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Fantasy Shubham - Ek Rakshak ya Bhakshak

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Pichle update tak aapne dekha ki Elika aur Mariana Madam ka healing magic ki vajah se Aaliya heal o saki, vahi dusri taraf Shubham na heal hone ka saath hi ek bahut bada khulasa kara, jisme usne sabke bich ya baat rakh di ki usse pata tha Draco kya karna cahata tha, par SHubham na sab kuch apne plan ka hisab se kara…..


Ab Aage


Shubham: Mei, Elika aur Aaliya hum teeno hi AS ka office se nikal kar pahuch gaye vapas vahi uss purine kamre mei jo kabhi mujhe mila tha School mei rahene ka liye….. Yaha aaj bhi sabhi kuch jaise meine phele kabhi choda tha vaise ka vaisa hi hai…. Har chij ussi tarah se rakhi hui…….


Shubham: Aaliya ya hai vo kamra jo mujhe iss school mei padhne ka liye mila tha…. Yaha meine kuch samaye hi bitaya hai, par aaj bhi sab kuch jaise ka jaise hi hai……


Aaliya: Sach mei yaha par rahene ka liye kaafi ache kamre milte hai, varna Earth par bacho ko hostel facility ka naam par kuch nahi dete hai…. Vaise tumne mujhe bataya tha ki ya school bahut bada aur sundar hai…. Kab dikhaoge mujhe…..


Shubham: Lo ismei kunsi badi baat hai…. School toh hum tumhai jab tum cahao tab dikha dege….. Par usse phele kuch samaye aaram karlo, fir hum chalege school ghumne bhi aur khana khane bhi…..


Aaliya: Tu kahi jaa raha hai kya abhi….??? Tu aram nahi karega….??


Shubham: Mei kahi nahi jaa raha hu bus bagal ka kamre mei hi hu aram karne ka liye….. Tumhare saath yaha Elika hai tumhare saath koi bhi jarurat ho toh isse bata dena……


Aaliya; Thik hai, par agar tum saath hote toh……


Shubham: Aaliya di, chinta nahi karo abhi thoda aram karlo uske baad hum log saath hi rahege….. Mujhe bhi abhi thode aram ki jarurat hai…. Chalo ab ache bache ki tarah jakar so jaao….. Ya kaha kar Shubham Aaliya ka sar par haath fer deta hai jiski vajah se Aaliya ko nind aane lagti hai aur vo so jaati hai…..


Elika: Shubham tumhai Aaliya ka upar apne magic ka istemaal karne ki jarurat nahi thi……


Shubham: Thi Elika, kyunki abhi usse aram ki jarurat hai aur vo abhi so nahi paati, vaise bhi kal se Aaliya ki asli training suru hogi jisse usse ek mahine mei hi puri karna hoga varna jo sab kuch socha hai usmei bahut badi problem ho jaayegi….. Vaise ya sab chodo aura b tum bhi jakar aram karo, varna mei tumhai bhi jaadu se sula dunga…..


Elika: Hehehehe, tum bhul gaye ho mere upar ya magic kaam nahi karega…..


Shubham: OOohhhh Haa…. Chalo ab so jaao….. Aur ya kaha kar mei bhi kamre se nikal kar, Willy ka kamre mei pahuch gaya….. Kuch der Willy ka kamre ko meine ache se dekha, aur fir meine ek aasan bichaya aur jamin par baith kar dhyan mei chala gaya…..


Kuch der dhyan mei rahene ka saath hi mere sharir se ek roshni nikalne lagi, jo pure kamre mei fail gayi aur uss pure kamre ko usne ache se pack kar diya….. Ab na koi ander aa sakta tha aur na hi koi kamre se bahar jaa sakta tha…. Uske baad kamre mei ektej roshni hui aur vo roshni agle 15 minute tak rahi….. Vo roshni par sirf aur sirf kamre ka ander tak hi rahi, bahar kissi ko kuch nahi pata chala….. Jab roshni kam hui tab vaha ka najara dekhne layak tha….. Agar koi bhi ander dekhta toh usse chakar aa jaate….. Kyunki ander ek nahi 8 Shubham khade tha aur unhe dekh ya bata paana mushkil tha ki kon asli hai aur kun nakli…… Sabhi ek jaise hi dikh rahe tha aur sabhi mei sab kuch ek jaisa hi tha…..


(Friends ab yaha ya pata toh hai nahi ki konsa asli hai aur konsa nakli, islye ab yaha sabhi ko Shubham1, Shubham2, and so on esse likhunga…… Asli Shubham kon hai ya aage pata chalega…..)


Shubham1: Bhaiyo hum sabhi ko pata hai hume kya karna hai, islye ab hum sabhi ko apne apne kaam par lag jaana cahaiye…..


Shubham2: Ab aayega maza, Draco tu ek Shubham se pareshan tha na ab tera samna 8 Shubham se hoga….. Sambhal ab apne aapko…..


Shubham3: Ha yaar vaise bhi Draco ko khelne ka shock hai aur uski vajah se hum bachpan mei nahi khel sake, islye ab hum Draco ka saath hi khelte hai….. Ek game usne khela, ek game hum khelte hai aur dekhte hai aakhir mei kon jitega….


Shubham4: Chalo bhaiyo kaam karke vapas milege…. Sab apna dhyan rakhna…..


Aur iske baad 8 mei se ek Shubham School mei raha gaya aur baaki sabhi gayab ho gaye…. Ab ya 7 Shubham kaha gaye iska pata aapko aane vale update mei chalega…… (Yaha School mei raha gaye Shubham ko Shubham 8 likhunga…..)


Shubham 8: Chalo ab chal kar so jaata hu varna shyam mei Aaliya aur Elika dono ka saath ghumne nahi jaa saka toh dono hi meri jaan le legi…..


Chaliye isse yahi sone dete hai vaise bhi kahani mei 8-8 Shubham ko sambhalna bada hi mushkil hoga kyunki ek na itne dushman bana rakhe hai ki 8 hone par na jaane kya hoga…..


Place: Unknown (Kyunki jagah nahi pata hai hume)


Yaha iss jagah ek badi si minar hai jo ki humari duniya Dharti ka hisab se kaha jaa sakta hai ki Burj Khalifa se 1.5 times badi hai…… Par vo dikhne mei bilkul kaali hai aur uss minar mei keval ek hi khidki hai jiski height Burj ki terrace ki height par hai…. Uss window se ek roshni nikal rahi hai deepak ki, jisse lag raha hai ki ander jarur koi hai…..


Tabhi achanak uss jagah tej hawa chalne lagti hai, par Deepak ki roshni par uss haw aka koi asar hi nahi ho raha tha, essa lag raha tha jaise ki vo Deepak kissi shakti se bana hai, jisse ya hawa chu bhi nahi paa rahi hai…. Kuch der tej hawa chalne ka baad uss Minar ka darwaja khulta hai aur ek saaya uske ander jaata hai…..


Vo saaya minar ka ander ghusne ka baad vahi biche ek kaalin par chad jaata hai aur vo Kaalin aasman mei uthne lagta hai….. Kuch der upar jaane ka baad vo Kaalin ek jagah ruk jaata hai aur vo Saya uss kaalin se utar kar aage bad jaata hai aur samne lage darwaje par haath rakhta hai ki darwaja teji se khul jaata hai….. Darwaje ka khulne ka baad samne ka najara kuch essa tha…..


Ander ek chota sa kamra tha, jisse kamra kahena bhi kamre ki bejatti hogi…. Kamre ka ander andhera hi andhera tha, bus itni si roshni thi ki thoda sa ander dekha jaa sake bus…. Ek taraf window baaki taraf dewar aur peene ka liye ……. OOOhhhh Shit…… Peene ka liye paani ki jagah khoon pada tha….. CChhheeee koi khoon bhi peeta hai kya paani ki jagah…… Ander dhyan se dekhne par pata chala ki ander ek ladki hai, jisse buri tarah se bandha hua hai,,,,, Ladki ko bandh jiss chij se rakha hai vo bhi khatarnak hai, vo hai ek saap…… Saap dikhne mei itna vishaal hai ki ek baar mei pura makan ko nigal jaaye….. Vo saap uss ladki ka chaaro taraf lipta hua hai….. Par ladki ko uske apne se lipte hone ka baad bhi koi farak nahi padh raha tha…..


Saaya: Kab tak kaid rahogi yaha….. Kyu nahi azad kar deti uss shakti ko, aur ban jaati mere Maharaj ki Raani…..


Ladki: Vo takat azad bhi karungi aur banugi bhi Maharani, par Imosopher ki kabhi nahi….. Vaise bhi Imosopher jaise kaayar se kya karungi Shadi karke jo khud ek ladki ko nahi pakad sakta hai….


Saaya: Hahahahaha…… Maharaj tujhc ulajhna nahi cahate hai kyunki vo tujhe khona nahi cahate hai,,,,, Aur vaise bhi vo Rakshak uski maut toh aaj hi ho jaati World of Dreams mei agar Maharaj aagya dete toh…..


Ladki: Janta hai tere Maharaj ki uske naam se fat jaati hai, vo kya khaak maarega Shubham ko…..


Saaya: Tu uss bache ki itni tariff kar rahi hai, par usse aaj tak nahi pata chala ki tujhe humne bandhi bana rakha hai aur uske saath jo hai vo humari beti hai……


Ladki: Iska javab tujhe waqt par milega aur jarur milega….. Janta hai ya jo Deepak hai na ya uski taqat ka ek namuna hai, agar tune isse bhuja diya toh mei ya maan lungi kit u bahut taqatwar hai….


Saaya: iss Deepak ko bhujane kunsi badi baat hai, ya le…… Aur ya kaha kar Saaya uss Deepak ka upar apne paani ka magic karta hai.,….. Jaise hi vo paani ka magic se paani nikal kar uss Deepak par girta hai….. Uss Minar mei ek chikh gunj jaati hai, ek essi dardnak chikh jaise kissi jinda aadmi ka sharir se uski khaal hi khich li gayi ho…..


YA cheekhne vala koi aur nahi vo saaya hi tha, hua ya tha ki jaise hi usne uss Deepak ka upar paani daala, uske ander se ek tej bijali nikali aur aap jante hi hai, water is good conductor of electricity, bus uss Saaye ko ek tej jhatka laga….. Aur uski ya chikh nikal gayi aur vo jamin par baith tadapne laga…..


Ladki: Vo jor jor se hasne lagi, kya hua ya toh aasan tha fir bhi tu isse nahi bhuja saka….. Abe bewakuf jo Deepak iss Kaali andheri duniya mei bhi jal raha hai, yaha ki kaali hawa jisse nahi bhuja saki, usse tere jaise 100 log milkar bhi nahi bhuja sakte hai….. Teri kismat achi bhi hai aur buri bhi….. Achi islye ki tune fire magic ka istemal nahi kara, varna tere saath kya hota tu soch bhi nahi sakta hai….. Aur buri islye hai kyunki teri maut Shubham ka haatho hi liikhi hai, aur tu ya nahi jaanta hai Shubham ki kaali shaktiya azad hone ka saath hi Tere Pita ka duwara di gayi maut ki takat bhi azad ho jaayegi……. Fir soch…..


Saaya: Bahut bharosa hai tujhe na toh chal dekhte hai kun jeetega….. Vaise tujhe ek baat batana toh bhul hi gaya…… Tujhe yaad hoga iss duniya mei Grey Flower aur Red Flower do phool hua karte tha,unn dono ko milane se ek vish banta hai jisse Jambri kaha jaata hai…… Aaj vo bhi Jambri ka sevan karne vala hai aur vo bhi bahut adhik maatra mei…..


Ab tuje kya batana ki jisne bhi aaj tak Jambri peeya hai uski maut nishchit hai, aaj tak koi bhi uska tod nahi dhund saka hai…… Ab agar tu usse bacha sakti hai toh bacha le, mei bhi dekhta hu aakhir kaise vo apne aapko Jambri se bachata hai…. Hahahahahahaha……


Ladki: Saaye ki ya baat sunkar uske hosh ud jaate hai….. Aaj vo apne aapko pheli baar uss saap ki kaid se chudane ki koshish karti hai…..


Saaya: Wah kya tadap hai, ab dekhta hu tujhe aur tere vishwas ko…… Aur ya kaha kar Saaya uss jalte hua Deepak ko uthata hai aur usse ek phook se hi bhuja deta hai….. Uss deepak ka bhujte hi pure kamre mei andhera chaa jata hai….


Saaye ka nikalte hi uss jagah ek baar tej bijali kadakti hai, jiski vajah se vaha thoda ujala hota hai….Jiski vajah se ab jaake ladki ka cehara samne aata hai aur ladki ka cehare ko dekh mera muh khula ka khula rahe gaya….. Mujhe toh apni aankho par vishwas nahi ho raha hai ki jo mei samne dekh raha hu vo aakhir sahi hai ki nahi….. Kyunki samne jo hai uske baare mei sune ka baad aap sabhi ka reaction ka mei wait karunga, ho sakta hai kuch log mujhe bahut gaaliya de….. Par jo samne hai vo likhna hi padega….. Samne jiska cehara meine dekha vo hai Elika….. Jee dosto Saaye na jisse bandhi bana rakha hai vo koi aur nahi Elika hi hai….. Ab saval ya hai ki yadi Elika iss Saaye vale aadmi ka pass bandhi hai toh fir jo ladki Elika bankar Shubham ka saath hai vo kya iss Saaye ki beti hai, ya koi aur….. Jaane ka liye bane rahe humare saath…….. Kyunki abhi ka liye hume bhi kuch nahi pata hai…..


Place: School


Shubham8: Kuch samaye sone ka baad mei uth gaya aur kamre ki Window ka bahar dekhne laga, toh mujhe meri window ka bahar apna vahi Tea Stall dikhne laga jaha mei Iszy, Willy aksar raat ko khane jaate tha…. Meri aankho ka samne vo din vapas yaad aa gaye…. Vo bhi kya din tha, jab sirf ek hi chij thi aur vo thi school mei training karna, dosto ka saath baithkar baate karna aur masti karna….. Aur bich bich mei Kairo ki mujhc ladai hona, jiske ander mere saare dost hi khud padhte tha….. Vo bhi sach mei din tha…. Mei apne beete dino mei itna kho gaya ki mujhe pata hi nahi chala ki koi mere kamre mei aa gaya hai aur mujhe dekh raha hai….


Glimo: Shubham agar tum ab phele se behatar mehsoos kar rahe ho, toh kya hum baat kar sakte hai…..???


Shubham8: Glimo ki awaj se mei vapas hosh mei aaya, ha Glimo baitho na tum khade kyu ho….. Mei bhi tumse baat hi karna cahata tha…. Mei bhi jaana cahata tha ki aakhir baat kya hai, jo tum mujhc kahena cahate ho par kahe nahi sak rahe tha…..


Glimo: Shubham baat ya hai ki mera Raajye aur mere log iss duniya se bahut saal phele gayab ho gaye ya tumne padha hoga apni kitabo mei, par sach ya nahi hai Shubham….. Mere log aur mera Raajye ka log aaj bhi jinda hai, mei cahata hu ki tum mujhe untak pahucha do…..


Shubham8: Glimo ek minute, tere log jinda hai toh ya baat kisiko pata kyu nahi hai aur tu madat toh kissi se bhi le sakta tha na fir meri kyu jarurat padh gayi….


Glimo: Shubham ya raaj saalo se apne seene mei dafan tha jo aaj tumhare samne khula hai….. Mere log aaj bhi jinda hai, par vo essi jagah kaid ho gaye hai jaha se unhe azad keval tum hi kara sakte ho…. Ya baat tabki hai jab Dragons hua karte tha humari duniya mei…. Uss samaye White aur Black Dragons ki vajah se sabhi log pareshan tha aur unhe khatam karne ka liye Maharani Trisha aur Maharani Nabila na jimma apne upar le liya tha….. Undono na unhe marne ka liye ek yojana banayi thi, jiske ander Jinlok ka Maharaj na dono Maharaniyo ki madat karne ka wada kara tha aur unhone uss wade ko nibhaya bhi tha…. Maharani Trisha ko ya baat phele se hi pata thi ki dono dragons ka marne ka sath hi unki shaktiya bhi azad ho jaayegi aur vo usse hi milegi jo unhe maarega……. Maharani Trisha ko kabhi bhi shakti paane ki lalsa nahi thi, vo humesha sabhi se yahi kaheti thi, ki jo shakti aapko janam se mili hai usse jada ki lalsa se acha hai jo hai usmei behatar ho jaao….. Iski vajah se vo uss Dragon ki shakti ko apnane ko tayar nahi thi, vahi Maharani Nabila Black Dragon ki energy ko apnane ko tayar thi, Par Maharani Trisha ki icha ka aage unhone bhi usse nahi apnayi, kyunki dono Maharaniyo mei Maharani Trisha ka duwara liya gaya faisla hi mana jata tha ya unka aapsi ekta thi……


Par azad shaktiyo ka kuch toh karna hi padega, aur iske liye Maharani Trisha na Maharani Nabila ka saath milkar unn dono dragons ki shakti ko bandhi bana kar ek dusri duniya mei kaid karne ka plan banaya….. Par ismei ek samasya aa rahi thi, aur vo samasya thi ki yadi unn shaktiyo ko dusri duniya mei kaid karege, aur agar uss samaye koi bhi chij, dono Maharani ki shaktiyo ka bich aaya toh vo bhi uske ander humesha ka liye kaid ho jaayega aur tab hi aazad hoga jab White aur Black Dragons ki shakti azad hogi…. Ismei mere log aur pura rajye aa raha tha bich mei…… Iske liye dono Maharaniyo na Pilaso aur Shasha ko apni apni kuch shaktiya di, jisse vo humare logo aur rajye ka upar ek kavach bana de jisse mere log surakshit raha sake….. Par aakhri samaye par Pilaso aur Shasha na apna kaam nahi kara aur mere log bhi unn shaktiyo ka saath dusri duniya mei kaid ho gaye….. Sirf mei hi bacha kyunki bachpan mei khel khel mei meine Maharani ka ek lauket ko khich liya tha, jiski vajah se Maharani na vo mujhe pehana diya tha jo ki ek tarah ka suraksha kavach tha…… Bachpan ka uss khel na mujhe mere hi logo se alag kar diya….


Shubham8: Glimo toh aaj tak unn dono dragons ki shakti ko paane ki kissi na koshish nahi kari kya…… Kyunki meine Elika aur Indra jee se suna hai aur kuch kitabo mei padha bhi hai ki unn dono ki unn dono ka pass bahut shaktiya thi…….


Glimo: Kari hai Shubham bahut se bade bade jadugaro na koshish kari hai, par aaj tak koi bhi uss jagah nahi pahuch saka hai jaha vo shaktiya kaid hai, kyunki uss tak pahuchne se phele ek bahut badi chunauti hai jisse paar karna bahut mushkil se thoda jada hi hai…. Bus tum hi meri aakhri umeed ho…..


Shubham8: Glimo mei vada karta hu mei puri koshish karunga ki tumhare logo ko bacha saku….


(Note: Friends Shubham8 ka vade se ya guess nahi karna ki vahi real Shubham hai…….. Kyunki ya parda abhi hatega ki kya Real Shubham school mei hai ya kahi aur……)


Tabhi AS ki awaj aati hai Shubham8 ko….


AS: Shubham hum tumhara mere kamre mei intezar kar rahe hai….


Shubham8: Abhi aaya AS…… Chalo Glimo hume AS bula rahe hai….. Aur dono gayab ho jaate hai…. Aur pahuchte hai AS ka office kam room mei….


AS: Shubham sabse phele tum mujhe ya batao ki tumhai jab sab kuch pata chal gaya that oh tumne mujhe kyu kuch nahi bataya…..???


Shubham8: Maafi AS, par majbur tha….. Draco na aapke upar har pal ki najar rakhi hui thi jab mujhe ya sab pata chala aur uske baad aapko batane ka time hi nahi mila kyunki ek ka baad ek chije hoti rahi mere saath….


Alvace: AS tum aaj bhi nahi badle, tumhai humesha sab kuch jaane ki icha khatam nahi hui hai…. Khair chodo ya sab aur Shubham ab hum uske baare mei baat kare jiski Noora na vaha dekha tha…. Aakhir hume usse dhund kar uske kiye ki saja bhi deni hai……


Shubham: Alvace uske liye toh aap Noora se hi pucho….. Kyunki usko sirf isne hi dekha hai aur yahi hume uska huliya batayegi….


Noora: Shubham mujhe ek din ka samaye cahaiye bus, mei kal tak uski tasveer aap sabhi ka samne dikha dungi,,,, Meine usse tasveer banane vale ko diya hai….


Shubham: Toh thik hai fir hum kal milte hai uske baad baat karte hai….. AS Alvace aap dono se kuch baat karni hai….


Mere esse kahete hi Maharani Indra, Madam Mariana, Noora aur Glimo gayab ho gaye….. Idhar Shubham, AS aur Alvace ka bich ki baat aage khulegi….


Vahi Noora gayab hokar pahuchi ek jagah jaha phele se hi do log uska intezar kar rahe tha…. Ek ka cehara toh Noora ko vaha aate dekh khil gaya, kyunki ya koi aur nahi Zooma tha aur dusra ka cehara abhi dusri taraf tha aur usse Noora ka aane se koi farak nahi pada, vo bus apni hi duniya mei kuch baith kar soch raha tha…..


Zooma: Noora, kaisi ho tum….???


Noora: Ek dum badiya humesha ki tarah Zooma, vaise bhi mujhe kya hoga jab mei Rakshak ka sath hi raheti hu toh…..


Teesra vyakti: Par jab rakshak ko ya maalum chalega ki tum uske saath vishwas gaath kar rahi ho toh vo rakshak tumhai maarne mei ek shank i deri bhi nahi karega….. Aur ya kaha kar teesra aadmi ghuma…….. Hey bahgwan lagta hai aaj toh din hi kharab hai aaj hi saare jhatke dene tha kya mujhe…. Bhailog maaf karna par jo dekha vahi likh raha hu…. Jo teesra vyakti tha vo koi aur nahi humare Nitin (Badshah)tha…..


Noora: Tu toh bol hi mat…. Jab tujhe bola tha ki Dream World mei khud mat jaana toh bhi tu gaya, uske baad jab tujhe Shubham ko maarne ka mauka that oh tune usse marne ki jagah NV8 ko maar diya aur uske liye piche apna black arrow bhi chod diya….. Essa hi tune Fair Mount bhi kara tha… Aakhir tu cahata kya hai….???


Nitin(Badshah): Vahi jo shuru uski Maa ki vajah se hua tha aur Khatam uski maut ka saath hoga…. Vaise bhi tu ya sab sochna chod aur ya bata ki kahi tune meri asli tasveer toh usse nahi de di….???


Noora: Pagal nahi hu, jo teri tasveer usse dungi…. Badi mushkil se baat ko ghuma diya hai…. Par kal usse tasveer deni hai mujhe….


Nitin (Badshah): Ya le meri jagah tu ya tasveer de dena….. Isko ulajhne de udhar tab tak mei apna kaam pura kar deta hu….


Zooma: Par kaisa kaam….


Nitin(Badshah): Bataunga par abhi nahi, kaam hone ka baad…..


Chaliye dosto aaj ka liye yahi rokta hu kyunki mujhc SHubham ki halat nahi dekhi jaa rahi hai….. Bechare ki kismat hai ya kya hai…. Khair chaliye dekhte hai aage kya hoga, uske liye bane rahe humare saath…..


Stay Tunned….
Baap re itne jhatke ek hi update arey bhainitnay to bhukamp me bhi nahi aatey. But boss story kich zada nahi ulajh ker reh gayi ab samajh hi nahi aa raha kaun kis ke sath aur kis ke kitney dushman aur kis ke kitne chehray hain. Baap re baap. Aur itna kafi nahi thaa to shubham ko bhi 8 8 kar diya arey bhai yaha waisay hi sar khuja khuja ker padna padta hain aur usme yah sab to dimagh jhatke khata hai 440 KW ke. lol
 

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