UPDATE NO - 148(B) post kar diya hai dosto.
Read nd enjoy it.
Nd aaj ab tak ke comments ka aaj reply mil jayega.
Read nd enjoy it.
Nd aaj ab tak ke comments ka aaj reply mil jayega.
Isme bhi koi shak hai kya Sandeep singh nirwan bhai to hai hi mere bade bhai.Sandeep singh nirwan aur Itachi_Uchiha dono langotiya yaar hai .
Ab kabhi na kabhi to accept karna hi tha.तो आयत ने स्वीकार कर ही लिया कि राइडर से मोहब्बत है
Bhai S Rank huntur jitna Powefull hota hai waise hi agar koi use hara de to usko dar khauf bhi utna hi bada hona bilkul jayaj hai... बहुत ही बादिया फाइट sequence था.. परंतु S रैंक फाइटर का इतना डर कुछ समझ नहीं आ रहा है.. ख़ैर ये आप के अनुरूप ही गाड़ा गया है तो कुछ सही होगा..
Nahi maine kuch mane final kiye hai usko yaha post karke aap logo se hi suggestion mangunga.अगले घटनाक्रम के इंतजार में, उम्मीद है कि गिल्ड के नाम पर आपने अपनी राय फाइनल कर ली होगी...
अगले घटनाक्रम के इंतजार में...
Itne beautiful word's ke liye tahe dil se sukriya Froog bhai.Sandeep singh nirwan भाई स्टोरी Itachi_Uchiha भाई की है और आप दोनों भाई इतना क्लोज है कि आप दावे के साथ कह रहे हैं कि अभी कहानी में राइडर की पावर का P भी नहीं आया है । मैं इस थ्रेड पर सभी पाठकों की ओर से Itachi_Uchiha भाई को इस बेहतरीन रचना के लिए बधाई देते हुए यह कामना करूँगा कि इस कहानी के अपडेट समय पर आते रहे और किसी भी प्रकार की बाधा न आये
Ummid to hai. Kahir aage dekhte hai kuch bhi ho skta hai.HUNTER...ek nayab story jisme Action,Thirll aur
Lagata hai aane wale updates me kuch Romace bhi dekhane ko milega.
Haaa aur abhi hmare hero ko bahut dur tak jana hai.Abhi tak aap ki story ki journy kabhi rocahk rahi hai ..Jisme NAYAK zero se lekar ek NAYE mukam tak ka safar tay kiya.
Bikul sahi kaha. Aakhir wo BERU hai koi Normal Shadow Soldiers thodi na hai.Lovely update .
Yahan to Ayat or KALUWAA ki fight serious hi ho gyii thi.
KALUWAA to usse maarne hi waala tha.
Rider shi time pr beech m aa gaya wrna abhi hum log Ayat ka Soyam mana rhe hote.
Kabhi na kabhi accept karna hi tha.To aakhir kaar Aayat n maan hi liyaa k woh Rider se pyar krti hai.
Mujhe bhi bahut besabri se intejar hai. Aage kya hoga ?ab Rider ka kya reaction kya hota hai ye dekhne waala hogaa.
waiting for the next update .
Bhai mere jaise aap bhi busy ho skte ho to sorry bilkul nahi kahne ka. Family nd personal chije Hmesa phle aati hai.or sorry bhai late review dene k liye bss thoda busy tha or Koi scene nhi bn rha tha story read krne kaa.
UPDATE NO - 114 post kar diya hai dosto.
To Sath bane rahiye ...
Masti me padhte rahe
aur apne vichar dete rahe...
Kal saam tak hi aane ki ummid hai.Update ka kb tk ka imkan h bro any ka
Bilkul yaar bss kuch personal kaam tha phir college k form etc or Sunday wale din gali k bacche log subah m cricket khelne le gye shaam m apne doston k saath nikal gaya cricket k liye or working Days m kuch samaan lene gaya tha . Or Phir jo extra time tha usme kuch time family k saath to kuch apni story ko likhne m laga diya.Bhai mere jaise aap bhi busy ho skte ho to sorry bilkul nahi kahne ka. Family nd personal chije Hmesa phle aati hai.
Baki aapke itne beautiful review ke liye dil se sukriya LionHeart007 bhai.
Keep supporting
Aapka sukriya ckkhandu bhai.awesome , fantastic , superb update bro
Aapka sukriya @09vk bhai.Nice update
Aapka sukriya Mahendra Baranwal bhai.Awesome
Aapka sukriya Jasdil bhai.Nice update bro
Aapka sukriya Yamraj@ bhai.Superb
Aapka sukriya realfriend bhai.Wah........ Mazza agayyaaa
Aapka sukriya Tahirtahir111 bhai.Boht Zabardast update
Jldi hi ye bhi pata chal jayega.Aaj to rider bhai...ne dil khush kr diya ab dekhna hn rider accept karta hn ya nhi....lovely update...
Aapka bahut bahut sukriya andyking302 bhai itne beautiful review ke liye.शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update
Ha ye to kabhi na kabhi hona hi tha. Aur rider kya karta hai ye bhi jldi hi pata chal jayega.Akhir kar ijhar kar hi diya Kab se wait kar raha tha
Ab dekhna padega rider ki kya halt hoti hey ye sunke
Aapka bahut bahut sukriya Pardeep Singh meena bhai itne beautiful world's ke liye.Bhai aaj to dil khush kar diya kya updated diya hai maja aaya bhai bhut sandar lajab mast update bhai samay nikale to update badh dena aaj update chota tha bro waiting for next update bro
Aapka sukriya Shahrukh bhai.Awesome update bhai keep posting
Aapka sukriya Arvind Sharma bhai.nice1
Ha kabhi na kabhi to pyar ka ijehar karna hi tha.Shaandar update bhai maza aa gaya to ayaat ne rider ko uske sawaal k jabab m purpose kar hi diya.
Aapka sukriya Ajay bhai.Nice update Bhai
Aapka sukriya Rk1991 bhai.Nice