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Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki kaise Willy Iszy ko apne se judi baate batata hai aur saath hi vo usse Shubham ka baare mei bhi bata deta hai ki vo vapas apni kaali takat lekar laut aaya hai par saath hi vo usse ya bhi samjha batata hai ki vo iss waqt behad dhur hai sabhi ki pahuch se…. Vo iss waqt essi jagah hai jaha koi nahi usse dhund sakta hai….. Idhar Nalini aur Elika jo Ghost World mei tha vaha Nalini ko kuch powers uss jagah ka singhasan par baithne ka saath hi milti hai….. Nalini jisko sabhi log Nimbasa ka naam se jada jante hai sabhi ko iss baat ka pata chal jaata hai ki Nimbasa vapas laut aayi hai….. Imosopher ko Nimbasa ka aane ka pata chal jaata hai aur saath hi usse ya bhi pata chal jaata hai ki Shubham bhi vapas laut aaya hai….. Vo apne hi ek Shaitan jisse hum S1 kaheta hai usko bulata hai aur usse sab kuch baate samjha deta hai…..
Ab aage….
Iszy: Willy ya kya hai aur koi itna bhayanak tarah se kaise chikh sakta hai…..???
Willy: Ya chikh iss baat ka sandesh de rahi hai ki iss duniya mei ab hum jaise aam logo ka samaye khatam ho gaya hai…..
Iszy: Kya….???? Kya matlab hai tumhara…..???
Willy: Iss chikh ka matlab hai iss duniya ka sabhi vo jadugar jinke marne ka baad bhi unka naam ka prabhav iss duniya mei chalta tha aur jinhone iss duniya mei kayi essa karnamei kiya hai aur essi shaktiya hassil ki hai jinka thod sirf unke mukable ka hi jadugar ka pass ho sakta hai….. Mera aur tumhare jaise logo ki prajati ko vo apni aankho ka ek ishare se khatam kar sakte hai essi takat ka maliko ka iss sansaar mei punah aagman ho gaya hai……
Iszy Willy tu mujhe dara raha hai…. Saaf saaf bolna…..???
Willy: Usko dekh muskurata hai….. Iszy ya chikh jiski hai uska naam hai Nimbasa urf Nalini….. Nimbasa ya naam iss sansaar ka unn Mahan aur sabse khaas jadugaro ka saath liya jaata hai jinhone iss sansaar mei apni mehanat aur lagan se kuch essa hassil kiya hai jiska thod iss sansaar mei namumkin ka barabar hai……
Nimbasa vaise toh ya ek behad samanye duniya ki behad samanye ladki hua karti thi par ek mahan rishi ka aakhri samaye mei jab unhe aakhri kuch bunde paani ki cahaiye thi uss samaye Nimbasa na hi unn rishi ko paani pilaya….. Rishni na uss ladki ka man mei jhak kar dekha toh paaya ki uss ladki ka dil behad komal aur behad saaf hai…. Bus yahi baat unhe pasand aa gayi aur unhone marne se phele apne jeevan ki sabhi arjit shaktiya aur unn sabhi se upar unki khator tapasya se arjit unka gyan sab kuch unhone uss ladki ko de diya…..
Unhone uske sar par haath fer usse Elika ka pass jaane ko kaha aur unke pran chale gaye…. Nimbasa na unn Rishi ka sharir ko jamin mei ek jaga dafna diya aur uss jamin ka char taraf usne behad sunadar aur khubsurat phool laga diya…… Nimbasa na unke samne apne haath jod unhe dhanyawad diya jo bhi unhone usse diya aur uske baad apni aankhe band kiya hi Elika ko yaad kiya…..
Elika jisse Rishi ki maut ka pata chal gaya tha usse unki urja se aaye sandesh ko samajh vo turant uss jagah pahuch gayi jaha se sandesh bheja gaya tha aur vaha jab usne Nimbasa ko dekha toh usse samajh aaya ki Rishi na usse apna sab kuch de diya tha….. Elika na uss ladki ko apni choti bhen ka roop mei swikaar liya aur usse lekar apni duniya yaani Paristan chali gayi….
Paristan ko dekh Nimbasa behad khush hui par usse jada usse ek pariwar ka sneha mila jisse uski khushi ka koi thikana nahi tha…. Elika aur Maharani na Nimbasa ki shiksha shuru karwa di…. Kyunki Nimbasa mei Rishi ki shaktiya thi issi vajah se uske ander dhyan aur kisi bhi jiss par purn dhyan dena ki kala bhi thi…. Usne behad jaldi vo sab sikh liya jo uske jeevan mei shaktiyo ka istemaal karne ka liya jaruri tha…. Jab usne sab jaruri baate sikh li uske baad toh vo kabhi nahi ruki aur bus unn jaruri baato ko dhyan rakh usne khudse hi nayi nayi chije sikhi aur karne lagi…. Waqt nikalta gaya aur Nimbasa ki shaktiya aur uska jaadu behad shaktishali hote gaye….. Par inn sabke bich usne kabhi bhi Elika aur Maharani ka saath kabhi essa vyavhaar nahi kiya ki unhe koi peeda pahuche bulki vo unn dono ka saath iss tarah raheti thi ki vo unki rakshak hai aur unko musibat se dhur rakhna uska ek maatr lakshaye tha…..
Ek din usne ek behad prachin jaadu ka baare mei Paristan ki kitabo mei pada….. Vo jaadu itna parachin aur iss tarah ka agyaat tha ki aaj tak iss duniya mei kabhi kisine usse na toh kiya tha aur na hi kabhi koi usse samajh saka tha…. Bus kitabo mei uske baare mei bataya gaya tha par logo ka maana tha ki essa jaadu kabhi hua hi nahi hai aur ya bus bakwas hai….. Nimbasa na jab uss jaadu ka baaremei sab padh liya tab usse laga ki nahi usse ya jaadu karna hai….. Usne kayi prayas kiya par vo safal nahi ho saki…. Apne asafal prayas se vo behad dukhi hui…. Par usne man mei vo baat abhi bhi thi ki usse vo karna hai….
Usne ek baar fir uss kitab ko padha jismei aakhir mei likha tha ki ki iss jaadu ko karne ka liya vyakti ka man, dimak aur uski sabhi urja na sirf sab ek honi cahaiye bulki uss vyakti ka dhyan ya concentration itna jada hona cahaiye ki yadi ko uske sharir ka aar paar talwar bhi nikal de toh usse vo mehsoos nahi ho aur uske sharir se uski aatma bhi uska saath na chod sake uski icha ka bina……
Ya baat padhne ka baad usne faisla kiya ki vo ek behad ekant jagah jayegi jaha koi nahi hoga usse pareshan karne vala aur islye usne Elika aur Maharani se aagya li aur vo chali gayi…. Usne Paristan ki purvi sima ki pahadiyo mei ek jaadu kiya aur uss jagah ko apne adhin kar liya jiski vajah se ab vaha na koi kabhi aa sakta tha aur na koi ander se bahar jaa sakta tha…..
Vaha pahuch usne ek baar fir book mei diya gaye sabhi nirdesho ka palan karna shuru kiya aur aakhir mei vo dhyan mei leen ho gayi….. Karib 28 saal ka samaye laga usse, inn 28 saalo mei uska dhyan bus ussi jaadu ki taraf tha jo vo karna cahati thi…. Inn 28 saalo mei ek shan ka liya bhi vo dhyan se vapas nahi lauti bus vo lagatar dhyan mei aur gherayi mei jati gayi jati gayi aur jati gayi….
Vo dhyan mei uss gherayi tak chali gayi ki jo jaadu vo karna cahati thi vo uss jaadu ka bicho bich khadi thi aur uske chaaro taraf vo jaadu ho chukka tha…. Dhere dhere uss jaadu ki urja usmei samane lagi aur saath hi samane lagi vo sabhi logi ki shaktiya jinhone uss jaadu ko karne ka behad prayas kiya par vo usmei kabhi safal nahi hua aur humesha ka liya iss jaadu mei kaid ho gaye tha……
Aakhir apne maksad mei kaamyab hokar hi vo maani aur fir vo vapas Paristan gayi…. Elika aur Maharani usse vapas vaha dekh behad khush hua par paristan mei ek dur desh ka Raja aur unke putr aaye tha jinhe Maharani na bulaya tha…. Unka putr na Nimbasa ka majak uda diya jismei usne ya kahe diya ki jiss jaadu ki vo baat kar rahi hai essa jadu iss sansaar mei kabhi nahi ho sakta hai…. Apni kadi mehanat ka apmaan usse bardash nahi hua aur usne apni aankhe band kar kuch shabd kahe aur pura paristan hi uske jaadu mei ghera gaya aur sabhi vaha pahuch gaye tha jo uska jaadu tha…..
Uss jaadu ko dekh sabhi ki aankhe fatti ki fatti rahe gayi aur sabhi ko dar ka saaye nag her liya…. Vahi Nimbasa par krodh behad hawi hone laga tha par Elika na samaye raheta usse shant kiya aur saath hi usse jaadu ko khatam kar unhe maaf karne ka liya bhi kaha…..
Nimbasa jiske liya Elika uski badi bhen thi vo usse mana nahi kar saki aur usne sabhi ko vapas apni duniya mei le aayi….. Idhar maharaj aur unke putr ka toh dar se behad bura haal tha aur vo log ulte pair laut gaye….. Ya baat aag ki tarah sansaar mei fail gayi aur Nimbasa ka naam sansaar ka sabse takatwar jaadugaro mei shumaar ho gaya……
Iszy: Willy vo jaadu konsa tha aur agar essa tha toh fir vo kaha chali gayi thi…..???
Willy: Iszy uss jaadu ko black hole kaheta hai….. Ek essi duniya jaha kewal andhera hi andhera hota hai, vaha prakash kabhi nahi pahuch paata hai aur iss vajah se aapko kabhi pata nahi chalta hai ki aap uss jagah se kaise bahar nikalo…. Black hole ek essa andhera ghera hai jismei jo bhi kabhi gaya hai laut kar nahi aaya hai bulki vo vaha jakar apni sabhi urja Nimbasa ko de deta hai…
Nimbasa kahi nahi gayi thi uski maut ho gayi thi….. Jiss samaye iss sansaar mei Satrangi Shaktiyo ko paane ka youdh prarambh hua tha uss waqt Elika par hua ek humle se usse bachane ka liya Nimbasa na apne sampurn shaktiyo ko ek kar Elika ka chaaro taraf ek suraksha kawach bana diya tha jisse takra kar vo humla toh bekaar ho gaya par saath hi Nimbasa ki sabhi shaktiya bhi usse chin gayi thi….. Bina shaktiyo ka Nimbasa fir samanye ho gayi aur uss youdh mei uski jaan chali gayi thi…..
Par apne bina swarth ka jeevan jeena ki vajah se Nimbasa ki ruhu ek sharir se nikal kar dusre sharir mei chali gayi aur fir vo vapas laut aayi Nalini bankar….. Nalini jo swarndesh ka Maharaj ki ek lauti putri hai vahi Nimbasa hai aur usko uski urja vapas Shubham na de di hai…. Uss youdh mei jo uski shaktiya samapt ho gayi thi unhi shaktiyo ka kuch kano se Maharani (Shubham Mom) na unhe vapas jeevit kar diya aur unhe Nimbasa ka punhe aagman ka liya aasman mei chupa diya…. Jiss din vo laut kar ghost world pahuchegi aur vaha apna rajye isthapit karegi bus uss din usse vo sabhi shaktiya vapas mil jaani thi aur essa hi hua hai aaj….. Ek baar fir Nimbasa ka aagman ka matlab hai achayi aur burayi ka bich ki jung ka aagas hone vala hai jismei sirf vahi log bhagedaar banega jinmei khaas baat hai…..
Iszy: Iska matlab hum sabhi…..
Willy: Bilkul Iszy….. Hum sab hiss youdh ka hissa nahi banega…… Tumhai yaad hai tumhare Pita na ek baar hum sabhi se tumhari shadi ka samaye kaha tha ki jab youdh ka samaye aayega tab sirf youdh achayi aur burayi ka bich hoga…. Iss duniya ki do maha shaktiyo ka bich hoga aur uss youdh mei hum jaise aam logo ka koi kaam nahi hoga….
Unka matlab yahi sab se tha…. Unka matlab yahi tha ki iss youdh mei bus duniya ki vo Maha shaktiya ladegi jo achayi aur burayi ki behad badi pratik hai…. Baaki sabhi iss youdh se dhur hi rahega….. Tum isse andaza laga lo ki iss youdh mei AS aur Mariana Madam jaise logo bhi shamil nahi ho sakega ………
Iszy: Iska matlab youdh mei jo bhi hoga vo apne aap mei ek behad uche darje ka log hoga…..
Willy: Bilkul Iszy unka darja aur unki kala kuch essi hogi jiske baare mei sirf sansaar mei logo na suna hoga par kabhi dekha nahi hoga…. Par iss youdh ka shuru hone mei abhi samaye hai…. Kyunki abhi dono taraf ka youdha pura nahi hua hai….. Iss youdh mei sab kuch daav par hoga achayi aur burayi ka….. Jo bhi harega vo sab kuch haar jayega……
Chaliye dosto inki baato ko yahi chod deta hai aur hum chalte hai ek din baad yaani parso ka samaye jab Imosopher na Draco ko bulaya tha madat ka liya…..
Imosopher: Vo aaj apni duniya se kahi jaane vala tha aur saath hi usne apni duniya mei ek hawan bhi karne ko kaha tha apne saath yaani S1 se….. Vo usse yaad karta hai toh turant hi S1 uske samne prakat ho jaata hai……
S1: Pranam Malik…..
Imosopher: Kya tumne apne sabhi aadmiyo ko sema par bhej diya hai aur saath hi unhe samjha diya hai na ki cahaiye kuch bhi ho jaaye vo sima se khudko na dhur karega aur na hi kisi tarah ka shastra uthayega…. Unhe bus sima par khade rahena hai aur kuch nahi karna hai……
S1: Ji malik, aapne jaisa mujhe karne ka liya kaha tha meine bilkul vaisa hi kar diya hai….. Meine sabhi ko sab kuch na sirf samjha diya hai bulki unhe ya bhi bata diya hai ki yadi kisine bhi galti kari toh unka sar unke dhad se turant alag ho jayega aur uski ruhu ko malik kaid karke behad tadpayega……
Imosopher: Behad ache S1…. Mujhe pata tha tum apne aadmiyo ko sambhal loge….. Aur kya tum hawan mei baithne ka liya tayar ho….???
S1: Jee malik mei hawan mei baithe ka liya tayar hu….. Mei apni sabhi urja ko uss hawan kund mei daal dunga……
Imosopher: Vo apna haath aage karta hai aur vaha ek hawan kund aa jata hai……
Imosopher: S1 tum iss kund ka aage baith jaao aur iss hawan kund ka samne se hilna nahi….. Ek samaye aayega jab ya kund apne aap jal uthega aur ussi samaye tumhai apni sabhi urja ko iss kund mei sama dena hai….. Iss kund se ek adrashya urja nikalegi jo dhere dhere sabhi taraf failne lagegi aur vo sab kuch apne giraft mei le legi jiski vajah se na koi ander se bahar aur na bahar se koi ander aa sakega……
Tumhare ya hawan mera vapas lautne ka saath hi khatam hoga aur agar ya tum iss hawan ko pura kar sake toh vapas aakar mei tumhai uphaar mei vo dunga jiski tumne kabhi kalpana bhi nahi kari hogi….. Par agar tumne koi bhi galti kari toh yaad rakhna tumhai vo saja milegi jiski bhi tumne kabhi kalpana nahi kari hogi……
S1: Malik mei aapko nirash nahi karunga….. Aapki icha anusaar hi ya hawan purn hoga aur aap iske purn hone par behad prasan bhi hoga ya mera wada hai aapse…..
Imosopher: Toh thik hai ab mei chalta hu….. Aur ya kahe kar vo gayab ho jaata hai aur vahi S1 bhi turant hawan ka samne jakar jamin par baith jaata hai……
Imosopher gayab hokar vaha pahuch jaata hai jaha se uska safar shuru hone vala tha….. Vo jab vaha pahuchta hai toh usse vaha Draco phele se hi maujood dikhta hai…..
Draco: Toh tum tayar ho Imosopher….???
Imosopher: Ha tayar toh hu par usse phele mujhe tumhai kuch dena hai….. Ya kahe kar vo apne haath ko Draco ka sar par rakh deta hai….. Jaise hi uska haath sar par jaata hai uski aankhe puri kaali ho jaati hai aur uske haatho se behad adhik maatra mei kaali urja nikal rahi thi jo Draco ka sharir mei sama rahi thi….
Kuch der baad Imosopher apna haath uske sar se hata leta hai….. Haath ka hatte hi Draco Imosopher ko dekhna lagta hai……
Imosopher: Jada chaukne ki jarurat nahi hai….. Ya urja tumhai behad kaam aayegi aur islye ab tumhai behad kada parishram karna hai jisse tum inhe kaabu mei kar sako…. Yaad rahe Nimbasa laut aayi hai iska matlab saaf hai ki youdh ki tayari ho rahi hai aur uske liya jaruri hai ki hum bhi tayari shuru karde….
Aur kyunki iss youdh mei tum mera sabse pasandita saathi ho islye mei cahata hu ki tumhari urja aur shaktiya har pal ka saath badhti rahe iske liya jaruri hai tum meri di gayi shaktiyo ko na sirf kaabu karoge bulki aajse hi tum duniya ka rajyo ko jeetna ki caha chod bus har roj hawan karoge aur apne sharir ki band aur chupi urja ko jagrat karoge…..
Mera aane tak tumhai ya karna hoga aur yaad rahe iss baar ek chuk aur tumhara astitv Shubham se phele mei hi iss sansaar se khatam kar dunga….. Iss baat ko bhulna mat……
Draco: Aaj pheli baar usse Imosopher ka asli roop dikh raha tha aur usne bus apni moun swikrati de di…..
Imosopher: Vo apne gale se ek tabij nikalta hai aur usse vahi jamin par cho deta hai…….
Draco: Imosopher ka dekha dekhi vo bhi yahi karta hai……
Jaise hi dono tabij jamin par pahuchte hai dono ek dusre ki taraf khiche chale jaa rahe tha apne aap aur ek pal mei hi dono judkar ek ho gaye…… Unke ek hote hi vaha ki jamin kapne lagi aur tabhi unke samne ki jamin dhasne lagi aur jamin se nikal kar upar aane laga ek gate……
Uss gate ka purn roop se bahar aate hi vaha prakat ho gaye do kaale libas pahane hua do aadmi…..
Aadmi 1: Kon ho tum aur tumne iss duniya ko kyu bulaya hai….???
Imosopher: Mera naam Imosopher hai aur mei iss duniya mei jaana cahata hu…..
Aadmi 2: Tum jante ho na iss duniya mei job hi gaya hai uska lautna na mumkin hai…..
Imosopher: Janta hu par fir bhi mei jana cahata hu aur na sirf jana cahata hu bulki mei yaha se laut bhi aaunga…..
Aadmi 1: Toh thik hai….. Ander jaane ki chabi hume do…..
Imosopher: Vo uss ek hua tabij ko utha kar Aadmi 1 ka haath mei vo de deta hai…..
Aadmi 1: Vo iss tabiz ko apne haath mei rakh apni aankhe band karta hai aur kuch bolne lagta hai….. Fir achanak apni aankh kholta hai….. Apna haath do…..
Imosopher: Vo apna haath usse pakda deta hai….
Aadmi 1: Jaise hi vo Imosopher ka haath pakadta hai Imosopher dhere dhere uske uss haath mei samane lagta hai jiss haath mei vo tabiz pakde hua tha aur dekhta hi dekhta Imosopher gayab ho jaata hai aur vo tabiz bhi……
Aadmi 2: Vo apni aankhe band karta hai aur dekhta hi dekhta vo darwaja fir gayab ho jaata hai aur saath hi Draco bhi…..
Idhar Imosopher gayab hota hai aur udhar Imosopher ka Mahal mei jaha S1 baitha tha hawan ka samne achanak hi uss hawan ki aag jal uthti hai….. Hawan ki jalti aag ko dekh S1 turant apni sabhi urja ko apne haath mei ikhata karta hai aur usse uss hawan kund mei daal deta hai……
Hawan kund mei unn kaali takato ka pahuchte hi uss kund ki agni behad tej jalne lagti hai aur dhere dhere vo neeli hone lagti hai….. Dekhta hi dekhta jab vo purn roop se Neeli ho jaati hai toh usmei se kuch kuch neeli roshni sabhi dishayo mei failne lagti hai aur idhar vo S1 apni aankhe band kiya uss hawan ka aage baitha tha aur vo hawan kund ki agni lagatar uss S1 ki urja ko uske sharir se chus rahi thi…… S1 kamzor hota jaa raha tha par fir bhi vo bilkul vahi jama baitha tha……
Chaliye dosto aaj yahi rukte hai aur kal ka update mei dekhiya aage hota kya hai……??? Till then see ya and bye….
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Willy ki baato se lag raha hai.....KI yuddh jab bhi hoga....jaisa bhi hoga....usme kewal....higher level ke log hee part lenge....OR bahut high level par hoga.....
Nalini jo ki apne aap me ak entity hai.....uski story fantastic thi....OR uski powers bhi.....bhai lekin aapne starting ke kuch updates ne Nalini ka naam NANDANI bataya tha....na ki Nalini ya Nimbasa.....
Imosopher bhi chala gaya he or powers ki khoj me.....
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai......
As always fantastic.....mind blowing and interesting update.....
Thanks.....
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