• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Fantasy Sheitaan

Which story you like the most?


  • Total voters
    2

kINg_deVil

Active Member
1,099
1,925
159
Update#1

{First portion is deleted for some reason if you want it PM me}

Iblees: Theek hai mein bhi deikhta hoon k log aap ki ibadat kesay krtey hn mein unhey burai k raastey pe le k jaun ga koi bhi aap ka naam leney wala nai ho ga.

*****: Jao tumhey ijazat hai yeh kr k deikh lo jo merey hn who kabhi bhi tumharey behkawey main nai aayen gey.

Iblees: Deikhta hoon.

Us k baad Iblees wahan se nikal gya aur us ka naam per gya Sheitan, Lucifer etc yeh nai tha k Sheitan ***** ki ibadat nai krta tha us ne Arbon saal ibadat ki esi lalach main k who Farishton ka Superior baney ga aur hakumat karey ga lekin Sheitan ka mansooba Adam a.s ki surat main fail ho gya.

800 Years ago.

Ek aadmi apney ghar main soya hua tha k us k khuwaab main usey ek perchayee nazer aaye jis who pehchaan gya aur us k aagey jhuk k beith gya.

Sheitaan: Mujhey kisi bhi keemat pe Zameen pe aana hai aa tou kabhi bhi sakta hn lekin koi deikh nai sakta mujhey, mein logon ki nazron main aana chahta hn ab kaan khol k sun jesa mein kehta hn wesa kr.

Aadmi: G maalik aap hukam kro.

Sheitaan: **************.

Aadmi: G maalik ho jaey ga do zaton k beech sakht dushmani hai who ek doosrey ko marney k liey kisi bhi hud tuk jaen gey aap ka kaam unhi pe krun ga.

Sheitaan: Shadbash hahahahahahahahaha ab mein deikhta hn k mujhey kon rokta hai (unchi awaz main) Waleed.

Waleed: G aaqa.

Sheitan: Jab tumhey lagey k mein aaney wala hoon tou tumhey ek kaam krna ho ga.

Waleed: Hukam aaqa.

Sheitan: ****************.

Aadmi: Bangash shb ek raasta hai k aap Niazi khandan ko khatam kr saktey hn lekin us main time lag sakta hai.

Jasim Bangash: Bolo kia kehna chahtey ho.

Aadmi: *******************.

Jasim: Tum pagal tou nai ho gaey yeh kia bakwaas kr rahey ho.

Aadmi: Shb mein ne tou aap k bhaley k liey bola aagey aap ki marzi ager Niazi khandan jarr se khatam krna hai tou yehi krna ho ga.

Jasim: (kch soch k) Theek hai.

Esi trhah who Aadmi Niazi khandan k pass gya.

Aadmi: Niazi shb ek raasta hai k aap Bangash khandan ko khatam kr saktey hn lekin us main time lag sakta hai.

Iftekhar Niazi: Bolo kia kehna chahtey ho.

Aadmi: *********************.

Niazi: Mujhey manzoor hai kaam shuru kro.

Aadmi: G Hazoor.

24 Year Ago.

Fakhar: (phone pe) Babajani beta hua hai.

Akbar: (khush hotey huey) Mubarik ho hum aa rahey hn abhi.

Waheen dosrey hospital main usi time pe.

Kashif: (khushi se) Baba beta hua hai.

Danyal: (khush hotey huey) Mubarik ho mera Waris aa gya mein abhi aata hn.

Sheitaan: Waleed dono aa gaey hn ab tumhey jo kaha hai wohi krna.

Waleed: Jo hukam aaqa.

Sheitaan: Hahahahahahahahahaha ab mujhey kon rok sakta hai mein ne kaha tha na k mein terey bandon ko apni traf laun ga ab deikh bas 18 saal aur intezaar us k baad Tabahiiiiiiiiiii hahahahahahhahahahahaha.

Akbar: (khushi se) Aao aao Hafeez bilkul sahi time pe aaye ho mera Waris aaya hai Fakhar ko beta hua hai.

Hafeez: (khushi se) Arey wah bht bht Mubarik ho bhai kia naam rakha hai.

Akbar: Wohi rakhney waley they.

Usama: Mein naam rakhun ga (kch soch k) Merey sheir ka naam ho ga Aly.

Fakhar: Bht pyara naam hai bhaijan mujhey pasand aaya.

Akbar: Chalo naam bhi ho gya (Hafeez se) Ab tu bhi deikh le jo tera kaam hai hisab krna (Fakhar se) Beta Hafeez ko Aly do.

Hafeez: Es ki date of birth aur time.

Fakhar: 29 Feb ko raat k 3 bajey.

Hafeez: (shocked) Kiaaaaaaa.

Akbar: Kia hua tujhey yeh teri herat se aankhein kiun bahir aaney ko hn.

Hafeez: (ghabratey huey) Kia Daniyal k haan bhi ladka hua hai.

Akbar: Haan usi din same time magar hua kia hai.

Hafeez: (mathey se paseena saaf krtey huey) Sheitaaaaaaannnn.
 
Last edited:

Prince Charlee

Active Member
1,413
2,248
159
Welcomeback. Lekin jahan tak mujhe yad hai hero ka name shayad koi aur tha aur hero ki 2nd wife Ayesha ka bhi intro me koi zikar nahi hai. Kya story ke characters hi change hai ya story bhi kuch change hai????
 
  • Like
Reactions: neer

Damha

I LOVE KUNG FUUU!!
Staff member
Sectional Moderator
18,532
21,633
229
FRIENDS MAIN CONFUSED HU MERI EK STORY HAI JIS KA NAAM SHETAAN ( EVIL ) HAI KIA US KE ORIGINAL WRITER YE HAI YA KOI AUR HAI PLEASE TELL ME
 
  • Like
Reactions: Ash123

Ash123

Member
323
878
108
FRIENDS MAIN CONFUSED HU MERI EK STORY HAI JIS KA NAAM SHETAAN ( EVIL ) HAI KIA US KE ORIGINAL WRITER YE HAI YA KOI AUR HAI PLEASE TELL ME
Bro wo ap alag story likh rahay ho lekin is story or theme la real writter yehi ha aly bro hi
Or aly bro nice update as usual mujhay thora change laga lekin yeh bhi bhut best ha
 
  • Like
Reactions: Last benchers
Top