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Itachi_Uchiha

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Mind blowing superb update bro Jabardast lajvab sandar

Ajay ki MA ne rider ki problem ko samjha or use glani se mukt kar diya maaf karke or sahi mayno me yahi mayne rakhta hai baki sab to bas bate karte rahte hai...
Bikul sahi kaha bhai aapne.
Aapne yha alag alag logo ke mnobhavo ko dikhaya hai jo ki aisi situation me Bilkul satik lag rhe hai...
Fir bhi mujhe laga kuch log baki rah gaye.
Sachin ne rider ke sir niche kiye hone pr jo kaha hai Vo bhi tarif ke kabil hai...
Raider ko iski jarurat thi.
Ye Adam rider ko apni guild ka vice master ke pass yah kahkr laya hai ki unke pass ek aisa hunter hai Jo dusro ki ability ko copy karke kisi or bande ke andar transfer kr sakta hai, ab ye dekhna mazedar hone vala hai ki rider ki ability ko copy karte time uska system us effect ko niskriya kr deta hai Ya nhi kyoki rider ka system most advanced or unique hai jo rider ko protect karta hai or Pahle se agah karta hai, ab dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...
Copy nahi karta balki apne power se aur bhi increase kar deta hai.
Superb bhai lajvab amazing Jabardast

Akhir Maine rider se puchh hi liya ki kya usne hi zeju island pe sabko behosh kiya tha ya kuchh aur hi baat hai, rider ke mna karne pr ab dusri possibility pr dhyan denge vahi ye kon
Ha ab ye to aap ka hi kaam hai.
important guest samay se pahle hi aa gya jisko attand krne mujhe Jana pad gya...
Nahi iska story me koi role nahi hai.
Us Adam ne akhir Kon si file rider ke samne rakhi hai, kya vo uske papa ALOK nath ki hai ya fir kisi or ki, salo ne jyada kuchh btaya nhi or sidha American citizenship ka offer Pahle thop rhe hai, Ayaat abhi bhi rider se najre jhuka kr yha vha dekhne lag jati hai vahi ye ability copy karne vali bhi koi ladki hi lag rhi hai, Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage... Superb bhai
Nahi us file me rider ke USA jane ke sare paper aur contract ke paper the.

Jb maine title padha to mujhe lga ki Sayad ye rider ka vo man hai jo sahi or galat ka bodh karata hai rider ko pr yha ye update padh kr to mai amaze ho gya sala rider ke dimag me jo uska antarman baitha hai vo ek Raja hai or uski koi limite hi nhi hai growth ki or jo khud hi unlimited ho uska Kon limite exceed kr sakta hai...
Bilkul sahi kaha.
Ab unlimited se aage kya hoga vo, ye Michael ki to sari ummido pr pani fer diya rider ke antarman ne or vahi rider ke antarman ko dekh kr Selner ki to dar ke mare fat ke 4 ho gyi hai, pasina hi chhod diya hai or abhi tk nikale hi ja rhi hai...
Ab wo lifetime hi darti rahegi rider se. :lol1:
Mind blowing jabarjast superb update bhai amazing fantastic Wao!
Aapka dil se sukriya sabhi bhai itne beautiful reviews ke liye.
Keep supporting ☺️👍

Major problem resolved.
Now if his mom knows what he is, he won't need to hide himself.
Absolutely right 😊
N now about this arc It was a very much thrilling journey. Now expectations have been gone to sky for the upcoming arc.
Nd I try my best to fulfill all of your expectations.
All the best for the upcoming arc. Let's see what ur creativity shows us. Thank you
N congrats.
Thank you so much for this encouragement Ashishsingg bhai.
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END OF THIS ARC




Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise Adam mujhe ek hotal me le kar jata hai jaha meri mulakat USA huntur association ke deputy cheif Micheal se hoti hai. Aur fir wo mujhe Mrs. Norma Selner se milwate hai. Aur wo mujhe batatai hai ki wo 30 percent ability ko increase kar skti hai. Uske baad wo mujhe iske 1st step ke liye mana kar mera hath pakad ke mere aakho me dekhne lagti hai. Aur fir mere man me mai ulta hi Mrs. Selner ko ghur kar dekhne lgta hu. Jisase wo bahut jyada dar jati hai. Uske baad mai waha se nikal jata hu. Aur Mrs Selner baki subko mere bare me bahut jyada darte hue batati hai ki mai ek King hu.



AB AAGE.....


EVENING TIME
HUNTUR ASSOCIATION BUILDING, DELHI



Saam ka time tha, Suraj bas kuch hi der me dubne hi wala tha. Aur is time Chairman XAbhi apne cabin me bikul akele the. Aur apne chair par baithe hue the. Is time wo bahut hi paresan dikh rahe the. Unhone apni aakhe band krke apne hatho se apna sir pakde hue the.

Xabhi ek lambi saas lete hue " Haa..... "
( Dukhi man se ) " Hmne Huntur Ajay ko kho diya. "
" Nahi, wo retired ho gaya tha to ab hum use huntur nahi bula skte hai. "
" Ye ek noble sacrifice hai. Isiliye is Raid ko aise khtam hone ke karan mera dil hi tut gaya hai. Mujhe bahut hi bura lag raha hai. "
" Aur ab yaha aage aur bhi kai obstacle aane baki hai. "
" Aur jab wo samne aayenge wo kewal ek hi sacrifice se khtam nahi honge. "


TRINN..... TRINN.....

Tabhi Chairman Xabhi ke smartphone ring hone lagta hai. Aur wo apne phone utha kar call recive karte hai.
Samne wala kuch kahta hai. Jise sun kar Chairmen Xabhi thode shocked ke sath kahte hai " Kya ? "
" Waha bich rode par ek B Rank Gate open hua hai ? "

Ye sunte hi samne wala kuch kahta hai. Aur Sabhi apne man me sochne lagta hai ' Agar ye ek B Rank DENGEON hai to, koi Average Attack force isko bikul bhi nahi sambhal skta hai. '

Ye sochne ke baad Xabhi phone par kahte hai " Mai abhi turant hi ek big Guild ko contact karta hu. "

Tabhi Xabhi ko kuch yaad aata hai aur wo kahte hai " Ruko, us jagah ki location kya hai ? "

Fir dusre side ek jaha DENGEON open hua hota hai uski location batayi jati hai. Aur location ka name sunte hi xabhi kahte hai " Kya Huntur Rider ne usi ilake me apna new office nahi khola hai ? "



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SAME LOCATION
ON TRAFFIC


Mai thik usi rode par jaha DENGEON open hua tha usase kuch duri par apne car me bitha hua idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Quki yaha abhi traffic jam laga hua tha. Aur uska karan mujhe bilkul bhi nahi pata tha. Mai to in sub bato se bekhabar draving sheet par bitha alag hi soch me ghum tha.

Mai apne man me ' Unhone definitely kuch na kuch dekha tha. '
' Lakin unhone dekha kya tha ? '
' Kya unhone System ke koi trace dekha tha ? '
( Mrs. Selner ka dara hua face yaad karte hue ) ' Wo kis chij se itna jyada dar gayi thi ? '
Unki aakhe dehsat aur khuff se bhari hui thi. To mujhe to nahi lagta hai ki wo wapas se dubara kabhi mujhse milengi. '
( Window se Bahar ki taraf jakh kar dekhte hue halke narajgi se ) " Is Traffic ko bhi pata nahi kya ho gaya hai ? "
" Isase acha to mai subway wale raste se yaha aa jata. "


TRINN.... TRINN.....

Tabhi car ke ander phone stand me rakha hua mera phone ring karne lagta hai. Chairman Xabhi ka call tha. Mai phone ko answer karke speekar par daal deta hu.

Xabhi " Mr. Huntur mai Chairman Xabhi bol raha hu. "

Mai " Ha mai janta hu, kya koi problem hai ? "

Fir Xabhi mujhe appear hue Gate ke bare me batate hai aur mai halke shock ke sath confirm karne ke liye kahta hu " Kya ? Bich rode per ek Gate open ho gaya hai ? "
( Apne man me ) ' tabhi mai sochu ki aaj ye traffic kyu hai yaha . '

Xabhi " Aisa lagta hai Wo ek B Rank Gate hai. Kya tum use sambhal skte ho ? "

Mai " Bina permission ke ? "


Hahahhah......

Ye sun kar Xabhi haste hue kahte hai " Mr. Huntur aapko permission kaha se milti hai ? "

Mai " Huntur Association se. "

Xabhi ek smile ke sath " Aur mai kon hu ? "

Mai ye sun kar kud par sharminda hote hue kahta hu " Aap waha ke chairmen ho. "


Hahahaha.....

Xabhi wapas se haste hue " To tmhe fikar karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. "

Mai " To aapka bahut bahut sukriya iske.... "
" Nahi mera Matlab tha Thank you. "

Uske baad bas kuch hi min me jaha Gate open hua tha uske samne pahuch cuka tha. Waha samne such me ek bahut bada Gate tha jisko charo taraf se huntur association ke logo ne restricted karke rakha hua tha.
Bahut sare Reporters bhi waha ab tak aa cuke the. Aur wo waha ki Reporting karna suru kar cuke the.

Reporters " Abhi jo TV screen par aap gate dekh rahe hai. Wo gate Greater Noida ke highway ke paas me appear hua hai.

Huntur Association ke members logo ko waha se duri bana kar rakhne ko kahte hue " Sare log please aap log yaha se duri banaye rakhiye. "
" Aur rules ko follow kariye. "


Tap.... Tap.... Tap....

Wahi mai jo ab tak waha pahuch cuka tha, mai bina kisi ki taraf dhyan diye waha se gate ke taraf jane lagta hu. Tabhi Huntur Association ki ek female member jisne chasma lagaya hua tha wo apne official uniform me mere samne aate hue gusse se kahti hai " Hey ! Ek minute ruk jao. "
" Tum bina permission ke yaha ander nahi aa skte ho. "

Ab tak wo mere paas aa cuki thi. Aur mera face dekhte hi sayad wo mujhe pehchan leti hai aur shocked ke sath kahti hai " Huh... Huh ? "
" S...S Rank huntur R....Rider !? "

Ab tak waha Traffic ke karan waha jama log bhi mujhe dekh lete hai aur sare logo excitement ke sath chilla kar kahne lagte hai.

" Are ye to Rider hai. "

" Aisa lagta hai Rider yaha is Gate ko sambhalne ke liye aaya hua hai. "

" Ab jabki Rider yaha aa gaya hai to ab hame fikar karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. "

" Wow, ye kitna handsome hai ? Kaas ye mera bf ban jaye. "

Reporters " Jaisa ki aap sub dekh skte hai yaha Huntur Rider aa cuke hai. Ab hme fikar karne ki koi bhi jarurat nahi hai. "

Jabki yaha ye female member abhi bhi halke gusse me mujhse kahti hai " T...tum yaha kaise aa gaye ? "
" bhle hi tum ek S Rank huntur ho. Lakin fir bhi hum tumhe process ko ignore karne nahi de skte hai. "
" Kya tumhe permission mila hai ? "
" Aur agar tumhare paas permission hua tab bhi hum tumhe gate ke ander nahi jane de skte hai, jab tak ki tumhare paas ander jane ke liye paryapt log nahi ho jate hai. "

Mai ye sub sun kr apne man me sochta hu ' Ye to kuch alag hi kah rahi hai. '

Aur fir mai bina usko koi reply diye Chairman Xabhi ko call laga deta hu. Aur jaise hi wo phone recive karte hai mai kahta hu " Well... Mai yaha phuche to gaya hu. Lakin mujhe lagta hai yaha ek problem hai. "

Itna kah kar mai apna phone us chasmis female member ki taraf badhate hue kahta hu " Lo pakdo. Aur baat karo. "

Ye sun kar wo Female member dar jati hai aur haklate hue kahti hai " K...kon hai ye ? "

Mai " Koi aisa jise tum na nahi kah sakti. "

Tab tak phone jo ki speekar par tha waha se chairman Xabhi bol padte hai " Mai chairman bol raha hu. "

Aur wo female member Cahirman ki aawaj turant pehchan jati hai. Aur turant hi phone ko pakad ke mere se thodi dur ja kar apna sir hilate hue dar dar kr baat karne lagti hai.

Female member " Ji ! Ji ! "
" Ji ! Ji ! Sir mai bikul waisa hi karungi jaisa aapne kaha hai. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Ye sunte hi mai aage Gate ki taraf jate hue kahta hu " Mai ab ander ja raha hu. "

Ye sunte hi wo female member bhi jldi se phone rakh kar mere taraf dekhne lagti hai. Lakin mai ab tak Gate se ander enter kar chuka tha.
Ye dekh kr wo female member apne man me gusse me kahti hai ' hump! Kaas wo kud se waha ander kud se gir jaye aur uske ek pair tut jaye. '

Tabhi baki sare huntur association ke members bahut jyada shocked ke sath Gate ki taraf dekhte hue dar ke sath kahne lagte hai

" Ye.... Ye kya ? "

" Ye Gate to.... "

" Is Gate ka color to change ho raha hai. "


BUZZZZZZ....... BUZZZZZZ........

Such me Gate Ka color blue se change ho kar red hone lagta hai. Aur ye dekh kr sare hi log bahut jyada shocked ho jate hai.

Wo female member bahut jyada shocked ke sath apna muh khole " Red gate.... "
( Apne man me ) ' Kya aisa is liye hue, quki mai uske hurt hone ke liye prathna kar rahi thi ? '



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INSIDE THE RED GATE


Wahi mai ab tak Gate ke ander aa cuka tha. Ye koi jangal type ka DENGEON tha. Aur mere ander aate hi gate lock ho jata hai. Aur mere taraf se Gate gayab ho jata hai. Aur yaha abhi kafi tej barish ho rahi thi. Mai abhi bhi santi se apni jagah khada rahta hu. Aur Mai ye sub dekh kar kud se kahta hu " Aisa lag raha hai ye ek Red Gate hai. "

Piche mud kar dekhte hue " Exit bhi band ho chuka hai. " Mujhe ab kud par kuch jyada hi depend hona padega. "

Tabhi kud par depend hone ki baat se mujhe kuch yaad aane lagta hai.


JEJU island ke Raid ke baad jab mai ghar wapas aata hu to uske agle din meri mom ke sath baat hoti hai. Quki meri mom ko bhi pata chal chuka tha ki mai ek huntur hu. Aur koi mamuli huntur nahi ek S Rank huntur. Jisne JEJU island raid ko clear kiya hai.


Mom us time kitchen me saaf kiye hue bartan ek dry kapde se saaf kar rahi thi.

Mom " Hum awakning ke sath kuch nahi kar skte hai. "
" Aur usase bhi jyada Ab jabki tum ek S Rank huntur ho to tumhe bahut si jaane bhi bachani padegi. "
" Jaise ki tmhare papa karte the. "
( Kuch yaad karke ek bahut hi pyari smile ke sath ) " Jb wo Huntur nahi bane the to wo ek firefighter the. "
" Aur jab maine unko logo ko bachate hue dekha tabhi mai unse pyar kar baithi thi. "
" Lakin mai kya kar skti hu. Jab tum bhi unke hi bete ho to. "
" Lakin apne aap par iske karan bahut jyada pressure mat dalna. "

" Thik hai na ? "

Meri mom ne mujhse bas itna hi kaha tha. Aur ye sun kar maine ek bahut badi rahat ki saas li thi.

Mai mom ki baat ko yaad karke kud se smile krte hue kahta hu " Ye jaan kar mujhe bahut santi mili ki mom iske khilaf nahi hai. "


DHUMM.... DHUMM....
TAP.... TAP.... TAP.....


Tabhi waha par bahut sare Monsters mere samne jangal me se nikal kar aane lagte hai. Jinme se kai sare Monsters elephant se bhi size me 10 times jyada bade the. Aur wo to mere taraf aate hue apne raste me aa rahe bade bade majboot tree ko bhi kisi kamjor lakdi ke tukdo ki tarah todte, kuchalte hue aage aa rahe tha.
Unke face bahut hi bada aur ajib sa tha. Unhone apne sirf face par lakdi ke bane hue bade bade mask lagaye hue the. Unki aakhe bilkul red color ki thi. Meri height ke equal to unke sirf daat hi the.
Un bade Monsters ke alawa aur bhi bahut sare chote Monsters jangale ke bich se nikalte hue mere samne aa rahe the.

Un sub ko dekhte hue mai santi se kahta hu " Ye sub mere liye bhut jyada nhi hai. "
" Mai to inhe yaha ke time ke hisab se ek din me hi khtam kar skta hu. "

Bas itna kah kar mai apne sare Shadow Soldiers ko bula leta hu. Aur mere bulate hi sare aa kar mere piche kade ho jate hai.
Mere right side me IGRIS Aur IRON khade the to wahi left side me BERU aur TANK khade the. Aur mere piche TUSK khada tha.

Fir mai un Monsters ki taraf dekhte hue kahta hu " Sbko jldi se khtam kar do. "


Run.... Run.....

ROARRRR...... ROARRRR.......
SWOSSSSSS..... SWOSSSSSS.....

Aur uske baad mere sare shadow Soldiers un Monsters ke upar bhagte hue, ant's fly karte hue tut padte hai. Aur badi hi teji se ek ek karke Sbko khtam karne lagte hai.

Buzzzz.....
BOOM.... BOOM....


Shadow Magicians apne spell se fire ke gole bana kr Monsters ke upar dhmaka karke unko jala kar maar rahe hote hai.

SWOSSSSSS.....
SLASHHH.....


IGRIS jump karte hue bade bade Monsters ke ander apne sword se kai sare jaanlewa ghaaw de kar baad me unke sir me apne sword ko pura ghusa kar khtam kar raha tha. Jiske baad waha bas un Monsters ka Green blood aur Mari kati hui body rah jati hai.

ROARRRR......
SWOSSSSSS.......


IRON bhi apne aawaj se Monsters ko Lalkaar kar unke upar apne bade axe se Attack karke unko badi aasani se maar raha tha.

BOOMMM..... BOOMMM......

TUSK bhi apne hath me ORB pakd kr apne spells se un Monsters par kahar ban kar tut pada tha. Wo jaha se gujarta waha par sirf jalti jamin aur jali hui Monsters ki body padi rahti thi.

Aur BERU to in sub se akdam alag tha. Wo to bahut hi speed se Monsters ko mar raha tha. Aur abhi bas fight start hue kuch hi minutes hue the. Lakin wo 50+ monsters ke laso ke upar khada apne dono hatho ko faila kar baki Monsters ko cillate hue lalkar raha tha.

Jabki mai abhi bhi apni jagah par santi se khada in sub ko fight karte hue dekh raha tha. Aur apne man me soch raha tha ' Ek huntur ka janam hi hunt karne ke liye hota hai. '
' Monsters hi sirf ek lauta Enemy nahi hai kisi huntur ka. '
' Hunturs logo ko bahut hi careful rahne ki jarurat hai.taki koi aur uska sikhar na kar sake. Warna unka kud koi aur sikar kar skta hai. '
' ek huntur aur uske hunt ki position kabhi bhi badal sakti hai. '
' Isiliye 1st grade ke hunturs log apne guards ko kabhi bhi down nahi kar skte hai. '
' Bhle hi yaha Hundreds ho ya Thousands se bhi jyada hunts ho. '
' Hunt kabhi bhi khtam nahi ho skta hai. '
' Aur na hi mai Ruk skta hu. '

Jab tak mai ye sub soch raha tha. Tab tak mere sare Shadow Soldiers ne yaha ke sare Monsters ko khtam kar diya tha.
Aur ye dekh kr mai style se apne pocket me hath dale aage jane lagta hu. Aur mere sare Shadow Soldiers mere dono side mere ko respect dete hue khade ho kar apne ek ghutne par baith kar mere liye rasta saaf karne lagte hai.

Mai aage badte hue apne tie ko loose karte hue kahta hu " Chlo hum hmare next target ko taraf chlte hai. "
" Jo hme hunt karne se rokna chahata hai. "

Jaha mai in sub me busy tha. Wahi meri MAA aur choti behan in sub bato se bekhbar Kavya big bajar me shopping kar rahi thi.
Kavya unko ek meat ka packet dikha rahi thi aur use lene ka jidd kar rahi thi. Aur usko aise baccho ki tarah jidd karta dekh kar kafi jor jor se has rahi thi.
Baki sare S Rank hunturs bhi apne apne office me apne normal kaamo me busy the. Aur Aayat, Rahul se sword chalana sikhane ki practice kar rahi thi.















[ NOTE :- Aaj isi update ke sath hi Meri story ke sbse bade is 1st ARC ka end hota hai. Ab next update se story ne new ARC SHADOW MONARCH ki suruaat hogi. Jisme maine aapko phle hi apne ek post me bata diya tha ki kya kya ho skta hai. ]
Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Shandaar
jaandaar
awesome update....
rider ke office ke area mai new dungeon ka open hona ye co incidence nahi ho sakta h definetly jarur kisi ne kiya h chahe wo system ho ya koyi aur ya definitely koyi reason hoga aur yakin isliye ho raha kyoki ......green se red ho gaya gate andar jate he ye toh clue he h but rider toh thahra rider usai kanha fark padna h...wo toh kudh gaya h andar aur ek maje ki baat ....matlb rider ko wo ladki andar jane se rok rahi thi had h yaar ...sala wo black ant aisi taisi kar deti tab kya hota india ka sare hunters ki maut ho jati tab ....by god is story ke original writer ko ek lagane ka man karta h ki hero jisne india ke S rank hunters ko bachaya usai koyi bi fuddu rok dega jaise rider toh bc honeymoon manane ja raha h dengeon mai what the fuck......
but koyi na rider ka beru aur team gajab he dha raha the really awesome update specially uski mother ne bahut he acha support kiya .....wo bakhubi samajti h ki hunters ki kya liability hoti h aur wo bakhubi is baat ko samaj bhi rahi h isliye jayda pressure lene se mana kiya........
 

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Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Tow yeh arc khatam huwa ab agle arc ki baari h jab yeh Arc hi itna jaberdast itna sab kuch dekhne or padhne ko mila agla Arc ki baat hi alag hogi
Bilkul ye naya arc phle arc se 100 times jyada better hoga.
Yeh gate khula beech raste m ise koyi or jagah nahi mili
Ab DENGEON hai bhai ye jagah dekh kar thodi open hote hai.
Baharhal shadow Army n kaher dha dia saare monster per aise kaat rehe thai jaise gajer muli
Zaberdast
Ab wo trained ho cuke hai na.
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Bahot khoob shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Aapka bahut bahut sukriya Naik bhai itne beautiful review ke liye.
Keep supporting ☺️👍
Wooowwww yrrr nice update.

Rider bhi soch rha hai k Mrs.Selner n kya dekh liya jis se woh itnii darrr gyiii.
kahin usse system k baare m to kuch pataa nhi chal gaya .
Sochega hi aakhir waha hua hi aisa sub kuch.
Wahin Xabhi pareshan hain dukhi hain k Ajay ab nhi rha .
or unka ye shubaaa bhi hai k aage bhi aisa ho sakta hai k kisi Hunter ko apni qurbaani deni pade.
Ha Quki world bahut change ho raha hai.
Ab ye beech road k ek Denguen khula hai .
Apna Rider bhi wahin paas m hai or Chairman XABHI n usse call kr k wahan jaane ka bola hai.
Rider bhi wahan gaya pr ye Female officer to gusse wali nili Rider k charm pr phislii hi nhi.
Rider n bhi Xabhi se baat krwa di or chala gaya andar.
Ab sub ek jaise nahi hote hai na.
Female officer n to shi se badduaa dii hai Rider ko lekin baad m usko bhi afsos hone lagaa k usne kahin kuch galat to nhi bol diya kyun k Denguen blue se Red ho gaya hai.
Kahte hai na 24 hour me ek baar saraswati hmare juban par baithati hai. Ye wahi time tha. A
apna Rider bhi andar apne soldiers ki help se fight kr rha hai or pehle aane wale sabhi monsters ko maaar diya hai.
To ye tha hamare firs Arc ka end .
Ha ab kabhi na kabhi to end hona hi tha.
waiting for the next Arc to start.
Indirectly waiting for the next update 😁.
Ha bhai aaj hi aayega raat me.
Aapka bahut bahut sukriya LionHeart007 bhai is beautiful review ke liye.
Keep supporting ☺️👍
Hahahaha 🤣 yehi shi hai .
or apne ko bhi koi shoq nhi hai Itachi_Uchiha . To apne ko bhi nhi banne kaa samjhe kya.
Thik hai jaisa aap kaho bhai
Heroine :roflol:,Dekh raha hai n Vinod :lol:
Waise quality to hai :akshay:
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Hasne jaisa kuch nahi tha usme😑 . Ab kya heroine bhi nahi bn skti🙂. Marriage officers se toh badhiya hai😩☹️
Ha ha kyu nahi.
 

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Nice update Bhai
Aapka sukriya Ajay bhai.
Keep supporting ☺️👍
Nice update bro keep updating the post
Aapka sukriya అరుణ్ కుమార్ bhai.
Keep supporting ☺️👍
Bro what r u starting new thread are what if u started new thread post it's link here
Nahi bhai yahi post krunga next ARC same tread me post hoti hai. Next season hota to new tread open karta bhai.
Nice update bro
Aapka sukriya Jasdil bhai.
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Nice update
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Awesome👍👏, mind blowing:flamethrower::party::party::yourock::yourock:
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Awesome fabulous update Bhai
Aapka sukriya Skul bhai.
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Nice one yaar
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Zabardast update
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Toh kya hua mere real name Adya kitna suit krta hai herione pr🥰
Ab to sochna hi padega Lady Bug🥀 ji, name to such me kafi acha hai.
🙂 Mai 2 chla lungi 😂🤣
Ye mai kya sun raha hu :freak:
😂🤣😂 Huh.. nahi ye aunty logo ka hota hai shadi lgana aur ye sab krna🙂. Apun in sab se dur rahi hai
Bahut Knowledge hai is bare me.
Ap to chala logi pr Rider se bhi to pooch lo k usko krna hai ya nhi ?
Ye baat bhi bikul sahi hai aakhir heroine milegi to use hi.
Naah ji naah mai nahi puchungi pta chle friend zone kr diya toh 🙃
Itne update me Rider ko janane ke baad bhi abhi tak aapki soch yahi hai ? Such me ? :confused3::rolleyes:
 

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प्रणाम भाई सहाब 🙏
जेजु दीप की रेड के अंत में जो दो लोग अनजान रहस्मय तरीके से आए थे
क्या वो भी किसी तरह के मोनार्च थे 🙄
Abhi to mai bhi nahi janta hu sayad aaj kuch pata chal jaye is bare me.
Baki Aapka sukriya Sk. bhai.
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Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai....
Waiting for new ARC
Aapka sukriya sorbobhuk bhai.
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Superb update bro waiting for the next update

My 1st story
Rudra (adventure story)
please read if you like then support and you dont like then please tell me where is my mistake
Aapka sukriya VAJRADHIKARI bhai.
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Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki system khud Rider ko aisi jagah le jaata hai jahan uske liye pahle se hi koi mission ready ho.
Kah skte hai aap ya kismat hi aisi hai apne rider ki aisi.
Kahin aisa to nahi ki is Dengeon ke peeche Sandy ka haath ho Rider ko maarne ke liye.
Nahi nahi aisa bilkul nahi hai. human inme kuch nahi kar skte hai.
Ye ladki kon thi jo Rider se nafrat karti hai aur uske chot lagne ki wish karti hai.
Bas aise hi side charector thi.
Ab dekhna hoga ki aage kya missions milte hai Rider ko yahan. Bahut hi sunder update
Ha next mission bahut hi bawal hone wala hai. Jiske bare me jaan kar aap sub ko shocked lagega.
Aapka bahut bahut sukriya Lib am bhai.
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Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Aapka sukriya The king bhai.
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fantastic update bro
Aapka sukriya ckkhandu bhai.
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My 1st story

please read if you like then support and you dont like then please tell me where is my mistake
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Rudra (adventure story)
Wakt milte hi dekhta hu bhai.
nice update. ek b rank gate ko clear karne ke liye kaha xabhi ne rider ko par ander jaate hi wo gate badal gaya .
wo ladki to shocked ho gayi ye sochkar ki uski baddua kaam kar gayi jo usne rider ko di thi 🤣.
Kahte hai na 24 hour me ek baar saraswati baithati hai juban par ye wahi time tha.
ek baat achchi huyi rider ke saath ki uski maa ne samjha usko aur hunter hone se bhi koi pareshani nahi balki wo khush hai ki uska beta apne baap ki tarah logo ki jaan bachata hai 😍😍.
Quki wo jaanti hai Ye ek bahut badi jimmedari hai.
gate ke ander saare soldiers keher banke toot pade monsters par aur jald hi result aa gaya monsters ka khatma ho gaya .
Sare nahi hue hai. Ya lakin yaha aaye hue sare khtam ho gaye hai.
Aapka bahut sukriya DARK WOLFKING bhai itne beautiful review ke liye.
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Ek B - rank gate Jisme ghuste hi vo red gate me badal gya hai or andar rider ko hathi se 3 guna bade monster mil rhe hai hunt karne ke liye...
Aakhir red Gaye jo hai.
Rider ki shadow army kafi powerful hai usne abhi sab samhal liya hai pr Dekhte hai aage kya kya dekhne milta hai is dungan me rider ko or kya janne milta hai apne system ko lekr...
Isi baat ka mujhe bhi wait hai.
Rider ko maine hi bheja hai us B-rank gate me jo ab red gate me badal gya hai, pta nhi kya hoga jb pta chalega mujhe yah sab, Vaise to vo moniter department se aayi ladki apna kaam Bahut hi umdha tarike se kr rhi thi, Usne ek S-rank hunter ko rokne ki Kosis ki, mujhe lagta hai aise or bhi log honge chahiye jo assosition ke law ko lagu karva sake kyoki Jaise halat ab banne vali hai usko dekh kr Lagta hai unki Bahut jarurat padne vali hai...
Ha aapne bikul sahi kaha. Sare logo ko wo galt lagi lakin usne Bikul sahi tarike se apna kaam kiya. Jo ki sirf aap hi smjha paye.
Rider ne apni ma ko sari sacchai bta diya hai ki Vo ek S-rank hunter hai or uski ma ne use khud pr easy rahne ka kaha hai, pr sabhi jante hai rider ki kismat me easy hone ka chance hi nhi hai...
Ab S Rank huntur kaise easy ho skta hai.
Kavya or uski ma abhi shopping mall me meat or other shopping kr rhi hai yha apna hero ek red gate pr pahuch chuka hai, kya hoga jb Uski ma vo news sunegi...
Fikar karengi. Aur sath me dua bhi.
Rider ke mind me us mahila ne black black Bahut dekha tha, kya vo negativity ko show karta tha ya vo sirf apne rider ki power hi thi, kyoki jab se rider growth karne lga hai tbse Usne sabse jyada black energy hi absorb ki hai, Yadi Vo negativity ko show karta hai Tbto gadbad ho jayegi...
Ab iska raj to is arc ke end me hi pata chlega.
Akhir aisa kya hua tha jo Mai apne office me nirash baitha hua tha, kya ye us Samay se pahle aaye guest ki vajah se tha ya fir zeju island pe hunters ke behosh hone ki vajah se...
Ajay aur baki logo ke marne se hai.
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing New Arc suru ho rha hai, Chalo Dekhte hai kya kya janne milta hai hame aage...
Bahut se raj open hoge waha.
Aapka bahut bahut sukriya Xabhi bhai itne beautiful review ke liye.
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Shandaar
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awesome update....
rider ke office ke area mai new dungeon ka open hona ye co incidence nahi ho sakta h definetly jarur kisi ne kiya h chahe wo system ho ya koyi aur ya definitely koyi reason hoga aur yakin isliye ho raha kyoki ......green se red ho gaya gate andar jate he ye toh clue he h but rider toh thahra rider usai kanha fark padna h...
Kya pata ye bas kismat ki hi baat ho.
wo toh kudh gaya h andar aur ek maje ki baat ....matlb rider ko wo ladki andar jane se rok rahi thi had h yaar ...sala wo black ant aisi taisi kar deti tab kya hota india ka sare hunters ki maut ho jati tab ....by god is story ke original writer ko ek lagane ka man karta h ki hero jisne india ke S rank hunters ko bachaya usai koyi bi fuddu rok dega jaise rider toh bc honeymoon manane ja raha h dengeon mai what the fuck......
Na bhai wo bas apna kaam kar rahi thi. Jo ki bahut hi kam log karte hai sahi tarike se.
but koyi na rider ka beru aur team gajab he dha raha the really awesome update
Ab sub Shadow trained ho cuke hai.
specially uski mother ne bahut he acha support kiya .....wo bakhubi samajti h ki hunters ki kya liability hoti h aur wo bakhubi is baat ko samaj bhi rahi h isliye jayda pressure lene se mana kiya........
Wo janti hai ki S Rank huntur hona ek jimmedari hai.
Aapka dil se sukriya Sandeep singh nirwan bhai itne beautiful review ke liye.
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