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Fantasy Sheitaan

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kINg_deVil

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Update#3

Akbar: Kon ho beta tum.

Ladka: Aap ka Pota Ch Aly Bangash.

Sab shocked they siwayee Sonia k who Aly ki traf bhag k gai aur usey galey se laga k roney lagi aur us ka chehra chumney lagi Aly ki aankhon main bhi aansu they kch deir k baad sab Aly k pass gaey aur us ko galey se laga k milney lagey Fakher ko bhi khushi hui thi apney betey ko deikh k.

Sab se milney k baad Aly idher udher deikhney laga lekin jisey who doondh raha tha who usey nai mila baqi sab ko bhi Aly k behaviour se pata chal gya k who kisi ko doondh raha hai.

Ami: Kia hua beta idher udher kiun deikh rahey ho.

Aly: Meri Gudiya nazer nai aa rahi.

Yeh suntey hi sab ghabra gaey lekin foran hi sambhal gaey Sonia ne Aly ko galey se laga lia aur usey phr se chumney lagi.

Ami: Who kaheen gai hui hai beta aa jaey gi tu 20 saal baad aaya hai tujhey zara bhi yaad nai aaye apni ami ki.

Aly: Kesi baatein kr rahi ho ami aap logon k kehney pe hi tou gya tha mein who bhi bhala koi umer thi mujhey khud se door krney ki who bas jab America pounch gya tou gussa aa gya aur aap logon se baat krney se manah kr dia us umer ka gussa dherey dherey itna tool paker gya k mein bhool hi gya k zaroor koi wajah ho gi khud se door krney ki werna kon apni aulaad ko khud se door krta hai.

Ami: (rotey huey) Beta mein tujh se bht pyaar krti hn tujhey khud se door krney ka tasawer bhi nai kr sakti us waqt mein majboor thi.

Aly: (Sonia k aansu saaf krtey huey) Acha ami aap chup ho jaen mujhey aap se koi shikayat nai hai acha aap Gudiya ko phone kro na k who jaldi aa jaey mera na batana mein usey surprise doon ga.

Ab sab preshan ho gaey k Aly ko kia jawab dein batana tou tha hi lekin es baat ka bhi dar tha k Aly pata nai kesay react karey ga.

Dada g: Beta us ki Shadi ho gai hai.

Aly: (shocked) What?

Aly ko yakeen hi nai ho rahaa tha k Gudiya ki shadi ho gi aur usey pata bhi nai kisi ne usey btaney ki zehmat hi nai ki.

Aly: Us ki shadi ho gi aur p ne mujhey batayaa tuk nai kisi ne bhi nai btaya chalo mujhey ghar se nikal hi dia tha na aata us ki shadi pe kam az kam bata tou saktey they k us ki shadi teh ho gai hai kam az kam koi gift hi us ko bheijh deta kiun kia aap sab ne merey sath aesa haan kiun.

Ami: (Aly ko galey se lagatey huey) Nai beta aesa kch nai hai who sab itni jaaldi hua k bataney ka waqt hi nai mila even Aliza ko bhi nai bataya hum ne.

Aly: Jo hua so hua mujhey abhi k abhi us k pass jana hai mein tyaar hota hn phr chaltey hn.

Aly uthney hi wala tha k Sonia ne usey hath se pakad k bitha dia.

Ami: Mein aur tumharey babajani abhi us ko shod k aaye hn hum kal subhah ko chalein gey abhi tu beith mein terey liey khud apney hathon se khana bnati hn.

Aly: (kch soch k) Theek hai pehley mujhey Gudiya ki tasveer la do mein bhi deikhun meri Gudiya kesi dikhti hai.

Ami: Theek hai.

Sonia Aly ko Gudiya ki tsveer la k deti hai aur kitchen main chali jati hai Aly Gudiya ki tasveer ko deikhta hai tou usey who bholi bhali masoom cute aur khubsurat dikhti hai last time jab us ney Gudiya ko uthaya tha us waqt who peida hui thi aur us waqt bhi cute aur golu molu si thi.

Waqiey main Gudiya bht khubsurat thi Kch deir main khana ready ho gya aur sab hall main beith k baatein krney lagey.

Dada g: America main kia krtey ho beta.

Aly: Dadajani mein Army main hoon.

Baba: Beta aesy achanak aa gaey bata detey humein hum leney aa jatey airport.

Aly: Bangladesh ek mission pe jana hai persun mein ne socha tha k aap se milta hua jaun ga aur waahan se wapis America.

Ami: (udaas man se) Tu phr se chla jaey gaa mujhey yahan shod k.

Aly: Jana kon kambhakt chahta hai ami aap logon ne hi tou bheija hai mujhey wahan hamesha hamesha k liey.

Ami: Beta mein majboor thi us waqt.

Aly: Aesi kia majboori aa gai us waqt k 5 saal ki umer main hi mujhey khud se hamesha hamesha k liey door kr dia (kch deir k baad) Acha ab mein chalta hn thuk gya hn neend bhi aa rahi hai subhah jana bhi so Subhah miltey hn aur mera kamra.

Ami: Aao beta mein tumhey tumhara room dikha doon.

Sonia uper ki traf janey lagi Aly apna saman utha k sab ko gud night keh k uper chala gya baqi sab waheen beithey they.

Akbar: Fakhar tum Umer ko phone kr k keh do k Gudiya ka bhai aa raha hai us sey milney aesi wesi koi herkat na karey.

Fakhar: G baba jani.

Akbar: (phone attend krtey huey) Haan beta bolo.

Usama: Baba jani mein ne yeh bataney k liey phone kia tha k Saman pounch gya hai kal se kaam shuru ho jaey ga.

Akbar: Theek hai.

Usama: Aur sunayen kia chal raha hai sab theek hn.

Akbar: Sab theek hn aur suno Aly aaya hai.

Usama: (shocked) Aly? Matlab Apna Aly.

Akbar: Haan beta.

Usama: (khushi se) Mein subhah subhah hi nikal raha hn gaun se mujhey us sey milna hai.

Yeh keh k Usama ne phone rakha dia us k baad sab soney chaley gaey subhah sab nashtey ki table pe nashta kr rahey they.

Aly: Kis waqt nikalna hai.

Baba: Bas Nashta kr k nikaltey hn.

Thodi deir k baad Aly Fakhar aur Sonia gadi mein beith k nikal gaey kch 2 ghantey k baad gadi ek ghar k bahir ruki Aly gadi se neechay utra aur derwazey ki traf janey laga tou ek Cheikh sunayee di jo k kisi ladki ki thi.

Ami: (cheikh suntey hi) Haey meri bachi.

Yeh suntey hi Aly dour k derwzey k pass gya aur ek laat maar k usey tod dia aur ander chala gya ab ander yeh scene tha k ek ladki zameen pe giri pari thi aur us k pass ek aadmi khada tha aur usey belt se maar raha tha aur us k pass hi ek budha aadmi ek budhi aurat aur ek ladki khadi thi.

Jesay hi Aly ander aaya sab ki nazer us pe gai Aly k peechay Fakhar aur Sonia bhi aa gaey Fakhar k aatey hi ek chota sa bacha Fakhar ki tang se lipat gya aur roney laga.

Fakhar: Umer tujhey raat ko phone kia tha mein ne k yeh sab na krna Rehana k sath us ka bhai aa raha hai us se milney.

Aly: Meri Gudiya kahan hai ami.

Ami: (Rotey huey) Yehi tou hai jo neechay giri hui hai.

Umer: Kiun bey budhey mein kia krun kon milney aa raha hai isey ya kon nai mein ne isey kaha k mujhey kch peson ki zaroorat hai tou yeh rand ahhhahahahahahahahahhhhahhhhh.

Abhi agey who kch bol pata k zameen se do foot uper tha Aly ne usey galey se pakad k uper uthaya hua tha aur es waqt us ka gussa saatvey aasman pe tha Aly ki pakad Umer k galey pe mazboot hoti ja rahi thi us ki aankhein bahir aaney ko ho gai theen sath sath us ka chehra hulka sa blue bhi honey laga tha saans na leney ki wajah se yeh sab deikh k Fakhar aur Sonia ghabra gaey.
 

kINg_deVil

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Agla update Corruption pe
 
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t13113

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Pichly baar b 2 k chakar mea 2no uncomplete he rah gai thi
 

Ash123

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Nice and superb update and waiting for next
 

Asif khan

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Good update
 
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Black water

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Super update bhai
 
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neer

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Congratulations
Bhai ab mein finally aa gya hn pura time doon ga es ko jo kaam honey they woh ho chukey ab 2 stories hn aur dono important hn merey liey so haftey main 3 din Sheitaan pe update aayen gey aur 3 din Corruption pe sunday rest ka ho ga so kal friday hai tou kal Sheitaan pe doon ga saturday ko Corruption pe sunday ko free us k baad monday se wohi Sheitaan pe phr tuesday ko Corruption pe and so on
 
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