Ek hot story ko aap ne 100% justify nahin kiya. Afsos kahani ka ant aap ne likh diya. Ab koi comments karna uchit nahin hai.
Aap agli next story ko long erotic scene narration den. Aap ne first sex ka beginning chhod diya Rakesh aur Nalini ke beech men. Nalima aur Birju ke scene men Nalini ko jaga ke chupke se dekhti aur Birju uski chori pakad leta toh aur men maza aata. Aap bahot khub likhte ho.
Aap agli next story ko long erotic scene narration den. Aap ne first sex ka beginning chhod diya Rakesh aur Nalini ke beech men. Nalima aur Birju ke scene men Nalini ko jaga ke chupke se dekhti aur Birju uski chori pakad leta toh aur men maza aata. Aap bahot khub likhte ho.