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Super bhai mast no word
Wonderful story! You are really an extraordinary writer!
Superb ending.. Shoaib ka past unexpected tha...socha nahi tha aisa bhi ho sakta hai.milte hai next story mein...waise commissioner ki acp biwi ko kaise patake sex kiya woh likhna chahiye tha..aur update no 62 mein gif abhitak aaye nahi nahi hai..waha thoda gif add kijiye
Gajab ki ending
Bhai fan ho gai hai aapkay
Is forum par one of the best writer ho aap
Apki kahaniya gajab,
writing style reader to kahani say jooday Rekhta hay
Is kahani ko likhnay kay leheh bahoot bhahoot
Dhanyavad
Apkay dawara aur naiee kahanioo ka intejar rahega
We want part2
Update no 62 mein aadhe part mein gif upload hua hai aadhe part mein nahi
Bahut khoob shikari bhai
1 aur saandaar kahani puri karne ke liye dhanyabaad, badhaai
Last me ek sath kai update de diye, to padhne me time lag raha hai, pure padh kar batata hu, ki ant kaisa raha
Aapki dusri kahaniyo ka intzaar rahega
Lage rahe golu bhai