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Note - Kal hamare yaha light ki problem thi isliye me mobile charge nahi tha jiske chalte mai kal update nahi de payi abhi mai kisi tarah mobile charge kar ke update de rahi hu ye update kuchh chota hai islie aap sab mind na kare mai aaj rat tak ek aur update dungi
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Update 13 (Roop Badalne Wala Devil's Soul)

Veer to us sunset point ke pahadi par khada ho kar us alien ko marne ke liye tarika soch hi rha tha jab us secret blood alien ko apne taraf aate huye dekha tha. Abhi wo sochh hi raha tha ki wo secret blood alien ka samna kis tarah se karega tabhi us alien par grandmaster ne teer chala ke uska kam asan kar diya tha. Apne shikar par kisi aur ko attack karta huya dekh kar veer ko gusa to bahut aaye tha par use ahsas huya ki ye samay gusa karne ka nahi balki samajhdari se kam karne ka hai. Ab jab garndmaster ne uska kam kar ke us secret blood alien ko adhmara kar diya hai to kyu na wo is mauke ki puri tarah se fayada uthaye bas yahi soch kar veer ne apne aadhe chandrama ke shape wale bhale us alien par attack kar diya aur wo bhala sidhe jaker us secret blood alien ke sine par ja laga jo pahle se hi jakhmi tha. Adhamra to wo ho hi chuka tha lekin veer ke bhala lagte hi uske pran pakheru ud gye alien ko marte veer ko uske power sreen kuchh information ubhar aayi SECRET BLOOD ALIEN MARA GAYA APKO SECRET BLOOD ALIEN KI DEVIL'S SOUL HASIL HUYI HAI 0 SE 10 SECRET POINTS JIN HASIL KARNE KE LIYE ISKA ENERGY HASIL KARE Power sreen par dekh kar veer ke khusi ka thikana nahi raha usne ek bar phir se devil's soul hasil kar li hai. Sachmuch uski kismat itni achhi ho gayi hai ya fir wo koi sapna dekh raha hai bas inhi khyalo me khoye huye veer ke chehro par ek gahari smile aa gyi thi par us samay veer ke pass itna samay nahi tha ke wo kushi ko celebrate kar sake. Grandmaster aur baki log usse jyada duri par nahi hai aur agar unlogo ne pakad liya to wo akela unlogo ka samna nahi kar payega bas yahi soch kar veer ne jaldi jaldi waha se bhag nikalne ka faisala kiya. Secret blood alien ka lash le jana uski bas ke bat nahi tha lekin us alien ke sunahari kulhadi leke to wo bhag hi sakta tha isliye iske pahle hi grandmaster aur sab secret blood alien ke kisi aur ke mare jane ke sadme se bahar nikalte veer us alien ke sunahre kulhadi lekar waha se bhag nikla. Aur ab wo yaha khada ho kar us sunahre kulhadi ko is tarah se dekh raha tha mano uske hath koi kimati khajana lag gya ho waise ek tarah se to ye kahna galat nahi hoga ki wakayi uske hath ek kimati khajana lag gya tha. Darasal dev ashram me is tarah ke item ki importance kisi khajana se kam nahi hai is tarah ke item ko dev ashram me gear kaha jata hai ye devil's soul ki tarah bulaye nahi jate par iski takat aur importance kisi devil's soul se kam bhi nahi hoti hai. Secret blood alien ki ye sunahri kulhadi devil's soul se bane hathiyar aur sawari ko asani se barbad kar sakti hai aur iski najara to veer ne abhi hi apne aankho se dekha tha isliye veer ke liye ye secret blood gear bahut hi kimati tha. Irada to veer ka bas is kulhadi ko churane ka tha par use kya pata tha ki bonus ke taur par use is secret blood alien ka devil's soul bhi hath lag jayegi sayad isi liye log kahte hai ki jab upar wala deta hai to chhapar phar ke deta hai. Jis veer ke liye sadhar jin point bhi hasil karna muskil ho raha tha uske hath achanak se itne sare achivement lag rahe the par jis grandmaster ke nake ke niche se ye khajana chura ke bhaga hai kya wo itani asani se veer ka pichha chhodega. Kahi aisa na ho ki veer ki ye khusi gam me badal jaye aur grandmaster ke hath lagne ke sath sath uske ye doller hone ka sach bhi sabke samne aa jaye.

-Kiski itni himat huyi ki mera khajana lut kar bhage..

Abhi abhi huye karname ke sadme se ubharne ke bad grandmaster ke guse se bhare pahle sabd yahi the jaha ek taraf veer apne jit ke khusi mana raha tha to wahi dusre taraf guse se grandmaster ka para high tha. Is pure dev ashram me use challange karne wale bas do hi log hai avani shergil aur bhim fir ye tisra kaha se paida ho gya aur agar ho bhi gaya to use iski khabar kyu nahi hai. Grandmaster ki najar waha khadi logo par padi jo usi ki tarah hi hairan the aur is samay jay ko dekh rahe the tab jakar grandmaster ko ye ahsas hota hai ki jay ne abhi abhi is rahsamayi adami ko dollar kah ke bulaya tha iska matlab ye ki ye is rahsamayi admi ko janta hai. Filhal ye samay in sawalo ka nahi tha is samay use us rahsamayi admi dollar ke pichhe bhagna chahiye grandmaster janta tha ki us secret blood alien ke bhar kulhadi ke sath dollar jyada nahi bhag paya hoga isi wajah abhi wo use pakad sakta hai. Ye khyal aate hi grandmaster ne kale bhaise ki devil's soul se bane sawari ko bulaya hai aur tezi se dollar ke piche nikal liya grandmaster ko dollar ke piche bhagta dekh uske gang ke sare log dollar ko gali dete huye apni apni sawari par baith kar usi direction me nikal pade. Is taraf jab veer ko unlogo ke aane ki aahat mahsus huyi to wo turant hi satark ho gaya use jald se jald bhagna hoga nahi to grandmaster usse uska khajana chhin lega balki use jan se bhi mar dega. Par dikat sirf itani thi ki itani bhari kulhadi ke sath veer ko tez bhagna to dur chalna bhi muskil tha aise me grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ka veer ko pakadna tay tha veer ko samajh nahi aa rha tha ki wo kya kare wo soch raha tha.

-Us secret blood alien ne to is kulhadi ko lekar asani se bhag raha tha fir mujhe itni dikat kyu ho rahi hai itani bhari hathir ke sath mera bhagna to namumkin hai

Grandmaster aur uske sathi usse bad aadhe mile ki hi duri par rah gye the jiski wajah se veer ab asani se unko dekh paa raha tha agar ye sunahri kulhadi uske hath me na hoti to abhi bhi wo unse bach ke bhag sakta tha. Par itni kimat khajane ko pichhe chhod kar wo bhagna nahi chahta tha ye to fir wahi bat ho jati ki hath ko aaya aur muh na lagaya fir ab wo kya kare.

-Kas ki wo bhi ek secret blood alien hota to wo bhi is kulhadi se sath...

Achanak se veer ki ankhe khuli ki khuli rah gayi aur use ye ahad huya ki wo ek jaruri bat to bhul hi gaya secret blood alien ki devil's soul jab wo alien itna takatwar tha to uska devil's soul bhi to takatwar hogi hi. Ye khyal aate hi veer ne turant hi use alien ke secret blood devil's soul par najar dalta hai aur devil's soul ko samne aate hi veer ke chehre par chamak aa jati hai SECRET BLOOD ALIEN KI DEVIL'S SOUL KI CATEGORY ROOP BADALNE KI SHAKTI powar screen par ye sabd dekh kar veer ko khusi ka thikana nahi rahta isi ki to use jarurat thi. Bina koi soch bichar kiye veer ne us devil's soul ko bula liya aur agale hi pal ek badi si parchhayi jo dikhne me bilkul us secret blood alien ki tarah hi thi veer ke samne aa kar khadi ho gyi agar iske pass ek badi si sunahri kulhadi de di jaye to ye parchhayi aur secret blood alien me koi farak nahi rah jayega. Agle hi pal wo parchhayi veer ki taraf daudti hai aur veer ke sharir me sama jati hai us devil's soul ko veer ke andar aate hi veer ka roop bhi usi secret blood alien ki tarah ho gya veer ke sharir ki tarah hi uska sunahara kavach bhi apna roop usi ke jaisa badal kar veer sar se lekar pav tak dhak leta hai. Ab veer ke pass ek nahi do devil's soul ki takat thi aur roop badalne ke bad to veer apne aap ko pahle se jyada energetic mahsus kar raha tha isliye ab ye bhari kulhadi uske liye kuchh bhi nahi hai ab to wo chahe to kisi pahad ko bhi ukhad kar apne sath le ja sakta hai. Halaki ye bat aur thi ki wo aisa kuchh karne wala nahi tha char pairo par sawar hath me kulhadi liye veer itani tezi se waha se bhaga ki grandmaster to kya kisi ko bhi use pakadna namumkin tha. Grandmaster aur uske sathiyo se bach kar veer waha se nikal gaya aur un sab ke pass khade rah kar dekhne ke alawa aur koi chara nahi tha sab kuchh itani tezi se huya ki kisi ko kuchh bhi samajh nahi aaya aur jabtak aaya tabtak bahut der ho chuki thi aur veer un sab ke najro se bahut dur nikal gaya tha.


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Update 14 (Veer Ka Excitement)

Sirf grandmaster aur uske sathi hi nahi waha maujud logo ko bhi apne aankho par bishwas nhi ho raha tha unhe aisa lag raha tha jaise unke aankho ke samne koi film chal raha ho jaise villain ke nake ke niche se koi hero heroin ko le jata hai unlogo me se kai to grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ko veer ke pichhe bhagte huye dekh kar man hi man has bhi rahe the. Sabhi ke man me bas ekhi sawal tha ki akhir wo rahsyamayi insan hai kon jise jay ne dollar kah ke bulaya tha jaha ek taraf dollar aur uske sathiyo par sab has rahe the wahi dusri taraf dollar urf veer ki image sanke najro me kisi hero se kam nahi rah gyi thi. Jis tarah se veer ne na sirf secret blood alien ka hathiyar balki uski devil's soul bhi churayi thi us hisab se veer ka kisi viral celebrity ki tarah charcha banna to lazmi tha aur rahi bat grandmaster ki to jo log kuchh samay pahle usse impress the wahi log ab uska majak uda rahe the. Akhir grandmaster ne sirf us secret blood alien ka hathiyar devil's soul ko hi nahi balki apne pass maujud 6 pankho wali baraiya ke devil's soul se bane hathiyar ko bhi kho giya tha to aise me to use sabka majak banana lazmi tha kuchh ko to yaha tak sak tha ki kahi is hadse ke bad grandmaster apna mansik santulan na kho baithe sab logo ke bich chal rahe is discussion me ek bat comman thi aur wo thi dollar ki asali pahchan kya hai. Jab jay ne dollar ka name liya tha tab waha maujud kai log thik se use sun nahi paye the is liye unlogo ko bas doll hi sunayi diya bhale hi sabki sunne me ye name ajib laga par dollar ya doll name ke is adami ne jo karnama kiya tha wo is name se bhi ajib tha. Sab log apas me veer grandmaster aur us secret blood alien ke charcha kar hi rahe the tabhi un sab ka najar grandmaster aur uske sathiyo par padi itani badi har ke wahaj se un sabhi ke chehro me 12 baje the. Unlogo ke aisi halat dekh kar kuchh logo ko to andar se bahut khusi huyi kyuki kahi na kahi wo log bhi grandmaster aur uske sathiyo ke nainsafi ka shikar bane the sayad isi ko karma kahte hai sabko tang karne wala adami ek anjan insan se har gaya tha wo anjan insan unko dhul chata gya tha. Wapas aate hi grandmaster sidha jay ke pass gya aur use dhamkate huye dollar ke bare me sari jankari lene laga usne kaha.

-Tum... tum jante ho na us doll ya dollar jo bhi hai uska name batao kaha rahta hai wo nahi to tum jante ho anjam achha nahi hoga

Grandmaster ko pata tha ki jay ne us adami ko dollar kahke bulaya hai to aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai ki jay us adami ke bare me kuchh bhi nahi janta ho. Grandmaster ke guse se bhara chehra dekh kar jay grandmaster ko dollar se apni pahli mulakat ke bare me batane ke alawa aur koi chara nahi bacha tha waise bhi jay ke pass iske alawa batane ke liye aur tha bhi kya siwaye dollar name ke wo kuchh aur janta bhi to nahi tha. Wo to ye tak bhi nahi janta tha ki dollar ka ye adami dikhta kaisa hai fir wo kaha rahta hai kya karta hai uske bat hi chhod do grandmaster ko jay ke bat par bharosa to nahi tha par wo aur kar bhi kya sakta tha jay avani ke gang ka adami hai aur isiliye grandmaster use jyada dhamka bhi nhi sakta tha. Agar jay uske gang me hota to grandmaster use ulta latka kar sab sach pata kar leta par abhi wo kuchh kar nahi sakta tha aur iski do wajah thi pahli wo avani par apna impression kharab nahi karna chahta tha pahle hi us dollar ke wajah se grandmaster ki image avani ke najar me aisi ki taisi ho gyi thi ab agar wo avani ki gang ke kisi bhi adami ke sath batmiji karta hai to avani usse impress hona dur sayad use apne aas pass bhatakne bhi Na degi. Dusri wajah ye thi ki grandmaster ke pass aisa kuchh proof nahi tha jisse ki wo jay ke bato ko wo galat thahra sake aise me uske pass nirash hoke dev ashram wapas jane ke alava koi aur rasta bacha bhi nahi tha. Is dollar ne use bahubali se jony leaver bana diya tha jise dekho wahi usko dekh kar has raha tha par ye bat alag hai ki kisi ke bhi itani himat nahi thi ki wo grandmaster ke muh par hase. Lekin apne kamre ko andar se band karke baithe grandmaster ne muthiya bhichte huye khud se wada kiya.

-Dollar teri wajah se aaj sabki najaro me meri ijat aisi ki taisi huyi hai aur to aur avani par mera impression bhi kharab ho gya kasam hai mujhe jis din tum mere hath lag gaya na beta usi din tere tukde tukde kar ke unhi tukdo se yaha ke alien treat dunga nahi tomera name bhi grandmaster nahi..

Ab wo apne is Wade ko pura kar payega ya nahi mujhe nahi pata par ha filhal abhi kuchh samay ke liye dollar ya doll grandmaster aur us secret blood alien aur secret blood alien ke devil's soul pure dev ashram me sabse popular topic the. Is taraf grandmaster ke kasam se anjan veer pahad ke pass ek gadha khodne me byast tha wo janta tha ki grandmaster aur uska sathi itani asani se to har nahi man manege isliye usne apne sunhare kulhadi ko us gadhe me chhupane ka decision liya. Is tarah se grandmaster aur uske sathi dev ashram me baki logo ki tarah uski bhi talashi lete hai to unhe veer ke pass kuchh milega nahi aur na unlogo ko veer par sak hoga kyuki abhi bhi veer unlogo se mukabla karne ke liye puri tarah se taiyar nahi hai. Bhale hi is samay veer apna roop badal kar nikal gya ho lekin roop badalne ka bhi ek time period hota hai wo kuchh hi samay ke liye apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai abhi uske jin itne strong nahi hai ki wo itne takatwar alien ke devil's soul se jyada der tak apne badle huye roop me rah sake. Jitna takatwar alien hoga veer ko utna jyada jin point aur utani hi takatwar body ki jarurat hogi is samay veer ke pass 8 secret jin poin hai aur itne jin points ke sath veer 8 minutes tak hi apne badle huye roop me rah sakta hai itna samay grandmaster aur uske sathiyo se bach nikalne ke liye kafi tha. Lekin un logo ka mukabla karne ke liye use aur jin point ki jarurat thi itne kam samay me to ek ya do ko hi mar payega un sab se mukabla karne ke liye use abhi aur strong hone ki jarurat hai ab devil's soul ko to koi tabtak nahi dekh sakta jabtak ki use bulaya na jaye par sunhari kulhadi to invisible nahi ho sakti na aaj nahi to kal sabko uske pass sunhari kulhadi dikh hi jayegi. Iske sath usne grandmaster hi nahi avani aur bhim ke sath bhi panga le liya hai bhale hi us secret blood alien ko admara us grandmaster ne kiya ho par is mission me teeno gang samil the isliye us sunahari kulhadi ko milne se un teeno gang ko barabar ka fayda hota par aisa huya nahi aur ab veer ne ek nahi teeno gang se dusmani mol leli hai. To aise me samajhdari isime hai ki is sunahri kulhadi ko veer isi surkshit jagah pe chhupa de jabtak ki is sunahari kulhadi ka achha kharidar nahi milta tabtak yaha ye sabke najro se safe rahegi.

-Is sunahari kulhadi ko bech kar to mujhe 2 crore to asani se mil jayenge aur mere pass jo sunahare kachhuye ka jo saman pada hai usse mai asani se 1 crore tak kama sakta hu yani ki ghar ki problem to solve ho jayegi par abhi ke liye mujhe is kulhadi ko yahi chhupana hoga ek bar jab ye situation cantrol me aa jayegi tab mai janta hu ki ye sari chije kaha bechani hai...

US sunahri kulhadi ko jamin me gadte huye veer bahut hi excited tha yahi excitement uske chehre par najar aa rahi thi fir wo jis maksad ke liye taitan grah aaya tha wo pura jo hone wala tha bhale secret blood devil's soul ke mukable secret blood gear utna kimati nahi tha is liye veer itna sure tha ki is kulhadi ke 2 crore to mil hi jayenge rahi bat secret blood alien ke devil's soul ki to use bechne ke bare me to veer soch bhi nahi sakta. Yahi to ek chij hai jo dev ashram me bane rahne aur success hasil karne me uski madat karegi ise bechna matalab sone ke ande dene wale murgi ko marna hoga aur veer aisa bilkul bhi nahi chahta tha uske liye dev ashram me ek STATUS hasil karna itna hi jaruri ho gya tha jitna yaha aane se pahle 3 crore rupay kamana tha ab uske aur 3 crore rupay me jyada duri nahi bachi hai tab wo apna sara focus physical development me laga sakta hai par jis jagah pe uske itne dusman hai us jagah pe veer kaise survive karega ye dekhna dilchasp hoga.
 
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