UPDATE NO - 148(B) post kar diya hai dosto.
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Ok Bhai waiting for next updateBhai fight bahut long h aaj complete nahi ho pati . Kl ke Update me aapko complete mil jayega with some intersting twists.
Nahi bhai kl sunday tha to de diya do Update aaj ek hi Update h .Aaj 2ra or Update aayega ya bas 01 se hi kaam chalana padega...
Sahi kaha 2nd me puri fight kardena warna adhi fight padhke maza nhi ayega
Bhadia update...
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Agr chota rahega to bhai puri kosis karunga yahi ho aage se.Par koshish kara karo ki fight scene ek hi update mein poora aa jaye nahi to Rhythm toot jaati hai. Maza kam ho jata hai. Just a suggestion.
Exactly bro reader ke liye bus ye ek finger touch hoga but apne liye reward hota h us update ke piche ki gayi mahnat ka ........Frnd' s aap logo se ek request h story ko read krne ke baad Updates pr like jarur de .
Qki aapke liye ye sirf ek like hoga but hm writers ke liye yahi reward hota h jo hme story ko aage aur ache se likhne me motivation deta h.
Aur mai ye baat sirf apne story ke liye hi nahi blki sari story ke liye bhi bol raha hu aap jo bhi story read kro kosis kro agr aapko wo pasand aa rahi h to us story pr like jarur de usase story ka writer bahut happy nd motivated hoga.
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Shandar update bro akhir lalit ankit ne aukat dikha he di but unhe kya pata baap se panga liya h is baar but koyi na ab shuru hoga rider ka khel....awesome update broUPDATE - 20
Ab tk aapne dekha dosto kaise mai sb hunturs ka bag le kr unke sath gate ke andar jata hu. Jaha hme bhut sare raste dikhayi dete h . Fir hme pata chalta h ye ak nest h. Uske baad inces hm pr hamla kr deti h, mujhe chor ke baki sare hunturs mil kr un sb ko khtam kr dete h aur unka Magical crystal collect kr lete h.
AB AAGE.....
Har Ek DENGOUN ka size alag hota h , lakin ye DENGOUN ke Rank pr nirbhar nahi krta h.
paristhiti ke anusar kabhi kabhi aisa time bhi aata h ki kisi DENGOUN ke bare me sb pata krne me weeks se jyada bhi lag jata h.
Aur kabhi kabhi aisa bhi hota h ki bs kuch ghnto me hi hm boss room me pahuch jaye h.
Aisa is liye hota h qki mostly DENGOUN me no. Of path hote h to kabhi kabhi boss room dundhne ke chakkar me sare rasto se gujarna padta h.
Aur kabhi kabhi hm jis raste ko phle choose krte h wo sidhe boss room me pahucha deta h.
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Hm sare hunturs sath me aage badh rahe the.
Aur m aage badhte hu soch raha tha.
' ye DENGOUN kisi bhoolabhulaiya ki taraf bana hua h . Isi liye yaha bahut sari fight nahi hui thi lakin hme aage badhne me bhut samay lag raha tha. '
' mera kaam tha bags ko utha ke chalna. '
' mujhe baki hunturs ki tatah fight nahi krni pad rahi thi. '
' bina fight kiye paise kamana , mere khyal se ye ek achi deal thi. '
Aise hi hm aage ja rahe the jb sare hunturs kafi der chlne se thak jate to hum sb koi safe jagah dekh kr wahi baith kr aaram krne lagte aur jo khana ham apne sath laye the wo khane lagte the.
Aise hi hm sb baith kr ak jagah aaram krte hue khana kha rahe the.
Lakin mai ek baat se bahut pareshan tha. Jb sare hunturs insects type monsters ko marne ke baad us jagah aapas me kuch baat kr rahe the aur m Shubham ke sath tha. tabhi system se ek notification aaya tha.
Jo ki actually ek warning thi .
[ BEWARE OF THE LIZARDS ]
Ek unexpected warning . Mai smjh nahi pa raha tha ye notification q aaya tha, aur system mujhe warning q de raha tha.
Lakin ek chij ko le kr mai confirm tha. Wo jo Lalit ke face pr smile thi us time aur jo uske aakho ki chmak thi. Wo sb normal nahi thi . Wo us time kisi evil ki tarah mujhe lag raha tha. Ur meri six sens mujhe kabhi dhokha nahi de skti itna to mai confirm tha.
Lakin aakhir baat kya thi ye nhi pata tha mujhe.
Tap... Tap... Tap...
Khir m bhi unke sath aage jane ke alawa aur kuch nhi kr skta tha.
Lalit( aage chalte hue ) " ye to bahut gambhir baat h. Hume chlte hue kafi time ho gaya h lakin hme koi bhi insects type monster ya kuch bhi nahi mila. "
" Hme bs mare hue ya kuchle hue hi monsters ki body mili h. "
" Lakin yha koi na koi ek BOSS monster hona cahiye h ki nhi ? "
" Aur agar yaha koi BOSS monster h hi nahi to gate open hi nahi hota. "
" Wait ! "
DUD.....
Abhi lalit ye sb kahte hue sbse aage chl hi raha tha ki achanak se wo ak jagah ruk jata h aur uske piche ke kuch hunturs usase takra jate h Qki we sb bina kuch dekhe bs chle ja rahe the.
Lalit " Ankit thoda fire tej kro taki hm is jagah ko pura dekh sake. "
Ankit bina kuch bole apne power ka use karke fire ko kuch increase kr deta h jisase hm sb ab wo jagah ache se dek par rahe the.
Fir jb samne ka jo najara tha hm sb hunturs jb wo dekhte h to hmari aakhe fati ki fati rah jati h aur hmare muh se bs itna hi nikal pata h .....
" My god !! "
Saamne ka naraja tha hi kuch aise. Hamari najar saamne jaha tak ja rahi thi waha tk hme bs makdi( spider ) ka jaalhi dikh raha tha. Jisme uncountable insects type monster fase hue the jaise ki mammy bn gaye ho aur mostly Mr gaye the, Ya behos the. Is jaal ke bich me seal bahut hi bada rasta bana hua tha .
Lalit ( samne dekhte hue ) " yahi h BOSS room. "
" Sb taiyar ho jao. "
Ye kah ke lalit jaal ke bich deji rasta andar ko ja raha tha usme jane lagta h. Hm sb bhi uske piche andar jane lagte h.
Kuch dur chlne ke baad hm ak jagah pahuchte h aur fir se samne ka najara aisa tha ki sbke muh khule ke khule rah jate h.
Sare hunturs khusi se kahne lagta h .
" Ye kya ? "
" Ye to khjana h. "
" Ye to bahut sara h. "
" Mana crystal ! "
" Yaha ye kitne sare honge ? "
" Wow ! This is amazing. "
Ji ha hmare samne aur kuch nahi mana crystal ka ak chota pahad tha jo ki us jaal me pasa hua tha . Aur hum sb isehi dekh kr khusi se phule nahi sama rahe the.
Ankit ( mana crystal ko dekhte hue ) " iski kimat monster se Mile Magical crystal se kam hai qki iski energy usase km hoti h. "
" Lakin yaha ye itna jyada h ki mai anuman laga sakta hu ki ye Magical crystal se jyada paise dilwayega. "
" Jara dekho in sb ko ye hm km se km 10,000,000 rupee dilwayega.
Sanjay ( lalit ki taraf dekh kr ) " yaha ye itna jyada h ki mere khyal se tmhara chota bhai bhi tumse jalne lagega. "
Ankit ( gusse se ) " hey ! Aisi jagah pr tmko lalit ke chote bhai ke bare me baat nahi krni cahiye . "
Jabki lalit in sb ko ignore karke mana crystal ke bikul samne khada ho ke use dekhta hua apne mn me soch raha tha..
' dekho namit dekho ! Tumhi hamesa sahi nahi ho sakte. '
' tmne mujhe ignore kr diya tha bs qki tmko high Rank mila tha, aur tmne apne desh ko chor kr America chle gaye bs jyada paisa kamane ke liye. '
' mai janta hu use America me bhi abhi VIP treatment mil raha hoga, aur wo abhi bhi mujhe ignore hi krega. '
' mujhe aisa bhai mat samajho jo apane chhote bhaee ke ghutanon ke barabar rahega aur uske ishare par thirakega. '
' mai is situation ka fayda uthaunga aur apni team ki manpower ko aur bhi jyada badaunga. '
Ek huntur ( kisi dusre hunter se) " maja aa jayega, sbme equal divide krne ke baad bhi hr ak ke paas 1,000,000 rupee honge hai ki nahi ? "
Tabhi Shubham mujhse kahta h ..
Shubham ( apna hath meri taraf bada kr ) " tmne jo contract kuch der phle sign kiya tha jara mujhe wo dikhana to. "
" Mai sari chije ak baad dekhna cahta hu usme. "
Fir Shubham ko mai apna sign kiya hua contract paper de deta hu jise wo kuch der read krta h fir lalit ki taraf dekh krbolta h " sir mujhe aapse kuch baat krni h abhi. "
Lalit aur baki sb Hunters bhi uski taraf dekhne lagte h .
Shubham aage kahta h ( mere contract ka paper abki dikhate hue ) " leader Lalit ye Rider ka contract paper hai . "
" Jaisa ki aap dekh sakte ho yaha aisa kuch bhi nahi likha h ki monsters se milne wale
magic crystal ke alawa aur kuch bhi milega to usme rider ko bhi hissa milega. "
Ankit ( thode rude tone me ) " kya ho raha h yaha ? "
Shubham " kya mana crystals ko 10 mein vibhaajit karana sahi nahi hai, 9 ki jagah ?
"
Lalit ( ek evil smile ke sath ) " of course hm ise sbhi hunturs me equal divide krenge. Mujhe ye baat ache se yaad hai. "
" Lakin usase phle hme dusrei bato pr phle dhyan dena hoga. "
Fir lalit sare hunturs ka dhyan mana crystals ke upar bane hue jale me aaram se lete hue spider pr karta h. Jo ki bahut hi bada spider tha . Aur yahi spider is DENGOUN ka BOSS tha. Sare hunturs use dhyan se dekhne lgte h .
Shubham ( spider ko dekh ke ) " DENGOUN BOSS. "
Lalit " tm sb bhut ache se jante ho lakin fir bhi ek baar bata du agr BOSS mara gaya to gate band ho jayega. "
" Isi liye hm sb ko phle mana crystals ko yaha se khod kr bahar nikalna hoga spider ko marne se pahle . "
" Wo to acha h ki dekhne se hi lag raha pet bharne ke baad ye so raha h . "
" Aur aisa lagta h yahi sbse acha chance h mana crystals ko yaha se bahar ke jane ka. "
" Sanjay kya tum apna equipment yaha laye ho ? "
Sanjay ( lalit ki dekhte hue ) " sorry, kitne socha tha ek C Rank DENGOUN me mana crystals hoga . Isi liye mai nahi laya . "
Ak dursa huntur ( Lalit se ) " maine bhi apna sara saman car me hi chor diya tha. "
Lalit ( thode gusse me ) " Idiots ! Maine phle bhi tm sb ko kitni baar kaha h apna sara saman hamesa apne sath rakha kro. "
Sare hunturs " hme maaf ke do ! "
Lalit ( niche dekhte hue ) " phew!! Ye to ak samasya ho gayi . "
Fir lalit muh kr mere aur Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue khta h..
Lalit " mai maafi mangta hu tmdono se. Lakin kya tum dono yaha ruk kr is jagah ki raksha kr skte ho ? "
" Qki hme bahar ja kr apne equipment yaha lane honge. "
Shubham ( thoda naraj ho kr ) " kya tm hme yaha kud se BOSS ke room me rukne ko bol rahe ho ? "
Lalit " are kuch nahi hoga. Sb thik h . "
"Mujhe nahi lagta ye us type ke monsters me se h jo attack kre. Ye tabhi attack krega jb aap uske area me jaoge. "
" Aur ise dekh kr yahi lagta h ki isne bahut jyada kha liya h aur ye abhi sota hi rahega. "
" Yaha rukne me tmko koi problem nahi hogi jb tk ki tm kud ise gussa nahi dilate. "
Mai ye sb bs sun raha tha m kuch bhi nahi bolta hu bs chup rahta hu .
Shubham ( nirasa se ) " lakin .... "
Lalit ( Shubham ki taraf smile krke ) " tmne kaha tha na ki ye tumhari 1st raid hai ? "
" Aur Rider ka bhi C Rank ke DENGOUN me phli baar hai . "
" To mujh pr yakin kro. "
" Thik hai ? "
Lalit ( jor jor se chilla ke Bolte hue ) " tumhe kya lagta h kuch hoga ? Jabki hm kuch der se aise hi jor jor se baate kr rahe h . "
" Aur mujhe apne baki hunturs se bhi kuch baate krni h. To hm jate h aur bs thodi der me smoke krke aur equipment le kr bas abhi aate h. "
Itna bol kr mujhe aur Shubham ko chor kr baki sare hunturs waha se jane lagte h .
Aur unhe jata hua dekh kr mai sochta hu....
' niyam ke hisab se to C Rank gate me andar aane ke liye 10 hunturs ka hona jaruri hai. '
' Shubham aur mujhe nikalne ke baad to bs 8 member hi rah jayenge. '
Fir mujhe lalit ki yaha aane se phle ki wo baat yaad aati h ..
( Lalit " tmhe to pata hi hai na ak healer ko kisi personal attack force me lana kitna hard hota h.
Hm hmesa ise aise hi krte h . )
Iska mtlb ki ye sare C Rank gate me aise hi enter ho jate h , aur mai smjho jata hu ki ye hamesa se aise hi krte h.
Aur unhe hmare na hone se jo jagah khali hui h use bharne ki koi jarurat nahi h.
Q ki yaha aane ke liye 10 members ke hone jaruri h aisa koi rule hai hi nahi.
Mai yaha ye sb soch raha tha. Jbki bahar jane ke baad Lalit Ankit se kahta h .
Lalit ( evil smile ke sath ) " ankit BOSS ke room ko band kr do. "
BUZZZZZZ............
BOOOMMM.....
TAD... TAD... TAD...
Aur ankit apne fire power ka use karke ab bahut tej visphot krta h aur Boss ke room se bahar jane ka rasta bade bade stone se bnd ho jata h .
Mai aur Shubham BOSS room se bahar jane wale raste ko dekh rahe hote h jo ki bnd ho gaya tha.
Shubham ( dar aur chinta ke sath ) " nahi !! Gate to band ho gaya h . "
Aur mai gate ki traf dhyan se dekhte hue apne mn me gusse se kahta hu ' sale, harami to ye sare the wo LIZARD. '
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