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Rider ke antarman ki ek jhalak





Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise mai aur baki sare hunturs nd almost puri India country JEJU ISLAND ke Rais me marne wale logo ko farewell de rahi thi. Waha se naiklte time mai Aayat ko dekhta hu lakin wo mere se najre cura rahi thi. Fir mai Chairman Xabhi se milta hu aur unhen apni ek Guild ko banane ke bare me batata hu. Uske baad mai waha se nikal raha tha ki mujhe ek american agent Adam mil jata hai. Aur wo mujhe ek hotal me apne deputy director Michael connor ke paas le jata hai. Jaha wo mujhe batate hai ki Hunturs ki ability ko increase kiya ja sakta hai kisi dusre Hunter ki help se. Fir wo waha ek lady ko bulate hai.



AB AAGE......


Tap... Tap.... Tap...

Ek lady hmare room ki taraf aa rahi thi. Jo ki uske chlne ke karan hone hue high hills ke aawaj se pata lag raha tha. Mai room ke door ki taraf dekh raha tha.
Jabki Michael mere taraf dekhte hue kahta hai " Is world me sirf ek hi person hai. "
" Jo baki dusre awakeners ko unki limit ke bhi paar jane me help kar skti hai. "
" Aur wo person hai Mrs. Norma Selner. "

Aur Michael ke itna kahne tak hmare room me Michael ke kahne par bahag gaye dono agents ek lady ko le kar aa jate hai. Wo ek black lady thi. Jo ki dikhne me 35-40th ki lag rahi thi. Uske hair caurly nd black color ke them usne grey color ka ek suit aur skirt pahna hua tha. Aur sath me usne apne sir par ek bahut badi si round cap laga rakhi thi. Apne Right hath me usne ek midium bag carry kiye hue thi.
Us lady ke aate hi Michael apne jagah se khada ho jata hai. Aur wo lady mere samne wale sofe ki taraf chli jati hai.
Mai bhi bade dhyan se Norma Selner ko hi dekh raha tha aur apne man me soch raha tha ' Iske paas baki dusre awakeners ke jaisa nahi balki ek bilkul hi alag atmosphere hai. '

Michael, Norma Selner se kahta hai " Mrs. Selner "
" Please apni ability ke bare me huntur Rider ko explain kijiye. "

Michael ki baat suns kar Norma Selner mere taraf dekhne lagti hai, aur kahti hai " Tmhe is baat par yakin nahi ho raha hai. Hai ki nahi ? "
" Baki dusre Hunter ka bhi 1st time same tmhare jaisa hi reaction raha tha. "
" Lakin ek baar jab tum ise experience kar loge... "
" Tumhare paas isko pane ke alawa aur koi choice hi nahi bachega. "

Itna kuch kahte hue Norma Selner Mere samne wale sofe par baith chuki thi. Jaha pahle Michael baitha hua tha. Aur uske baad wo apni wo badi si round cap utar kar wahi sofe me ek side me rakh deti hai.
Ab tak hmare samne ke table par bhi coffee aur kuch khane pine ka saman aa kar rakha ja cuka tha.

Jb Norma Selner mujhe itna sub kuch bata rahi thi to pata nahi kyu Michael ek baar unhe rokna cahta tha aur wo kahta hai " Mrs. Selner. "

Lakin wo bina ruke mere taraf jukhte hue meri aakho me dekhte hue aage kahti hai " Jaisa ki tum jante ho. Sare awakeners ki ek limit hoti hai. "
" Koi bhi ise paar nahi kar skta hai. "
( Apne same table par cack ke ek pis ko kaat kar uska ek chota tukda frok se utha kar khate hue aage kahti hai ) " So jab tak ki tum REAWAKEND nahi hote. "
" Tab tak aap high rank ke level par kabhi bhi nahi pahuch skte ho. "
" Ye kisi bhi huntur ke liye basic knowledge hai. Jiske bare me abhi Hunturs jante hai. "

Mai, Norma Selner ki taraf dekhte hue santi se " So, Mrs. Selner... "

Isase phle ki mai aage kuch kahta Norma Selner wo cack ka tukda khate hue bich me hi kahti hai " Ha mere paas wo ability hai jiske help se koi bhi huntur apni limit ke us paar ja skta hai. "
" Mai 3 stages ke through help karke unki Strength ko increase kar skti hu. "
" Lakin mujhe abhi bhi ye smjha nahi aata ki mai ise kya kahu ? Jabardasti force de kar karwaya gaya REAWAKEND ya Kisi ke potential ko increase karna. "

Michael jo ki Norma Selner ke bagal me hi ek side khada tha wo kahta hai " Unhone abhi jo bhi kaha sub such hai. "
" Lakin ek baad jab ye apne power ka use kar leti hai to inhen ek long time tak rest karna padta hai. "
" Isiliye her year sirf kuch hi awakeners ko choose kiya jata hai jo ki is benifit ka fayda utha sake. "

Ye sun. Kah mai apne man me kahta hu 'Aur mai un kuch logo me samiul hu. '
' Jo bhi ho agar ye baat such hai to..... '
' Ye ek bahut hi amazing ability hai. '

Mai, Norma Selner ki taraf dekhte hue " ... To kitni jyada efficient hai ye ability ? "

Norma Selner " Ye person ke upar depend karta hai. "
" Lakin ek baar jab unhone 3rd stage ko complete kar liya. To unhone kam se kam 20 percent ya 30 percent jyada kud ko pahle se mehsoos paya. "

Mai apne man me ' 20-30 percent ? "
' Aisa nahi ho skta. '
' Ab mujhe smjh me aaya kyu itni sari burayi aur criticism hone ke baad bhi huntur Namit ne America jane ka decision liya. '
' Aakhir aise offer ko kon mana kr payega ? '
' Baki dusre Hunters bhi iske liye bhagte hue America chle jayenge. '

Main, Michael ki taraf dekhte hue " Agar is ability ke bare me kisi ne outside world me leaks kar diya to.... "

Michael " Isi liye to Mrs. Selner hamre sath hai. "
" Inke safety ki responsibly hmare upar hai. Aur sath hi me hum inko ek reasonable amount pay karte hai. "
" Jiske liye Mrs. Selner hmare dwara select kiye gaye hunturs ko higher level par phuche me madad karte hai. "
" Mrs. Selner ki ability ek gift hai jise hum aapko dena cahte hai. "

Mai apne man me ' Ek gift ? '
( Michael ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Ye ek gift se jyada kisi deal ki tarah nahi lag raha hai ? "

Michael meri taraf dekhte hue smile ke sath " Agar tum USA ke ek huntur ban gaye to hum is baat ka pura dhyan rakhenge ki tum hi sbse phle person ho jise jyada se jyada benifits mile. "
" Sath hi is deal ko aur bhi acha banane ke liye. Hum tumhare choice ke kisi bhi USA ke guild ke sath judne ke liye sari arrengement karwa sakte hai. "

Norma Selner apne coffee ko khtam karke cup ko table par rakhte hue kahti hai " Tumhe jaldbaji karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Hum yaha tumhari help karne aaye hai. Jiske liye hum aaj abhi hi tumhare liye 1st button ko start krte hai. "

Mai ( thode Surprise se ) " Kya ? "

Norma Selner meri taraf dekhte hue " Hmne tmhe bataya tha na ? "
" Ye ek Gift hai. "

Michael meri taraf dekhte hue " Ye bikul sahi kah rahi hai. "
" Kya tum apne potential ko unlocked karne ke liye taiyar ho ? "

Mai, Michael ki taraf dekhte hue " Bina kisi cost ke ? "

Michael, meri taraf dekhte hue smile ke sath " Ise hmari taraf se ek Gift smjho bas. "

Mai, Norma Selner ki taraf dekhte hue apne man me ' Inhone yahi kaha tha na ki agar mai ise ek baar experience kar lunga to mai isase piche nahi hat paunga ? '
' Iska Matlb hai ki inko apne Ability par pura confidence hai. '

Fir mai bhi apna sir haa me hila kar apni rajamandi de deta hu. Uske baad Mrs Selner apne dono hatho ko aage karke mere right hath ko pakd kr kahti hai " Meri aakho me dekho. "
" Dhyan se. "
" Ye 1st step hai. "

Michael hum dono ki taraf Dhyan se dekhte hue ek smile ke sath apne man me kahta hai ' Achi baat hai. Ise ye feel hona suru ho gaya hai. '
' Bhale hi ye abhi apna aap ko saant dikha raha hai. Lakin ek baar jab ye 1st stage ko pura kar lega to ye hum logo ko wapas se jarur contact karega. '
' Nahi ! Agar ye impatient hua to ye abhi turant hi contract ko sign kar dega. '
' JEJU island ke jis Raid me Ryuji Koto name ka jo huntur National level huntur banane ke liye aim kiye baitha tha. '
' Wah iske rear ability ke karan bahut hi aasani se clear ho gaya. '
' Mai to yahi soch kar shocked hu ki iski limit aakhir kitni hogi. '

Norma Selner aur mai ek dusre ki aakho me dekh rahe the.
Unki aakhe jaha green color ki glow ho rahi thim wahi meri aakhe sky blue color ki glow ho rahi thi. Hum dono ke body ko sky blue color ki ek energy ki patli si layer cover kar leti hai. Aur kuch hi second me Norma Selner mere antarman me pahuch jati hai.
Jab wo waha phuchti hai to unhen waha charo taraf bikul andhera dikahyi deta hai. Wo apne gardan ko ghuma ghuma kar idhar udhar dekhti hai. Lakin her taraf unhe Ghana, kala andhera hi dikhayi deta hai. Aise hi wo idhar udhar dekh hi rahi thi ki unhen ek taraf unse kafi height par ek face dikhayi deta hai. Jab wo dhyan ne us face ko dekhti hai to unhen pata chalta hai wo face kisi aur ka nahi mera hi tha. Aur meri aakhe close thi. Aur mere face ke alawa waha aur kuch bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha. Jb Mrs Selner aur dhyan se mere face ki taraf dekhti hai to ekdam se mere antarman me meri aakhe open ho jati hai. Aur wo ghur kar apne sky blue color ki aakho ke sath Mrs Selner ko dekhne lagti hai.

Aaaaaaaaa.........

Aur aisa hote hi Mrs Selner turant hi apne dono hatho ko wapas apni taraf bahut jor se chillate hue teji se khich leti hai.
Aisa hote hi waha par khade sare log aur sath hi mai, sabhi chauk jate hai.

Aur turant hi mere piche khade 2 american agent apni apni gun nikal kar use mere sir ki taraf point out karte hue kahte hai " Tum sale, kamine ! Tmne Mrs Selner ke sath kya kiya !? "

Aur ye dekhte hi turant hi Michael bahut jor se chillate hue un dono agents ko order dete hue kahta hai " Ruk jao ! "
" Kya tum logo ka dimak khrab ho gaya hai !? "
" Tum dono gadhe ho kyaaa..... ? "

Ek agent, Michael ki taraf dekhte hue halke dar ke sath " But Mrs Selner.... "

Michael gusse se " Agar tumhe Mrs Selner ki itni hi fikar hai to jao aur ja kar unko sambhalo. Aur unka dhyan rakho. "

Ye sun kar wo agents turant hi apne apne gun ko ander rakh lete hai. Adam aur kuch agents ja kar Mrs Selner ko pani pilate hai. Aur unko check karne lagte hai.

Michael mere samne aa kar turant hi apna sir jukha kar mujhse mafi mangate hue kahta hai " Mujhe maaf kar dijiyega Mr. Huntur. "
" Hmare agents ne aapke sath thik se behave nahi kiya. "

Mai bhi ab tak shocked ke sath Mrs Selner ko dekh raha tha aur apne man me ek hi baat soch raha tha ' yaha ho kya raha hai ? '
( Michael ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Koi baat nahi. "
" Mai thik hu. "

Ye sun kar ab kahi ja kar Micheal ne rahat ki saas li. Uske face ko dekh ke hi pata chal raha tha ki wo kitna dar gaya tha is sub se. Pasine ki bund fully A.C. room me bhiuske forehead par saaf dekhi ja sakti thi.

Michael mere piche khade dono agents ke paas ja kar unke kaan me dhire, lakin sakt tone me kahta hai " Agar aisa kuch Sandy Nirwan Ya Liu Zhigang ke samne hua hota to ab tak hum sb yaha mare pade hote. "
" Is baat ko apne dimak me fit kr lo. "
" Aakhir ye ek National level huntur hai tum ek mamuli se Gun se iska kya bigad lete ? "

Ye sun sunte aur smjhte hi un dono ke pure body se pasine nikalne lagte hai aur wo jldi se bas itna hi kah pate hai " Ji ! Ji ! "
" Aage se hum pakka dhyan rakhenge. "

Fir jaldi se Micheal Mrs Selner ke paas jata hai jo ki abhi tak dar ke karan bahut buri tarah kaap rahi thi. Sath hi me unke pure body se pasina pani ki tarah bah raha tha. Unhone apne dono hatho se apna sir pakd rakha tha Aur wo jaise kisi sadme me chli gayi ho. Wo bas niche jamin ki taraf dar aur khauf se dekh rahi thi.

Michael fikar ke sath Mrs Selner se kahta hai " Mrs. Selner kya hua ? "
" Aapko lagatar itna pasina kyu aa raha hai ? "
" Kahi aap bimar to nahi ho gayi hai ? "

Lakin Mrs Selner bina kuch bole chori chori dar ke sath mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thi.

Michael meri taraf dekhte hue kafi nirasha se " Aisa lagta hai ki Mrs. Selner ki tabiyat aaj thik nahi hai. "
" Kya hum aapko baad me fir se contact kar skte hai ? "

Mai " Ji jarur. "

Michael, Adam ki traf dekhte hue " Adam Mr. Rider ko ache se ghar tak chod kar aana. "

Adam, Michael ki taraf dekhte hue " ji smjh gaya. "

Tap... Tap... Tap....

Aur mai waha se apne ghar ke liye nikal jata hu.

Mere jane ke baad Micheal wapas se Mrs. Selner ke paas jata hai aur puchta hai " Mrs. Selner kya hua ? "

Norma Selner dar ke mare niche jamin ko dekhte hue kapte hue apne hatho ke sath yaad karte hue kahti hai " W....wo e.....ek ..... "
" Wo ek Raja hai. "
" Aur sirf itna hi nahi wo ek bahut hi Powefull Raja hai. "

Michael bhi ye sun kah shocked ho jata hai aur haklate hue kahta hai " I...iska mat...matlab, kya wah National level hunturs ke jitne samne level par hai ? "

Norma Selner " Nahi mai thik se nahi kah sakti hu. "
" Maine aisa kuch bhi aaj tak kapne life me kabhi bhi experience nahi kiya hai. "
" Wo ek king hai. Lakin wo bakiyo se bilkul alag hai. "
( Meri antaratma ki eye ko yaad karte hue ) " Jab maine uske aakho me dekhne ki kosis ki . "
" Usne bhi wapas se mere aakho me dekha. "
" Aisa lag hi nahi raha tha ki wo Huntur Rider hai. Balki aisa lag raha tha ki uske ander kabhi na khtam hone wala andhkar tha. "
" Aur wo mujhe hi dekh raha tha. "
" Aur uski.... "
" K...koi ..limit nahi hai. "














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UPDATE NO - 109
Rider ke antarman ki ek jhalak





Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise mai aur baki sare hunturs nd almost puri India country JEJU ISLAND ke Rais me marne wale logo ko farewell de rahi thi. Waha se naiklte time mai Aayat ko dekhta hu lakin wo mere se najre cura rahi thi. Fir mai Chairman Xabhi se milta hu aur unhen apni ek Guild ko banane ke bare me batata hu. Uske baad mai waha se nikal raha tha ki mujhe ek american agent Adam mil jata hai. Aur wo mujhe ek hotal me apne deputy director Michael connor ke paas le jata hai. Jaha wo mujhe batate hai ki Hunturs ki ability ko increase kiya ja sakta hai kisi dusre Hunter ki help se. Fir wo waha ek lady ko bulate hai.



AB AAGE......


Tap... Tap.... Tap...

Ek lady hmare room ki taraf aa rahi thi. Jo ki uske chlne ke karan hone hue high hills ke aawaj se pata lag raha tha. Mai room ke door ki taraf dekh raha tha.
Jabki Michael mere taraf dekhte hue kahta hai " Is world me sirf ek hi person hai. "
" Jo baki dusre awakeners ko unki limit ke bhi paar jane me help kar skti hai. "
" Aur wo person hai Mrs. Norma Selner. "

Aur Michael ke itna kahne tak hmare room me Michael ke kahne par bahag gaye dono agents ek lady ko le kar aa jate hai. Wo ek black lady thi. Jo ki dikhne me 35-40th ki lag rahi thi. Uske hair caurly nd black color ke them usne grey color ka ek suit aur skirt pahna hua tha. Aur sath me usne apne sir par ek bahut badi si round cap laga rakhi thi. Apne Right hath me usne ek midium bag carry kiye hue thi.
Us lady ke aate hi Michael apne jagah se khada ho jata hai. Aur wo lady mere samne wale sofe ki taraf chli jati hai.
Mai bhi bade dhyan se Norma Selner ko hi dekh raha tha aur apne man me soch raha tha ' Iske paas baki dusre awakeners ke jaisa nahi balki ek bilkul hi alag atmosphere hai. '

Michael, Norma Selner se kahta hai " Mrs. Selner "
" Please apni ability ke bare me huntur Rider ko explain kijiye. "

Michael ki baat suns kar Norma Selner mere taraf dekhne lagti hai, aur kahti hai " Tmhe is baat par yakin nahi ho raha hai. Hai ki nahi ? "
" Baki dusre Hunter ka bhi 1st time same tmhare jaisa hi reaction raha tha. "
" Lakin ek baar jab tum ise experience kar loge... "
" Tumhare paas isko pane ke alawa aur koi choice hi nahi bachega. "

Itna kuch kahte hue Norma Selner Mere samne wale sofe par baith chuki thi. Jaha pahle Michael baitha hua tha. Aur uske baad wo apni wo badi si round cap utar kar wahi sofe me ek side me rakh deti hai.
Ab tak hmare samne ke table par bhi coffee aur kuch khane pine ka saman aa kar rakha ja cuka tha.

Jb Norma Selner mujhe itna sub kuch bata rahi thi to pata nahi kyu Michael ek baar unhe rokna cahta tha aur wo kahta hai " Mrs. Selner. "

Lakin wo bina ruke mere taraf jukhte hue meri aakho me dekhte hue aage kahti hai " Jaisa ki tum jante ho. Sare awakeners ki ek limit hoti hai. "
" Koi bhi ise paar nahi kar skta hai. "
( Apne same table par cack ke ek pis ko kaat kar uska ek chota tukda frok se utha kar khate hue aage kahti hai ) " So jab tak ki tum REAWAKEND nahi hote. "
" Tab tak aap high rank ke level par kabhi bhi nahi pahuch skte ho. "
" Ye kisi bhi huntur ke liye basic knowledge hai. Jiske bare me abhi Hunturs jante hai. "

Mai, Norma Selner ki taraf dekhte hue santi se " So, Mrs. Selner... "

Isase phle ki mai aage kuch kahta Norma Selner wo cack ka tukda khate hue bich me hi kahti hai " Ha mere paas wo ability hai jiske help se koi bhi huntur apni limit ke us paar ja skta hai. "
" Mai 3 stages ke through help karke unki Strength ko increase kar skti hu. "
" Lakin mujhe abhi bhi ye smjha nahi aata ki mai ise kya kahu ? Jabardasti force de kar karwaya gaya REAWAKEND ya Kisi ke potential ko increase karna. "

Michael jo ki Norma Selner ke bagal me hi ek side khada tha wo kahta hai " Unhone abhi jo bhi kaha sub such hai. "
" Lakin ek baad jab ye apne power ka use kar leti hai to inhen ek long time tak rest karna padta hai. "
" Isiliye her year sirf kuch hi awakeners ko choose kiya jata hai jo ki is benifit ka fayda utha sake. "

Ye sun. Kah mai apne man me kahta hu 'Aur mai un kuch logo me samiul hu. '
' Jo bhi ho agar ye baat such hai to..... '
' Ye ek bahut hi amazing ability hai. '

Mai, Norma Selner ki taraf dekhte hue " ... To kitni jyada efficient hai ye ability ? "

Norma Selner " Ye person ke upar depend karta hai. "
" Lakin ek baar jab unhone 3rd stage ko complete kar liya. To unhone kam se kam 20 percent ya 30 percent jyada kud ko pahle se mehsoos paya. "

Mai apne man me ' 20-30 percent ? "
' Aisa nahi ho skta. '
' Ab mujhe smjh me aaya kyu itni sari burayi aur criticism hone ke baad bhi huntur Namit ne America jane ka decision liya. '
' Aakhir aise offer ko kon mana kr payega ? '
' Baki dusre Hunters bhi iske liye bhagte hue America chle jayenge. '

Main, Michael ki taraf dekhte hue " Agar is ability ke bare me kisi ne outside world me leaks kar diya to.... "

Michael " Isi liye to Mrs. Selner hamre sath hai. "
" Inke safety ki responsibly hmare upar hai. Aur sath hi me hum inko ek reasonable amount pay karte hai. "
" Jiske liye Mrs. Selner hmare dwara select kiye gaye hunturs ko higher level par phuche me madad karte hai. "
" Mrs. Selner ki ability ek gift hai jise hum aapko dena cahte hai. "

Mai apne man me ' Ek gift ? '
( Michael ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Ye ek gift se jyada kisi deal ki tarah nahi lag raha hai ? "

Michael meri taraf dekhte hue smile ke sath " Agar tum USA ke ek huntur ban gaye to hum is baat ka pura dhyan rakhenge ki tum hi sbse phle person ho jise jyada se jyada benifits mile. "
" Sath hi is deal ko aur bhi acha banane ke liye. Hum tumhare choice ke kisi bhi USA ke guild ke sath judne ke liye sari arrengement karwa sakte hai. "

Norma Selner apne coffee ko khtam karke cup ko table par rakhte hue kahti hai " Tumhe jaldbaji karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. Hum yaha tumhari help karne aaye hai. Jiske liye hum aaj abhi hi tumhare liye 1st button ko start krte hai. "

Mai ( thode Surprise se ) " Kya ? "

Norma Selner meri taraf dekhte hue " Hmne tmhe bataya tha na ? "
" Ye ek Gift hai. "

Michael meri taraf dekhte hue " Ye bikul sahi kah rahi hai. "
" Kya tum apne potential ko unlocked karne ke liye taiyar ho ? "

Mai, Michael ki taraf dekhte hue " Bina kisi cost ke ? "

Michael, meri taraf dekhte hue smile ke sath " Ise hmari taraf se ek Gift smjho bas. "

Mai, Norma Selner ki taraf dekhte hue apne man me ' Inhone yahi kaha tha na ki agar mai ise ek baar experience kar lunga to mai isase piche nahi hat paunga ? '
' Iska Matlb hai ki inko apne Ability par pura confidence hai. '

Fir mai bhi apna sir haa me hila kar apni rajamandi de deta hu. Uske baad Mrs Selner apne dono hatho ko aage karke mere right hath ko pakd kr kahti hai " Meri aakho me dekho. "
" Dhyan se. "
" Ye 1st step hai. "

Michael hum dono ki taraf Dhyan se dekhte hue ek smile ke sath apne man me kahta hai ' Achi baat hai. Ise ye feel hona suru ho gaya hai. '
' Bhale hi ye abhi apna aap ko saant dikha raha hai. Lakin ek baar jab ye 1st stage ko pura kar lega to ye hum logo ko wapas se jarur contact karega. '
' Nahi ! Agar ye impatient hua to ye abhi turant hi contract ko sign kar dega. '
' JEJU island ke jis Raid me Ryuji Koto name ka jo huntur National level huntur banane ke liye aim kiye baitha tha. '
' Wah iske rear ability ke karan bahut hi aasani se clear ho gaya. '
' Mai to yahi soch kar shocked hu ki iski limit aakhir kitni hogi. '

Norma Selner aur mai ek dusre ki aakho me dekh rahe the.
Unki aakhe jaha green color ki glow ho rahi thim wahi meri aakhe sky blue color ki glow ho rahi thi. Hum dono ke body ko sky blue color ki ek energy ki patli si layer cover kar leti hai. Aur kuch hi second me Norma Selner mere antarman me pahuch jati hai.
Jab wo waha phuchti hai to unhen waha charo taraf bikul andhera dikahyi deta hai. Wo apne gardan ko ghuma ghuma kar idhar udhar dekhti hai. Lakin her taraf unhe Ghana, kala andhera hi dikhayi deta hai. Aise hi wo idhar udhar dekh hi rahi thi ki unhen ek taraf unse kafi height par ek face dikhayi deta hai. Jab wo dhyan ne us face ko dekhti hai to unhen pata chalta hai wo face kisi aur ka nahi mera hi tha. Aur meri aakhe close thi. Aur mere face ke alawa waha aur kuch bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha. Jb Mrs Selner aur dhyan se mere face ki taraf dekhti hai to ekdam se mere antarman me meri aakhe open ho jati hai. Aur wo ghur kar apne sky blue color ki aakho ke sath Mrs Selner ko dekhne lagti hai.


Aaaaaaaaa.........

Aur aisa hote hi Mrs Selner turant hi apne dono hatho ko wapas apni taraf bahut jor se chillate hue teji se khich leti hai.
Aisa hote hi waha par khade sare log aur sath hi mai, sabhi chauk jate hai.

Aur turant hi mere piche khade 2 american agent apni apni gun nikal kar use mere sir ki taraf point out karte hue kahte hai " Tum sale, kamine ! Tmne Mrs Selner ke sath kya kiya !? "

Aur ye dekhte hi turant hi Michael bahut jor se chillate hue un dono agents ko order dete hue kahta hai " Ruk jao ! "
" Kya tum logo ka dimak khrab ho gaya hai !? "
" Tum dono gadhe ho kyaaa..... ? "

Ek agent, Michael ki taraf dekhte hue halke dar ke sath " But Mrs Selner.... "

Michael gusse se " Agar tumhe Mrs Selner ki itni hi fikar hai to jao aur ja kar unko sambhalo. Aur unka dhyan rakho. "

Ye sun kar wo agents turant hi apne apne gun ko ander rakh lete hai. Adam aur kuch agents ja kar Mrs Selner ko pani pilate hai. Aur unko check karne lagte hai.

Michael mere samne aa kar turant hi apna sir jukha kar mujhse mafi mangate hue kahta hai " Mujhe maaf kar dijiyega Mr. Huntur. "
" Hmare agents ne aapke sath thik se behave nahi kiya. "

Mai bhi ab tak shocked ke sath Mrs Selner ko dekh raha tha aur apne man me ek hi baat soch raha tha ' yaha ho kya raha hai ? '
( Michael ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Koi baat nahi. "
" Mai thik hu. "

Ye sun kar ab kahi ja kar Micheal ne rahat ki saas li. Uske face ko dekh ke hi pata chal raha tha ki wo kitna dar gaya tha is sub se. Pasine ki bund fully A.C. room me bhiuske forehead par saaf dekhi ja sakti thi.

Michael mere piche khade dono agents ke paas ja kar unke kaan me dhire, lakin sakt tone me kahta hai " Agar aisa kuch Sandy Nirwan Ya Liu Zhigang ke samne hua hota to ab tak hum sb yaha mare pade hote. "
" Is baat ko apne dimak me fit kr lo. "
" Aakhir ye ek National level huntur hai tum ek mamuli se Gun se iska kya bigad lete ? "

Ye sun sunte aur smjhte hi un dono ke pure body se pasine nikalne lagte hai aur wo jldi se bas itna hi kah pate hai " Ji ! Ji ! "
" Aage se hum pakka dhyan rakhenge. "

Fir jaldi se Micheal Mrs Selner ke paas jata hai jo ki abhi tak dar ke karan bahut buri tarah kaap rahi thi. Sath hi me unke pure body se pasina pani ki tarah bah raha tha. Unhone apne dono hatho se apna sir pakd rakha tha Aur wo jaise kisi sadme me chli gayi ho. Wo bas niche jamin ki taraf dar aur khauf se dekh rahi thi.

Michael fikar ke sath Mrs Selner se kahta hai " Mrs. Selner kya hua ? "
" Aapko lagatar itna pasina kyu aa raha hai ? "
" Kahi aap bimar to nahi ho gayi hai ? "

Lakin Mrs Selner bina kuch bole chori chori dar ke sath mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thi.

Michael meri taraf dekhte hue kafi nirasha se " Aisa lagta hai ki Mrs. Selner ki tabiyat aaj thik nahi hai. "
" Kya hum aapko baad me fir se contact kar skte hai ? "

Mai " Ji jarur. "

Michael, Adam ki traf dekhte hue " Adam Mr. Rider ko ache se ghar tak chod kar aana. "

Adam, Michael ki taraf dekhte hue " ji smjh gaya. "


Tap... Tap... Tap....

Aur mai waha se apne ghar ke liye nikal jata hu.

Mere jane ke baad Micheal wapas se Mrs. Selner ke paas jata hai aur puchta hai " Mrs. Selner kya hua ? "

Norma Selner dar ke mare niche jamin ko dekhte hue kapte hue apne hatho ke sath yaad karte hue kahti hai " W....wo e.....ek ..... "
" Wo ek Raja hai. "
" Aur sirf itna hi nahi wo ek bahut hi Powefull Raja hai. "

Michael bhi ye sun kah shocked ho jata hai aur haklate hue kahta hai " I...iska mat...matlab, kya wah National level hunturs ke jitne samne level par hai ? "

Norma Selner " Nahi mai thik se nahi kah sakti hu. "
" Maine aisa kuch bhi aaj tak kapne life me kabhi bhi experience nahi kiya hai. "
" Wo ek king hai. Lakin wo bakiyo se bilkul alag hai. "
( Meri antaratma ki eye ko yaad karte hue ) " Jab maine uske aakho me dekhne ki kosis ki . "
" Usne bhi wapas se mere aakho me dekha. "
" Aisa lag hi nahi raha tha ki wo Huntur Rider hai. Balki aisa lag raha tha ki uske ander kabhi na khtam hone wala andhkar tha. "
" Aur wo mujhe hi dekh raha tha. "
" Aur uski.... "
" K...koi ..limit nahi hai. "















Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Bohat achu update hy ..Norma selner ko apni oukat maloom ho gye😁 American's ka plan ulta paaad gya..
 

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UPDATE NO - 110 ke baad se meri story ka new ARC, SHADOW MONARCH ARC start hoga. Jisme aap logo ko Rider ke System re releted sari jankari milegi. Jaise ki....
1. Ye System kya hai ?

2. System bana kaise ?
3. Kisne banaya is System ko ?
4. Kyu banaya ?

5. Aur Rider ko hi kyu choose kiya usne.

aise hi aur bhi bahut sare sawalo ke jawab aapko is ARC me milega.
sath hi me aapko her ek Update me ek se badh kar ek dhamakedar masala read karne ko milega. Aur ye sub almost 140 se 150 Upadte thk jayega.
 
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AReeee yrrr ye kya update de diyaa poora dimaagh hi ghoom gaya isse padh kr to.


Jeju Island 🏝️ ki raid bhi ab complete ho gyiii hai almost lagta to yehi hai .
Ha khatam ho gaya hai wo.
ab ye Sandy ko alag chull machi padi hai or wahan uss Chinese ko bhi Black Ant 🐜 se ladna tha ajeeb hi namoone bhare pade hain yahaan to.
Kya kare duniya me her tarah ke log bure pade hai.
Ab ye 2 namoone kon aagaye aise lag rha hai k mela laga huwaa hai jo har koi aajataa hai ghoomne phirne.
Abhi to logo ka aana shuru hi hua h :hint:
or ye Manish ka kya scene hai jo woh namoone usko aise dekh rhe the.

ab agle update m hi pata chale gaa k kya hogaa 😂 pehle to ap batane se rahe 😁.
Ye baat to bikul sahi kaha aapne.
shaandaar lekin confusing update 😍😁.
Abhi to aap logo ko isase bhi kai time jyada confused Krna h.
Aapka bahut bahut sukriya LionHeart007 bhai itne pyare review ke liye.
keep supporting ☺️👍
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निर्वाण भाई सहाब को भी इस कहानी में लेकर आ गए आप कहीं यह निर्वाण Sandeep singh nirwan भाई सहाब तो नहीं है ना
अगर वहीँ है तो क्यु उन्हें मरवाने वाले हो आगे हंटर राइड से
Ha unhe to le kar aana hi tha bas unke layak ka koi charecter sindh raha tha jo mil gaya.
Baki aapka Bahut Sukriya Sk. Bhai.
Keep supporting ☺️👍
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आप ने ऐसा क्यूं किया

या

इतनी जल्दबाजी काहें किया
ये कहें

या

कुछ मित्रों के कमेंट से आहत होकर
जल्दबाजी में ऐसा किया

या

हम मजाक मजाक में कुछ ज्यादा ही मजाक कर दिए

जों सहन नहीं हूआ ओर जों 10 या 15 अपडेट बाद जो होने वाला था वो अभी हों गया जल्दबाजी में

इतना जल्दी की आशा नहीं थीं वैलेंटाइन भाई
Nahi Zoro x bhai sb kuch apne time par hi bilkul sahi chal raha hai.
कहां से पता चलेगा डिमोन भाई
जब उनके पास पोर्टल खोलने की शक्ति हैं
जब चाहें जहां चाहें पोर्टल खोला काम खत्म किया और गायब
पिछें सिर्फ शक्ति के सबुत के सिवा कुछ नहीं छोड़ते हैं
पोर्टल के खोलने की शक्ति के कणों के अलावा पीछे कुछ भी नहीं मिलता हैं डिमोन भाई
Bikul sahi kaha aapne bhai.
जों बंदा चुटकी पोर्टल ओन ओफ कर सकता हैं उसके सामने राइडर कुछ भी नहीं हैं डिमोन भाई
Aap to bade sajhedar nikale bhai.
राइडर एक बार पोर्टल खोलता है तों दूसरे के लिए समय की सीमा हैं लेकिन उस बुढंऊ के लिए सिर्फ चुटकी बजाना 😀😀😄
कहा से बराबरी करेगा राइडर
:smartm:
Aapka sukriya bhai.
Keep supporting ☺️👍
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क्या हैं की यहां सब बग की तरह हैं
बातें चाहें जितनी बड़ी बड़ी करवा लों काम एक कोड़ी का होता नहीं हैं

फिर उसी काम को कोई ऐसा अंजाम दे देता हैं तो फिर बड़बोले की तरह आ जातें है हमें क्यूं नहीं कहा हम हीं कर देते

जब ऐसा था तों चार साल क्या कोकीन के नशें में थें या ब्राउन शुगर के

साला काम हीं खत्म हो गया फूंको फिर जों फूंकना हों
😄😄
Kaam khtam hone ke baad uska credit lene walo ki line bahut lambhi hoti hai.
Is isme to mai bhi kuch nahi kar skta bhai.
 

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UPDATE NO - 110 tomorrow 6PM par upload karunga.
 
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