Incest Shikari Ki Bimari (completed)

[Chutiyadr]

for new story thread Dr shahab

dhanywad tony bhai

 

[Shikari_golu]

dhanywad shikari bhai
jadui lakadi ka gussa abhi tak hai
ab padhte jao dekhte hai ki iska end kya hoga , abhi to shuru hi hui hai

Naa dr...usse jyada gussa biwi ke kaarnaame ka hai.....

Last me saare logic hi galat kar diye...sirf us kameeni randi ko sahi dikhane........???

Khair.....dekhte hai is baar gussa jyada aata hai ya kam...

Update baad me padhuga..abhi khud ka likh raha hu...fir batata hu....

Keep going.......

 

[Chutiyadr]

Welcome dr. sahab. Aur kya khatarnaak update diya he yaar. Starting hi itani jabardast he ki kya kahu. Sanju baba ki ek film ka scene yaad aa gya. Aur aapka wala usase 21 hi tha. Gajab ek dum. Lagta he ki tara ko apni beti aur ajay ki akhon me pyaar dekh liya tha. Lekin sayad usake bhai ne dhoke se war karke in sabko ghayal kar diya he jisame ajay ke pita aur chacha chal base he.
Waiting 4 next update

dhanywad aka bro
aap itni tareef kar dete ho to fir dar lagne lagta hai ki story aage jakar pasand aayegi ki nahi kyoki isme thoda jadu wala touch hai aur incest story bhi hai
to abhi se itani ummid mat rakhiyega , aise meri puri koshis hogi ki entertaining story ho ..
aap to aa gaye ye brego4 aur Studxyz kaha hai

 

[Chutiyadr]

Naa dr...usse jyada gussa biwi ke kaarnaame ka hai.....

Last me saare logic hi galat kar diye...sirf us kameeni randi ko sahi dikhane........???

Khair.....dekhte hai is baar gussa jyada aata hai ya kam...

Update baad me padhuga..abhi khud ka likh raha hu...fir batata hu....

Keep going.......

yar wo biwi ke karname thi isliye uske karname dikhaya tha aise usme kai logo ko bahut gussa aaya hai

 

[firefox420]

ha bhai thoda jadu ka touch hoga isme
fantasy bole to wahi sab hai , pichhali story me fantasy tag nahi dala tha aur jadu dikha diya tha to kamdev99008 aur firefox420 ne gariya diya tha
isliye is bar tag pahle se daal diya hu

ai mere sher.. nayi kahani shuru ki hai.. badhiya hai.. bahut dino se kisi ke kapde faadne ka mann kar raha tha.. ab aa gaye ho to aapse hatke aur kaha jaayenge...

waise ye kahani jaadui lakdi ke aghori wale paatr se sambandhit he hai na...

 

[Chutiyadr]

ai mere sher.. nayi kahani shuru ki hai.. badhiya hai.. bahut dino se kisi ke kapde faadne ka mann kar raha tha.. ab aa gaye ho to aapse hatke aur kaha jaayenge...

waise ye kahani jaadui lakdi ke aghori wale paatr se sambandhit he hai na...

dhanywad ff bhaiya
nahi bro ye wo wali nahi hai , wo wali abhi panding me hai kyoki use devnagri me likh raha tha aur abhi itna time aur effert nahi laga pahunga ki devnagri me likh pau , isliye uske jagah bhabhi maa shuru ki thi aur ab ye shuru kar raha hu
wo wali bhi likhunga jab time milega thoda lamba

 

[Shikari_golu]

yar wo biwi ke karname thi isliye uske karname dikhaya tha aise usme kai logo ko bahut gussa aaya hai

Mera gussa jaayaj tha....aapne kisi bhi baat ko clear nhi kiya....aur happy ending dikha di....

well...leave it....is baar gaaliyan jaroor aaygi.....aap likho to ....?

 

[Chutiyadr]

Mera gussa jaayaj tha....aapne kisi bhi baat ko clear nhi kiya....aur happy ending dikha di....

well...leave it....is baar gaaliyan jaroor aaygi.....aap likho to ....?

thik hai bhai

 

[Naina]

dhanywad naina ji

Btw Dr sahab story mein kaajal ki bhi ek role toh banti hai..

 

[Chutiyadr]

Btw Dr sahab story mein kaajal ki bhi ek role toh banti hai..

yar isme kajal ko abhi tak plan nahi kiya hu lane ki , lekin ek dusari bandi aa rahi hai ek majedar cherecter hoga uska , aur wo dr chutiya ki gf hogi lekin wo abhi serprise hai sabhi readers ke liye