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update 3 : ( Sam shining)


Sam ... apni car mein baithkar diary ko phir se uthaya. Uske dimaag mein ek idea..aayaa,

(Sam man mein: "Kya is diary mein kuchh chhupa hua hai aisy kaise ho sakta diary complete nahi ho?,)

usne diary ke panne ko dheere se sunlight mein dekha. Kuchh ajeeb se nishaan dikhai diye... jaise kisi ne pressure daalkar likha ho. Usne apne coat se ek UV light nikali ....
....(jo har agent ke paas hoti hai) aur diary par maari ,

aur usey ... UV light ke andar...kuch codes dhikte hai... aur wo car ki raftaar..barha kar foran commissioner office chale jaata hai.,

aur andar aatey hee Sam commissioner se kehta hai ,

Sam: "Commissioner, dekhiye... Yeh kya hai?"

aur wo dubara UV light diary par maar kar... commissioner ko dhikata hai ,

UV light ke andar...us diary mein.. ek naya code ubhar kar aaya: 9-1-12-12-1...

Commissioner: "Yeh numbers phir se... alphabet code?"

Sam ne turant translate kiya: 9=I, 1=A, 12=L, 12=L, 1=A → "I-ALL-A"... Lekin phir achanak uski aankh chamki......

Sam :Nahin... Yeh 'I-ALL-A' nahi... 'JALL-A'... JALLIANWALA, Commissioner yeh Jallianwala Bagh ka reference hai,

Commissioner: "Par Delhi mein toh Jallianwala Bagh nahi hai..."

Sam ne socha, "Shayad koi building ya hotel hai iss naam se." Usne apne phone se search kiya: "Jallianwala Heights" — Delhi ke nazdeek ek abandoned society



thodi der baad...Sam aur police ki team wahaan pohoch gayi...aur wo Building ke andar dhaakil huwe ...waha.. ek basement tha... jahaan se awaaz aa rahi thi. Darwaza todte hee saamne ka...nazara aata ...saamne ek..aadmi khada tha...uske.. haath mein pistol thi... Wo Commissioner ka assistant, Ravi tha...

commissioner shocked mein: Ravii..tuuu....

Ravi: Bahut smart ho Sam... Par ab sab khatam ho chuka "hahaha",

Sam ne usey ..ghoorkar dekha.. aur apni pistol ka aim uspar kiya ..,

Sam: to tum hee wo killer ho... Kyun?

Ravi: Kyuki yeh sab log mere illegal deals ko expose karne wale thy....Confidential files inke paas thi... Aur tumhare aane se pehle hee maine sabko khatm kar diya."

Ravi ne pistol uthayi... lekin Sam pehle hee action mein tha. Usne Ravi ke haath par ek tez kick maari... pistol gir gayi. Police ne Ravi ko daboch liya... aur uske dono haath peeche karke hath-kadi laga di...aur muh par kaala kapra daal diya,

aur ab Sam commissioner ki taraf dhekte huwe bolta hai..,

Sam : Yeh case sirf murder case nahi tha... yeh ek corruption ka khel tha ,

aur isee tarhaa..Sam ki 2 months puraani kahani khatam huwi ,

(now back to the present)...


komal ab Sam ka intezar kar rahi thi....

Tabhi peeche se awaaz aayi... "Madam... Nill sir ne bulaya hai... aap jaldi andar aayein."

Komal ne palat kar dekha... Nill ka chela Raaju darwaze par khada tha... uski aankhein aik dam laal... aur haath mein pistol dikhai de rahi thi...

Komal man mein: "Shit... ab to pakdi gayi... Sam... jaldi aa..."

Usne chupke se phone ko chhupate hue kaha, "Haan... aa rahi hoon."

Andar jaate hi Nill ne uski kalai pakad li... "Reporter sahiba... aapke id card mein photo alag kyun hai?" Usne komal ko khinchkar apne saamne khaadi kiya...

Komal dard mei : aahhhh chodd mujhe kutte mai tujhe kuch nahi bataugi ,

Nill uske kareeb aata hai ... aur apna.. "Ek haath barha kar... uske boobs ke paas jo id card tha... usey zoor se..kench kar nikaal leta hai..

id card.. ko zor se kench ne ki waja se.. "komal ko gardan par bohot tez dard..hota hai"...

Komal : ooooiiiiii... mummyy... pagal aaadmiiiii..

Nill : muje chutiya banane ki saazish kar rahi thi tum... "hahaha"... ab sach btao.. reporter...matlab.."jaali reporter saahiba",

tabhi nill aagey barhta hai... aur..komal ko kamar se pakad ke... apne seene ..se laga leta hai ....

Nill : , tum jaisi maal..ko to.. punished bhi pyaar karke karna chaiye ,

aur wo komal ko dhekte huwe.. apne gande daant nikaal kar ..hastaa hai..,

Komal chatpatati hai par uski pakad se nahi chuht paati ....aur ab usey bass "Sam ka intezar tha",

Komal : tujh jaise kamine namard ke saath rehne se acha hai mai jau apne sadde daat dekhe hai , ( Aur hasne lagti hai,)


ye sunke Nill ke peeche khade.. uske 2 chamche .. bhi hasne lagte hai ,


Nill ko gussa aajata hai aur wo chillata hai ,

Nill :"CHUP"

aur komal ko zor daar thappad maarta hai komal door jaake girti hai ,


(Now come into Sam pov )

Sam ki Car... GPS MAP"...par Komal ka location blink kar raha tha....aur wo car ki speed aur tez kardeta hai...

aur ab wo location par... pohoch chuka tha... saamne.. garage ka bada sa gate tha... aur ab wo apni.. car se utar jaata hai,

aur ab wo soch hee raha tha... andar kaise jaaya jaaye...

(now komal pov)..

Andar... Nill ne Komal ko utha khada karke ....sofe par dhakela...,

Nill. : tu "CBI" se hai naa ?.mujhe pata chal gaya... bataa.. yehi gooli maardu... yaa tere is kasse huwe..jism ko..shaant karne ke baad.. tujhe hamisha ke liye apni.. personal rakhel bana lu ?..,

tabhi Komal ne apni skirt ki pocket se USB nikali...

Komal : iss mein tumhare saare scams ke proof hai.... aur ye mein tumhe .. aik shart par dungi.. jab tum muje yaha se jaane doge,

Nill : "hahaha".. tu abhi bhi yeh sooch rahi.. mein tujhe jaane dunga,


Komal :Tujh jaise namard kamine ke saath rehne se acha hai mai mar jau
Apne daant dekhe hai sadde hue ,

Nill gussa hojaata hai aur ek aur thappad maarta hai aur apne chello se kehta hai :

Nill : bandh do isko kursi pe rassi se


Tabhi dhad!... Darwaza tootkar gira...

aur sab ki nazar darwaaze ki taraf gayi...

Darwaaze par "Sam Pistol aim karte hue khada ...tha ,

Sam : helloo...komal ..mein kahi late to nahi huwa hu naa?

Komal : aagaya attention seeker, hero wali entry maarni zaroori hai.. (aur sukoon se bhari smile leti hai)


to be continued....
Komal last line attention wala mazedaar hai ... Aur baki update toh mast hai bhai 🎊🎊
 

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