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Fantasy Shubham - Ek Rakshak ya Bhakshak

Shubham

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Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Aaliya World of Dreams mei pahuch gayi thi aur vahi Shubham jab vapas Dharti par pahuchne ka liya nikala toh uss samaye ek tej roshni na aakar SHubham ko apne ander khich liya…… Shubham aur Elika dono gayab hokar pahuche ek Jungle mei jaha unhe koi bhi nahi dikha, na insaan aur na hi Janwar….


Ab Aage….


Place: Earth


Lily: Awaj se baat karne ka baad usne ek pure din ya socha ki usse aage kya karna cahaiye aur kya vo iss Awaj vali par bharosa kar sakti hai….. Ek din khatam hone par usne Awaj ko apna faisla suna diya ki vo Boss se badla hi legi…..


Awaj: To thik hai….. Kuch din mujhe do….. Mei uske baare mei saari jaankari nikal leti hu uske baad tmhai kuch logo se milaungi jinke saath milkar tum Boss ko khatam kar dena….. Aur iss baat ka liye nishchint raho vo log tumhari tarah hi nek aur saaf dil hai aur unki bhi boss se purani dushmani hai….


Lily: Tab tak mei yaha raha kar kya karungi…. Mujhe issi ek hi ek jagah mei band hone mei bilkul maja nahi aa raha hai….


Awaj: Toh tumhai yaha rahene ka liye kisne kaha hai…. Jab tum cahao aur jaha tum cahao tum vaha aa jaa sakti ho…. Bus dhyan rakhna ki Boss ka aadmiyo se jitna bach sako utna behatar hoga….


Lily: Thik hai…..


Place: Sidhra Mountain


Yaha Aaliya aur uska Instructor dono hi dhyan mei baithe hua tha aur Aaliya ka sapne mei dono hi maujood tha….. Aaliya apne sabse phele sapne ko dhund rahi thi, vahi Instructor iss baat ka dhyan rakh rahe tha ki koi bhi uske sapne mei na ghus sake aur usko koi haani pahucha sake….


Aaliya: Usse dhyan mei baithe hua bahut samaye ho gaya tha, par abhi bhi vo apne phele sapne ko nahi khoj saki thi….. Ismei ek sabse badi samasya ya bhi thiki yadi uss sapne ki yadi ek jhalak bhi vo bhul gayi hai toh vo sapna humesha humesha ka liye uss duniya se gayab ho jaata hai, jiska matlab hai ki Aaliya kabhi uss sapne ko nahi dekh sakegi aur humesha vahi ghumti rahegi….


Instructor: Vo lagatar Aaliya ka sapne mei aane valli har mushkil se usse protect karne ka liye tayar tha….. Ya uske jeevan ki sabse kadi chunauti thi, kyunki sapne ki duniya mei kun kaha se aur kaise samne aayega usse nahi pata aur saath hi saath kahi galti se vo Aaliya ko koi aur samajh kar yadi yaha maar dega toh Aaliya ka jeevan bhi khatam ho jaayega…..


Aaliya na bahut koshish ki aur aakhir kaar usne apne jeevan ka sabse phela sapne ko dhund hi liya….. Par jaise hi Aaliya apne phele sapne mei ghus kar usko dekhne lagi ussi samaye se Aaliya ka sapne mei ghusne ki chut mil gayi aura b Instructor ka kaam bad gaya tha usse har tarah ka logo ko Aaliya ka sapne mei ghusne se rokna tha aur saath hi Aaliya ko sahi salamat World of Dream mei se nikalna tha….


Vahi dusri taraf ek sunsaan jagah par ek aadmi Kaale kapdo mei ek jagah baitha hua tha aur usse dekh hi koi bhi kaha sakta tha ki ya koi tantrik Kriya kar raha hai….. Achanak hi jaha vo baitha vaha ki saari jagah har se badal kar kaali ho gayi aur vo uss kaali jagah mei essa lag raha tha ki vo jamin ka hi koi hissa hai….


Dekhte hi dekhte vaha par ho rahi tantrik kriya ka liye bane hawan kund mei aag badh gayi aur kuch hi der mei vaha sab kuch shant ho gaya….


Vaha baitha ladka apni jagah se utha aur ek gheri muskaan ka saath hi usne haath aage kiye aur vaha ki jagah aur baaki sabhi kuch phele jaise ho gaya aur uske kapde bhi badal kar ek dum sadharan insaan mei badal gaye….


Ladka: Aaliya ab tumhara game khatam…… Ab tum kabhi bhi uss World of Dreams se nikal nahi sakogi…. Kyunki tumhara Rakhwala jaldi hi maut ki godh mei pahuchne vala hai…..


Chaliye Piche chal kar dekhte hai, aakhir iss ladke na vaha par essa kya kara….


Flash Back….


Ladka: Vo bhi Aaliya ki tarah World of Dreams mei tha aur jaise hi Aaliya apne sapne mei pahuchi usse bhi pata chal gaya aur usne vaha kaali takat ka logo ko Instructor se ladne ka liye bhej diya…..


Instructor: Itne saare dushmano ko dekh unke face par ek muskurahat aa gayi, jaise unhe pata hi tha ki aisa kuch jarur hoga…. Ek ka baad ek lagatar buri takat ka rakshak aa rahe tha, par Instructor se jeetna unke liye mushkil ho rahi thi…. Vo lagatar ek saath sabhi ko sambhal rahe tha….


Par achanak hi ek ghusa aakar Instructor ko laga, aur ya vahi samaye tha jab jungle mei jaha vo ladka baitha hua tha vo puri jagah black ho gayi thi….


Instructor bhi unke upar humla karne vale ko dekhne lage….. Unki nigha jaise hi samne maujood vyakti par padi unki aankhe shock mei aur bhi badi ho gayi aur unke muh se sirf ek hi baat nikali….. Tum…. Tum abhi bhi jinda ho, par ya kaise mumkin hai…. Ya koi aur nahi vahi Ladka tha, aur ya ladka koi aur nahi Nitin tha….


Nitin: Kya hua Zafon mere dost, aaj itne saalo baad mujhc milkar bhi tumhai khushi nahi hui….??? Tumhai mere jinda hone ki khushi nahi hai….???


Instructor (Zafon): Tumse milkar khushi nahi dukh hota hai sirf aur sirf dukh….. Dukh iss baat ka ki kabhi meine tumhai dost kaha tha….. Dukh iss baat ka ki meine tumhai iss World mei aane ki shiksha hassil karne mei madat kari….. Dukh iss baat ka ki tumne mere hi logo ko meri madat se hassil kari siksha se maara….


Nitin: Zafon, tum bhul rahe ho, iss sabki suruvat meine nahi tumhare logo na kari thi…. Mujhe tumhare logo na hi apne yaha se nikal diya tha, tumhare logo na mere Pariwar ko unki saalo ki madat ka badle apne Rajye se bedakhal kar diya….. Tumhare logo na mere Pariwar ko meri aankho ka samne apni jaan dene par majbur kar diya, par kissi na meri madat nahi kari….. Yaad hai Zafon meri choti bhen jo tumhai mujhc jaada apna bhai manti thi….. Jisse tumne ya vachan diya tha ki tum usko duniya ki har pareshani aur mushkil se dhur rakhoge par tumne kya kara tha usse apna muh mod liya tha usse marne ka liye chod diya tha….


Ya sab kyu hua Zafon bato mujhe, sirf islye kyunki mere Pariwar vale aur mei White Magic ka saath saath Black Magic ka bhi istemaal kar sakte tha….. Sirf islye ki tumhare Maharaj, Magical City ka Raja, Aaliya ka Pita ko ya lagne laga tha ki mere pariwar ki prashidi unse jaada ho rahi hai….. Bolo Zafon batao kya meine jo bola vo galat hai….


Zafon: Uske pass iss baat ka koi javab nahi tha aur na hi kabhi ho sakta tha…. Kyunki usne jo kuch bhi bola vo sab kuch sahi tha…… Par tumne bhi mere Pariwar ko maar kar vahi kiya na Nitin…..


Nitin: Jor Jor se haste hua….. Zafon mei tumhari tarah nahi hu, jisse ek baar apna kaha diya ya maan liya fir usko mere rahete koi pareshani ho essa kabhi nahi ho sakta hai…. Tumhara Pariwar aaj bhi jinda hai aur mehfoos bhi…. Aaj tak meine unhe tumse dhur rakha sirf ya samjhane ka liye ki apno ki judayi kaisi hoti hai…… Tumne uss din jo dekha tha vo sab kuch meri takat se bana ek chalawa tha aur meri Shakti ka ek chota sa namuna…. Milna cahaoge apne Pariwar se…. Lo mil lo…..


Ya kaha kar Nitin na ek taraf ishara kar diya aur jab Zafon na uss taraf dekha toh sach mei vaha Zafon ka Pariwar tha….


Zafon: Vo turant hi uth kar vaha se apne Pariwar ki taraf bhaga aur jaakar unse mila…. Kuch der sabhi vaha milte milate rahe…..


Zafon: Nitin mujhe maaf kardo….. Jo kuch hua usse mei badal nahi sakta hu, par mei uske liye tumse maafi mangta hu….. Aur ek vinti karta hu jiss raste par tum nikal gaye ho, uss raste ko chod kar ek baar fir se apna jeevan suru karo…. Iss baar koi tumhai …….


Nitin: Zafon ya kabhi nahi ho sakta hai…. Jab tak mei unn sabhi se jinki vajah se mei aaj iss duniya mei akela aur anath ho gaya hu unse badla nahi le leta mei rukne nahi vala….. Behatar yahi hoga ki tu apne Pariwar ka saath rahe, koi na tujhe dhund sakega aur na hi kuch aur pareshani…. Par abki baar tune mere raste ka bich aane ki koshish kari toh mei sab bhul jaaunga….




Zafon: Thik hai Nitin, tu apna badla pura kar aur mei apna Kartavya… Jo haar gaya vo dusre ki aatma ki shanti ka liye duwa karega…. Aur iske saath hi suru hua Nitin aur Zafon ka bich ek youdh par ya sirf ek tarfa hi chala kyunki Nitin iss youdh mei Zafon par bahut bhaari pada aur ant mei Nitin na Zafon ko maar diya…..


Ya sab kuch Zafon ki Family na bhi dekha par kissi na bhi Nitin se kuch nahi kaha….


Nitin: Zafon ko maar kar Aaliya ka sapne mei ghus gaya aur usse apne sapne mei hi essa uljha diya ki uske liya uska sapna ek bhul bhulaiya ban gayi jaha se usse vapas koi bahut Shakti Shali banda hi nikal sakta tha, jisse World of Dreams ka baare mei sab kuch pata ho…. Flash Back Ends….


(A small Intro About Nitin….. Par abhi bhi kuch hissa baaki hai…….)


Iss tarah se Nitin na Aaliya ko sapno ki duniya mei hi uljha diya hai, jaha se vo ab kabhi khudse bahar nahi aa sakti thi….


Place: Jungle…


Ya kunsi jagah hai abhi iske baare mei hume nahi pata chala hai…… Par iss Jungle mei Elika aur Shubham abhi bhi fase hua hai…. Dono raat ko ek gufa dikhti hai usmei jakar jaise taise karke raat nikal lete hai…


Agli subha Shubham aur Elika dono hi uss gufa se bahar aaye, par bahar aate hi unhone jo dekha usse dekh vo soch mei pad gaye, kyunki bahar ka najara hi badla badla hua sa….


Elika: Shubham ja jagah badal kaise gayi….. Kal raat tak toh yaha ek bhi phool nahi tha, par abhi toh har paid hi khil khila raha hai….


Shubham: Ha Elika, ya jagah badi ajeeb hai…. Meine iske baare mei jaane ki koshish bhi kari par mujhe kuch pata nahi chala….. Na jaane hum kaha fas gaye hai….


Tabhi vaha ek Awaj hoti hai…..


Awaj: Tum dono ko yaha islye bulaya gaya hai kyunki kal SHubham na Magical City ko Shetan se azad kara kar Guru Trajang ka duawara kiye gaye Brahamand ka Rahasiye ko alag alag patharo mei baat diya tha, aaj usmei se ek pathar usse hassil hoga…. Usse paane ka liye tumhe dakshin disha mei aana hoga, aur usse hassil karna hoga,…. Aur awaj gayab ho jaati hai….


Elika: Wow, matlab hume jaldi hi apna phela Pathar mil jaayega….


Shubham: Ha Elika, par abhi humari manjil bahut dhur hai aur saath hi saath hume abhi bhibahut se patharo ko paana hai….


Elika: Jab tak hum saath hai koi mushkil humara kuch nahi bigad sakti hai…. Aur vaise bhi Guruji na hi tumhai kaha tha ki tum unn patharo ko hassil kar sakte ho, so be positive….


Iske baad dono vaha se Dakshin disha mei nikal gaye, Kuch der mei hi dono apni manjil par pahuch gaye jaha ek nayi chunauti unka intezar kar rahi thi….. Ya chunauti ek ajeeb chunauti thi…. Uss pathar ko hassil karne ka liye Shubham ko paani se bane ek Rakshak se ladna tha aur usse ladna tha, aur jo sabse badi baat thi vo ya ki Shubham apni Elemental Power mei se keval Water ka hi uske kar sakta tha….


(Yaha uss pathar ka Rakshak ko WR likhunga……)


WR: Kon ho tum aur yaha kaise aaye…. ???


Shubham: Hum kun hai aur kyu aaye hai uska karan hai vo Pathar jiske tum rakhwale ho….. Mei janta hu Guru Trajang na hi tumhai apni takat se uss phele pathar ki raksha ka liye choda hai jo ki paani ki tarah hai ek du maar paar dekhne layak….


WR: Acha, iska matlab tum vahi ho jiski mujhe saalo se talash thi…..Jisko maar kar mujhe apneiss jeevan se mukti milegi….


Shubham: Tumhai mukti jarur milegi par mujhe maar kar nahi, bulki mujhc mar kar….. Chalo ab samaye nahi barbad karte hai aur suru karte hai khel…..


WR: Jaisa meine phele hi kaha tha ki vo paani se bana hai, jiski vajah se uske Elemental Magic mei bahut Power thi…. Usne ek tej paani ki lehar banayi aur mere aur Elika ki taraf chod di…..


Elika iske liye tayar nahi thi jiski vajah se vo paani ki uss lehar mei hi fas gayi, par mei tayar tha….. Meine uss Lehar ko khudpar asar karne se rokne ka liye ek thik ussi ki tarah ek lehar banayi aur usse uski taraf chod diya, essa karne ka reason simple tha opposite direction ki vajah se dono hi lehar mei kuch asar padega…..


WR: Apni lehar ka jaadu ko mere duwara bekar kare jaane par bhai humse prabhavit hua aur uske fal swaroop unhone mere upar ek saath na jaane kitne hi paani ki bani Talwar, Trishul, Teer aur Bhale chod diye, par isse bhi uska man nahi bhara aur vo khud bhi unke bich mei se apne aapko ek Talwar ka roop dekar meri taraf bad gaya…..


Shubham: Mei ek saath itni saari alag alag chijo ko rokne ka liye apne haatho ko aage karke do bade bade paani ka cyclone tayar kare aur uhe apne aage chod diya…. Saare hathiyar cyclone mei hi fas gaye aur kuch der mei hi khatam ko gaye, aur mera dhyan samne se bhatak gaya tha aur yahi galti meine kardi…..


Kyunki WR toh khud bhi ek Talwar bankar aage bad raha tha, par jaise hi usne vaha do bade cyclone dekha khudko piche rok liya aur jaise hi cyclone khatam hua, usse mauka mil gaya mujhpar humla karne ka aur uska humla mere siddhe haath ka aar paar ho gaya…..


Uske aar paar hote hi meri chikh nikal gayi, jo ek dum shaant jagah mei ashanti failane ka liye kaafi thi…. Mei dard se karane laga….. Na jaane uske ander essi kunsi Shakti mili hui thi jiski vajah se jaha mujhe lagi thi vaha toh mujhe dard ho raha tha, par saath hi saath mere dil mei bhi jaise khoon jama hone laga tha par mere sharir mei vapas nahi jaa raha tha….. Jiski vajah se meri aankhe band hone ko aayi… Aur ek samaye baad dhere dhere meri aankhe band hi ho gayi….


Yaha meri aankhe band hui, vahi Elika uss jagah se gayab hokar vapas Paristan pahuch gayi….. Khud ko Paristan mei dekh Elika shock ho gayi…


Elika: Mei yaha kaise pahuch gayi…. Mei to abhi kuch der phele ek jungle mei thi na….


Tabhi vaha koi Lady aati hai jinhe dekh Elika ek baar shock hoti hai, par fir turant hi unke samne jhuk jaati hai….


Aurat: Elika khade ho jaao…. Meine tumhai kitni baar kaha hai tumhai kabhi bhi mere samne jhukne ki jarurat nahi hai….. Tum mera liye humesha meri beti hi rahi ho…..


Elika: Par Maharani aap jinda kaise hai…… Aur jinda hai toh abhi tak kaha thi….. Aur fir uss din job hi kuch hua tha vo kya tha…..???


Aurat: Elika aram se aram se…. Tumhai sabhi savalo ka javab de dungi, par usse phele meine tumhai yaha kisi khaas kaam ki vajah se bulaya hai….


Elika: Jee bataye Maharani aapne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya hai….???


Aurat: Elika samaye jaldi hi aane vala hai jab Shubham ki Black Magic Powers azad ho jaayegi, aur jab essa hoga toh Shubham ek Rakshak se Bhakshak ban jaayega aur uss samaye Shubham ko rokna kissi bhi achai ya burai ki takat ka bus mei nahi hoga…..


Elika: Ya baat mujhe pata hai Maharani….. Ab aap hi iska koi hal bhi bataye kyunki aapko iska hal jarur se pata hoga….


Aurat: Pata hai, par mei tumhai vo kaise kahu samajh nahi aa raha hai…


Elika; Maharani aap mujhe bataye mei Shubham ko bachane ka liye kuch bhi karungi…..


Aurat: Elika tumhai Shubham ko rokne ka liye Satrangi Shaktiyo ko azad karna hoga, par……


Elika: Par ki chinta mujhe nahi hai….. Mei janti hu jaise hi mei usse azad karungi mera jeevan ussi waqt khatam ho jaayega….. Par Shubham ko bachane ka liye mei ya haste haste karungi….


Aurat:: Elika tumne sach mei apna pura jeevan sirf aur sirf achayi ki sew aka liye hi laga diya….. Tum sach mei bahut Mahan ho…. Ab dusra karan yaha bulane ka….


Elika: Bataiye Maharani…..


Aurat: Tumhai khudmei mujhe jagah deni hogi….. Mei tumhare ander aakar jaha iss waqt tum aur Shubham ho vaha lekar chalna hoga…… Kyunki ab mujhe SHubham ko uska asli roop aur uska khudse parichaye karana hai….


Elika: Par ya kaise hoga….. Aap ab jaadu nahi kar sakti hai…. Aur yadi koi aur essa karega toh vo apni saari takat kho dega…. Fir ya kaam kun karega humare liye…..


Do awaj aati hai vaha…… Hum karege ya kaam…… Ya awaj thi Pilaso aur Elika ki Maa ki….. Hum aap dono ko ek hone ka jaadu padege…..


Aurat: Par uske baad tumhari Shakti humesha ka liye khatam ho jaayegi…..


Pilaso: Maharani, hum iss takat ka adhikari nahi hai….. Humne iss Takat ka sahi istemaal nahi kara hai aur uska paap aaj bhi hum dono dho rahe hai…… Ab hume kuch acha karke apne uss paap ko kam karne dijiye…..Aur vaise bhi Shubham ka ek baar khudko pehachan lene ka baad hume inn Shaktiyo ki jarurat vaise bhi nahi padegi….


Aurat: Thik hai toh ab shuru karo, kyunki ab huma jaldi hi Shubham tak pahuchna hoga…..


Iske baad Elika aur vo Aurat dono ek dusre ka haath pakad kar khade ho jaate hai aur Pilaso aur Shasha (Elika’s Mother) dono jor jor se kuch Jaadu padhne lagte hai….. Aur dekhte hi dekhte Elika ka ander vo aurat gayab ho jaati hai….


Aurat: Elika jaldi chalo…. Hume der ho rahi hai….. Essa na hoki Shubham humare vaha pahuchne se phele hi uss WR ka humle mei humesha ka liye gayab ho jaaye….


Iske baad Elika aur vo Aurat dono hi gayab ho gaye, aur pahuche vaha jaha Shubham gira hua tha aur WR uske uthne ka intezar kar raha tha ki kab Shubham ek baar uthe aur vo SHubham ka aar paar hokar usse khatam karde….


Aurat: Elika ya mantar padho, aur usne usse ek mantar padhne ko kaha….. Jaise hi Elika na vo mantar padha vo aurat aur Elika ek baar firse alag ho gaye, par vo aurat abhi ek aatma ki tarah thi aur vo jaakar Shubham ka ander sama gayi…..


SHubham: Jaise hi uss aurat ki aatma mere ander sama gayi, mere sharir na ek tej jhatka liya aur fir se mei jamin par gir gaya ek dum achet avastha mei….


Par mere man mei aur mere ander apne aap hi bahut si awaje sunayi de rahi thi aur kuch chije dikhayi bhi de rahi thi….. Par ismei se ek aakrati mujhe saaf dikhayi de rahi thi….. Ya aakrati thi ek Mahila ki…..


Awaj: Tum jisse samne dekh rahe ho na Beta ya koi aur nahi tumhari Maa hai…. Maharani Trisha…..


Shubham: Meri Maa…. Par ya kaise ho sakta hai vo saalo phele hi mujhe chod kar chali gayi thi…..


Awaj: Nahi Beta, ya jo samne hai yahi tumhari Maa Trisha hai….. Jo sadiyo se tumhara intejar kar rahi hai ki jab tum janam loge tab tum usse uss kaid se azad karoge……


SHubham: Nahi tum jhuth bol rahi ho….. Meri Maa ki kitab mujhe mili thi, jismei ya saaf saaf likha tha ki meri Maa na aakhri baar jab apni Shakti ka istemaal Imosopher aur Draco ko kaid karne ka liye kara tha uske baad unke jevan bhi khatam ho gaya tha…..


Awaj: Tumhai pata hai vo kitab kisne likhi thi……


SHubham: Vo kitab meri Maa na hi likhi thi…..


Awaj: Nahi Shubham vo Kitab tumhari Maa na nahi Imosopher ki Maa na likhi thi aur uss kitab ki likhi har baat sach nahi thi….. Usmei jo aakhri mei likha tha vo ek dum galat tha…. Kyunki uske ander ya likha tha ki Mei Nabila aur tumhari Maa Trisha dono apni Shakti ka istemaal karne ka baad mar gayi hai…… Agar ya sach hota toh mei tumhare samne yaha kaise hoti…..


Shubham: Kya aap hi Meri Dusri Maa Nabila hai…… Toh aap dono itne samaye tak kaha thi….. Aur Maa Trisha ko kaha kaid kar rakha hai….. Mei abhi jaakar unhe chuda kar lekar aaunga….


Awaj: ABhi ya sab jaane mei time hai….. Shubham ab khudko samjho jiss jagah mei lekar jaa rahi hu vaha chalo, aaj tumhai tumhare aakhri bandhan se mukt karne ka samaye aa gaya hai….. Aajse tum apni sabhi shaktiyo ka istemaal kar sakoge vo bhi puri urja ka saath…..


Shubham: Par aap mujhe kaha lekar jaana cahati hai…. Meine jab tak ya saval kara tab tak unhone mujhe gayab karke ek Gufa ka samne lekar pahuch gayi….


Awaj: Shubham ya iss duniya ki sabse pavitr Gufa hai….. Iss gufa ka ander ek sarovar hai, jiska jal iss duniya ka sabse pavitr jal hai….. Iss Jal mei yadi koi Rakshak ek baar dubki laga le toh uski puran urja 1000 guna bad jaati hai aur vo sabhi bandhano se humesha ka liye mukt ho jaata hai,,,,,, Tumhai bhi ander jaakar apni Shakti ko badhana hoga, par yaad rahe dubki lagate waqt tumhare sharir par kissi bhi prakar ka vastr nahi hone cahaiye…. Varna iska ulta asar hoga aur tumhara jeevan samapt ho jaayega…..


Ab jaldi jaao aur jaldi aao, kyunki agar tum agle 3 minute mei tumhare sharir mei nahi pahuche toh tum humesha ka liye mar jaaoge aur fir kabhi Trisha aur mujhc nahi mil sakoge….


Shubham: Nahi essa nahi hoga….. Mei aap dono ko ek baar firse nahi kho sakta hu…. Mei abhi gaya aur abhi aaya….. Aur ya kaha kar meine daud laga di….. Mei bhagta hu ander gaya aur dubki laga kar bahar bhaga…..


Par jab mei bahar aaya toh vaha vo nahi thi…. Meine unhe sab jagah dekha par vo vaha nahi thi….. Aur issi vajah se mei Jor jor se Nabila Aur Trisha Maa ko awaj lagane laga… Aur unn dono ko awaj lagate lagate hi meri chetna achanak hi vapas laut aayi….


Vahi WR mera chilane ki vajah se ek dum tayar khada tha…. Jaise hi mei khada hota vo mere aar paar ho jaata….


Shubham: Jaise hi meri chetna vapas lauti mei khudko jungle mei dekh samajh gaya tha ki mei jo abhi sab kuch dekha vo sab mere man mei ho raha tha…. Mei jamin se khada hua aur abhi palta hi tha ki…….


Elika: Vo mere palate hi jor se chilayi…… Shubham aur khudka Magic bhi use karne ki koshish karne lagi, par vo kaam nahi kiya…..


Uske chilane ki awaj ka khatam hote hi vaha ek chilane ki awaj aur sunayi di…..


Ya Awaj kiski thi aur aba age Shubham mei iss Gufa ka paani mei dubki ka baad kya badlav aaye ya sab jaane ka liye bane rahe …..


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BHAI AAP KI STORYBAHUT HI SHAANDAAR AUR KHOOBSIORAT HAI LEKIN ABHI PAHALE JITNA INTEREST NAHI BAN RAHA HAI KYUN KI HAR JAGAH SUSPENSE BAHUT JYADA KHADA KAR DIYE HO. PICHALE EK UPDATE ME AAP NE DIKHAYA KI SUBHAM KE EK AADMI KO MAAR KAR KISI NE KHUD KO USKA RUP LE KAR SUBHAM KE AADMI KI JAGAH KHUD AA GAYA .NITIN BHI EK SHAITANI TAKAT KA MALIK HAI .
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