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Wo Statue jiska name Architect tha wo meri taraf dekhte hue ek smile ke sath kahta hai " to tum mujhse jawab cahte ho ? "
" Ohhh ab pata chala..... "
" Tum shayad soch rahe hoge ki agar tum mujhe maar doge to tmko tmhare swalo ke jawab nahi milega. "
RUN... RUN...
Itna keh kar wo full speed me bhagte hue mere taraf aane lagta hai.
Aur use yu apni taraf aata hua dekh kr mai apne man me sochta hu ' Ye sare attacks faltu hai iske upar. '
RUN... RUN...
Uske baad mai bhi apni jagah se teji se bhagya hue ek taraf jate hue apne right hand ko architecture ki taraf krke open krte hue apne skill ko on kr deta hu.
Ding...
[ SKILL :- ' Ruler's authority ' Activate ho gaya hai. ]
Mujhe apne is skill ko use karta hua dekh kr architecture kehta hai " Tum mere upar duri se war karna cahte ho ? "
" Ye bilkul bekar hai. "
Itna keh kar uske face par ek evil smile aa jati hai aur wo mere taraf dekhte hue apne right hath ko utha kar meri hi tarah Ruler's authority skill ka use krne lagta hai.
RUMBLE.... RUMBLE....
Hum dono ke power ek dusre se takrate hai. Aur unke takrane se energy ka ek bada sa gola ban jata hai. Aur waha ek bahut bada dhmaka hota hai. Jisase hum dono kuch kadam piche ki taraf khisak jate hai. Aur waha ki jamin buri tarah se tut jati hai.
Mai kud ko rokte hue shocked ke sath apne man me sochta hu ' Ye mere tarah same Skills ko use kr skta hai. '
' Iska matlab dur se attack karna ka bhi koi fayda nahi milega mujhe. '
Wahi architecture meri taraf dekhte hue kahta hai " Isase koi fark nahi padta hai. "
" Cahe tum mujhe maar dalo ya nahi..... "
" Jo jawab tumhe milenge wo phle se hi decided hai. "
SWOSS.... SWIRL....
Ye kehte hue Architecture apne back par lage hue apne sabhi 6 hand ko hawa me upar ki taraf utha kar wapas se Ruler's authority ka use karta hai.
Aur agle hi pal piche distroy ho chuke Status ke niche pade hue weapons fly hote hue ekdam se uske hatho me aa jate hai. Aur uske kud ke 2 hatho me 2 bahut hi sharp sword aa jati hai.
SWOSS..... SWOSS....
Kuch duri par khada mai jab ye sub dekhta hu to mai bhi apne dono hatho me apne dagger ko system se lete hue kahta hu " Tum sub kuch plan kaise kar paye ? "
" Aur aakhir tum mujhe ye sari power kaise de paa rahe ho ? "
Architecture ye sub sun kar smile ke sath meri taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Maine tmhe choose nahi kiya tha. "
" Balki iska ulta hua tha. "
" Mai bas ek designer hu, is Player leveling system ka. "
" Mera plan perfect tha. "
Jab Architecture ye sub keh raha tha Tabhi meri najar achank se chal rahe emergency Quest ke timing par jati hai.
[ Time remaining : 6:19 ]
Ye dekhte hi mai apne man me kehta hu ' Mere paas jyada time nahi bacha hai. Mere paas directly attack karne ke alawa ab aur koi rasta nahi bacha hai. '
SWOSS.....
Abhi mai ye soch hi raha tha ki Architecture hawa me udte hue sare wapons ke sath mere taraf jump laga deta hai.
Architecture meri taraf aate hue " Chlo bache hue time me apni puri ji jaan laga kar fight karte hai. "
THUDD.... Jump....
Aur uski baat khtam hone tak wo mere par apne sare weapons se attack karte hue kud padta hai. Lakin isase phle ki koi bhi weapon mujhe touch bhi kar pate mai waha se jump laga kar ek taraf ko ho jata hu.
DING... DONG....
DING.... DONG....
aur fir turant hi mai bhi Architecture ke upar jump laga kar usase fight krne lagta hu. Jaha architecture apne 8 hatho me pakde hue weapons se mujhe par attack kar raha tha. Wahi mai apne dono dagger se uske har ek Attack ko puri ji jaan se block karne ki kosis kar raha tha.
Tabhi fight karte hue mujhe kuch feel hota hai. Meri aakho ki brightness aur bhi jyada increas ho jati hai.
Mai apne man me ' Ye kya hai ? '
' Mere senses aur bhi jyada sharp hote ja rahe hai. '
' Mai ye kar skta hu. '
( Architecture ke hath me pande hue sare weapons ) ' Sword, spear, club, hammer, axe. '
' Mai sbko feel kar skta hu. '
SLIDE....
SWOSS... CRACK...
SLIDE.....
Fir Architecture se fight karte hue dhire dhire me uske sare attacks ko aasani se apni taraf aate hue dekh pa raha tha. Jiske baad mai opposite direction me ja kar , ya jujh kar uske Attack se badi aasani se bach ja raha tha. Aur sath hi mai apne dagger se ab usko kafi nuksan bhi pahuncha paa raha tha.
Architecture jab ye sub dekhta hai to wo bahut jyada surprise hote hue apne man me kehta hai ' Iski movement... '
' Ye apne kud ke power se mere attack ko block aur Dodge kar paa raha hai. '
' Aur sath me ye ab phle se bhi tej hota ja raha hai. '
Aisa Architecture ne is liye bola kyuki ab mai uske attack se bachte hue use bahut sare marks de chuka tha. Uska status jagah jagah se kat chuka tha. Wo pura jor laga kar mujhe rokne ki kosis kar raha tha. Lakin mai bina koi chance diye uska haal bigadne me laga hua tha.
SWOSS....
Tabhi ekdam se mai uske ek hath par apne dagger se jor se attack karta hu. Aur uska ek hath puri tarah se kat kar hawa me uadte hue kafi dur ja kar girta hai.
Urghhh....
Architecture dard se karahte hue meri taraf shocked se dekhte hue ekdam se kahta hai " Bhle hi ye ek nakli body hai fir bhi tumne mujhe straggle karne par majbur kar diya hai. "
( Kud ko mere se bachne ke liye piche khisakte hue mujhe gaur se dekhte hue ) " Ab smjh me aaya. "
" Tumhe hi choose kiya gaya. Iske pich ek karan hai. "
" Bhale hi wo bahut thoda sa hai. "
" Lakin tumhare ander wo hai. "
Mai jo ki is time blood se sana hua tha. Mere face me half side blood pura laga hua tha. architecture ki bate sunta hua mai use ghur kar dekhta hu.
Architecture pehli baar gusse me meri taraf dekhte hue chilla kar kehta hai " Tum sirf ek aam, kamjor Human ho. "
" Tumhari himmat kaise hui ? "
DING....
[ Time remaining : 3:45 ]
CRACK.... CRACK....
CRUMBLE....
Mai dekhta hu ki Jin status logo ko mai distroy kar chuka tha. Wo sub ek ek karke wapas se apni jagah par se jagne lagte hai.
[ Time remaining : 3:30 ]
[ Time remaining : 3:20 ]
Aur kuch hi der me sare Statues wapas se khade ho jate hai jinme wo big Statue bhi samil tha. Aur sare mere taraf hi ghur rahe hote hai.
RUN... RUN... Jump....
Mai ye sub dekhte hue gusse se apne daat piste hue full speed me bhag kar un logo ki taraf ek jump laga deta hu.
WOONG....
SLAM....
Aur hawa me hi hote hue mai apni Ruler's authority skill ka use karte hue un sub Statue ke bich apna hath niche ki taraf karte hue kud padta hu.
Jisase waha par mere charo taraf paas ke khade sare Statues bahut hi buri tarah girte hue jamin ke ander kai feet ander dhans jate hai.
[ Time remaining : 3:15 ]
RUN... jump...
BAAM....
Mai bina wakat gawaye wapas se Architecture ki taraf jane lagta hu. Lakin bich me hi us big Statue ka bada sa mukka mere upar aa kar padta hai. Lakin isase phle ki wo punch mujhe lagta, mai waha se architecture ki taraf jump laga cuka tha. Jisase wo punch jamin ko todte hue ander das jata hai. Lakin mujhe kuch nahi hota hai.
DING... DONG....
DING.... DONG....
Wahi mai architecture ke paas pahuchte hi usase wapas se fight start kar deta hu. Hum dono apni puri speed se ji jaan laga kar ek dusre par attack kar rahe the. Lakin is baar scene alag tha. Jaha is baar mai, architecture ke upar attack kar raha tha. Wahi architecture mere attack ko block karne ki kosis kar raha tha.
SWOSS.... DHAMMM....
Is baar fir se apne ek khatarnak attack se mai Architecture ke left ke do hathi ko kaat deta hu. Uske alawa mai uske right hath me pakde hue uske sword ko bhi bich se break kar deta hu.
[ Time remaining : 3:02 ]
SLAM....
Aahhhh......
Lakin isi bich mujhe bhi architecture ke ek weapon ka attack lag jata hai, jisase mai piche ki tarah jane lagta hu. Lakin tabhi mere right solder par kisi ne piche se attack kar diya tha. Jo ki koi aur nahi shield pandne wala Statue tha. Usne apne shield ko sidhe mere solder par pure power se de mara tha. Jisase dard ke mare mere muh se ek karah nikal jati hai.
Mai piche mud kar us Statue ko dekhte hue apne man me ' Ye status ? '
' Acha haa !! Ye to wahi hai.... '
Jab mai piche mud kar use dekhta hu to mujhe last time ki sari baate yaad aa jati hai. Ki isi ne mere leg ko kata tha last time. Aur ye yaad aate hi mere gussa apne charam par chala jata hai.
[ Time remaining : 2:40 ]
Jump... Break....
Aur mai turant hi apne jagah se ek high jump laga kar us Statue ke sir ke upar jata hu aur apne right hath ke kohani ko sidhe uske muh par de karta hu. Jisase us status ka sir 2 parts me divide ho jata hai.
Uske baad mai wahi se piche mud kar architecture ki taraf gusse me dekhta hu. Aur is baar mera ye roop dekh kr dar ke mare architecture ka muh khula ka khula reh jata hai.
[ Time remaining : 2:21 ]
Jump.... SWOSS....
SLASH... BAAM....
CRACK.... CRACK...
Fir bina wakt gawaye mai wahi se jump laga kar architecture ke upar kud padta hum aur is baar ek ek karke mai uske back se nikle sare 6 hath kaat deta hu. Aur use bahut buri tarah marta hu.
Hum dono ke fight ke karan waha dhool ka gubbar ban jata hai. Aur kuch second me jab dool waha se hatati hai to waha ki jamin puri tarah se tut chuki thi.
[ Time remaining : 2:13 ]
Waha par bich me architecture leta hua tha. Mai uske upar khada tha aur Uske gardan par mera dagger rakha hua tha.
Architecture darte hue " Mai haar manta hu. "
" Ye test ab khtam ho gaya hai. "
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Wo Statue jiska name Architect tha wo meri taraf dekhte hue ek smile ke sath kahta hai " to tum mujhse jawab cahte ho ? "
" Ohhh ab pata chala..... "
" Tum shayad soch rahe hoge ki agar tum mujhe maar doge to tmko tmhare swalo ke jawab nahi milega. "
RUN... RUN...
Itna keh kar wo full speed me bhagte hue mere taraf aane lagta hai.
Aur use yu apni taraf aata hua dekh kr mai apne man me sochta hu ' Ye sare attacks faltu hai iske upar. '
RUN... RUN...
Uske baad mai bhi apni jagah se teji se bhagya hue ek taraf jate hue apne right hand ko architecture ki taraf krke open krte hue apne skill ko on kr deta hu.
Ding...
[ SKILL :- ' Ruler's authority ' Activate ho gaya hai. ]
Mujhe apne is skill ko use karta hua dekh kr architecture kehta hai " Tum mere upar duri se war karna cahte ho ? "
" Ye bilkul bekar hai. "
Itna keh kar uske face par ek evil smile aa jati hai aur wo mere taraf dekhte hue apne right hath ko utha kar meri hi tarah Ruler's authority skill ka use krne lagta hai.
RUMBLE.... RUMBLE....
Hum dono ke power ek dusre se takrate hai. Aur unke takrane se energy ka ek bada sa gola ban jata hai. Aur waha ek bahut bada dhmaka hota hai. Jisase hum dono kuch kadam piche ki taraf khisak jate hai. Aur waha ki jamin buri tarah se tut jati hai.
Mai kud ko rokte hue shocked ke sath apne man me sochta hu ' Ye mere tarah same Skills ko use kr skta hai. '
' Iska matlab dur se attack karna ka bhi koi fayda nahi milega mujhe. '
Wahi architecture meri taraf dekhte hue kahta hai " Isase koi fark nahi padta hai. "
" Cahe tum mujhe maar dalo ya nahi..... "
" Jo jawab tumhe milenge wo phle se hi decided hai. "
SWOSS.... SWIRL....
Ye kehte hue Architecture apne back par lage hue apne sabhi 6 hand ko hawa me upar ki taraf utha kar wapas se Ruler's authority ka use karta hai.
Aur agle hi pal piche distroy ho chuke Status ke niche pade hue weapons fly hote hue ekdam se uske hatho me aa jate hai. Aur uske kud ke 2 hatho me 2 bahut hi sharp sword aa jati hai.
SWOSS..... SWOSS....
Kuch duri par khada mai jab ye sub dekhta hu to mai bhi apne dono hatho me apne dagger ko system se lete hue kahta hu " Tum sub kuch plan kaise kar paye ? "
" Aur aakhir tum mujhe ye sari power kaise de paa rahe ho ? "
Architecture ye sub sun kar smile ke sath meri taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Maine tmhe choose nahi kiya tha. "
" Balki iska ulta hua tha. "
" Mai bas ek designer hu, is Player leveling system ka. "
" Mera plan perfect tha. "
Jab Architecture ye sub keh raha tha Tabhi meri najar achank se chal rahe emergency Quest ke timing par jati hai.
[ Time remaining : 6:19 ]
Ye dekhte hi mai apne man me kehta hu ' Mere paas jyada time nahi bacha hai. Mere paas directly attack karne ke alawa ab aur koi rasta nahi bacha hai. '
SWOSS.....
Abhi mai ye soch hi raha tha ki Architecture hawa me udte hue sare wapons ke sath mere taraf jump laga deta hai.
Architecture meri taraf aate hue " Chlo bache hue time me apni puri ji jaan laga kar fight karte hai. "
THUDD.... Jump....
Aur uski baat khtam hone tak wo mere par apne sare weapons se attack karte hue kud padta hai. Lakin isase phle ki koi bhi weapon mujhe touch bhi kar pate mai waha se jump laga kar ek taraf ko ho jata hu.
DING... DONG....
DING.... DONG....
aur fir turant hi mai bhi Architecture ke upar jump laga kar usase fight krne lagta hu. Jaha architecture apne 8 hatho me pakde hue weapons se mujhe par attack kar raha tha. Wahi mai apne dono dagger se uske har ek Attack ko puri ji jaan se block karne ki kosis kar raha tha.
Tabhi fight karte hue mujhe kuch feel hota hai. Meri aakho ki brightness aur bhi jyada increas ho jati hai.
Mai apne man me ' Ye kya hai ? '
' Mere senses aur bhi jyada sharp hote ja rahe hai. '
' Mai ye kar skta hu. '
( Architecture ke hath me pande hue sare weapons ) ' Sword, spear, club, hammer, axe. '
' Mai sbko feel kar skta hu. '
SLIDE....
SWOSS... CRACK...
SLIDE.....
Fir Architecture se fight karte hue dhire dhire me uske sare attacks ko aasani se apni taraf aate hue dekh pa raha tha. Jiske baad mai opposite direction me ja kar , ya jujh kar uske Attack se badi aasani se bach ja raha tha. Aur sath hi mai apne dagger se ab usko kafi nuksan bhi pahuncha paa raha tha.
Architecture jab ye sub dekhta hai to wo bahut jyada surprise hote hue apne man me kehta hai ' Iski movement... '
' Ye apne kud ke power se mere attack ko block aur Dodge kar paa raha hai. '
' Aur sath me ye ab phle se bhi tej hota ja raha hai. '
Aisa Architecture ne is liye bola kyuki ab mai uske attack se bachte hue use bahut sare marks de chuka tha. Uska status jagah jagah se kat chuka tha. Wo pura jor laga kar mujhe rokne ki kosis kar raha tha. Lakin mai bina koi chance diye uska haal bigadne me laga hua tha.
SWOSS....
Tabhi ekdam se mai uske ek hath par apne dagger se jor se attack karta hu. Aur uska ek hath puri tarah se kat kar hawa me uadte hue kafi dur ja kar girta hai.
Urghhh....
Architecture dard se karahte hue meri taraf shocked se dekhte hue ekdam se kahta hai " Bhle hi ye ek nakli body hai fir bhi tumne mujhe straggle karne par majbur kar diya hai. "
( Kud ko mere se bachne ke liye piche khisakte hue mujhe gaur se dekhte hue ) " Ab smjh me aaya. "
" Tumhe hi choose kiya gaya. Iske pich ek karan hai. "
" Bhale hi wo bahut thoda sa hai. "
" Lakin tumhare ander wo hai. "
Mai jo ki is time blood se sana hua tha. Mere face me half side blood pura laga hua tha. architecture ki bate sunta hua mai use ghur kar dekhta hu.
Architecture pehli baar gusse me meri taraf dekhte hue chilla kar kehta hai " Tum sirf ek aam, kamjor Human ho. "
" Tumhari himmat kaise hui ? "
DING....
[ Time remaining : 3:45 ]
CRACK.... CRACK....
CRUMBLE....
Mai dekhta hu ki Jin status logo ko mai distroy kar chuka tha. Wo sub ek ek karke wapas se apni jagah par se jagne lagte hai.
[ Time remaining : 3:30 ]
[ Time remaining : 3:20 ]
Aur kuch hi der me sare Statues wapas se khade ho jate hai jinme wo big Statue bhi samil tha. Aur sare mere taraf hi ghur rahe hote hai.
RUN... RUN... Jump....
Mai ye sub dekhte hue gusse se apne daat piste hue full speed me bhag kar un logo ki taraf ek jump laga deta hu.
WOONG....
SLAM....
Aur hawa me hi hote hue mai apni Ruler's authority skill ka use karte hue un sub Statue ke bich apna hath niche ki taraf karte hue kud padta hu.
Jisase waha par mere charo taraf paas ke khade sare Statues bahut hi buri tarah girte hue jamin ke ander kai feet ander dhans jate hai.
[ Time remaining : 3:15 ]
RUN... jump...
BAAM....
Mai bina wakat gawaye wapas se Architecture ki taraf jane lagta hu. Lakin bich me hi us big Statue ka bada sa mukka mere upar aa kar padta hai. Lakin isase phle ki wo punch mujhe lagta, mai waha se architecture ki taraf jump laga cuka tha. Jisase wo punch jamin ko todte hue ander das jata hai. Lakin mujhe kuch nahi hota hai.
DING... DONG....
DING.... DONG....
Wahi mai architecture ke paas pahuchte hi usase wapas se fight start kar deta hu. Hum dono apni puri speed se ji jaan laga kar ek dusre par attack kar rahe the. Lakin is baar scene alag tha. Jaha is baar mai, architecture ke upar attack kar raha tha. Wahi architecture mere attack ko block karne ki kosis kar raha tha.
SWOSS.... DHAMMM....
Is baar fir se apne ek khatarnak attack se mai Architecture ke left ke do hathi ko kaat deta hu. Uske alawa mai uske right hath me pakde hue uske sword ko bhi bich se break kar deta hu.
[ Time remaining : 3:02 ]
SLAM....
Aahhhh......
Lakin isi bich mujhe bhi architecture ke ek weapon ka attack lag jata hai, jisase mai piche ki tarah jane lagta hu. Lakin tabhi mere right solder par kisi ne piche se attack kar diya tha. Jo ki koi aur nahi shield pandne wala Statue tha. Usne apne shield ko sidhe mere solder par pure power se de mara tha. Jisase dard ke mare mere muh se ek karah nikal jati hai.
Mai piche mud kar us Statue ko dekhte hue apne man me ' Ye status ? '
' Acha haa !! Ye to wahi hai.... '
Jab mai piche mud kar use dekhta hu to mujhe last time ki sari baate yaad aa jati hai. Ki isi ne mere leg ko kata tha last time. Aur ye yaad aate hi mere gussa apne charam par chala jata hai.
[ Time remaining : 2:40 ]
Jump... Break....
Aur mai turant hi apne jagah se ek high jump laga kar us Statue ke sir ke upar jata hu aur apne right hath ke kohani ko sidhe uske muh par de karta hu. Jisase us status ka sir 2 parts me divide ho jata hai.
Uske baad mai wahi se piche mud kar architecture ki taraf gusse me dekhta hu. Aur is baar mera ye roop dekh kr dar ke mare architecture ka muh khula ka khula reh jata hai.
[ Time remaining : 2:21 ]
Jump.... SWOSS....
SLASH... BAAM....
CRACK.... CRACK...
Fir bina wakt gawaye mai wahi se jump laga kar architecture ke upar kud padta hum aur is baar ek ek karke mai uske back se nikle sare 6 hath kaat deta hu. Aur use bahut buri tarah marta hu.
Hum dono ke fight ke karan waha dhool ka gubbar ban jata hai. Aur kuch second me jab dool waha se hatati hai to waha ki jamin puri tarah se tut chuki thi.
[ Time remaining : 2:13 ]
Waha par bich me architecture leta hua tha. Mai uske upar khada tha aur Uske gardan par mera dagger rakha hua tha.
Architecture darte hue " Mai haar manta hu. "
" Ye test ab khtam ho gaya hai. "
[ Time remaining : 2:11 ]
Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!