Adultery SHART KA ANJAAM......
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congrats for completing 200 pages 
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chalo writer saheb ne kosish kari hai ki regular update de halaki abhi bhi kafi gap hai update mein...
Golu saheb un writers mein se ek hai jo acchi kahaniya likhte aur story mein dum hota aur sex bhi badiyan ... aur thora complicated bhi ...
aur sach kahu to aadhi se jadya kahani bhool chuka hun... to aisi complicated stories mein baar baar gap ho to kahani ka theme aur maja dono kam ho jata hai....
to ab kahani to kuch samjah nahi aarahi hai ki kya chal rahi hai.. kiska aur kaisa inteqam.. kaun zakar.. kaun dharma.. kaun kamini... ab to kuch bhi likh do .. ya to kahani doobara se padu to samjh aaye ..
rahi golu shabe ke sex likhne ki baat . usme di hui gif ke sath jayda maza aata tha yehi khasiyat thi...
par isme na to gif hai ... aur na hi sex....
jo mujhe sabse jayda shocking laga wo hai Kallu se Rape karwana... kahani ka koi villain rape karta to alag baat hai .. yahan kalu ko supporting hero dikha rahe the aur wo rape kare.... aisi bilkul umeed nahi thi...
pata hai Golu shayad daleel dega ki kamin iko maja aane laga tha to rape nahi..
par shuruwat aur maqsad to uska to wahi tha... so main bilkul bhi khush nahi iss update se bhi...
well aage dekhte hai ki kya tum wapas se kahani mein jaan pate ho ya nahi...
Golu saheb un writers mein se ek hai jo acchi kahaniya likhte aur story mein dum hota aur sex bhi badiyan ... aur thora complicated bhi ...
aur sach kahu to aadhi se jadya kahani bhool chuka hun... to aisi complicated stories mein baar baar gap ho to kahani ka theme aur maja dono kam ho jata hai....
to ab kahani to kuch samjah nahi aarahi hai ki kya chal rahi hai.. kiska aur kaisa inteqam.. kaun zakar.. kaun dharma.. kaun kamini... ab to kuch bhi likh do .. ya to kahani doobara se padu to samjh aaye ..
rahi golu shabe ke sex likhne ki baat . usme di hui gif ke sath jayda maza aata tha yehi khasiyat thi...
par isme na to gif hai ... aur na hi sex....
jo mujhe sabse jayda shocking laga wo hai Kallu se Rape karwana... kahani ka koi villain rape karta to alag baat hai .. yahan kalu ko supporting hero dikha rahe the aur wo rape kare.... aisi bilkul umeed nahi thi...
pata hai Golu shayad daleel dega ki kamin iko maja aane laga tha to rape nahi..
par shuruwat aur maqsad to uska to wahi tha... so main bilkul bhi khush nahi iss update se bhi...
well aage dekhte hai ki kya tum wapas se kahani mein jaan pate ho ya nahi...
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Samreenqureshi2
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Me bhut time se story reed krti hun apki story bhut achi lagti h mujhe but aab socha mene ke cmnt kru apki story pe kyu ki aap bhut din m update dehte ho