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Congratulations for the start. Nice start bas spelling mistakes hai jinse padhne ka flow kafi bar bigad jata hai. Hope next update mei ye bhi nahi hongi.
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(Dosto spalings mistake Hongi plz apna chota bhai samaj kar maaf kardena )
Ek Ladka Mumbai Rajdhani Main Delhi se Mumbai jarha tha bilkul gumsum sa jase kise ghare soch main pata nahi asa kya soch rha tha Face ke expression bar bar change ho rahe tha kabhi gusa tu kabhi bilkul maus tu kabhi ankho main ashu jase jase life main asa tufan aya ho jase uski puri life change ho gai ho Abhi usko train main bathe 10 hour ho chuke tha or 6 hour tha Mumbai phouchne main abhi train ek station pur ruki tu vha koi 45 sa 50 year ka admi usi train ke couch main chadha train main jada bhid nahi thi jo us couch main tha vo saab so rahe tha vo admi bhi usi ladke ke samne vali khali sheat par bath gaya admi kafi ghabraya hua tha jase kise sa jaan bacha kaar bhaga ho train chal padi raste abhi train kuch dur hee chali tabhi us admi ke sheat par ko 3 log aya or ata hee admi ki gudi pakadli use kuch mang rhe tha lakin vo admi bar bar mana kar rha tha ki asa kuch nahi ha jo job hi tha sab beka tha or aab khatam ho chukka ha but feer bhi us admi ko maar rahe tha lakin us ladke ko ye dekh kar gusa aya or usne gunda1 ko jabardast 1 filing kick mari or vo vahin dhar uski avaj sunkar gunda 2 or 3 ne kha oy ladke tujhe pata tune kis ko mara ha bhout pachtayga ladke na bina kuch kahi gunda 2 or 3 ko bhe 1+1 jabardast punch mara or utha kar train sa bhar faak diya agle station par admi ne ka thanks beta mera name ga Dr Ramanujan ladke ne kha hi mera name ha SHANI (ji ha dosto ye apna hero ha) avase ye log kon tha
Dr Ramanujan – ye loog mujse ek furmula chaheya but vo formula bana sap hale hee khatam hogaya
Shani – aap koi sintist tu nahi matlab kya khatam hogaya
Dr Ramanujan – ha tumne sahi kha main eh scientist hee hu khatam hone ka ye matlab ha main ak formula bana rha tha agar banjata tu hamare desh ko bhout jada fayda hota lakin formula bilkul fail ho gaya ye loog samajte ha main abhi bhi usi formule par kaam kaar rha hu
Me – ooo ye baat ha koi nahi inshan har baar kamyab nahi hota
Dr Ramanujan – Ha Tumne Sahi Kha vase tum ja kha rahe ho
Me – main Mumbai Ja Rha Hu Koi Job Ke Liya
Dr Ramanujan – ooo feer itne mayus kyou ho Koi Pyar Vr Ka Mamla H ya Family Ka
Me – (thoda Hash Kar )2 Chij Hee Sahi ha family bhi Or Pyar Bhi
Dr Ramanujan – Ye Baat Ha Tu Koi Job Dhundi Ha Ya Nahi
Me – abhi nahi vahi ja kar dakhunga
Dr Ramanujan – agar tumhe koi problem nahi ha tu mera ghar chal sakte hoo jab taak koi job na mila
Me – uncle kyou prashan ho rahe ho muj jase ajnabi par aap bade loog ho rahne du main dekh lunga
Dr Ramanujan – beta ismain pareshan hone vali kya baat ha itne bade ghar main akela rhata hu yum ajaoge tu mujhe bhi koi mil jayga jiske sath beth ke koi baat kar saku vase bhi beta jab tumne mari help ki usi vakth tum ajnabi nahi rahe or vase bhi koi chota bada apne karmo se chota ya bada hota ha
Me - ok uncle aab or maat kahrya main chalunga
(Uske baad in done main normal baat hui idhar udhar ki)
(Pata nahi ye safar apne hero ko kaha se kha le jayga )
Ek Ladka Mumbai Rajdhani Main Delhi se Mumbai jarha tha bilkul gumsum sa jase kise ghare soch main pata nahi asa kya soch rha tha Face ke expression bar bar change ho rahe tha kabhi gusa tu kabhi bilkul maus tu kabhi ankho main ashu jase jase life main asa tufan aya ho jase uski puri life change ho gai ho Abhi usko train main bathe 10 hour ho chuke tha or 6 hour tha Mumbai phouchne main abhi train ek station pur ruki tu vha koi 45 sa 50 year ka admi usi train ke couch main chadha train main jada bhid nahi thi jo us couch main tha vo saab so rahe tha vo admi bhi usi ladke ke samne vali khali sheat par bath gaya admi kafi ghabraya hua tha jase kise sa jaan bacha kaar bhaga ho train chal padi raste abhi train kuch dur hee chali tabhi us admi ke sheat par ko 3 log aya or ata hee admi ki gudi pakadli use kuch mang rhe tha lakin vo admi bar bar mana kar rha tha ki asa kuch nahi ha jo job hi tha sab beka tha or aab khatam ho chukka ha but feer bhi us admi ko maar rahe tha lakin us ladke ko ye dekh kar gusa aya or usne gunda1 ko jabardast 1 filing kick mari or vo vahin dhar uski avaj sunkar gunda 2 or 3 ne kha oy ladke tujhe pata tune kis ko mara ha bhout pachtayga ladke na bina kuch kahi gunda 2 or 3 ko bhe 1+1 jabardast punch mara or utha kar train sa bhar faak diya agle station par admi ne ka thanks beta mera name ga Dr Ramanujan ladke ne kha hi mera name ha SHANI (ji ha dosto ye apna hero ha) avase ye log kon tha
Dr Ramanujan – ye loog mujse ek furmula chaheya but vo formula bana sap hale hee khatam hogaya
Shani – aap koi sintist tu nahi matlab kya khatam hogaya
Dr Ramanujan – ha tumne sahi kha main eh scientist hee hu khatam hone ka ye matlab ha main ak formula bana rha tha agar banjata tu hamare desh ko bhout jada fayda hota lakin formula bilkul fail ho gaya ye loog samajte ha main abhi bhi usi formule par kaam kaar rha hu
Me – ooo ye baat ha koi nahi inshan har baar kamyab nahi hota
Dr Ramanujan – Ha Tumne Sahi Kha vase tum ja kha rahe ho
Me – main Mumbai Ja Rha Hu Koi Job Ke Liya
Dr Ramanujan – ooo feer itne mayus kyou ho Koi Pyar Vr Ka Mamla H ya Family Ka
Me – (thoda Hash Kar )2 Chij Hee Sahi ha family bhi Or Pyar Bhi
Dr Ramanujan – Ye Baat Ha Tu Koi Job Dhundi Ha Ya Nahi
Me – abhi nahi vahi ja kar dakhunga
Dr Ramanujan – agar tumhe koi problem nahi ha tu mera ghar chal sakte hoo jab taak koi job na mila
Me – uncle kyou prashan ho rahe ho muj jase ajnabi par aap bade loog ho rahne du main dekh lunga
Dr Ramanujan – beta ismain pareshan hone vali kya baat ha itne bade ghar main akela rhata hu yum ajaoge tu mujhe bhi koi mil jayga jiske sath beth ke koi baat kar saku vase bhi beta jab tumne mari help ki usi vakth tum ajnabi nahi rahe or vase bhi koi chota bada apne karmo se chota ya bada hota ha
Me - ok uncle aab or maat kahrya main chalunga
(Uske baad in done main normal baat hui idhar udhar ki)
(Pata nahi ye safar apne hero ko kaha se kha le jayga )