Horror Siccin ( crimes for love)

[The Survivor]

for new story
Starting kaafi achhi hai
Waiting for next update sir

Thank you so much sona madam

 

[johnsamuri]

congrats for new storyfor new story
and updates are nice ..................

 

[johnsamuri]

congrats for new storyfor new story
and updates are nice ..................

 

[kamdev99008]

kahani ka pahla update hi........... dar paida karnewala hai..............

interesting

keep it up

yahan ye ek alag hi tarah ki kahaniyon me se hai.... the real horror

 

[tpk]

waiting

 

[Moon Light]

Hello dear

This message is sent on behalf of XF admin team.
You are one of the best writers of XFORUM. And your story is also going very well. So we request you to write a short story for USC.
I hope aapki mehnat aur imagination is contest mein Char Chand laga degi aur XFORUM ke deewano ki list din doguni aur raat chauguni badhati rahegi, aur hum XF ko ek next level tak lekar jaayenge.Even Iss baar winners k liye Cash Prizes bhi hain jo hum pehli baar leke aae hain so make sure you write a masterpiece.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 25th February 2022, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point par aate hain, jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap sabhi readers aur writers se meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap jarur participate kare aur apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut khushi hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar agar Review likhenge.

Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye aage bade aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 700 words aur maximum 7000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete karni hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.

I hope you will not disappoint me and participate in this ultimate story contest and write your story.

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare ~ Entry Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho ~ Rules & Queries Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare ~ Review Thread

Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare ~ Chit Chat Thread

Aur aapne jo story likhi hai uske words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare ~ Characters Tool

Prizes

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Position​	Benifits​
Winner​	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)​
1st Runner-Up​	500 Rupees +2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)​
2nd Runner-UP​	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership​
Best Supporting Reader​	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership​
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof​	200 Likes for each report​

______________________________________________________________​

On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards - XForum Staff.

 

[Shetan]

kahani ka pahla update hi........... dar paida karnewala hai..............

interesting

keep it up

yahan ye ek alag hi tarah ki kahaniyon me se hai.... the real horror

Kahani he kaha??????

 

[kamdev99008]

Introduction

Siccin crimes for love.
Ye ek behad daroni kahani hai kamzor dil wale na pade ye true story hai Naam or jagah badal diye gaye hai

Lubna.. Ek 18 saal ki larki jiski khubsurati pure Lucknow me Mashoor thi pario jaisi ladki lambi naak nili ankhe dudhiya skin.

Arbaz : ye ek 46 saal k admi hai lubna k father

Sahila : ye lubna ki Maa hai ek khubsurat aurat.

Lubna ka ghar bhut bada hai jisme ek bada sa maidan hai maidan me ek bada sa anar ka ped hai.

Lubna ki khubsurati ke charche pure mohalle me Mashoor they. Vaise to lubna k ghar kisi ka Ana jana nahi tha lekin pados ki nayela khala jo Sahila ki saheli thi unka ana jana bhut tha lubna unhe khala bulati thi.

Nayela k sauhar ki maut tab hui jab arman chota tha.
Arman nayela ka eklauta beta hai arman ki ek cousin sister hai jiske Maa baap ki maut Bachpan me ho gayi isliye ap ab arman or uski ammi k sath rehti hai.

Arman abhi 21 saal ka naujwaan hai or padne k Baad achi job karta hai jisme uski kamayi bhut achi hoti hai.

Saima : 18 saal ki larki

Bhut chanchal subhaow ki hai lekin andhere se bhut darti hai

 

[kamdev99008]

Kahani he kaha??????

Ye kahani sachi ghatna par adharit hai Naam aur jagah badal diye gaye hain
Warning... Kamzor dil wale na pade


Update 1

Lubna ka ghar bahut bada tha ghar ke bahar lohe ka bhut bada gate fir ek maidan jisme tarah2 ke foolo ke Ped lage they inhi pedo me ek anar ka Ped tha maidan ke andar ko Lubna ka ghar jisme 3 kamre 1 store room ek kitchen tha.

Evening sham 6 baje
Lubna ka ghar.

Lubna o Lubna kya kar rahi hai beti
Tu subah se ese baithi hai.
Sahila ghar ke darwaze se Lubna ko Awaaz dete hue kehti hai jo apne ghar ke maidan me thi.

Awaaz dene ke kafi der ke baad bhi jab Lubna andar nahi ati to Sahila khud ghar ke maidan me aa jati Lubna ko dekhne.

Kab se is anar ke Ped ke niche baithi rahegi beti chal raat ka khana banwa le.

Lubna jo charpayi par anar ke Ped ke niche leti hoti wo bolna shuru karti hai... Ammi baithne do na kuch der fir aati hu.

Sahila : ye ladki bhi na sara sara din guzar deti hai yahan lete lete fir bhi iska man nhi bharta.
Ye Kehte hue Sahila Lubna ka hath pakad ke uthati hai khat se jaise hi Lubna ki nili ankho ko dekhti to sahem jati hai. Aur usi ke sath charpayi par baith ke Lubna k sar ko apni god me rakh kar sehlane lagti hai.

Sahila : kya hua meri fool jaisi bachi ko kisne rulaya meri nazuk si bachi ko chupp Jaa meri bachi.....beti kya hua tujhe kyo ro rahi hai..
Sahila ke Kai bar israr karne par Lubna kuch nhi kehti hai.

Sahila : chal andar chal beti raat ho gayi hai mai roti pakaungi aur apni bachi ko garam garam khilaungi.

Lubna : ammi mujhe yahi baithe Rehne digiye na.

Sahila : chal tu baith mai khana paka ke Awaaz de lungi tujhe tab aa jana.

Lubna : ji ammi ap jaye

Fir Sahila khana pakane lagti hai khana pakte pakte raat k 9 baj jate hai.

Lubna o Lubna chal beti aaja khana pak gaya.
Sahila fir darwaze se kehti hai.

Lubna : aayi ammi
Ye Kehte hue Lubna uthti hai aur ghar ke andar Aa jati hai

Sahila : beti tu garam garam kha le tere abbu pata nahi kab tak ayenge

Lubna : ammi abbu Aa jaye fir sath me teeno khayenge

Sahila : apne abbu ke bagair to ye ladki kuch karti hi nahi thik hai unhe Aa jane de.

Kuch der Baad lohe ka darwaza bajta hai aur gate ko band karte hue arbaaz ke Lubna ke abbu ghar aate hain.

Sahila : Aa gaye ap aaj bahut der laga di

Arwaaz : Sahila mai faizan ke janaze se Aa raha hu aaj dophar me uski lash hamare mohalle ki sadak par mili thi aur uska ek hath gayab tha.

Sahila hairaani se : kya........ Ya ****** ye kaise ho gaya faizan subah to hamare ghar me hi khel raha tha

Faizan.. Ek 12 saal ka ladka tha jo Sahila ke hi mohalle me rehta tha roz Sahila ke ghar khelne Aa jaya karta tha.

Arwaaz : pura mohalla sadme me hai aur har kisi ke dil me faizan ki maut ka dar baith gaya hai uske ammi abbu ka ro ro ke bura haal hai.

Sahila : pata nhi kis kambhakt ne us nanhi si jaan ki jaan le li mujhe to yaqin nhi ho raha hai subah acha khasa hamare ghar khel raha tha.

Arbaaz : hmm ab kya kar sakte hai.

Sahila : ap hath mooh dho lo fir khana lagati hu.

Arbaaz : nhi mera man nhi hai dil sadme me hai us nanhi si jaan ki maut ki vajh se.

Sahila bhi gham ki vajh se nhi khati Lubna ko khilane ke liye bulane uske kamre me jati hai.

Sahila : chal beti khana kha le
Ji chale ammi
Ye Kehte hue Lubna bad se uthti aur apni ammi ke sath chalne lagti hai.

Tujhe pata hai beti faizan ki maut ho gayi hai.
Fir Sahila Lubna ko sari Baat bata deti hai.

Sahila : tu kuch janti hai beti faizan ke bare me tu subah uske sath thi na.

Lubna : ammi kuch der khelta raha fir chala gaya wo.

Sahila ko Lubna ke is vyavhar par badi hairaani hoti hai ki Lubna ne kuch bhi react nhi kiya faizan ki maut par.

Isi tarah kuch din guzar jate hai mohalle me faizan ki maut se logo me jo dar baitha tha wo bhi dhire dhire logo ke dilo se nikalne laga tha.

Ek din jab arwaaz kaam par Jaa raha hota hai tab use Sahila Awaaz dekar rokti hai.

Sahila : sune...... Ye car kab se esi hi kharab padi hai mai soch rahi thi ise bech dete to kuch paise Aa jate.

Arbaaz : kuch din se mai bhi anar ka Ped ko kattne ki soch raha hu jaise hi Ped kat ke bech dunga uske baad car bhi bech dunga kisi kabadi k hath.

Sahila : thik hai

Fir arbaaz chala jata hai aur dophar me kulhadi ke sath aata hai anar ka Ped kattne aur anar ke Ped ke niche bichi charpayi par Lubna leti hoti hai.


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Be continue.....

 

[kamdev99008]

Kahani he kaha??????

delete kar di TS ne jitni post huyi thi wo meine repost kar di