Incest SHOBHA "A JOURNEY OF SWEET MOM TO SLUT"

[vikram don]

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[Varun42]

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[ashik awara]

sahi kaha aapne..rahul ko cuck dikhana galat hai kyunki uska character waise build hi nahi huva tha..aur shobha ko randi banana hai toh yeh pyaar ka drama band kar de..rahul usse direct bol de ki tuze aur teri beti ko jo karna hai kare lekin bas ab rahul se pyaar ki umeed na rakhe kyunki rahul itna toh bewkoof nahi hai ki woh shobha ka game nahi samajha hoga..rahul shobha se apna yeh pyaar ka rishta khatam kar de rahe toh bas ab maa bete ka rishta..baki rahul khud hi shobha aur priya se dur hojaye kyunki woh shobha ko kisi aur ke sath bardasht nahi kar payega..!!
aur sach kahu toh ab story padhne ka mood nahi raha kyunki rahul ke character jo cuck nahi tha woh ek strong personality tha usse zabardasti cuck bana diya..baki ab writer ki marji hai jaisa chahe likh sakte hai..aur writer sahab se ek baat kehni thi ki agar meri baat ka bura laga ho toh maaf karna..!!

कहानी पर डिस्कशन देखकर अच्छा लगता हे , एक स्वस्थ परिचर्चा होनी चाहिए , में कहानी तो अब पढूंगा पर इस बार कमेन्ट पढना बहुत अच्छा लगा , अब देखना ये हे की शोभा सलट क्यूँ बनना चाहती हे , हो सकता हे लेखक ने कहानी के शुरू में बताया हो , अब ये तो कहानी पढकर ही पता लगेगा

 

[kirantariq]

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[Bilal jan]

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[Siraj Patel]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries Thread

Contest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread

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Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3000 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[Joker7755]

Bhai ek suggestion he sub ko jo karna he karne do
Bus rahul ko inse ab dur kardo
Kyuki bichara in sub ke khel me woh ulaj gaya
Agar is kahani ko isi gar tak simit rakhte to acha tha yeh pura rayta fel gaya

 

[SUCKMEOFF]

Shobha rahul se chud ke langdane lagi aur priya aaram se rahul ke laude se chud gayi aur raat mein bhi chudane ko taiyaar hai.
Matlab priya pahele se hi chudi haui hai rahul ka lund lene se pahle hi.

 

[SUCKMEOFF]

Matlab ab shobha avinash se chudegi aur uski capacity check karegi,
Badhiya hai.

Kuch pics bhi add kar sako to achcha hoga. Teeno maa beta-beti ki outing karwao, priya li honeymoon ki practice bhi ho jayegi.

 

[SUCKITOFF]

Awesome update bhai maja agya

ye koun sa turn hai boss??? U/Z sub uper se nikal gaya GAJAB FIRKI li HO