UPDATE NO - 148(B) post kar diya hai dosto.
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Intezaar rahega bhaiUPDATED NO - 114 will be posted tomorrow at 6PM.
Tab tak ke liye apna pyar aur support banaye rakhiye.
Ha ab itna Intelligence increase ho gayi hai to ab next LEVEL ka hi sochega na apna hero.Rider ab apni powers ke saath experiment bhi karne laga hai joiki achcha hai apni powers next level le jaane ke liye.
Ye baat to bikul sahi kaha.Aayat sach mein Rider ko pyar karne lagi hai
Ab ye to aaj hi pata chlega.aur isiliye uske challenge ko bina shart accept kar liye aur Igris ko hara bhi diya magar kya wo Beru ko ladai mein Hara payegi yaa nahi? Superb update
Ye to gussa kha kar hi manega.Waise ghus ka to pta nhi khyaaal rkho kahin ghusaa na pad jaye.
Ab lover's ke bich kisi aur ko nahi aana cahiye.Chairman ko fight dekhna chahiye tha only him ….
Sayad aap sahi ho.Aayat strong hai lekin abhi thodi weak hai isliye Rider ko shayad rokna pade fight ko bich mein.
Isi Arc me milan hoga lakin abhi nahi hoga. Thode time baad jb sbse jaruri hoga tabhi milege dono.baap bete ka milan kab tak hone ki ummid hai
Aapka bahut bahut sukriya F@ckYouBitch bhai aapke itne beautiful review ke liye.Bahut hi achi story hai bro....... Bahut hi acha likhte ho tum. Next update plzz....
Jarur time milte hi read krunga bhai.Aur mein v ek story likh raha hoon jiska link neeche diya gya hai. Plzz guys use v ik chance de.
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Abhi bahut kuch hona baki hai bhai.Outstanding update bhai maza aa gaya ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai.
Aapka sukriya arish8299 bhai.Wah bahut sundar update
Aapka sukriya @09vk bhai.Nice update
Ha apna hero ka experiment kaam kar gaya. Abhi to aise bahut se chije hongi.romanchak update .aayat ke saath apne aap ko ek jagah se dusri jagah transfer kar diya rider ne aur uska kaam bhi ban gaya ek saath 2 logo ko transfer karne ka .
Haa Shubham ki jagah aur koi hota to wo pakka behos hi ho jata.shubham ko to jhatka hi lag gaya jab usne dekha ki dono shadow se kahi jaa rahe hai aur unki jagah high orc aa gaya jusne shubham ki mithai kha li .
Bilkul sahi kaha.xabhi ne dekh liya dono ko gym me aur saare cameras band karne ka order de diya .xabhi samajh chuka hai ki aayat pyar karti hai rider se .
Aakhir usne bhi to rider par puri research ki thi.aayat ne aasani se hara diya IGris ko par usko pata hai wo rider ka sabse best shadow nahi hai ,aur ab rider ne BEru ko summon kiya hai jo aajtak ka sabse best shadow hai .
Aaj pata chal jayega.dekhte hai kya aayat BEru ko takkar de pati hai ya nahi .
Bilkul apni Aayat bahut strong hai.Achaa update raha bhai.
Aayat nai igris ko hara diya matlab chori rider ki takkar ki hai..
Ha aaj pata chal hi jayega.Ab dekhte hai beru ke sath uska test kaisa jata hai...
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Jarur bhai.Aise he likhte raho bhai.............
Wahhh wahhh kya baat !humko maar sake aisa jamane me dum nhi.....jamana humse hai,jamane se hum nhi
Haa haa bade aaye gyaan dene wale
Aapka sukriya Yamraj@ bhai.Mast update bhai
Waise mera ek sawal hai bandu aasa karta hun aap uska jawab doge apne ek update mai rider ke father mai disclose kiya tha sawal ye hai ki rider ke father kis age mai the I mean s hunter abhi ke generation ke ya chairmain ke generation ke
Aisa to hota hai hai bhai.Fantastic update
Pyar pyar ka imhtehan le raha hai
Ab dekhna pyar kya rang Lata hai
Wahhh kya baat kahi hai Rohit1988 bhai manana padega.Kisi ko pyar samajh nahi aata to kisi ko pyar kabhi mil nahi pata dekhna hai kiske Nasib me ye pyar likha hai..... dil to dil Manta nahi is pyar ko samjhta nahi is pyar ko
Ha is Arc me bahut hi jayada maja aayega.Bhai pichle Updates ka to mai ek hi scenes par jikr Krna chahunga wo tha jitne bhi wo aayat ke sath scenes wo bohot jyada intresting mod le aaya story me yaar bohot jabardast scenes ab aayenge iss new arc me jo ki sayad ab mysterious people's ke karan bhi ho sakta hai.
Ise likhne me such me mujhe bhi bahut mushkil ka samana karna pada. Maine apne ek scene ko likhne ke baad use kud read karke dekhta hu ki padhne me sahi lag raha hai ki nahi ?Well ab aata hu tere unn suspence ke create krne ke style par jo bohot amazing laga khaskar unn wo budha fatachita jo uss dengeon me enter krte hi rider ke sapne me jo scenes create hue the lekin mereko to nhi lagta ki ye jo sabkuch rider ke sapne me yaa kaho to jo hua wo sirf ek sapna hi tha kyuki ye kahi se bhi wo iconic situation kisi tarah se bhi sapne ka to mod bilkul bhi nhi lesakta.....ho sakta hai ye Rider ki ye future destiny place ho I mean jo future me hone wala koi mystery situation ho jo sayad usne apne sapne me dekha khair iss mamle me to mai kya koi bhi sure nhi ho sakta but really iss scene ko jis tarah se ju ne likha tha wo bohot hi kabile taarif tha.
Tabhi to ye gild name nahi rakh raha hu.Ab aate guild ke name rakhne par to Rider ka guild name kya galti tha yaar kuch to nhi Kitta acha name hai SOLO PLAY guild ahemm-ahemm haa thoda bacho ke play school wala lag raha tha ....khair mai iss scene ko bohot enjoy kiya tha yaar 2-3 baar padha tha maine iss scene ko bhale ye common funny sa scene tha but yaar literally meko bohot majedar laga ye scene.
Aisa her badi company me hota hai. Lakin ab pyar ho gaya to kya kr skte hai ?Ab aate hai Aayat par jiske man me ladu is futing ...... akhirkar aahi gayi Rider ke pass.Khair gulid me join hona hai to pahle contract todne ke liye amount dekr todna hoga jo lajmi hai terms and conditions unke bhi honge kuch jis guild me aayat hai.
Wo india ki top hunturs me se ek hai. Normal S Rank huntur nahi hai.Aayat ne igris ko defeat kr diya literally ye asaan to bilkul nhi tha kyuki pahle bhi igris ke fighting scenes dekh chuke hai ham log alag alag scenes me ki wo kitna powerful hai Khair lekin yaha aayat ne usse defeat kr diya ye to saaf ho gaya ki Aayat bhi kuch kam nhi power ke mamle me
Aaj pata chal jayega.lekin Beru se hmm jeet to sakti hai khair dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
Ha ab aise hi bahut kuch chije aati rahegi.AUr at the end ab aate unn mysterious charecters par to may be ki unka role aur bhi dikhega hi iss arc me jo bohot jabardast hoga akhir utne powerfull mystery persons se related jab aage scenes honge wo bohot amazing aur exciting scene create krega.
Ju ka dil se sukriya Sanki Rajput bhai.Itachi_Uchiha ju ka likhne ka dhang hi iss story me ek fantasy wali jabardast feel laata hai khaskar ju ke unn sound effects ko jo ju har scenes me likhte ho aur khaskar ju ka wo tarika jis tarah se ju har scenes ko change krte ho aur fir har moment ko ek perfect direction par finish krte ho wo bohot amazing hota hai.....Keep it up bhai and keep going in !!
Take care bhai........
Aapka sukriya andyking302 bhai.शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update is
Bikul sahi kaha aapne bhai. Aakhir aap bahut sharif jo hai.Kya baat hai maza hi dila diye bhai, sabko privacy chahiye hoti hai or jb baat Apne rider ki Ho to mai kaise uski privacy me dakhal andaji hone de sakta hu...
Bilkul sahi kaha aapne.CCTV cameras hi band karva diye or DND lgva di dekh kr maine, or Ye Bilkul sahi hai ki javan hona Accha hota hai pr uske sath hosh na khona bhi Accha hota hai...
Kisi ke bhi haal aisa hi hoga ye sub dekh kr. Wo to behos nahi hua yahi bahut badi baat hai.Shubham to Ayaat ko rider ke gale lage dekh kr stachu hi ban gya, vo jo khane ko laya tha use high arc ne kha liya plate sahit...
Ek tin kai nishane.Rider ne apni shadow exchange skill ka use kiya or sath hi apni theory ko bhi test kr liya, Ayaat ko apne sath shadow exchange se Jim pahuch gya...
Ullu hai na is mamle me.Ayaat pahli baar rider ke gale lag kr jaha khush ho gyi or kash kar chipak gai Vahi apna rider hai ki use kuchh samajh hi nhi aa rha, vo use normal hug samajh rha tha...
Nahi bilkul nahi.Rider ne egrish ke sath ladne ko kaha hai Jisme Ayaat ne use hara diya or ab vo Beru ko bulane ko kah rhi hai, rider ko ab bhi yah sab normal lag rha hai...
Bilkul sahi kaha aapne bhai.Ayaat ne yha ek baat Bilkul sahi kahi ki jiske pass takat or knowledge hai uske liye weapon jyada mayne nhi rakhta, vo to ek kagaj ke tukde ko bhi hathiyar ki tarah use kr sakta hai...
Aapka dil se sukriya Xabhi bhai itne beautiful review ke liye.Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab