ahahahaha robin bhai ye story maine kisi ko target karke na likhi hai aur kya hua tha wo to likhne wala jane han itna jarur kahunga ki nasa kabhi achcha nahi hota har botal par likhi ye baataur aap aaye yahan
target toh app kar rehe , lekin kise 
maza nai aya 
for ghapa ghap complete... 
agreed
wo baba nahi wo chutiya tha
bhai faltu me daru ko badnaam kar rahe ho yar
yanha ham jaise daru lovers ka dil dukha diya
daru ki galti nahi thi wo baba hi chutiya tha
wo agar mai likhta to uski ek sima hoti bhai ji aur aap us sima ke aage bhi kalpana kar sakte ho
rahul ji , me apki bat se sehmat hu , par ik chota sa kam toh kar dete
baba ka ghapa ghap thoda detail me likh do
HahaWhite white face dekhke tharki baba ke niyat bigde re... nasha toh eh bahana hai re
Wonderful story line with awesome writing skill Rahul ji
naina aapne bola to sayad kuch aisa hi raha ho waise jo hai so hai 
Awesome storykisi nagar me ek pahunche huye sant (baba) ji aagman hua to log darshan ko toot pade sab..wo sabko ashirwaad dete kalyaan karte sabka..sab log baba ji ke aane se bahut khus the aur khud ko kismat wala maan rahe the darsan karke..ek veshya ne bhi suna wo bala ki khubsurat thi wo gayi darshan karne saj sawanr kar lekin baba ji ne dhyan na diya kabhi uspar koi khas..wo rooj jati unko lubhane lekin koi farak na padta unko akhir wo sant the papi man se bahut door the..lekin ye baat us veshya ko khal gayi aur usne baba ji ka dharam bharsht karne ka palan banaya aur fir ek din..usne apni dasi ko bualkar plan samjhakar raat me use bhej diya aur sari taiyari pahle se kar liya tha usne..dasi gayi baba ke pass boli ki meri malkin bahut bimaar hai aap unhe chalkar dekh lo to mujhe yakin hai wo theek ho jayegi..baba ji kisi ke ghar na jate the lekin kisi ki zindgi ka sawaal tha ishiliye sath chal diye uske fir jaise hi baba ghar ke andar gaye usne bahar se darwaja band kar diya..baba ji jab andar pahunche dekha ki wo veshya ekdam nagi bistar par leti thi aur usne bola aao mere sath sex karo baba ji to unhone kaha mujhe jane do yahan se wo samjh gaye ki fans gaye hain wo zaal me..tab usne kaha ki 3 option hai aapke pass unme se ek kaam karo koi bhi to Jane dungi mai to baba bole kaun se option hain..wo boli ki samne ek matke me madira hai(sharaab)use pikar ja sakte ya uske bagal me ek baby hai use maar do ya mere sath sex karo koi ek kaam karo aur jao..to baba ji ne soncha inme kewal madira pina hi sahi hoga baki dono to mahapaap hain..to unhone madira pi liya fir nasa ho gaya unko to sex ka man hua fir wo bistar ki taraf badhe to usne kaha ki pahle baby ko maar do tab aana to nase me unhone usko bhi maar diya aur sex bhi kiya..yani sharaab ke nase me sare paap kar diye..is short story se hame ye pata chalta hai ki sharaab bahut bura nasa hai aur har galat kaam karwa deti ishiliye hame sharaab se door rahna chahiye..story khatam ho gayi
bilkul bhai lekin koi baat nahi sabke samne aisi naubat nahi aati kisi ka ego hurt hua to usne barbaad kar diya
are bro main kab bol raha hu ki aap jo post kar rahe ho wo story main jo bata raha hu wo wali story hai ..wo story koi aur hai jiski aap baat kar rahe ye story viveka ji ki hai bhai aur isme koi cheng nahi kiya hai maine bilkul original me hai aapke samne
main baba ka chela nahi baba mera chela thaAre doctorwa bhai ju to aise pareshan hoi gaye jaise wo baba ke chela aap hi ho ahahahaha
achcha bhai aapki baat bhi sahi hai lekin ye story dusri hai yahi maine bhi kaha haiare bro main kab bol raha hu ki aap jo post kar rahe ho wo story main jo bata raha hu wo wali story hai ..
main aur tony bhai alag chij ki bat kar rahe hai , purana comment to padh lo
hahahaha achchi baat hai lekin doctor waise rah gawa is story memain baba ka chela nahi baba mera chela tha
mera shishy hokar bhi sala daru pi ke bahak gaya
