Adultery SHOUHAR BECHARE ( शाैहर बेचारे ) [COMPLETED]

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Koee aadmi itna bewakoof nahi ho sakta jitna is kahani me shoib ko dikhaya gaya hai ye likhne wale ki sabse badi kamjori hai ........isliye is kahani me mujhe jhut aur bakwaas nazar aata hai ........ koee Bata sakta hai ki jitne log comment karte hai ki koee itna bewakoof ho sakta hai

Ye tumhari soch hai....tum isme khush raho....story to aage badti hi rahegi.....

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Sirajali,
paheli bat ye koi reality nahi hai sirf aur sirf manoranjan hai to aap ise usi tarah dekhe.

Aap ne bollywood ya Hollywood ki filme bhi dekhi hogi. Usme jo stunt dikhate hai kya wo kabhi dimag main baith te hai. Fir bhi hum enjoy karte hai na. Aaj kal jo Avengers ki movie jo world wide hit hai kya wo sab reality mai possible hai? Nahi na per world mai kitne log dekhte hai (paisa deke) to kya wo sab bewakoof hai? Nahi wo sirf use entertainment ke liye dekhte hai. Waise hi ye story sirf entertainment hisab se padhiye. Dimag mat lagaiye.

Samjhane ki jaroorat nhi use....uska ajenda hi kuch aur hai....so leave him...jalne walo ko jalne do....hum pardanseeno ko nanga karte rahege....ok

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Bahut mast stury hai

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Mere bhai maine hollywood aur bollywood dono tarah ki movee dekhee hain magar itna bewakoof to filmo me bhi nahi banate jitna is kahani me lekhak ne readers ko banaya hai ........kisi aadmi ko aanhe aur thup thup sisakne ki awazen sun kar ki uski patni dusre.aadmi ke.saath.hai aur usko pata bhi nahi chalta ........koee readers kya itna bewakoof ho sakta hai ....ye lekhak ki sebse badi kamjori hai is kahani me sirf aur sirf sex hi hai kahani me koee majbooti nahi hai ........

Ha dost...tum sahi ho...baki sab galat....ok...khush raho....

Aur ek baat...main yaha sex likhne hi aaya hu....kyoki yaha sab sex padhne hi aate hai...

Ab aise forume par aa kar gyaan aur samjh ki baat karne wala koun hoga....u know d ans...right....

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Aur ek baat kehna chahta hoon aap hollywood aur bollywood filmo ki baat kar rahe hai mere bhai agar filmo ki kahani hi achchi nahi hogi to film ko koee bhi pasand nahi karega

Meri kahani pasand karne wale bhi hai aur napasand karne wale bhi...jaise mujhe sahrukh, salman aur amir ki filme dekhna pasand nhi...to iska matlab ye nhi ki koi bhi unki film nhi dekhta....to apni pasand aur apni soch ke hisaab se kaam karo....nhi pasand to dekhna hi kyo.....

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Sirajali
Ek bat batao, aap sirf story ke liye negetive likh na hai isliye likh rahe ho ya aur koi bat hai.

Bollywood / Hollywood movies mai isse bhi kai guna jyada ullu banate hai aur aap ko wo kam lagta hai aur ye jyada lagta hai.

Any way ab sirf story ki bat kare to ye story mai bahut clear writer ne batya hai ki Shoaib ek llach insan ban gaya hai aur use bina mahenat ki sab chij mil rahi hai . To bat ye hai ki jab kisi ko lalach lag jaye to wo sunke bhi ansuna karta hai. Aur yahi kam Shoaib kar raha hai.
Aap thoda dhyan se padhenge aur story ke liye jo prejudice hai wo nikalen ge to samaj aa jayega. Baki aap ki marzi

Aap abhi tak unka main matlab nhi samjhe kya....i hope samjh to aa gaya hoga ki unhe paresaani kyo ho rahi hai....use story se matlab hi nhi...bas kuch aur hi paresaani hai....to samjhane ka matlab nhi....leave him...nd enjoy....

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Lagta hai aap galat forume par aa gaye hai, jaldi se is forume se doori nana lijiye, kyoki yaha aapko aisi hi kahaniya padhne ko milegi, jo aapko jhoothi aur bakwas lagegi

Jaise incest sex, usme maa-behan dawa ke chud jati hai bete aur bhai se, isse badi bakwaas koi hai duniya me

Rahi is story ki baat, to shoaib ka character last tak hi clear hoga, kyoki jitna main golu bhai ko janta hu, wo bina wajah ke kuch bhi nhi likhte, to ya to wait kare ya padhna chhod de,

Acchi nhi lag rahi to door rahe, fir ye bakwaas kyo karni, koi daawat to de nhi raha na aapko, ya koi majboori hai ki aap ye bakwaas padhe

Rahne de bhai....mat samjha....ok

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Aap behad badhiya story likhte ho. Bhai. Maine bhi apse inspired hoke ek kahani likha shuru kiya hai. Pehli baar koi story likh raha hu. Story me mood maintain karna behad hard kag raha hai. Aap ye sab kaise kar lete ho bhai. Manana padega apko

Gud luck 4 ur story....kabhi time mila to read karuga.. k nk bhej dena...ok

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