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Mai manta hoon ki adultry kahani me sex jayada hota hai magar kahani likhne ki kala bahut hi bekaar hai ............agar apko kahani likhne ki kala sikhni hai aap is forum par ek kahani hai manhoos se mahan tak ..us kahani se kuch seekh lena .....galti ke leye maafi chahunga
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Agar golu saniya se Sacha pyar karta hai to saniya randi ya rakhail banata aurat pyar karne ke liye hoti na ki rakhail banane ke liye
Mai apki baat mante hue is kahani ko ant tak padhunga dekhte hai kya hota hai
Maine pehle hi kaha hai aurat pyar karane ke liye hoti na ki rakhail banane ke liye .......apke.jawab ke intjaar me
Agar is kahani me golu aurat ko uski galti ki saza nahi.de raha hai.balki apni hawas mita raha hai
Sahi kaha....kabhi khushi ki baat hoti hai to kabhi jaroorat ki....aur kabhi sabkuch kisi maqsad ke liye hota hai....
Maine pehle hi kaha hai aurat pyar karane ke liye hoti na ki rakhail banane ke liye .......apke.jawab ke intjaar me
Main aapke uTumne ab tak jo bhi story ke baare me bola tha...wo theek tha...but ab galti kar di....mera ego hurt kar ke...
Mujhse bol rahe ho ki writting seekhu....wo bhi aisi story jo apni maa-behan ki chudaai dikhata hai....
I hate incest...aur un writter se nafrat hai jo incest , khas kar ki maa ki chudaai bhi dikha dete hai....
So...mujhe aisi ghatiya writting nhi seekhni....main jo likhta hu....wo saalon se likh raha hu....jise pasand hai wo read kare...warna na kare...uski marji.....
Shikari apne aap me ek brand hai...aur ye meri story bolti hai....main nhi....
To story ke baare me kuch bhi bolo...good ir bad...no problem...but personal comment nhi...
Ye forume maze ke liye hai to maze kare aur karne de.....ok
Main apke upar persnal attack nahi kar raha hoon mai to ye keh raha hoon ki sabkuch apni aankhon ke samne hote huye bhi kya koee itna bewakoof ho sakta jaise is kahani me Sanya ke Pati ko dikhaya gaya haiTumne ab tak jo bhi story ke baare me bola tha...wo theek tha...but ab galti kar di....mera ego hurt kar ke...
Mujhse bol rahe ho ki writting seekhu....wo bhi aisi story jo apni maa-behan ki chudaai dikhata hai....
I hate incest...aur un writter se nafrat hai jo incest , khas kar ki maa ki chudaai bhi dikha dete hai....
So...mujhe aisi ghatiya writting nhi seekhni....main jo likhta hu....wo saalon se likh raha hu....jise pasand hai wo read kare...warna na kare...uski marji.....
Shikari apne aap me ek brand hai...aur ye meri story bolti hai....main nhi....
To story ke baare me kuch bhi bolo...good ir bad...no problem...but personal comment nhi...
Ye forume maze ke liye hai to maze kare aur karne de.....ok
Main aapke u
Main apke upar persnal attack nahi kar raha hoon mai to ye keh raha hoon ki sabkuch apni aankhon ke samne hote huye bhi kya koee itna bewakoof ho sakta jaise is kahani me Sanya ke Pati ko dikhaya gaya hai