Fantasy shaitaan se shoda

[MOM_😜😜😜]

Aap i ka prayog Bahut jyada kr rhe ho jaha dekho vha pr,
Maine aapke update me kuchh jagaho pr hilight kiya hai aap dekh sakte ho, pure update ko sudhar ki avasyakta hai, flow Bahut jagaho pr tuta mera...

Yadi Hinglish mistake ko najar-andaj kr diya jaye to update sandar jabarjast tha bhai

ye saitan ki beti hai jo Apne hero ke sath kadam se kadam mila kar Chal rhi hai or mujhe lagta hai ye sab uska hi kiya dhara hai sab Varna ye sab achanak se sunne dekhne ko nhi milta...

Sorry me khani ka update jayad bada dena chahata hu aur logon ko meri bat samjhane chahata hu par hinglish ki auto correct ki vajah se Meri khani me kami arahi hi

mujh par pata nahi konsa gadu kar deya tha mehek nahi paraga tha

Par me ye lekh na chanta tha -mujh par pata nahi konsa jadu kar deya tha me hel nahi pa raha tha

Aur Ha me - (( i )) ka istemal kam kar duga ok

 

[curious.marathi]

mujh par pata nahi konsa gadu kar deya tha mehek nahi paraga tha

Par me ye lekh na chanta tha -mujh par pata nahi konsa jadu kar deya tha me hel nahi pa raha tha

Aur Ha me - (( i )) ka istemal kam kar duga ok

ha bhai....story bhut mast hai lekin kuch words samaz nhi aa rahe....aap ko jra typing pe dhyaan dena hoga....ye bas ek chota sa suzaav hai baki aap ki marzi...but keep writting...story is very nice

 

[Xabhi]

mujh par pata nahi konsa gadu kar deya tha mehek nahi paraga tha

Par me ye lekh na chanta tha -mujh par pata nahi konsa jadu kar deya tha me hel nahi pa raha tha

Aur Ha me - (( i )) ka istemal kam kar duga ok

Bhai aap khud likhne ke baad ek baar padh liya Karen, Isse mistake kam ho jayengi...

Aapko likhne ke liye ek app ka prayog karna chahiye, Jaise notebook ya word pad karke kuchh, usme Pahle se likh kr rakha Karen bhai or jb update dena Ho 2 minute pahle padh kr check krke de diya karna...

 

[Xabhi]

mujh par pata nahi konsa gadu kar deya tha mehek nahi paraga tha

Par me ye lekh na chanta tha -mujh par pata nahi konsa jadu kar deya tha me hel nahi pa raha tha

Aur Ha me - (( i )) ka istemal kam kar duga ok

Touch pad keyboard me jakr is settings ko click kro or fir Smart input me jao...




Yha se Auto-correction vale option ko off kr do, baki sab aise hi rahne do, typing problem khatm ho jayegi...

 

[Suniya]

Waiting

 

[MOM_😜😜😜]

Update 5
JAb meri aankh khuli to maine dekha ke me bed par hu aur kise anjan jagahen par hu mene jaldi se aas pas ke chego ka gaega leya me ak kamri me lock tha meni darvaga todani ki koshish ki par me nakam raha mujhe pata tha jo mene daka va sach hi mene khidki se bahar aani ki koshish ki par khidki choti the me ab bed par aakar baith gaya aur shochni laga ab kya karu itni me meri kandhon par kisi ni apane hat rakhi meni pechi dekha to vo yehan( shaityaan ke beti ) thi use dekh ti hi mara pora sarer kapkapani laga me use ki laal aankhon ko dekh raha tha



Vo bhi mere aankhon me gor se dekh rahi thi par me kuch nahi kar sakta tha mujhe aisa lag raha tha jese meri jan khatam ho gaye ho itne me vo bole
Yahan - kya hua
Raj - ....... meri aavaj hi nahi nekal rahi thi
Yahan - daro mat raj me thumhi koye noksan nahi pohchaogi ( meri gal par hat ferate hue)
Raj - mujhe se kya chahti hun
Yahan - mene bataya na itni jaldi bol gaye ( muskurate hue boli)
Raj - tom kyo chahti ho ki me un logo se badla lu
Yahan - kyo ki tom ne mujhe ajad kiya hi raj aur mujhse shodh kiya hi
Agr tum ni shodh ki motabik badala nahi leya to mujhe mazboori me un sb ko marna hoga jin se tum payar karti ho ab aur koyi saval nahi me chahti hu tum har use insan se badala lo jinhone tumhen aur tumhare ghar vale ko noksan pahunchaya hi yad hi na kise thumari dost tumhare maa ko randi kha rahe the ab unhen mut ki nend sulani ka vakt aagya hi
( Yahan ki bat sun kar meri muh se aavaj nahi aarhi thi par mujhe un se badala lena tha )
Yahan - kya hu bolo jaldi ya me (itna kha kar vo chup ho gai me id ki bat ka matlab samz gaya tha )
Raj - me kisi ko marna nahi chahata me bas sach samni lana chahata hu
Yahan - kya thumhi yad hi camp bas ki har ak insan ni thumhi marne ki leya jungle me chod deta tha bholo mat ( vo jor se hasti hoye bole)
Raj - koyi aur tarika nahi hi me unhi nahi mar sakta hu chahi vo kitani hi bori kayo na ho koye aur tarika nahi hi
Yahan - Us ni ab Hasna band kar deta tha aur vo dheri se bole ak rasta hi par thumahi pasand nahi aayega
Raj - bolo kya tarika hi
Yahan - roko mujhe ganane do thek hi raj thumhi un sab ki sab se kimati cheg unho se chenne padi ge
Raj - me ye kar sakta hu par me kisi ko maru ga nahi
Yahan - is me tumhen kise ko marna nahi hi par mujhe nahi lagata tum ye kar paoge
Raj - me kar lu ga
Yahan - to Reya se shuru karti hi
Raj- thek hi
Yahan - me tumhare chahare ko badal deti hu aur kuchh aur bhi badal deti hu par yad rakh na jab tak tum shodh ki mutabik kam karoge tab tak tum meri takat ka istemal kar sakte ho
Us ni kuch kha aur mera pura sarir ag ki lapto ki bech me tha par me galraha tha par mujhi kuch mahasush nahi ho raha tha mera chahara aur mere body me badalav aani lage



Me ab puri tarah se alag ho gaya tha mera chahara badal gaya tha aur meri bodi bhi


Yahan - is insan ni marne se pahle kayi sari ladkiyan ki jenadagi barbad ki hi is ni apane parivar ko bhi nahi chhoda is ni apane sagi maa ,bhan aur apni ghar ki naukarani ko bhi maa bana diya tha ak car accident me mara gaya
Raj - to tum ni mujhe is ki bode kyo de hi
Yahan - meri bat khatam hone ka intezar kiya karo samzi is insan ko dhokho is ki body aur face ko dekh kar koyi bhi ladki devani ho jaye ab tum ak naye insan ho tum pher se collage me admission lo aur dheri dheri Reya aur bakiyon ko apna dost bana lo aur pher tum janti ho kya karna hi
Raj - thek hi
Meni yahan ki bat man le me janta tha ki me jo karne ja raha hu vo galt hi pher bhi mujhe use ki bat manane hogi jab tak me koye tarika na dhud lu is shode se bhar nekalni ka

 

[BIWI NO.1]

very nice update

 

[curious.marathi]

mast update....bhai story achhi ja rahi hai...plz try 2 give fast update

 

[Amrit_#0]

Update 5
JAb meri aankh khuli to maine dekha ke me bed par hu aur kise anjan jagahen par hu mene jaldi se aas pas ke chego ka gaega leya me ak kamri me lock tha meni darvaga todani ki koshish ki par me nakam raha mujhe pata tha jo mene daka va sach hi mene khidki se bahar aani ki koshish ki par khidki choti the me ab bed par aakar baith gaya aur shochni laga ab kya karu itni me meri kandhon par kisi ni apane hat rakhi meni pechi dekha to vo yehan( shaityaan ke beti ) thi use dekh ti hi mara pora sarer kapkapani laga me use ki laal aankhon ko dekh raha tha



Vo bhi mere aankhon me gor se dekh rahi thi par me kuch nahi kar sakta tha mujhe aisa lag raha tha jese meri jan khatam ho gaye ho itne me vo bole
Yahan - kya hua
Raj - ....... meri aavaj hi nahi nekal rahi thi
Yahan - daro mat raj me thumhi koye noksan nahi pohchaogi ( meri gal par hat ferate hue)
Raj - mujhe se kya chahti hun
Yahan - mene bataya na itni jaldi bol gaye ( muskurate hue boli)
Raj - tom kyo chahti ho ki me un logo se badla lu
Yahan - kyo ki tom ne mujhe ajad kiya hi raj aur mujhse shodh kiya hi
Agr tum ni shodh ki motabik badala nahi leya to mujhe mazboori me un sb ko marna hoga jin se tum payar karti ho ab aur koyi saval nahi me chahti hu tum har use insan se badala lo jinhone tumhen aur tumhare ghar vale ko noksan pahunchaya hi yad hi na kise thumari dost tumhare maa ko randi kha rahe the ab unhen mut ki nend sulani ka vakt aagya hi
( Yahan ki bat sun kar meri muh se aavaj nahi aarhi thi par mujhe un se badala lena tha )
Yahan - kya hu bolo jaldi ya me (itna kha kar vo chup ho gai me id ki bat ka matlab samz gaya tha )
Raj - me kisi ko marna nahi chahata me bas sach samni lana chahata hu
Yahan - kya thumhi yad hi camp bas ki har ak insan ni thumhi marne ki leya jungle me chod deta tha bholo mat ( vo jor se hasti hoye bole)
Raj - koyi aur tarika nahi hi me unhi nahi mar sakta hu chahi vo kitani hi bori kayo na ho koye aur tarika nahi hi
Yahan - Us ni ab Hasna band kar deta tha aur vo dheri se bole ak rasta hi par thumahi pasand nahi aayega
Raj - bolo kya tarika hi
Yahan - roko mujhe ganane do thek hi raj thumhi un sab ki sab se kimati cheg unho se chenne padi ge
Raj - me ye kar sakta hu par me kisi ko maru ga nahi
Yahan - is me tumhen kise ko marna nahi hi par mujhe nahi lagata tum ye kar paoge
Raj - me kar lu ga
Yahan - to Reya se shuru karti hi
Raj- thek hi
Yahan - me tumhare chahare ko badal deti hu aur kuchh aur bhi badal deti hu par yad rakh na jab tak tum shodh ki mutabik kam karoge tab tak tum meri takat ka istemal kar sakte ho
Us ni kuch kha aur mera pura sarir ag ki lapto ki bech me tha par me galraha tha par mujhi kuch mahasush nahi ho raha tha mera chahara aur mere body me badalav aani lage



Me ab puri tarah se alag ho gaya tha mera chahara badal gaya tha aur meri bodi bhi


Yahan - is insan ni marne se pahle kayi sari ladkiyan ki jenadagi barbad ki hi is ni apane parivar ko bhi nahi chhoda is ni apane sagi maa ,bhan aur apni ghar ki naukarani ko bhi maa bana diya tha ak car accident me mara gaya
Raj - to tum ni mujhe is ki bode kyo de hi
Yahan - meri bat khatam hone ka intezar kiya karo samzi is insan ko dhokho is ki body aur face ko dekh kar koyi bhi ladki devani ho jaye ab tum ak naye insan ho tum pher se collage me admission lo aur dheri dheri Reya aur bakiyon ko apna dost bana lo aur pher tum janti ho kya karna hi
Raj - thek hi
Meni yahan ki bat man le me janta tha ki me jo karne ja raha hu vo galt hi pher bhi mujhe use ki bat manane hogi jab tak me koye tarika na dhud lu is shode se bhar nekalni ka

Awesome update bro

 

[Xabhi]

Update 5
JAb meri aankh khuli to maine dekha ke me bed par hu aur kise anjan jagahen par hu mene jaldi se aas pas ke chego ka gaega leya me ak kamri me lock tha meni darvaga todani ki koshish ki par me nakam raha mujhe pata tha jo mene daka va sach hi mene khidki se bahar aani ki koshish ki par khidki choti the me ab bed par aakar baith gaya aur shochni laga ab kya karu itni me meri kandhon par kisi ni apane hat rakhi meni pechi dekha to vo yehan( shaityaan ke beti ) thi use dekh ti hi mara pora sarer kapkapani laga me use ki laal aankhon ko dekh raha tha



Vo bhi mere aankhon me gor se dekh rahi thi par me kuch nahi kar sakta tha mujhe aisa lag raha tha jese meri jan khatam ho gaye ho itne me vo bole
Yahan - kya hua
Raj - ....... meri aavaj hi nahi nekal rahi thi
Yahan - daro mat raj me thumhi koye noksan nahi pohchaogi ( meri gal par hat ferate hue)
Raj - mujhe se kya chahti hun
Yahan - mene bataya na itni jaldi bol gaye ( muskurate hue boli)
Raj - tom kyo chahti ho ki me un logo se badla lu
Yahan - kyo ki tom ne mujhe ajad kiya hi raj aur mujhse shodh kiya hi
Agr tum ni shodh ki motabik badala nahi leya to mujhe mazboori me un sb ko marna hoga jin se tum payar karti ho ab aur koyi saval nahi me chahti hu tum har use insan se badala lo jinhone tumhen aur tumhare ghar vale ko noksan pahunchaya hi yad hi na kise thumari dost tumhare maa ko randi kha rahe the ab unhen mut ki nend sulani ka vakt aagya hi
( Yahan ki bat sun kar meri muh se aavaj nahi aarhi thi par mujhe un se badala lena tha )
Yahan - kya hu bolo jaldi ya me (itna kha kar vo chup ho gai me id ki bat ka matlab samz gaya tha )
Raj - me kisi ko marna nahi chahata me bas sach samni lana chahata hu
Yahan - kya thumhi yad hi camp bas ki har ak insan ni thumhi marne ki leya jungle me chod deta tha bholo mat ( vo jor se hasti hoye bole)
Raj - koyi aur tarika nahi hi me unhi nahi mar sakta hu chahi vo kitani hi bori kayo na ho koye aur tarika nahi hi
Yahan - Us ni ab Hasna band kar deta tha aur vo dheri se bole ak rasta hi par thumahi pasand nahi aayega
Raj - bolo kya tarika hi
Yahan - roko mujhe ganane do thek hi raj thumhi un sab ki sab se kimati cheg unho se chenne padi ge
Raj - me ye kar sakta hu par me kisi ko maru ga nahi
Yahan - is me tumhen kise ko marna nahi hi par mujhe nahi lagata tum ye kar paoge
Raj - me kar lu ga
Yahan - to Reya se shuru karti hi
Raj- thek hi
Yahan - me tumhare chahare ko badal deti hu aur kuchh aur bhi badal deti hu par yad rakh na jab tak tum shodh ki mutabik kam karoge tab tak tum meri takat ka istemal kar sakte ho
Us ni kuch kha aur mera pura sarir ag ki lapto ki bech me tha par me galraha tha par mujhi kuch mahasush nahi ho raha tha mera chahara aur mere body me badalav aani lage



Me ab puri tarah se alag ho gaya tha mera chahara badal gaya tha aur meri bodi bhi


Yahan - is insan ni marne se pahle kayi sari ladkiyan ki jenadagi barbad ki hi is ni apane parivar ko bhi nahi chhoda is ni apane sagi maa ,bhan aur apni ghar ki naukarani ko bhi maa bana diya tha ak car accident me mara gaya
Raj - to tum ni mujhe is ki bode kyo de hi
Yahan - meri bat khatam hone ka intezar kiya karo samzi is insan ko dhokho is ki body aur face ko dekh kar koyi bhi ladki devani ho jaye ab tum ak naye insan ho tum pher se collage me admission lo aur dheri dheri Reya aur bakiyon ko apna dost bana lo aur pher tum janti ho kya karna hi
Raj - thek hi
Meni yahan ki bat man le me janta tha ki me jo karne ja raha hu vo galt hi pher bhi mujhe use ki bat manane hogi jab tak me koye tarika na dhud lu is shode se bhar nekalni ka

Ha bhai Isme Bahut hi kam galtiya dilhi pichhle update se, keep it up bhai jabarjast sandar update bhai superb

Sarir badal diya or badla lene ka tarika bhi badal diya, Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...