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Pichle updte tak aapne dekha ki Shubham na Elika aur baaki sabhi par apni healing magic ka use karke sabhi ka ghaav bhar diye, vahi Aaliya ko ya pata chala ki Shubham hi uska bhai hai..... Vahi Magical City ka Shetan ko bhi Sword ka milne ka pata chal jaata hai......
Ab Aage.....
Shubham: Mei Aaliya ko lekar hospital sa nikal gaya tha aur mei usse lekar pahucha esse jagah jiske baaremei koi bhi nahi janta tha mere alawa..... Ya jagah meine khaas banayi thi apne liye, jaha meine apni training ka liye aur apne kuch khaas saman rakhe tha, jinke baare mei aapko aage pata chal jaayega.....
Aaliya: Pure raste vo kuch nahi boli aur jaise hi usne uss jagah ko dekha jaha mei usse lekar gaya, ya jagah bhi tumhari hai kya.....???
Shubham: Ha, par yaha mere alawa koi nahi aa sakta tha aur ab tum aa sakti ho...... Ander chalo aur tumhare sabhi savalo ka javab mei tumhai de dunga.....
Ander.....
Shubham: Meine ander jaakar apne haatho ko aage kara toh samne ek screen si ban gayi aur uske ander aaj tak mere jeevan ka baare mei Aaliya ka samne aane laga.....
Aaliya: Jaise Jaise mere jeevan ko vo dekh rahi thi, uski aankho mei sa aasu nikal rahe tha, kyunki usne vo bhi dekha jo mera bachpan mei meine saha tha......
Kuch lambe samaye tak vo uss screen ko dekhti rahi aur kuch samaye baad vo screen gayab ho gayi aur meri kahani bhi band ho gayi......
Shubham: Umeed karta hu, tumhai apne sabhi savalo ka javab mil gaye hoge......
Aaliya: Uski aankho mei abhi bhi aasu tha, vo apni jagah sa uthi aur mere pass aayi aur ek khich kar thapad pad gaya mujhe......
Shubham: Thapad padhte hi meri aankhe bahar nikalne ko aa gayi, aur mei bus muh faade usse hi dekh raha tha.......
Aaliya: Usne mujhe thapad maar kar mere gale lag gayi aur khud continous roye jaa rahi thi.....
Shubham: Ya kya hai, thapad tumne mujhe maara, aur ro khud rahi ho.......
Aaliya: Ha toh tu kaam hi esse karta hai....... Itne saalo se mujhc dhur tha aur baad mei bhi aakar mujhc nahi mila aur na hi mujhe bataya..... Toh ab tujhe kya iske liye tofa dugi...... Abhi toh meine bus ek maara hai..... Abhi toh kitno sa khaane hai tu soch bhi nahi sakta hai......
Shubham: Wah ya sahi hai...... EK toh itne din baad bhai mila hai aur usse ya puchne ki jagah ki vo kaisa hai ulta usse maar pit rahi hai.....
Aaliya: Jada nautanki kari hai na toh tera vo haal karungi ki tu soch bhi nahi sakta hai..... Chal ab ghar chalte hai aur Nani ko bhi ghar bula le, sabhi log tujhc aur Nani sa milkar bahut khush hoge.....
Shubham: Nahi, abhi ya baat apne alawa kisi ko nahi batana kyunki abhi vo samaye nahi aaya hai ki mei ghar valo ko apni sachai batau..... Ya baat Nani ko bhi nahi pata hai ki mei unka Nawasa hu.....
Aaliya: Nahi ab aur koi baat nahi sunne vali mei..... Tujhe pata hai Maa kitna yaad karti thi tujhe aur baaki sabhi bhi..... Tu nahi jaanta hai ki sabhi log kitne khush hoge jab tu unse milega.....
Shubham: Aaliya, please samjho..... Abhi aga mei khul kar samne aa gaya toh jo ladka ghar mei hai aur jo bhi vo karna cahata hai hum kabhi nahi jaan sakege ki vo kyu aur kis vajah sa ya sab kar raha hai.....
Aaliya: Mei na abhi jaakar usse do thapad lagati hu aur sab kuch pata chal jaayega.....
Shubham: Essa nahi karna hai..... Dekho abhi tum bus mujhe kuch samaye do, mei sab sahi kar dunga..... Bs tab tak apna ya roop samanye kar lo aur ghar jaao..... Vaha Nani tumhara intezar kar rahi hogi..... Unhe tumse kissi ko milana hai..... Par yaad rahe kissi ko kuch nahi bolna......
Idhar hum dono vaha sa nikal gaye..... Aaliya nikal gayi ghar ka liye aur Mei nikal gaya Hospital ka liye.....
In Hospital......
Mere jaane ka kuch samaye baad sabhi ko hosh aa gaya tha aur sabhi logo ka ek hi saval tha ki mei kaha hu..... Vahi doctors achanak hi sabhi ka hosh mei aane aur unke ghaav bhar jaane ki essi halat dekh shock mei chale jaate hai..... Vo puchna bhut kuch cahate tha, par Neeta ka samne muh kholne ki unki halat nahi thi..... Yahi haal meri uss team ka bhi tha jo ki mere liye specially kaam karte tha.....
Shubham: Abhi mei hospital ka ander ghusa hi tha ki bahar hospital ko News Reporters na gher liya tha..... Sabhi logo ko Neeta sa milna aur usse baat karni thi......
Neeta: Aa gaye, makhi ki tarah.... Jaha mitthe ki khushbu mili nahi ki aa jaate hai......
Shubham: Acha hua, unhone mujhe ander aate hua nahi dekha...... Vaise ya log ander kaise ghus gaye..... Guards na inhe roka nahi......
Neeta: Unhe meine hi mana kara tha..... Inhe samaye par javab dene sa ya humara picha kam karte hai......
Shubham: Thik hai, tum jaano aur tumhara kaam jaane..... Aaliya ko kuch samaye lagega..... Usse abhi involve nahi karna...... Vaise baaki sab kaha hai......???
Neeta: Sabhi tumhare baare mei puch rahe hai..... Tum upar jaao, aur mei niche.....
Mei upar pahucha, toh dekha ki sabhi log ek jagah hi baithe hua tha...... Vaha mere dosto ka alawa Aaliya ka team members bhi tha.....
Shubham: kaise ho tum sab.....??? Maaf karna, meri vajah sa tum sabhi ki jaan khatre mei aa gayi thi.....
Willy: Ho gaya..... Ab kuch kaam ki baat karle...... Aur rahi maafi teri, toh vo esse nahi milegi...... Uske badle tujhe saja milegi jo samaye aane par tujhe bata dege .........
SHubham: Hmm bolo....
Willy: Nani aur Neeta kaise bach gayi ya bata aur ya sab kya tha......
Shubham: Willy Nani ko kidnap meine hi karaya tha..... Naaz aur Reshma ya dono hi saalo sa Nani ka liye kaam kar rahi hai aur inhone abhi abhi pata lagaya tha ki iss Egypt ka koi aadmi iss duniya ko apne adhin karne ki soch rakhta hai...... Ya dono na usse join kar liya.....
Par jab mei India aaya toh ya bhi India aa gayi, inse meri mulakat Nani ka saath hi hui, jab unhoe mujhe inn dono sa milaya aur uss samaye inn dono sa pata chala ki koi Nani aur unke apno ko haani pahuchana cahata hai......
Islye meine inn dono ka saath milkar Nani ko gayab karna ka plan banaya taaki unka dushman khul kar samne aaye...... PAr usse shayad ya sab phele hi pata chal gaya tha, jiski vajah sa usne aakhri samaye mei ya sab kuch kara aur uske baare mei kissi ko kuch bhi pata nahi chala......
Uske baad kya hua ya tumhai pata hi hai...... Par Neeta ka kidnap aur baaki sabhi kuch mere haath mei nahi tha aur uske saath kya hua aur kaise ya sab kuch meine unhe bata diya......
Nancy: Iska matlab Nani aur Neeta dono ka dushman ek bhi ho sakta hai aur alag bhi..... Par abhi tak hum dono ki nahi jaante hai.....
Elika: Aur vo dono itne smart khele ki humare plan ka baare mei unhe sab kuch pata chal gaya, iska matlab koi essa hai jo humari baate idhar ki udhar kar raha hai.....
SHubham: Ya sab kuch mujhe nahi pata, par abhi ek problem aur hai aur usse bhi solve karna baaki hai.....
Iszy: Aur vo kya hai.....??? Aur ek baat hum sab thik kaise ho gaye.....??
Shubham: Dono ka javab tumhai kuch der mei de dunga..... Abhi ka liye hume yaha sa nikalna hoga aur Aaliya ki team ko yahi rahena hoga..... Tum sabhi log Aaliya sa contact karlo aur usse kahana ki Hospital mei Media aayi hui hai..... Islye vo yaha nahi aye aur tum log bhi Media ka jaate hi yaha sa nikal jaao..... Details Aaliya tumhai de degi.....
Kajal: Par, hum tumhare orders kyu maane...... Ek baar phele bhi tumhari vajah sa humari jaan jaate jaate bachi hai.....
Shubham: Kajal, I know aur uske liye meine Maafi mangi hai..... Aur mei tumhai orders nahi de raha hu suggestions de raha hu..... Maana ya nahi ya tumhari marji hai aur usse bhi badi baat ........ Meine tumhari jaan khatre mei daali uske badle tumhai jo saja deni ho de lena, par abhi mei busy hu......
Ya kaha kar mei vaha sa nikal gaya aur mere dost bhi mere saath ho liye...... Hum log hospital ka parking mei aaye aur vaha sa piche sa nikal kar pahuch gaye mere ghar.......
Vahi dusri taraf Singhaniya Mansion jaha ek dum Matam ka mahool tha, jaha sabhi ki aankho mei aasu tha..... Par tabhi Achanak kisse ka aane sa sabhi log shock mei chale gaye aur unhe muhhh faad kar dekhne lage...... Ya koi aur nahi Nirmala Thakur hi thi......
Sabhi log Thakur Haweli mei achanak Nirmala Thakur ko jinda dekh kar hi shock mei chale gaye, kyunki sabhi ko abhi tak yahi lag raha tha ki Nirmala Thakur ab duniya mei nahi rahi..... Sabse jaada apni Maa ko dekh kar khush Ranjhana hui, kyunki apni Maa sa sabse jaada pyar bhi vahi karti thi.....
Yahi haal Pratibha ka bhi tha...... Vo bhi apni dadi ko dekh kar ek dum khush ho gayi..... Aakhir uski sabhi badmashiyo ko vahi toh sahi kar deti hai......
Inn sabhi mei kuch log esse bhi tha, jinke expression ya bata rahe tha ki vo Nirmala ko vaha dekh kar khush nahi tha......
Nirmala: Ary yaar, tum sabhi ko kya laga ki mujhc itni jaldi chutkara mil jayega tumhai..... Abhi toh bhut kuch bacha hai mujhe tum sabhi ko pareshan karne ka liye......
Ranjhana: Apni Maa ka jaakr gale lag gayi....... Uski aankho mei kuch boond aasu tha...... Maa aap kaha chali gayi thi...... Aur uss din jo sab kuch vaha hua tha uska kya......???
Nirmala: Beta ya sab kuch khaas baat hai, isse mere tak hi rehane do....... Vaise na tum logo na mere upar jaane ki kriya karam sahi sa nahi kara..... Islye Bhagwaan na vapas bhej diya.....
Itne mei hi Pratibha bhi aakar apni dadi sa gale mil gayi.....
Pratibha: Dadi, aap na bhut kharab ho..... Aapne hume itna rulaya ab na aapko iski saja milegi..... Aapko hum sabhi ko shoping karani hogi.....
Niramala: Hey bhagwan, tu ayr teri Shoping kabhi khatam hone ka naam hi nahi leti hai...... Chal thik hai......... Vaise Aaliya nahi dikh rahi.......???
Aaliya: Mei aapke piche hu...... Mujhe pata hai aap kaha kaha ghum rahi thi itne dino sa...... Ab aapko na iski saja milegi......
Nirmala: Acha, toh tu bhi ab mujhe saja dene lagi,,,,,, Jara mei bhi dekhu toh.....
Aaliya: Aur nahi toh kiya...... Aapko iski saja milegi aur saja ya hai ki aapko apne haatho se bana kar mujhe aalu ka paratha khilana padega...... Meine bade din sa nahi khaya hai aapke haath ka aalu ka paratha......
Nirmala: Had hai yaar, isse acha toh mei aati hi nahi.......
Ranjhana: Maa...... Tum na kuch jaada hi ulta sidha bolne lagi ho.....
Abhi inki baato ka bich Aaliya ko Kajal ka call aata hai aur uski baat hoti hai, jaisa meine kaha tha Aaliya na bhi unhe vaisa hi kaha aur unhe ya bhi bata diya ki unhe kaha aakar milna hai.....
Idhar Shubham and Friends Pahuch gaye tha Shubham ka ghar......
Iszy: Shubham ab bata aakhir hum thik kaise hua......??? Kyunki humari halat essi thi ki hume koi bhi nahi bacha sakta tha......???
Shubham: Iszy, tum bhul rahi ho ki mei bhi Healing magic kar sakta hu...... Tum sabhi ko heal meine hi kara hai......
Willy: Wait, tune hume Heal kara hai, iska matlab ya hua ki tu jaadu use kar sakta hai, iska matlab tune Sword of Destruction ko hassil kar liya hai...... Kya sahi mei.......????
Shubham: Ha Willy...... Tum sabhi ko bachane ka liye meine Sword of Destruction ko hassil kar liya hai..... Par ab humare upar ek bhut badi responsibility hai...... Hume Magical City ko bachana hai aur vaha ka uss Shetan ko bhi khatam karna hai...... Islye aaj tum aram karo, hum kal sabhi chal rahe hai.....
Mei bhi tab tak jo jaruri kaam hai vo pura kar leta hu...... Kyunki hume vaha kitna samaye lagega ya hum nahi jaante hai....
Nisham: Shubham hum sabhi toh abhi bhi ready hai..... Hum aaj hi chalte hai tumne hume heal kara uske baad kaise hum logo ko koi problem ho sakti hai.....
Shubham: Nahi yaar, fir bhi thodi tayari aur abhiyaas karlo uske baad hum chalege..... Mei bhi kuch kaam kar leta hu jaane sa phele..... Ab mei chalta hu......
Idhar mei bahar nikal gaya aur meine kissi ko call kara..... Mera number dekh kar uss bande ka pasine aane lage aur usne darte hua mera call pick kara.....
Shubham: Mei 15 minute baad aakar tumse milta hu..... Apni jagah par hi milna......
Aadmi: Ohk Sir aur usne call cut kar diya...... Hey bhagwan isse ab kya kaam aa gaya......
Tabhi vaha koi aur bhi aata hai......
Aadmi 2: Itna dar kyu raha hai...... Vo koi shetan toh hai nahi jo tujhe nuksaan pahucha dega..... Aur vaise bhi abhi usse aane mei 15 minute hai, humara kaam ho jaayega.......
Aadmi: Tu usse nahi jaanta hai....... Vo kab kya dekh lega, tu soch bhi nahi sakta hai...... Sabhi kuch sahi ho, yahi behatar hoga, varna humari shamat aane vali hai......
Abhi usne ya baat boli hi thi ki uske sharir ka aar paar ek goli ho gayi...... Samne khade aadmi ko dekh Aadmi 2 ki bhi halat bahut kharab ho gayi.......
Aadmi 2: Tum yaha......????
Aaj ka liye itna hi....... Aage jaane ka liye ki aakhir ya kun aaye jaa raha hai aur yaha sa gayab ho raha hai, bane rahiye aapki apni story par....... Aapke valuable comments ka intezar rahega.....
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