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Adultery SHOUHAR BECHARE ( शाैहर बेचारे ) [COMPLETED]

Shikari_golu

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Shikari_golu

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Mai manta hoon ki adultry kahani me sex jayada hota hai magar kahani likhne ki kala bahut hi bekaar hai ............agar apko kahani likhne ki kala sikhni hai aap is forum par ek kahani hai manhoos se mahan tak ..us kahani se kuch seekh lena .....galti ke leye maafi chahunga

Tumne ab tak jo bhi story ke baare me bola tha...wo theek tha...but ab galti kar di....mera ego hurt kar ke...

Mujhse bol rahe ho ki writting seekhu....wo bhi aisi story jo apni maa-behan ki chudaai dikhata hai....

I hate incest...aur un writter se nafrat hai jo incest , khas kar ki maa ki chudaai bhi dikha dete hai....

So...mujhe aisi ghatiya writting nhi seekhni....main jo likhta hu....wo saalon se likh raha hu....jise pasand hai wo read kare...warna na kare...uski marji.....

Shikari apne aap me ek brand hai...aur ye meri story bolti hai....main nhi....

To story ke baare me kuch bhi bolo...good ir bad...no problem...but personal comment nhi...

Ye forume maze ke liye hai to maze kare aur karne de.....ok
 

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Agar golu saniya se Sacha pyar karta hai to saniya randi ya rakhail banata aurat pyar karne ke liye hoti na ki rakhail banane ke liye

Kisne kaha ki wo saccha pyaar hai....kya saccha pyaar dhokha de kar kiya jata hai....bilkul nhi...

Bas time ke sath kuch galtiyan hui aur kuch hawas....baki kuch trick aur ho gaye dono humbistar...baki last me samjh jaoge....ok
 

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Mai apki baat mante hue is kahani ko ant tak padhunga dekhte hai kya hota hai

Bilkul....main bhi janna chahuga ki end me aapke view kya hoge....
 

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Maine pehle hi kaha hai aurat pyar karane ke liye hoti na ki rakhail banane ke liye .......apke.jawab ke intjaar me

Agar aourat pyaar karne ki cheej hai to mard bhi support karne ki cheej hai....use aourat ka support chahiye....taali ek hath se nhi bajti....jo apne pati ko chhod kar dusre ki baahon me jaygi...wo rakhel hi samjhi jaygi....ye fact hai....
 

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Agar is kahani me golu aurat ko uski galti ki saza nahi.de raha hai.balki apni hawas mita raha hai

Wait till d end...abhi kuch nhi boluga...ok
 

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Sahi kaha....kabhi khushi ki baat hoti hai to kabhi jaroorat ki....aur kabhi sabkuch kisi maqsad ke liye hota hai....
Maine pehle hi kaha hai aurat pyar karane ke liye hoti na ki rakhail banane ke liye .......apke.jawab ke intjaar me

Tumne ab tak jo bhi story ke baare me bola tha...wo theek tha...but ab galti kar di....mera ego hurt kar ke...

Mujhse bol rahe ho ki writting seekhu....wo bhi aisi story jo apni maa-behan ki chudaai dikhata hai....

I hate incest...aur un writter se nafrat hai jo incest , khas kar ki maa ki chudaai bhi dikha dete hai....

So...mujhe aisi ghatiya writting nhi seekhni....main jo likhta hu....wo saalon se likh raha hu....jise pasand hai wo read kare...warna na kare...uski marji.....

Shikari apne aap me ek brand hai...aur ye meri story bolti hai....main nhi....

To story ke baare me kuch bhi bolo...good ir bad...no problem...but personal comment nhi...

Ye forume maze ke liye hai to maze kare aur karne de.....ok
Main aapke u
Tumne ab tak jo bhi story ke baare me bola tha...wo theek tha...but ab galti kar di....mera ego hurt kar ke...

Mujhse bol rahe ho ki writting seekhu....wo bhi aisi story jo apni maa-behan ki chudaai dikhata hai....

I hate incest...aur un writter se nafrat hai jo incest , khas kar ki maa ki chudaai bhi dikha dete hai....

So...mujhe aisi ghatiya writting nhi seekhni....main jo likhta hu....wo saalon se likh raha hu....jise pasand hai wo read kare...warna na kare...uski marji.....

Shikari apne aap me ek brand hai...aur ye meri story bolti hai....main nhi....

To story ke baare me kuch bhi bolo...good ir bad...no problem...but personal comment nhi...

Ye forume maze ke liye hai to maze kare aur karne de.....ok
Main apke upar persnal attack nahi kar raha hoon mai to ye keh raha hoon ki sabkuch apni aankhon ke samne hote huye bhi kya koee itna bewakoof ho sakta jaise is kahani me Sanya ke Pati ko dikhaya gaya hai
 
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Main aapke u

Main apke upar persnal attack nahi kar raha hoon mai to ye keh raha hoon ki sabkuch apni aankhon ke samne hote huye bhi kya koee itna bewakoof ho sakta jaise is kahani me Sanya ke Pati ko dikhaya gaya hai

I know ye sab abhi dekhne-padhne me bura feel kara raha hoga kuch logo ko...

But as i said....wait till d end....

I know aapne aaj tak meri koi bhi story nhi read ki.....warna aap ye acchi tarah se samjhte ki meri story me kych bhi bewajah nhi hota....har ek baat ka valid reason hota hai...but wo reason janne ke liye last rak chalna hoga....ok...
 
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