hai.. Or bad me kanika ka kam tamam karne ki sochta hai..
Bhavna bhi kuch kanika se gandi bat karke kunal ka kam karva na chayti thi. Par bhavna ko kaha pata tha ki kunal jalim ke sath kuch sapne dekh raha hai..
Halaki bhavna jalim ke ghodhe jese lund par fida ho chuki thi.. Vo jalim se apni chut chudai karvane ke nam se hi use kuch kuch hone laga tha...
Ese hi sam hoti hai bhavna fir se kanika ke ghar ati hai..
Lekin kam jyada tha sam ko es liye vo kanika se bat nahi kar pati..
Or kunal bhi jab ghar ata hai to vo bhi kuch taka hua hota hai..
Aaj us ne bhi kanika ko jyada taim nahi de pata...
Bhavna ke ghar jane ke bad kunal or kanika ka aaj ka din ese hi nikal jata hai..
Agle din kunal or kanika uth jate hai..
Kunal bhi aaj office jaldi nikal jata hai..
Kanika fir akeli kal ki hi bat soch me dub jati hai..
Us ka man nahi lag raha tha.. To us ne kuch sochti hai or apne padhosi ke yaha jane ki sochti hai...
Vo to ye bhi bhul gyi thi ki bhavna ne jalim ko aaj bulaya tha..
Bas kanika padoshi ke yaha jane ke liye taiyar thi..
Tabhi kanika bhavna se..
Kanika _ bhavna kaha ho tu.m..
Bhavna _ ji bibi ji..
Kanika _ me todha baju bale ghar par ja rahi hu.. Koi aa jye to muche bula lena..
Bhavna _ ji bibi ji..
Kanika bhavna ko dekhti hai aaj bhavna bhaut aachi tarah reddy thi.. Esa lag raha tha jese vo kahi ja rahi ho..
Tabhi kanika _ bhavna tum ka aaj kahi ja rahi ho..
Bhavna _ nahi to bibi ji..
Kanika _ aaj etni aaj dhaj kar taiyar hai tu..
Bhavna _ bas bibi ji ese hi..
Man ho gya.. Aachi nahi lag rahu na bibi ji..
Kanika _ ha ha tu bahut aachi lag rahi hai..
Chal me abhi ayi.. Tu kam kar ke firee ho ja..
Kanika etna kah kar chali jati hai..
Edhar kuch hi der bad jalim ata hai bhavna se milne..
Bhavna bhi to jalim ka hi intjar me thi..
Us ki kismat aachi es liye bhi aachi thi ki jalim se use akele me milna hoga.. Lekin us ka kam tha kanika ko uksane ka..
Aaj bhavna ko sahi moka mil gya tha...
Jalim ata hai.. Par jalim vo kanika ko dekhta hai.. Jo vo ghar par hi nahi thi.. Par jese hi bhavna us ke samne ati hai to jalim bhavna ko dekh te hi rah jata hai..
Bhavna lag hi rahi thi aaj bahut sundar...
Jalim _ are meri rani aaj tu badhi kamal ki lag rahi hai.. Kya bat hai..
Bhavna _ mere raja ye rup ye singar aaj sab tere liye hai.. Mene tuche aaj bulaya or Tu aa gya...
Bhavna _ meri rani Tu bulaye or me na aau.. Ese kese ho sakta hai..
Jalim bhavna ko baho me bhar ke apni or khinch leta hai...
Bhavna _ uch kya kar raha hai jara aram se kar. ..
Jalim _ ab tere es rup ko dekh kar me kaha aaram se kuch kar sakta hu meri jaan..
Bhavna _ esi Tu kitni oarat ko dekh kar ese kar chuka hai..
Jalim _ ginti ginuga to me khud bhul jauga.. Par ek bat sach hai teri kanika medham ko bhi jarur line mari hai..
Bhavna _ kya bakwas kar raha hai tu..
Jalim _ are meri jaan ab me tuch se kiyo jhuth boluga.. Jo sach hai vo hi to bol raha hu..
Par tu apni memsahab se bhi mast mal hai...
Or jalim bhavna ki ek chuchi pakadh kar dava deta hai...
Bhavna _ uchaaaa kya kar raha hai.. Kese jalim jesa daba raha hai.. .
Jalim _ are meri rani mera nam hi jalim hai..
To kuch to jalim pan hoga hi na..
Bhavna _ bakwas mat kar ab chod muche kanika memsahab aa jyegi.. Vo padhosh me hi gyi hai..
Jalim _ darta nahi teri kanika memsahab se.. Tu kahe to me tuche usi ke samne chod du...
Bhavna _ apni bate todha kam.. Esa karega to dande khayega.. Or meri ijjat ko alag se lutwayega...
Jalim _ Tu darti hai kya.. Dekh me aaj tuche usi ke kamre me usi ke bistar me tuche choduga.. Or vo kanika dekh bhi legi to teri ijjat nahi jayegi meri rani...
Bhavna _ are na baba muche tuch se kuch nahi karvana.. Tera hathiyar bahut badha hai..
Or meri chut ka bhosdha bana dega...
Jalim _ lund hona hi esa chaiye ki chut ka bhosdha ban jye.. Or asli sukh to chudai se hi hai...
Bhavna _ chal chod muche.. Muche nahi karna tere sath kuch..
Jalim _ are meri rani kaha ja rahi hai tu..
Todha payar to kar hi lene de es gadraye jism se..
Etna kahna kafi tha or jalim bhavna ke Nick ko chumne lagta hai...
Bhavna _ kya kar raha hai tu.. Sach me bibi ji aa jyegi...
Jalim _ aa to jane de na us randi ko tum dono ko me ek sath bhi chod duga...
Bhavna _ haha haha tu bahut dur ki sochta hai jalim.. Vo din to sayad hi aye.. Kanika memsahab tere pass tak na aye..
Jalim _ vo sab chod meri rani.. Abhi tu kanika randi se kam hai hai..
Tuche to me apni malai bali randi banaana hai meri jaan...
Or jalim bhavna ki saree ke andar se us ki chut ko masal deta hai...
Bhavna ko ab 440 bolt ka carent lag jata hai.. Jalim bato hi bato me bhavna par havi hota ja raha tha...
Bhavna es hamle se sisak jati hai..
Bhavna _ hahaaaaaaa kya kar raha hai.. Chod muche...
Jalim _ tuche kese chod du meri jane man Tu hai etni rasbhri ki ab tuche chode bina nahi chod sakta..
Or jalim ek hath se bhavna ki saree ka pallu niche gira deta hai...
Bhavna _ kya kar raha hai jalim.. Chod na muche..
Par jalim bhavna ke mumme ki darar par apne kale hoth rakh kar chumne lagta hai...
Bhavna control kam padhne lagta hai...
Aaaaaaaaaa jalim chod na re...
Jalim _ kya hua meri rani.. Ruk to sahi..
Or jalim bhavna ko sahlane me teji kar deta hai....
Ab bhavna madhosh hone lagti hai.. Us ki chut me risav ane lagta hai...
Jalim bhavna ke blouse ko kandhe par kar deta hai.. Or kandhe par gandi sabse chodte hue..
Jalim _ kya mast badan hai ri tera randi..
Ummnaaaa ummmaaa
Bhavna _ mat kar jalim koi dekh lega...
Jalim _ ab koi dekhe ya kuch ho tuche bina chode to kahi nahi jauga...
Bhavna _ naahhhiii jalim aaaaa....
Jalim niche jhuk kar bhavna ki navel ko chumne lagta hai.. Bhavna bhi jalim ka ab todha sa sath dene lagti hai...
Jalim _ aaj me tuche batauga ki chudai kya hoti hai meri jaan..
Tere pati bhi ese nahi chod payega jese me tuche choduga meri rani....
Jalim bhavna ko apni banho me utha leta hai.. Or sach me kanika ke room ki or le jata hai.. Kanika ke bed par bhavna ko lita deta hai..
Or apna fata hua sa kurta nikal kar bhavna ke upar chad jata hai...
Bhavna _ nahi jalim esa mat kar.. Meri goan me bhaut badnami hogi...
Jalim _ kuch nahi hoga meri jaan.. Ab Tu chudai ka sukh le..
Or jalim bhavna ke lips par apne lips le jane lagta hai..
Bhavna sar ko hila kar anakani karne ki kosis kar rahi thi..
Par jalim ek maza hua khiladhi tha en sab ke liye..
Or vo nisana laga kar apne mote hont bhavna ke lips par rakh kar chusne lagta hai..
Bhavna kiss me jalim ka sath deti hai...
Jalim bhavna ko kiss me kho dena chayta hai..
Or bhavna ki saree ko jangho tak kar us ki jangho ko sahalne lagta hai...
Bhavna _ o aaaa na karo jalim muche kuch ho raha hai...
Jalim _ o meri jaan kuch ho raha hai tabhi to tuch se payar kar raha hu...
Etne me kanika bhi paroshi ke ghar se ane lagti hai..
Or vo dor khol kar andar ati hai use bhavna kahi nazar nahi aa rahi thi..
Vo apne room ki badhne lagti hai..
Jaha par bhavna or jalim ki raslila suru ho chuki thi...
Vo apne bedroom ki or jane ke liye kadam badhati hai.....
To kya hoga dosto..
Jalim or bhavna ki chudai ho payegi..
Ya kanika rok degi..
Kya ye sab dekhne ke bad kanika par koi asar padhega...
Ye sab bate agle update me......