Fantasy Shubham - Ek Rakshak ya Bhakshak

[Acme]

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[Lucky198]

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[Acme]

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[Shubham]

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[Shubham]

Yo bro.... Your story is fabulous, fantastic super duper hit bhai....
What a narration of story. Read all the update bhai...
Its gonna be mega hit story in the forum.
All the update are awesome bhai... Fiction, Thriller, Fight, romance, Magic or much more is really damn super hit bro.. wanna read much more and more....
By the way from now onward new updates are gonna be start. Eagerly waiting for new one..
Please bro rock the xforum with your creativity...
Keep posting........

Thank you Very Much Lucky bhai......
Aap jaise readers ka saath hoga, toh koshish jarur karunga ki yaha bhi sabhi ko story pasand aaye....

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[Shubham]

Update 77​

Pichle update mei aapne dekha ki Shubham Delhi mei hi bani ek essi jagah jaata hai, jaha usse Neeta ka hone ki sambhavna thi, par jab vo vaha pahuchta hai, toh jo vaha dekhta hai usse uska dimag hi ghum jaata hai……. Usse Karuna ki madat sa ek clue milta hai……

Ab Aage……

Shubham: Ab bus intezar tha toh raat ka, jab mei unke upar humla bol du…… Mei apne room mei aakar humle ka liye jin chijo ki jarurat thi vo sab kuch arrange kar raha tha aur saath hi saath meine ek baar fir sa apne plan ko execute karne sa phele usko check kara aur apne unn paancho khaas agents ki bhi madat li…… Sabhi na har chij ko bade dhyan deta hua ek plan banaya…….

Thik Raat 12 baje mei apne kamre sa nikal kar, pahuch gaya uss Dharamshala ka uss Electricity board ka pass jaha sa sabhi jagah light distribute hoti hai uss jagah……. Meine Light to band kar diya, par jaise hi meine light band kari, vaha par goli chalne lagi…….

SHubham: Vaha goliyo ka chalne ka matlab tha, unhe mere yaha hone ki khabar hona……. Par kyunki vo andhere mei andha dun firing kar rahe tha, islye unhe ya nahi pata tha mei kaha hu, kyunki phele insaan ka goli chalate hi mein apni jagah chod chukka tha aur vaha sa thoda dhur nikal gaya tha……..

Mein badi hi savdhani sa unki taraf bada aur unn sabhi ko apne pass maujood khanjar sa upar pahucha diya……

Shubham: Par ab mere liye bhi khatra bad gaya tha, kyunki unhe ya toh pata chal hi gaya tha ki mei issi dharamshala mei hu…… Islye samaye tha naye plan ka aur mere backup plan ka……. Jisse meine phele hi essi paristhiti ka liye bana rakha tha……

Ab kyunki mei sidhe tarike sa uss kamre tak nahi pahuch sakta tha, jaha unhone ladki ko rakha tha, islye meine piche ka darwaje ko kaam mei lene ki sochi, bole toh uss kamre ki khidki ko kaam mei lene ki sochi…… Iske liye meine phele hi apne dhanush ka istemaal karke uss kamre ki khidki tak pahuchne ka liye apne teero ko uss dharamshala ki deewar ko bhed kar unmei gaad diya tha, jisse mei latak kar unki madat sa upar chad saku……(SHayad aapne ya scene Prince of Persia mei dekha hoga, jab dastan suru mei gate kholne ka liye deewar sa kaise chaat par jaata hai……

Mein apne teero ki madat sa uss khidki tak pahucha aur usse ander ghus gaya…… Jaise hi mei ander ghussa, uss pura Dharamshala ki light vapas aa gayi thi…… Aur vaha samne khada tha vahi Caller jisse Meine Neeta ko chudane ka liye kaha tha……

Caller: Welcome bro Welcome…….. Vaise lagta hai bada yaarana hai tumhare aur uss ladki ka bich….. Jo uss mamuli si ladki ko bachane ka liye yaha aa gaye……. Par afsoos vo toh yaha hai hi nahi……. Usse toh meine kahi dusri jagah rakh rakha hai……

Vo toh tujhe ab kabhi nahi milegi iss jeevan mei…… Ab toh vo tujhe upar jaane ka baad hi mil sakegi…….

Shubham: Mein bus uske pass gaya aur uske upar jor jor sa hasne laga…….

Caller: Mujhe esse hasta hua dekh usko kuch samajh nahi aaya……. Kya be tu pagal ho gaya hai kya….. Jo esse has raha hai…… Lagta hai apni maut ko samne dekh tera dimak kharab ho gaya hai……..

Shubham: Mei badi mushkil sa apni hasi rokte hua……. Abe chirkut, tujhe kya laga tha tere jaise mamuli log mujhe bevakuf bana dega aur mei ban jaunga…… Tujhe lagta hai mujhe pata nahi hai ki tu pichle 1 saal sa mere piche hai……..(Friends iss time period mei mera judwa include hai…..) Abe mujhe toh ya bhi yaad hai ki tune abhi haal mei hi 3 mahine phele mere hi guards ko kharid kar mujhe marne ka plan banaya, par usse phele hi Neeta na unhe maar diya…….

Tune kya socha tha, jab tune call kara aur piche sa Neeta ki awaj aur yaha ka indication bataye toh mei tere iss plan mei aa jaunga……. Munna abhi tu iss game mei bhut chota hai re…….

Tabhi uss Caller ka phone bajne lagta hai……

Shubham: Uthale Uthale, tere jeevan ka aakhri call hai…… Iske baad tu kabhi call na sun sakega aur na hi kabhi kisi ko call ka sakega……

Caller: Hello…… Ha pakiya bol……

Samne sa:…………..

Caller: Ya sunte hi vo mujhe esse dekhne laga jaise ki meine uski bina tel ka hi le li ho……..

Shubham: Kya hua, pakiya na bus yahi bola na ki jab vo factory pahucha toh tere saare aadmi mare hua tha aur Neeta bhi nahi thi…… Tujhe ek raaj ki baat batau, pakiya bhi nahi raha ab…… Ab tak uske praan nikal gaye hoge Yamraj ka pass pahuchne ka liye……

Caller: Tune cahaiye Neeta ko chuda liya hoga, par ab tu yaha sa kaise jaayega……..??? Dekh raha hai, yaha hum kitne hai aur tu akela…….

Shubham: Kya yaar jab baat karta hai choti hi karta hai…… Ruk aur mei ek baar sitti baja deta hu…… Dekhte hi Dekhte uss dharamshala ka saare kamro ka gate khulte hai, aur usmei sa nikalte hai haatho mei hathiyaar liye hua guards……

Dekh ab kiske pass kitne log hai…… Tujhe kya laga ya sab guests hai….. Ya sab mere hi aadmi hai….. Jinhe meine kuch din phele hi yaha pahucha diya…… Mujhe tera ya plan toh bhut phele sa hi pata tha, par meine tujhe roka nahi kyunki mei dekhna cahata tha ki tere piche kun hai, jo ya sab tujhc kara raha tha……

Caller: Apne piche itne log dekh usse ya samajh aa gaya tha ki aaj uska jeevan khatam…….. Tujhe ya sab kaise pata chala……???

Shubham: tu jaana cahata hai toh sun……. Tera jo right hand tha, vo koi aur nahi mera hi guard tha…… tu kab kya krega vo mujhe batata raheta tha……

Caller: Par vo toh 6 mahine phele hi chod kar chala gaya tha, toh kaise pata chala……??

Shubham: Ary vo gaya nahi meine hi bhagaya tha…… Tu jaanta nahi hai usne tere phone mei teri sim badal di thi….. Usne teri original sim ki jagah mere duwara banayi gayi vo sim laga di, jisse mei teri har baat jo tu call par karta tha, usse sun sakta tha……

Aur usse hi mujhe pata chala ki tere piche koi hai, par tune kabhi uska naam nahi liya islye pata nahi chala ki vo kun hai……..
Par saale tune aakhri minute mei plan badal kar, Neeta ko apne hi Boss Shanti Bhushan ki band hui uss Factory mei rakha jisse usne aajse koi 30 saal phele hi band kar diya tha…… Par ya acha hua ki meine phele hi Neeta ko ek device inject kar rakha tha Nano technology ka, jisse mujhe ya pata chalta raheta hai ki vo kab kaha hai…..

Par chod ya sab aur sirf aur sirf ya bata ki aakhir vo kun hai jisne Warehouse Godown mei mere dosto par humla kara tha…….. Aur jhut bolne ki sochna bhi nahi, kyunki mujhe pata hai ya kaam tere boss ka nahi hai……

Caller: hahahaha……. Tu kabhi nahi jaan sakega uska naam….. Aur ya bhi mat sochna ki Shanti Bhushan iss game ka khiladi hai……. Vo toh iss game mei ek bakri hai, jisse sher ka shikar karne ka liye bandha gaya tha…..

Tera Pariwar na phele, na aaj aur na hi aane vale samaye mei surakshit hai…… Tu toh ya bhi nahi janta hai ki kun tera dushman hai aur kun dost

Shubham: Uski iss hassi aur baat na mujhe apna aapa khone par majbur kar diya tha…… Mere liye khudko rokna na mumkin tha islye meine uske sharir ka ek dum chote chote tukda kar diya…… Iss bich na jaane kaise mei apne aapko nahi rok saka…….

Aaj toh jaise mera upar hawaniyat hi savar ho gayi thi…… Ussi ka chalte meine uss Caller ka sharir ko pura chote chote tukde mei kaat diya tha….. Jo log uss caller ka saath tha, unn logo ki aage aur piche sa dono taraf sa hi geeli ho gayi thi, aur kuch toh behosh hi ho gaye tha……

Mere Saath jo tha, vo bhi ya dekh shok mei tha, kyunki unhone kabhi meri essi hawaniyat nahi dekhi thi……

Agli subha News aur paper par sirf aur sirf ek hi khabar thi…… Vo thi uss Caller ki Dil dehlane vali maut…… Saath hi saath uske saath tha ek message…… Agar Delhi ka gundo na ab bhi apna rasta nahi badla, toh agli maut isse kahi gunna bhayanak hogi……

Ya khabar mei aur Neeta dono hi Hospital mei baith kar TV par dekh rahe tha……

Neeta: Shubham, ab samaye aa gaya hai ki Sword of Destruction ko laaya jaaye aur inn sabhi ko jaldi hi thik kara jaaye…..
Aur tum yaha ki saari chinta chod do…… Ab mei yaha sab dekh lungi, tum bus Magical City jaao aur jald sa jald Magical City sa Sword of Destruction ko laana hoga…..

Tabhi piche sa ek awaj aati hai…..

Awaj: Sword of Destruction, Magical City……. Ya kya baat kar rahe ho tum dono……????

Shubham: Ya awaj sunte hi Neeta aur mujhe jhatka lagta hai…… Kyunki hum iss awaj ko pehachante tha…… Ya awaj thi
Aaliya ki…… Jo na jaane yaha kya karne aayi thi…….

Neeta: Ary Aaliya kuch nahi…… Ya kya hai meine na ek magical book mei padha tha, toh…….

Aaliya: Bich mei….. Neeta yaha kya tumhai mere sar par kuch likha dikh raha hai, jo bacho jaise bevakuf banane ki koshish kar rahi ho…… Mujhe sirf aur sirf sach jaana hai…… Aakhir yaha kya chal raha hai……???

Neeta: Vo na…..

Shubham: Nahi Neeta, ab aur kuch nahi…… Shayad yahi vo samaye hai jab huma sach ko bata dena cahaiye, vaise bhi aage aur piche mujhe ya baat batani hai…….

Shubham: Aaliya mei tumhai sab kuch sach sach bata deta hu……. Sachai ya hai ki mei koi aam insan nahi hu…… Mujhmei kuch SuperNatural Powers hai, par abhi mei unhe use nahi kar sakta hu…… Bus unn Powers ko vapas use kar sakne ka liye mujhe Sword of Destruction ko paana hoga, jo ki ek dusri duniya mei, jisse Magical City ka naam sa jaante hai sabhi……

Aaliya: Kuch der mere kahane ka baad sirf aankh gadaye meri taraf dekhti rahi, aur uske baad piche mudkar chali gayi……

Neeta: Ya kaisa reaction tha…… Kya vo gussa hai ya fir khush……

SHubham: Mujhe nahi pata….. Mujhe nahi lagta hai, usse meri baat par bharosa hua hai….. Khair chodo meine usse sach bata diya, ab jo usse acha lage vo vahi kare…… Vaise huma jo ladki mili thi, uska kya hai…..????

Neeta: Meine sab pata kar liya hai….. Ek garib ghar ki ek lauti ladki hai….. Sehar mei Maa Baap na padhne bheja tha, yaha hostel mei saath ki ladkiyo na uske kuch adult videos aur images leli, aur usse jor jabardasti karke iss kaam mei laga diya…….. Ya uska first time tha, par khushi ki baat ya hai ki unhone uske saath kuch nahi kara tha aur usse keval behosh karke rakha tha……

Par ab vo thik hai aur usse har tarah ki madat aur iss baat ko bhulne mei madat kar rahi hai humari staff ki ladkiya……. Par ek baat batao, tumne uss caller ka ghar itne paise kyu bheja……???

Shubham: Kyunki mei nahi cahata hu ki iss duniya mei ek caller fir koi bane…… Tumhai pata hai caller na ya kaam majburi mei suru kara tha…… Sabse phele usne ya sab kuch apni kitabo ka liye paisa jama karne ka liye suru kara tha….. Par halat ko kuch aur manjur tha, samaye na uske jeevan ko esse badla ki uska jeevan kitabo ki jagah sirf yahi sab mei ulajh kar raha gaya…… Vo jo nahi kar saka tha, vo apne bête ka jariye karna cahata tha…… Vo usse ek bade aur ache English Medium school mei padha raha tha aur saath hi saath uski padhai mei kissi tarah ki problem na ho uska pura dhyan rakhta tha……

Uske ghar valo ko nahi pata ki vo kya karta tha……. Islye meine uske ghar paise bheja, taaki uska beta padh sake aur uske pariwar ki jarurate bhi puri ho sake…… Neeta yaad rakhna uske Pariwar ko koi taklif na ho kabhi sirf islye ki unke pass paise nahi hai…..

Neeta: Tum sach mei Rakshak ho, uss pariwar ki madat karke unki Raksha kar rahe ho aur Caller ko maar kar iss duniya ki Raksha kar rahe ho…….

Mein kuch kahu, usse phele ek awaj aati hai…… Ya tha Ramswaroop (Eravat)……

Ramswaroop: SHubham meri Guruji sa baat ho gayi hai, unhone tumhai aaj hi raat mei jungle bulaya hai…..

Shubham: Thik hai, mei aaj raat hi vaha pahuch jaaunga…...

Shubham: ya baat ka baad mei Elika ka room mei gaya….. Vo vaha comma mei thi….. Uski essi halat ka kahi na kahi jimmedar
mei hi tha…… Uske sharir mei kaafi jagah patti aur kaafi saari pipes lagi hui thi….. Iss humle mei sabse jaada vahi chotil hui thi…… Uski essi halat dekh mei rok na saka khudko aur do boond aasu aa hi gaye meri aankho mei…. Khair meine khudko
sambhala……..

Shubham: Elika mei jaldi hi vapas Sword of Destruction lekar aaunga….. Aur meine uske sir par ek kiss kar diya……

Iske baad mei nikal gaya hospital sa sab kuch Neeta ko sambhla kar….. Ab mujhe bus jaldi sa jaldi uss Talwar ko paana tha…… Aur iske liye jaruri tha uss kitab ko padhna….. Kyunki ho sakta hai, kuch esse mantr mujhe mil jaaye, jiski madat sa mei vaha ki baadha paar kar saku…… Iske liye mei ghar gaya aur uss kitab ko kholkar padhne laga…..

Vahi dusri taraf Delhi mei ek basement mei kuch bade bade Aadmi baithe hua tha aur kissi baat ka baare mei discuss kar rahe tha……

Aadmi 1: Rajveer jab tumne Special Unit banane ki baat kari thi, tab tumne internally India ko strong karne ki baat kahi thi, aur aaj Delhi mei ek itna bada hathiyakand ho jaata hai, aur tum kaha rahe ho tumhai kuch nahi pata……

Human Rights aur Media na humara jeena mushkil kar rakha hai……

Rajveer: (Friends please note, iss Story mei Rajveer aur Rajbeer do alag alag log hai…… Jaha phela vala hai vo Desh Bhakt hai, ek Officer…… Vahi dusra vala Radha Thakur ka beta hai…… Jo kiRajneeti karta hai Nirmala Thakur ka saath….. Second vala apne party ka head ki Wife ka saath tha……)

Rajveer: With Due respect sir, par jiski Human Rights ki baat ho rahi hai, uske upar 30 murder aur 120 sa upar robberies aur extortion money ka case hai, par aajtak hum usse ek hour bhi pura nahi jail mei rakh sake hai….. Kyunki iss desh ka bade sa bade aadmi ka saath uske link tha…..Par aaj jab koi esse insaan ka safaya kar raha hai, toh hum Media aur Human Rights ki baat kar rahe hai……

Sir ya Media, jab sehar mei kahi chori aur daketi hoti hai ya fir kahi kuch galat, toh humse puchte hai ki kya hum apni duty immandari sa kar rahe hai……Aur aaj jab kuch acha hua hai, toh bhi inhe problem hai….

Aadmi 2: Mr. Rajveer baate sunne mei achi lagti hai…… But just think if someday usne aap par ya hum sabhi mei sa kissi par bhi humla kar diya toh aur saath hi saath huma jaldi sa jaldi usse pakadne ka Home Minister sa order hai…..

Rajveer: Sir aapka toh pata nahi, par mera mujhe pura bharosa hai vo kabhi mere saath essa nahi karega, kyunki vo sirf bure ka saath hi bura karne vala hai…… Aur rahi arrest ki baat toh sir aap shayad bhul rahe hai, mujhe order HM nahi de sakte hai…… Meri unit directly PM ya President ka control mei hai….. Aur hume order sirf vahi de sakte hai…… So I hope you understand…… Ab aapko hi ispar action lena hoga….. Now please excuse me……

Idhar Aaliya hospital mei Shubham sa hui baat ka baad ek bhut badi soch mei kho jaati hai….. Usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki vo Shubham ki baat ko sach maane ya fir jhut……. Kyunki usne ya sab kuch keval Fantasy stories ya movies mei dekha hai…… Vahi dusri taraf usse vo din bhi yaad aata hai, jab usne Guruji ka ek sishye ko jaadu karte hua dekha tha……

Vo iss samaye iss soch mei buri tarah sa ghiri hui thi….. Tabhi uske Pass ek call aata hai…… Madam SHubham abhi abhi Hospital sa nikla hai aur apne ghar jaa raha hai…..

Aaliya: Thik hai, uspe najar rakhna…… Aur mujhe uske har pal ki khabar dete rahena…….

Aaliya: AB ya jaana hi hoga ki aakhir vo sach bol raha tha ya jhut……..

Esse hi raat ka time bhi aa jaata hai, aur mei jungle pahuch jaata hu, iss baat sa anjan ki mere piche piche Aaliya bhi aa gayi hai….

Shubham: Abhi kuch der hi hui thi mujhe aaye, ki ek door open hota hai…. Aur usmei sa Guruji bahar aate hai…..

Guruji: Kya tum tayar ho chalne ka liye……

SHubham: Jee bilkul…… Aur iske saath hi hum bhi ander bad chalte hai….. yaha aap sabhi ko batana cahaunga ki ek magic
door ko kholne ka baad usse band hone mei do minute ka samaye lagta hai…..

Idhar Aaliya na jaise hi mujhe ander ghuste hua dekha, vo bhi mere piche piche pahuch uss darwaje mei ghus gayi…… Aur jab vo vaha sa bahar nikli, toh usne jo dekha samne usse dekhne ka baad uski aankhe bus badi badi ho gayi……..

Vo ek dum pathar ka jaise ho gayi…… Essa Aaliya na kya dekh liya aur iss Sword of Destruction ka safar mei kya kya baadha aati hai, jaane ka liye bane rahe aapki apni kahani par……. Aapke comments ka intezar rahega……

Stay Tunned……

 

[Aryan]

nice update bhai.
caller k saath mast game khela subham ne
neeta ko bacha liya.
magical city me pahuch gye
lekin aaliya bhi subham k saath aa gyi
dekhte hai aage kya hota hai

superb story bhai
keep it up

 

[sonukale]

Superb update Lajawab story