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Wow.. Excellent.. waitig for next .. daru ke nashe mein kutch tuo gadbad honi chiye .
Zabardast update
Wow.. very seductive update bro..
Badhiya update hae bhai
Awesome and wonderful update
Super........ Update
lajawab,mast aur ekdom fadu update
Good going..But it's the time for more action and less conversations
Zabardast update
Same banarsi paan wali lag rahi ha fir bhi mazedaar ha keep it up yaar
Wonderful update....
sach to ye bhi tha ki kanika khudh hi jalim ke samne aaj khudh ko hasin sabit karna tha... Jalim bhavna ki taraf khinch gya tha use us se koi problem nahi thi..
lekin kuch jalan use bhi hone lagi thi…(ye tau natural hai, jab koi doosari aurat ko importance de, tau apna jalawa dikhakarusko afsos fil karana hota hai)
kya hai ye :::::::::::----
Kanika dekhti hai ki ye kunal tao nahi hai aaspas Kunal kahi nazar nahi ata to vo Jalim ka call utha hi leti hai..
Jalim _ are memsahab etna der laga diya call uthane me..
Kanika _ tum pagal ho kya etne samay call kiyo kiya Kunal ji ghar par hi hai.. (means Kunal ghar par na ho tau phone kar sakta hai JALIM)
Nice
Waiting for next update hope to read it soon
We want kanika jalim hardcore romance atleast
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Anyone ji update कहाँ hai
Waiting for update bro
Agla update kya aaj ayega please reply
Aisa na karna bhai, ap story likhna bandh na kariye. Please
Hii dear friend anyone writer..47 update aane me bahut time LGA Diya Apne..Sare user apki story k next part Ka wait Kr rhe hai..please jaldi se jaldi story share kre...u are very good sense of humour writer...likes your stories.. well-done good job friend.
Pathetic. Writer pehle bolta hai daily ek update dunga. Fir bolta h lockdown khul gya to busy hu. Koi baat nhi fir bolta h sunday ko update dunga. Bhai agla sunday aa gya. Nahi dena update to bol de. Bewakuf kyu bnaa rha h logo ko
Waiting for update
Hii dear friend anyone writer..47 update aane me bahut time LGA Diya Apne..Sare user apki story k next part Ka wait Kr rhe hai..please jaldi se jaldi story share kre...u are very good sense of humour writer...likes your stories.. well-done good job friend.
Lgta hain writer ke pass likhne ke liye kuch bhi Nahi hain
updated plz
क्या ये सच है
update postप्लीज आप स्टोरी पूरी कीजिए
Bhai main aapse kahunga ki aap ye story quit kar do...jaha writer ke sentiments ki koi kadar nahi....jaha aise readers comment kare ...I can't think ki log aise bhi hain ki mara hua sochne lage aur RIP likh rahe ..aise log khud mare hue hainWow yar me bissy kya hua online hi nahi aya to muche mara hua samjh liya...
Bahut aache hai aap sabhi log..
Dosto story likh raha tha vo bhi aap sab ke liye..
Par me pahle hi bol chuka tha ki mere bhi koi parsnol kam hote hai un me bissy tha..
Socha tha ek sath likh kar es story ke sare update de duga..
Par yaha ke log to etne ese nikle ke me soch bhi nahi sakta...
Aaj tak meri koi story aadhuri nahi hai.. Or na karna chayta tha..
Par esi side me story likhne ka koi fayda nahi jaha logo ki kadar na ki ja sake...
Thanks too all jis ne muche saport kiya..
Par aaj man bahut dukha hai aap logo ki bate se..
Es liye ab bay...
Sach bat ye thi mere chote bhai ki sadi thi es liye es side se dur raha..
Par mere jara se din online nahi hone par kya kya bat karte hai log aaj pata chala...
Bay
RIP kar diya ab abuse bhi kara do ...writer ka khud ka personal life to hai hi nahiAre itne emotional kiu ho rahe ho? Koi tumko abuse toh nahi kiya, sab toh joke hi mar rahe the
Chodo bhai.. Muche es bat se koi farak nahi padhta..Bhai main aapse kahunga ki aap ye story quit kar do...jaha writer ke sentiments ki koi kadar nahi....jaha aise readers comment kare ...I can't think ki log aise bhi hain ki mara hua sochne lage aur RIP likh rahe ..aise log khud mare hue hain
bat to aap ki ek dam sahi hai bhai..Chodo bhai.. Muche es bat se koi farak nahi padhta..
Yadi sach me meri jaan nikal jati to bhi yaha kisi ko kuch farak nahi padhne bala..
Enhe story ke update se matlab hai...
Meri har story complite story hai..
Es liye ese adhura nahi chodna chayta..
Es liye baki update bhi de duga es story ke