Gabbarsing
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ekdom dashu kahaani, great writings! bahut h mazadar aur interesting update!
Nice start.Shobha ka ek fix routine tha. Har roj subah wo 5 baje uth ke thoda ready hoke apne ghar ka kaam niptane me lag jaati....
Wo raat ko aksar two piece nighty pehenke soti thi...kabhi kabhi subah me kuch samaan jaise ki bread butter ya dudh lene bhi aise hi jaaya karti thi....
Jab wo chalti to subah me jogging karne nikle hue bade chode ya budhe sabki dhadkane ruk jaati....Shobha ko in sab baato ka pata rehta tha lekin wo ignore karti thi...
Kabhi kabhi uske bete se bhi choti umar ke ladke bhi use ghurte to use thoda ajeeb lagta tha phir bhi wo us par jyada dhyan nahi deti thi...
Sab kuch hone ke baad wo nashta taiyaar karti apne pati aur baccho ke liye...
Uska pati Subah 7 baje uthkar ready hoke 9 baje ke aaspaas office chala jaata
Uska beta Rahul bhi subah jaldi uthkar ready hoke college jaata tha....
aur Priya 8 baje ke aaspaas uthkar ready hoti aur kabhi kabhi apni maa ko ghar ke kaam me help karti thi...
Sab kuch normal chal raha tha...lekin wo kehte hai na ki waqt karwat leta hai to use samajhna kabhi kabhi insaan ki haisiyat se bahar ki baat ho jaati hai...
kuch aisa hi is pariwaar ke sath hua.
Beta bada ho gaya tha aur beti bhi....Priya ke liye ladka dhoondhana chalu tha...
Dono waise ab sab kuch samajhte the lekin umar bhi aisi thi ki samajh aane ke baawjood control nahi kar paate is umar me....
aur bas yahi hua yaha pe...
Chota sa pariwar tha Shobha ka aur apne bete aur beti pe to jaan chidakti thi wo...khaas kar bete pe...
waise bhi maa ko beta aur baap ko beti jyada pyaari hoti hai...
Rahul kha Shobha ko piche se hug karna, use gaal pe halki si kiss karna, us se chipak ke baithna ye sab jaise normal tha....
waise hi Rakesh aur priya ke bich me aur Rahul aur Priya ke bich me.....
Haan...ek khaas baat...
Shobha aur Rakesh ab puri tarah active nahi the..lekin Shobha andar hi andar tadap rahi thi....
Shobha ne apni ye tadap kabhi jaahir nahi hone di thi lekin do tin mahine me ekaad baar Rakesh uski chudaai kar leta tha....
Ek din Rahul ko college se aane me der ho gayi. aur Shobha ne use call kiya...
Shobha : Rahul kaha ho tum?
Rahul : Maa aaj mujhe late ho jaayega...mai mere ek dost ke waha aaya hu aur raat ko late aaunga...
Shobha : Kitne baje..?
Rahul : Kuch fix nahi hai..aap khana khakar so jana...
Shobha : thik hai...beta jaldi aana
ghar me sabke paas ek ek chaabi rehti thi taaki agar koi raat ko late bhi aaye to kisiko uthane ki jaroorat naa pade...
Us raat
Rakesh ka kisi wajah se mood ban gaya tha...usne Shobha ko jaldi jaldi ghar ka kaam niptane ko kaha...Shobha bhi thodi khus hui lekin uski kismat footi aur kuch mehmaan aa gaye...raat ke 11 baje tak mehmaan the..kuch karibi the isliye der raat tak baithe rahe...
Mehmaano ke jaane ke baad
Rakesh : Shobha dekho to Priya jaag rahi hai ya so gayi?
(Shobha Priya ke kamre me jaake dekhti hai wo so rahi thi)
Shobha ne ishara kar ke kaha ki wo so rahi hai....aur kitchen me jaane lagi kuch lene ke liye...
Tab Rakesh ne Shobha ki or dekha....Shobha apne me hi apni mast gand matkate hue jaa rahi thi jise dekhkar budho ka bhi lund khada ho jaaye...
Rakesh se raha nahi gaya aur wo Shobha ke piche piche gaya...
Shobha kitchen me platform pe kuch kaam kar rahi thi...aur us waqt tak Shobha ne saree peheni thi...
Rakesh se raha nahi gaya..wo waise bhi Shobha ki gand ka diwana tha lekin ha Shobha ne kabhi use apni gand chudai nahi karne di...wo ise ganda aur darawana maanti thi...
Rakesh ne piche se hi uski saree par karni start kar di...Shobha chok gayi...
Shobha : Rakesh ye kya kar rahe ho kitchen me...koi aa jaayega..
Rakesh : Shobha darling aaj bahut man hai..raha nahi jaa raha...
Shobha : to piche(gand) kya rakha hai..room me jaake aaram se karna....
Rakesh : Shobha tum bas chup raho...Rahul abhi ghar pe nahi hai aur Priya ki nind to tum jaanti ho..koi nahi aayega...
Shobha : phir bhi...tum samjho room me jaake karte hai..
Rakesh : nahi aaj yahi karna hai...
Shobha : tum nahi maanoge...ek kaam karo..Kitchen ka darwaja to band karo agar Rahul aa gaya to uski nazar sidhi yaha padegi...
Rakesh ne waisa hi kiya...
Rakesh ki aadat thi ki wo kabhi forplay nahi karta tha aur isi wajah se Shobha ko bhi itna pata nahi tha ki aaj ke zamane me kis kis type ka forplay hota hai....wo bas jaise Rakesh bole waise karti thi aur kabhi kabhi apni iccha jaahir karti lekin Rakesh to apne me hi mast rehta...
Shobha ke madmast badan ko dekhkar Rakesh se raha nahi gaya aur uske Shobha ko kitchen ke platform pe haath rakh ke doggy style me jhukne ko kaha...
Ye Shobha ke liye naya tha...itne saal me pehli baar Rakesh ne is tarah ki position karne ke liye kaha tha jo ki Shobha ke liye uncomfortable thi....
wo mana karti rahi ki is position me wo nahi kar paayegi....aur isi nokjhok me kab Rahul aa gaya unhe pata nahi chala...
Rahul ko uska dost uske ghar se thoda door chod ke gaya tha...dar asal Rahul ke ghar ke thode door uska ek doosra dost rehta tha...to wo tino sath me aaye the...
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Dear writer sahab ne clear kr diya hai shobha randi bnegi, ab uske liye bete ke payar se badkar uski khud ki shrer ki bhuk hai, han ye dekhna hoga ki rahul ko kaise dikhaya jayega aage kahani me , lekin abhi tak uska bhi same wahi soch dikh rhi hai ma ke aage uski nhi chalegi, aur use manna hoga do bar ki bat chit se yahi lag rha hai , ma usko apni khushiyo ka hawala de rhi hai aur wo chup ho ja rha hai , ab to matter ma ke bhai ka hai usko to mna kr rhi nhi payega, kyoki wo khud apni bahan ko chod rha hai to ma ko kaise rok skta hai apne bhai se chudne sebhai agar aise hi kahani aage badhani hai toh rahul aur shobha ke rishte me khatas aani hi chahiye aur rahul shobha se dur hona hi chahiye..yeh pyaar ka dikhawa kyun karna fir..rahul ko samajh aana chahiye ki uski maa sirf chudna chahti hai baki kuchh nahi hai..aur pyaar vyaar sab natak hai..rahul ko cuckold mat dikhana bhai..rahul ke samne shobha kisi se nahi chudni chahiye..rahul ka aisa character nahi hai..rahul bas asliyat samajh jaye ki uski maa ek randi ki tarah chudayi karna chahti hai aur rahul yeh pyaar aur shaadi ki baat sab bakwas yeh samajh jaye aur shobha se duriya bana le..dono ke bich maa bete ka rishta rahe lekin rahul jo shaadi ki baat karta tha woh sab rahul dimag se nikal de ab..kyunki rahul aisi aurat se shaadi karna nahi chahega kabhi bhi..bhai shobha ko jaise marji chahe dikhao but rahul ke character ke sath nainsafi mat karo..rahul bas shobha ke zuthe drame se bahar nikal kar apni life enjoy kare aur shobha se duri bana le..aur shobha agar rahul se puchhe iss bare me toh rahul direct bol de ki woh apni premika ko kisi aur ke sath kabhi nahi dekh sakta hai aur ab shobha ko jaise marji chahe ji sakti bas ab rahul se jyada umeed na rakhe..!!