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[Itachi_Uchiha]

UPDATE NO - 148(B) post kar diya hai dosto.
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UPDATE NO - 144(B)
SHUBHAM SHOW HIS TRUE COLOR​

AN UNKNOWN PLACE, USA

Ye area isi City ka ek outer place tha, jaha kuch year phle Tak to bahut cehal pahal hua karti thi. Quki past me ye place is City ke industrial area me se ek hua karta tha.
But jaise jaise civilization hua aur bhi sukh suvidhaon aane lagi samay ki raftar ke sath ye place kud ko morden nahi kar paya aur usi ka natija hai ki ye place ab is City ke remote nd band pade ilako me tabdil ho gaya. Jaha galti se hi kbhi koi dikhayi deta hai.

Is time bhi is jagah bilkul sannata pasara hua tha. Har jagah close ho cuki factory aur wherehouse pade hue the.
Pure jagah electricity bhi naam matr ki thi.

Lakin hmesa ki bikul saant rhne wala ye jagah aaj raat ke samay thoda sa asaant dikh Raha tha. Quki ek band padi badi si factory ke ek bade se hall type jagah par is time kul 4 log maujud the.

Jinme se 3 log to us jagah ke bich me khade the. Lakin unke samne ek lohe ke piller ke sahare ek ladka baitha hua tha. Jo ki koi aur nahi Shubham hi tha.

Shubham ki halat is time bikul bhi thik nahi lag rahi thi. Uske shirt ke kai button khule hue the. Aur sayad 1-2 to tut bhi chuke the. Jis par jagah jagah blood laga hua tha. Aur gale ke paas ki jagah par sbse jyada blood lag hu tha. Jo ki uske muh aur naak se halka halka bhi bhi beh rah tha. Uske pure face me kafi chot ke nishan the. Ek aakh to sujne ke sath bilkul kaali pad gayi thi. Kul mila kar wo bhut buri halat me tha.

Aur uske samne khade 3 log Scavenger Guild ke hi 3 S Rank Huntur the. Jinme jo sbse aage khada tha wo koi aur nahi Namit hi tha. Uske bagal me hi jo S Rank Huntur khad th usne bas ek slivless jacket pehna hu tha jiska chain bhi usne open rakha hua tha jiske karan uske 6 pack abs show ho rahe the. Uske Baal bhi curly thpe ke the. Aur wo ek black man tha.
Sbse piche Jo khad tha usne chasma lagaya hu tha aur usne normal kapde hi pehan rakhe the.

Shubham ki ye halat dekh kr wo Black man thodi fikar ke sath kehta hai " Tmhe pura yakin hai ki ye sub kuch thik hai ? "

Namit, Shubham ki taraf dekh kr ek evil smile krte hue " Mera ise kuch karne ka irada bikul bhi nahi hai. "
" Mai to sirf ek baat janana chahta hu ? "

Itna kehne ke baad Namit apne mind me ye sochte hue evile smile krta rehta hai ' Master Sandy ne mujhe Rider ko touch bhi karne se warna kiya tha..... '
' Lakin mera plan phle se hi tha ki mujhe rider ke sath direct koi pang nahi karn hai. '
' Quki mai janta tha ki ek aur person hai, jo mujhe jo janana hai wo baat bata skt hai. '
' Maine ise starting me hi kaha tha ki us dengoen ke ander mere bhai ke sath kya hu tha agar ye mujhe wo sari baat bikul such such bata de to mai isko bina kisi khroch ke jane dunga. '
' Sirf ek hi baat thi Jo mai sunana cahta hu. '
' Aur wo ye ki us Rider ne mere Bhai ko mara tha. '
' Jitni jldi me ye baat tmhare muh se sun lunga Shubham utni jldi Mera tumse kaam khtam ho jayega. Aur mujhe tmse koi matlb nahi rahega. '

Ye soch kar Namit wapas se Shubham ke aas ja kar apne ghutno ke bal jukh kar Besudh pade Shubham ko hilate hue kehta hai " Oye... uth ja... "
" Chal bahut ho Gaya Tera natak, ab uth ja... "

Lakin Shubham ko Namit ne itna mar th ki wo apni aakhe nahi khol pata hai. Wo bikul besudh hu pad apna sir niche latkaye wahi baitha tha.

BISOOM......

Ab Namit ko gussa aa jata hai aur wo ek jordar punch sidhe Shubham ke chest ke bicho bich Marte hue jor se gusse me kehta hai " Maine kaha utha ja saale.... "

Aaaahhhhhh......
Blurr....

Is jordar mukke se Shubham na cahte hue bhi dard ke karan hose me aa jata hai. Aur dard bhari ek chikh ke sath uske muh se kafi Sara blood bahar aa jata hai.

Ye dekh kar waha par santi se khada wo 3rd S Rank Huntur apne trouser ke pocket me hath Dale hue aaram se kehta hai " Ye kafi Sehanshil lagta hai. Mere khyal se ye ek Tanker hoga tabhi ye utna kuch jhel gaya. "
" Iske jagah agar koi normal human hota to wo ab tak bhut phle hi mar cuka hota. "

Namit bhi ye sun kar Shubham ko dekhte hue khijate hue kehta hai " Mujhe smjh me nahi aa raha hai ki ye aakhir jid kyu kar Raha hai. Ye sala masoom sa dikhne wala kamina hai. "
" Tmhara courage to tarif karne layak hai. Lakin tmhara jiddipan tmko sahi end ki taraf nahi le ja raha hai. "

BAAAMMMMM......
Aahhhh....

Aur ye kehte hue Namit, Shubham ke sir ko apne right hath se pakade hue Shubham ke piche ke iron ke mote se pillor me jor se bhida deta hai. Jisase Shubham ki ek baar fir se dard bhari chikh us band pade factory me goonj utati hai. Aur uske sir ke piche se bhi blood nikal kar uske shirt ka back part bhigone lagt hai.

Namit, Shubham ke sir ko pakde hue hi kehta hai " Sun be.... "
" Mai tujhe bikul bhi jaan se marna nahi chahta hu. "
( Shubham ke sir ko us 3rd hunter ki taraf ghumate hue ) " Ye bnda jo mere piche tu hasta hua dekh rah hai. Ye ek kafi ach healer hai. "
" To tu jab bhi bilkul Marne ke kagar par hoga ye tujhe Bach lega. "
" To iska matlb yhi hai ki jab tak tu mujhe, jo mai janana chta hu wo baat nahi bata deta, tab tak mai tujhe yaha hmesa isi tarah torture karta rahunga. "
" Aur tujhe itn bata Diya to ek baat aur bata deta hu ki hum yaha ek aisi factory me hai Jo ki last ke 5 year se bikul band padi hui hai.
" To tu cahe yaha jitni jor se, aur jitni der chillata rahe. Teri aawaj ko sun kar yaha tujhe bachane aane wala koi bhi nahi hai. "
" To ab bata tune kya socha ? "
" Kya ye sub sun kar ab tu mujhe kuch batane ko raji hua ? "

Shubham ( dard bhari kaapti aawaj me ) ".....offf.... "

Ye sun kar Namit ki aakhe glow hone lagti hai wo excited ho jata hai aur kehta hai " Kya ? "

Shubham itna dard hone ke bawjud bhi kisi tarah ek smile karte hue apne left hand ki middle finger ko dikhate hue kehta hai " FUCK OFF. "

BAAAMMMMM......
Aahhhhh.......

Aur ye sun aur dekh kr to Namit ke gusse ki limit Tut jati hai. Aur wo usse me jor se Shubham ke sir ko piche ke iron ke pillor se de marta hai. Ye attack itn jordar tha ki piche ka iron pillor eclipse ki shap me bend ho jata hai.
Aur Shubham ki ab tak ki sbse tej aur dard bhari chikh us factory me goonj jati hai. Aur is baar bllod ki ek moti dhaar uske sir ke piche se nikalne lagti hai.

Ye dekh kr wo Black man kehta hai " Master Namit dhyan se. "
" Mai money ke liye kisi ke murder ke chakkar me nahi padna chahata hu. "

Namit " .......mai Apne mind me ye baat yaad rakhunga. "
( Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Now, to kya hab hum start kre ? "
" Tum ready to ho na ? "


Shubham, Namit ko apni adhkhuli aakho se dekhte hue " T...tum ki..s b..are me baa..t kar ..rahe ho ? "

Namit apni power ko release karte hue apni red colour ki glow hoti aakho se Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue evil smile ke sath kehta hai " Maine to bas abhi shuruwat ki hai. "

Tabhi Namit ko apne left side kuch feel hota hai aur wo apne aakho ko left side krke dekhta hai " Hm.... ?? "

Waha left side me factory ki ek wall tuti hui thi. Jiske bahar ek red colour ka orc chupchap khada ye sub dekh Raha tha.

Ye dekh kar Namit us orc ki taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Ye kya hai ? "
" Ek Orc ? "
" Kya yaha aas paas me koi dengoen break hua hai ya aur koi baat hai ? "

Tap... Tap...

Ye kehta hua Namit apne jacket ko utar kar us orc ki taraf aaram se aage jane lagta hai.

Wo samne khada orc dar se bahut buri tarah kaap rah hota Hain itni dur se bhi dekhne par baki bache dono S Rank Hunturs ko bhi ye baat saaf dikh Raha hota hai.

Unme se ek smile karte hue kehta hai " Kitni ajib baat hai. "
" Master Namit aisa lagta hai aapne is orc ko dekh liya ye baat jaan kar ye bhut jyada Dr gya hai. "

Namit ek jor ka punch us orc ki taraf marte hue kehta hai " Mere paas abhi tmhare sath time pass karne ka wakt bikul bhi nahi hai. "

Jabki us orc ka dar har gujarte pal ke sath increase hota jata hai. Aur jaise hi usko punch padne wala
hot hi usase just kuch micro second phle usko apne maind me ek aawaj sunayi deti hai.

" Exchange. "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Itachi_Uchiha bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

 

[big king]

UPDATE NO - 144(B)
SHUBHAM SHOW HIS TRUE COLOR​

AN UNKNOWN PLACE, USA

Ye area isi City ka ek outer place tha, jaha kuch year phle Tak to bahut cehal pahal hua karti thi. Quki past me ye place is City ke industrial area me se ek hua karta tha.
But jaise jaise civilization hua aur bhi sukh suvidhaon aane lagi samay ki raftar ke sath ye place kud ko morden nahi kar paya aur usi ka natija hai ki ye place ab is City ke remote nd band pade ilako me tabdil ho gaya. Jaha galti se hi kbhi koi dikhayi deta hai.

Is time bhi is jagah bilkul sannata pasara hua tha. Har jagah close ho cuki factory aur wherehouse pade hue the.
Pure jagah electricity bhi naam matr ki thi.

Lakin hmesa ki bikul saant rhne wala ye jagah aaj raat ke samay thoda sa asaant dikh Raha tha. Quki ek band padi badi si factory ke ek bade se hall type jagah par is time kul 4 log maujud the.

Jinme se 3 log to us jagah ke bich me khade the. Lakin unke samne ek lohe ke piller ke sahare ek ladka baitha hua tha. Jo ki koi aur nahi Shubham hi tha.

Shubham ki halat is time bikul bhi thik nahi lag rahi thi. Uske shirt ke kai button khule hue the. Aur sayad 1-2 to tut bhi chuke the. Jis par jagah jagah blood laga hua tha. Aur gale ke paas ki jagah par sbse jyada blood lag hu tha. Jo ki uske muh aur naak se halka halka bhi bhi beh rah tha. Uske pure face me kafi chot ke nishan the. Ek aakh to sujne ke sath bilkul kaali pad gayi thi. Kul mila kar wo bhut buri halat me tha.

Aur uske samne khade 3 log Scavenger Guild ke hi 3 S Rank Huntur the. Jinme jo sbse aage khada tha wo koi aur nahi Namit hi tha. Uske bagal me hi jo S Rank Huntur khad th usne bas ek slivless jacket pehna hu tha jiska chain bhi usne open rakha hua tha jiske karan uske 6 pack abs show ho rahe the. Uske Baal bhi curly thpe ke the. Aur wo ek black man tha.
Sbse piche Jo khad tha usne chasma lagaya hu tha aur usne normal kapde hi pehan rakhe the.

Shubham ki ye halat dekh kr wo Black man thodi fikar ke sath kehta hai " Tmhe pura yakin hai ki ye sub kuch thik hai ? "

Namit, Shubham ki taraf dekh kr ek evil smile krte hue " Mera ise kuch karne ka irada bikul bhi nahi hai. "
" Mai to sirf ek baat janana chahta hu ? "

Itna kehne ke baad Namit apne mind me ye sochte hue evile smile krta rehta hai ' Master Sandy ne mujhe Rider ko touch bhi karne se warna kiya tha..... '
' Lakin mera plan phle se hi tha ki mujhe rider ke sath direct koi pang nahi karn hai. '
' Quki mai janta tha ki ek aur person hai, jo mujhe jo janana hai wo baat bata skt hai. '
' Maine ise starting me hi kaha tha ki us dengoen ke ander mere bhai ke sath kya hu tha agar ye mujhe wo sari baat bikul such such bata de to mai isko bina kisi khroch ke jane dunga. '
' Sirf ek hi baat thi Jo mai sunana cahta hu. '
' Aur wo ye ki us Rider ne mere Bhai ko mara tha. '
' Jitni jldi me ye baat tmhare muh se sun lunga Shubham utni jldi Mera tumse kaam khtam ho jayega. Aur mujhe tmse koi matlb nahi rahega. '

Ye soch kar Namit wapas se Shubham ke aas ja kar apne ghutno ke bal jukh kar Besudh pade Shubham ko hilate hue kehta hai " Oye... uth ja... "
" Chal bahut ho Gaya Tera natak, ab uth ja... "

Lakin Shubham ko Namit ne itna mar th ki wo apni aakhe nahi khol pata hai. Wo bikul besudh hu pad apna sir niche latkaye wahi baitha tha.

BISOOM......

Ab Namit ko gussa aa jata hai aur wo ek jordar punch sidhe Shubham ke chest ke bicho bich Marte hue jor se gusse me kehta hai " Maine kaha utha ja saale.... "

Aaaahhhhhh......
Blurr....

Is jordar mukke se Shubham na cahte hue bhi dard ke karan hose me aa jata hai. Aur dard bhari ek chikh ke sath uske muh se kafi Sara blood bahar aa jata hai.

Ye dekh kar waha par santi se khada wo 3rd S Rank Huntur apne trouser ke pocket me hath Dale hue aaram se kehta hai " Ye kafi Sehanshil lagta hai. Mere khyal se ye ek Tanker hoga tabhi ye utna kuch jhel gaya. "
" Iske jagah agar koi normal human hota to wo ab tak bhut phle hi mar cuka hota. "

Namit bhi ye sun kar Shubham ko dekhte hue khijate hue kehta hai " Mujhe smjh me nahi aa raha hai ki ye aakhir jid kyu kar Raha hai. Ye sala masoom sa dikhne wala kamina hai. "
" Tmhara courage to tarif karne layak hai. Lakin tmhara jiddipan tmko sahi end ki taraf nahi le ja raha hai. "

BAAAMMMMM......
Aahhhh....

Aur ye kehte hue Namit, Shubham ke sir ko apne right hath se pakade hue Shubham ke piche ke iron ke mote se pillor me jor se bhida deta hai. Jisase Shubham ki ek baar fir se dard bhari chikh us band pade factory me goonj utati hai. Aur uske sir ke piche se bhi blood nikal kar uske shirt ka back part bhigone lagt hai.

Namit, Shubham ke sir ko pakde hue hi kehta hai " Sun be.... "
" Mai tujhe bikul bhi jaan se marna nahi chahta hu. "
( Shubham ke sir ko us 3rd hunter ki taraf ghumate hue ) " Ye bnda jo mere piche tu hasta hua dekh rah hai. Ye ek kafi ach healer hai. "
" To tu jab bhi bilkul Marne ke kagar par hoga ye tujhe Bach lega. "
" To iska matlb yhi hai ki jab tak tu mujhe, jo mai janana chta hu wo baat nahi bata deta, tab tak mai tujhe yaha hmesa isi tarah torture karta rahunga. "
" Aur tujhe itn bata Diya to ek baat aur bata deta hu ki hum yaha ek aisi factory me hai Jo ki last ke 5 year se bikul band padi hui hai.
" To tu cahe yaha jitni jor se, aur jitni der chillata rahe. Teri aawaj ko sun kar yaha tujhe bachane aane wala koi bhi nahi hai. "
" To ab bata tune kya socha ? "
" Kya ye sub sun kar ab tu mujhe kuch batane ko raji hua ? "

Shubham ( dard bhari kaapti aawaj me ) ".....offf.... "

Ye sun kar Namit ki aakhe glow hone lagti hai wo excited ho jata hai aur kehta hai " Kya ? "

Shubham itna dard hone ke bawjud bhi kisi tarah ek smile karte hue apne left hand ki middle finger ko dikhate hue kehta hai " FUCK OFF. "

BAAAMMMMM......
Aahhhhh.......

Aur ye sun aur dekh kr to Namit ke gusse ki limit Tut jati hai. Aur wo usse me jor se Shubham ke sir ko piche ke iron ke pillor se de marta hai. Ye attack itn jordar tha ki piche ka iron pillor eclipse ki shap me bend ho jata hai.
Aur Shubham ki ab tak ki sbse tej aur dard bhari chikh us factory me goonj jati hai. Aur is baar bllod ki ek moti dhaar uske sir ke piche se nikalne lagti hai.

Ye dekh kr wo Black man kehta hai " Master Namit dhyan se. "
" Mai money ke liye kisi ke murder ke chakkar me nahi padna chahata hu. "

Namit " .......mai Apne mind me ye baat yaad rakhunga. "
( Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Now, to kya hab hum start kre ? "
" Tum ready to ho na ? "


Shubham, Namit ko apni adhkhuli aakho se dekhte hue " T...tum ki..s b..are me baa..t kar ..rahe ho ? "

Namit apni power ko release karte hue apni red colour ki glow hoti aakho se Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue evil smile ke sath kehta hai " Maine to bas abhi shuruwat ki hai. "

Tabhi Namit ko apne left side kuch feel hota hai aur wo apne aakho ko left side krke dekhta hai " Hm.... ?? "

Waha left side me factory ki ek wall tuti hui thi. Jiske bahar ek red colour ka orc chupchap khada ye sub dekh Raha tha.

Ye dekh kar Namit us orc ki taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Ye kya hai ? "
" Ek Orc ? "
" Kya yaha aas paas me koi dengoen break hua hai ya aur koi baat hai ? "

Tap... Tap...

Ye kehta hua Namit apne jacket ko utar kar us orc ki taraf aaram se aage jane lagta hai.

Wo samne khada orc dar se bahut buri tarah kaap rah hota Hain itni dur se bhi dekhne par baki bache dono S Rank Hunturs ko bhi ye baat saaf dikh Raha hota hai.

Unme se ek smile karte hue kehta hai " Kitni ajib baat hai. "
" Master Namit aisa lagta hai aapne is orc ko dekh liya ye baat jaan kar ye bhut jyada Dr gya hai. "

Namit ek jor ka punch us orc ki taraf marte hue kehta hai " Mere paas abhi tmhare sath time pass karne ka wakt bikul bhi nahi hai. "

Jabki us orc ka dar har gujarte pal ke sath increase hota jata hai. Aur jaise hi usko punch padne wala
hot hi usase just kuch micro second phle usko apne maind me ek aawaj sunayi deti hai.

" Exchange. "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

Bhai aap thik hoke baapas aa gaye iye khushi ki baat hain. Bhai update bahot jabardast tha bhai. Ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hain bhai. Next update ka intajaar rahegaa bhai.

 

[Mahakaal]

Superb fantastic update

 

[anujpal]

UPDATE NO - 144(B)
SHUBHAM SHOW HIS TRUE COLOR​

AN UNKNOWN PLACE, USA

Ye area isi City ka ek outer place tha, jaha kuch year phle Tak to bahut cehal pahal hua karti thi. Quki past me ye place is City ke industrial area me se ek hua karta tha.
But jaise jaise civilization hua aur bhi sukh suvidhaon aane lagi samay ki raftar ke sath ye place kud ko morden nahi kar paya aur usi ka natija hai ki ye place ab is City ke remote nd band pade ilako me tabdil ho gaya. Jaha galti se hi kbhi koi dikhayi deta hai.

Is time bhi is jagah bilkul sannata pasara hua tha. Har jagah close ho cuki factory aur wherehouse pade hue the.
Pure jagah electricity bhi naam matr ki thi.

Lakin hmesa ki bikul saant rhne wala ye jagah aaj raat ke samay thoda sa asaant dikh Raha tha. Quki ek band padi badi si factory ke ek bade se hall type jagah par is time kul 4 log maujud the.

Jinme se 3 log to us jagah ke bich me khade the. Lakin unke samne ek lohe ke piller ke sahare ek ladka baitha hua tha. Jo ki koi aur nahi Shubham hi tha.

Shubham ki halat is time bikul bhi thik nahi lag rahi thi. Uske shirt ke kai button khule hue the. Aur sayad 1-2 to tut bhi chuke the. Jis par jagah jagah blood laga hua tha. Aur gale ke paas ki jagah par sbse jyada blood lag hu tha. Jo ki uske muh aur naak se halka halka bhi bhi beh rah tha. Uske pure face me kafi chot ke nishan the. Ek aakh to sujne ke sath bilkul kaali pad gayi thi. Kul mila kar wo bhut buri halat me tha.

Aur uske samne khade 3 log Scavenger Guild ke hi 3 S Rank Huntur the. Jinme jo sbse aage khada tha wo koi aur nahi Namit hi tha. Uske bagal me hi jo S Rank Huntur khad th usne bas ek slivless jacket pehna hu tha jiska chain bhi usne open rakha hua tha jiske karan uske 6 pack abs show ho rahe the. Uske Baal bhi curly thpe ke the. Aur wo ek black man tha.
Sbse piche Jo khad tha usne chasma lagaya hu tha aur usne normal kapde hi pehan rakhe the.

Shubham ki ye halat dekh kr wo Black man thodi fikar ke sath kehta hai " Tmhe pura yakin hai ki ye sub kuch thik hai ? "

Namit, Shubham ki taraf dekh kr ek evil smile krte hue " Mera ise kuch karne ka irada bikul bhi nahi hai. "
" Mai to sirf ek baat janana chahta hu ? "

Itna kehne ke baad Namit apne mind me ye sochte hue evile smile krta rehta hai ' Master Sandy ne mujhe Rider ko touch bhi karne se warna kiya tha..... '
' Lakin mera plan phle se hi tha ki mujhe rider ke sath direct koi pang nahi karn hai. '
' Quki mai janta tha ki ek aur person hai, jo mujhe jo janana hai wo baat bata skt hai. '
' Maine ise starting me hi kaha tha ki us dengoen ke ander mere bhai ke sath kya hu tha agar ye mujhe wo sari baat bikul such such bata de to mai isko bina kisi khroch ke jane dunga. '
' Sirf ek hi baat thi Jo mai sunana cahta hu. '
' Aur wo ye ki us Rider ne mere Bhai ko mara tha. '
' Jitni jldi me ye baat tmhare muh se sun lunga Shubham utni jldi Mera tumse kaam khtam ho jayega. Aur mujhe tmse koi matlb nahi rahega. '

Ye soch kar Namit wapas se Shubham ke aas ja kar apne ghutno ke bal jukh kar Besudh pade Shubham ko hilate hue kehta hai " Oye... uth ja... "
" Chal bahut ho Gaya Tera natak, ab uth ja... "

Lakin Shubham ko Namit ne itna mar th ki wo apni aakhe nahi khol pata hai. Wo bikul besudh hu pad apna sir niche latkaye wahi baitha tha.

BISOOM......

Ab Namit ko gussa aa jata hai aur wo ek jordar punch sidhe Shubham ke chest ke bicho bich Marte hue jor se gusse me kehta hai " Maine kaha utha ja saale.... "

Aaaahhhhhh......
Blurr....

Is jordar mukke se Shubham na cahte hue bhi dard ke karan hose me aa jata hai. Aur dard bhari ek chikh ke sath uske muh se kafi Sara blood bahar aa jata hai.

Ye dekh kar waha par santi se khada wo 3rd S Rank Huntur apne trouser ke pocket me hath Dale hue aaram se kehta hai " Ye kafi Sehanshil lagta hai. Mere khyal se ye ek Tanker hoga tabhi ye utna kuch jhel gaya. "
" Iske jagah agar koi normal human hota to wo ab tak bhut phle hi mar cuka hota. "

Namit bhi ye sun kar Shubham ko dekhte hue khijate hue kehta hai " Mujhe smjh me nahi aa raha hai ki ye aakhir jid kyu kar Raha hai. Ye sala masoom sa dikhne wala kamina hai. "
" Tmhara courage to tarif karne layak hai. Lakin tmhara jiddipan tmko sahi end ki taraf nahi le ja raha hai. "

BAAAMMMMM......
Aahhhh....

Aur ye kehte hue Namit, Shubham ke sir ko apne right hath se pakade hue Shubham ke piche ke iron ke mote se pillor me jor se bhida deta hai. Jisase Shubham ki ek baar fir se dard bhari chikh us band pade factory me goonj utati hai. Aur uske sir ke piche se bhi blood nikal kar uske shirt ka back part bhigone lagt hai.

Namit, Shubham ke sir ko pakde hue hi kehta hai " Sun be.... "
" Mai tujhe bikul bhi jaan se marna nahi chahta hu. "
( Shubham ke sir ko us 3rd hunter ki taraf ghumate hue ) " Ye bnda jo mere piche tu hasta hua dekh rah hai. Ye ek kafi ach healer hai. "
" To tu jab bhi bilkul Marne ke kagar par hoga ye tujhe Bach lega. "
" To iska matlb yhi hai ki jab tak tu mujhe, jo mai janana chta hu wo baat nahi bata deta, tab tak mai tujhe yaha hmesa isi tarah torture karta rahunga. "
" Aur tujhe itn bata Diya to ek baat aur bata deta hu ki hum yaha ek aisi factory me hai Jo ki last ke 5 year se bikul band padi hui hai.
" To tu cahe yaha jitni jor se, aur jitni der chillata rahe. Teri aawaj ko sun kar yaha tujhe bachane aane wala koi bhi nahi hai. "
" To ab bata tune kya socha ? "
" Kya ye sub sun kar ab tu mujhe kuch batane ko raji hua ? "

Shubham ( dard bhari kaapti aawaj me ) ".....offf.... "

Ye sun kar Namit ki aakhe glow hone lagti hai wo excited ho jata hai aur kehta hai " Kya ? "

Shubham itna dard hone ke bawjud bhi kisi tarah ek smile karte hue apne left hand ki middle finger ko dikhate hue kehta hai " FUCK OFF. "

BAAAMMMMM......
Aahhhhh.......

Aur ye sun aur dekh kr to Namit ke gusse ki limit Tut jati hai. Aur wo usse me jor se Shubham ke sir ko piche ke iron ke pillor se de marta hai. Ye attack itn jordar tha ki piche ka iron pillor eclipse ki shap me bend ho jata hai.
Aur Shubham ki ab tak ki sbse tej aur dard bhari chikh us factory me goonj jati hai. Aur is baar bllod ki ek moti dhaar uske sir ke piche se nikalne lagti hai.

Ye dekh kr wo Black man kehta hai " Master Namit dhyan se. "
" Mai money ke liye kisi ke murder ke chakkar me nahi padna chahata hu. "

Namit " .......mai Apne mind me ye baat yaad rakhunga. "
( Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Now, to kya hab hum start kre ? "
" Tum ready to ho na ? "


Shubham, Namit ko apni adhkhuli aakho se dekhte hue " T...tum ki..s b..are me baa..t kar ..rahe ho ? "

Namit apni power ko release karte hue apni red colour ki glow hoti aakho se Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue evil smile ke sath kehta hai " Maine to bas abhi shuruwat ki hai. "

Tabhi Namit ko apne left side kuch feel hota hai aur wo apne aakho ko left side krke dekhta hai " Hm.... ?? "

Waha left side me factory ki ek wall tuti hui thi. Jiske bahar ek red colour ka orc chupchap khada ye sub dekh Raha tha.

Ye dekh kar Namit us orc ki taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Ye kya hai ? "
" Ek Orc ? "
" Kya yaha aas paas me koi dengoen break hua hai ya aur koi baat hai ? "

Tap... Tap...

Ye kehta hua Namit apne jacket ko utar kar us orc ki taraf aaram se aage jane lagta hai.

Wo samne khada orc dar se bahut buri tarah kaap rah hota Hain itni dur se bhi dekhne par baki bache dono S Rank Hunturs ko bhi ye baat saaf dikh Raha hota hai.

Unme se ek smile karte hue kehta hai " Kitni ajib baat hai. "
" Master Namit aisa lagta hai aapne is orc ko dekh liya ye baat jaan kar ye bhut jyada Dr gya hai. "

Namit ek jor ka punch us orc ki taraf marte hue kehta hai " Mere paas abhi tmhare sath time pass karne ka wakt bikul bhi nahi hai. "

Jabki us orc ka dar har gujarte pal ke sath increase hota jata hai. Aur jaise hi usko punch padne wala
hot hi usase just kuch micro second phle usko apne maind me ek aawaj sunayi deti hai.

" Exchange. "






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UPDATE NO - 144(B)
SHUBHAM SHOW HIS TRUE COLOR​

AN UNKNOWN PLACE, USA

Ye area isi City ka ek outer place tha, jaha kuch year phle Tak to bahut cehal pahal hua karti thi. Quki past me ye place is City ke industrial area me se ek hua karta tha.
But jaise jaise civilization hua aur bhi sukh suvidhaon aane lagi samay ki raftar ke sath ye place kud ko morden nahi kar paya aur usi ka natija hai ki ye place ab is City ke remote nd band pade ilako me tabdil ho gaya. Jaha galti se hi kbhi koi dikhayi deta hai.

Is time bhi is jagah bilkul sannata pasara hua tha. Har jagah close ho cuki factory aur wherehouse pade hue the.
Pure jagah electricity bhi naam matr ki thi.

Lakin hmesa ki bikul saant rhne wala ye jagah aaj raat ke samay thoda sa asaant dikh Raha tha. Quki ek band padi badi si factory ke ek bade se hall type jagah par is time kul 4 log maujud the.

Jinme se 3 log to us jagah ke bich me khade the. Lakin unke samne ek lohe ke piller ke sahare ek ladka baitha hua tha. Jo ki koi aur nahi Shubham hi tha.

Shubham ki halat is time bikul bhi thik nahi lag rahi thi. Uske shirt ke kai button khule hue the. Aur sayad 1-2 to tut bhi chuke the. Jis par jagah jagah blood laga hua tha. Aur gale ke paas ki jagah par sbse jyada blood lag hu tha. Jo ki uske muh aur naak se halka halka bhi bhi beh rah tha. Uske pure face me kafi chot ke nishan the. Ek aakh to sujne ke sath bilkul kaali pad gayi thi. Kul mila kar wo bhut buri halat me tha.

Aur uske samne khade 3 log Scavenger Guild ke hi 3 S Rank Huntur the. Jinme jo sbse aage khada tha wo koi aur nahi Namit hi tha. Uske bagal me hi jo S Rank Huntur khad th usne bas ek slivless jacket pehna hu tha jiska chain bhi usne open rakha hua tha jiske karan uske 6 pack abs show ho rahe the. Uske Baal bhi curly thpe ke the. Aur wo ek black man tha.
Sbse piche Jo khad tha usne chasma lagaya hu tha aur usne normal kapde hi pehan rakhe the.

Shubham ki ye halat dekh kr wo Black man thodi fikar ke sath kehta hai " Tmhe pura yakin hai ki ye sub kuch thik hai ? "

Namit, Shubham ki taraf dekh kr ek evil smile krte hue " Mera ise kuch karne ka irada bikul bhi nahi hai. "
" Mai to sirf ek baat janana chahta hu ? "

Itna kehne ke baad Namit apne mind me ye sochte hue evile smile krta rehta hai ' Master Sandy ne mujhe Rider ko touch bhi karne se warna kiya tha..... '
' Lakin mera plan phle se hi tha ki mujhe rider ke sath direct koi pang nahi karn hai. '
' Quki mai janta tha ki ek aur person hai, jo mujhe jo janana hai wo baat bata skt hai. '
' Maine ise starting me hi kaha tha ki us dengoen ke ander mere bhai ke sath kya hu tha agar ye mujhe wo sari baat bikul such such bata de to mai isko bina kisi khroch ke jane dunga. '
' Sirf ek hi baat thi Jo mai sunana cahta hu. '
' Aur wo ye ki us Rider ne mere Bhai ko mara tha. '
' Jitni jldi me ye baat tmhare muh se sun lunga Shubham utni jldi Mera tumse kaam khtam ho jayega. Aur mujhe tmse koi matlb nahi rahega. '

Ye soch kar Namit wapas se Shubham ke aas ja kar apne ghutno ke bal jukh kar Besudh pade Shubham ko hilate hue kehta hai " Oye... uth ja... "
" Chal bahut ho Gaya Tera natak, ab uth ja... "

Lakin Shubham ko Namit ne itna mar th ki wo apni aakhe nahi khol pata hai. Wo bikul besudh hu pad apna sir niche latkaye wahi baitha tha.

BISOOM......

Ab Namit ko gussa aa jata hai aur wo ek jordar punch sidhe Shubham ke chest ke bicho bich Marte hue jor se gusse me kehta hai " Maine kaha utha ja saale.... "

Aaaahhhhhh......
Blurr....

Is jordar mukke se Shubham na cahte hue bhi dard ke karan hose me aa jata hai. Aur dard bhari ek chikh ke sath uske muh se kafi Sara blood bahar aa jata hai.

Ye dekh kar waha par santi se khada wo 3rd S Rank Huntur apne trouser ke pocket me hath Dale hue aaram se kehta hai " Ye kafi Sehanshil lagta hai. Mere khyal se ye ek Tanker hoga tabhi ye utna kuch jhel gaya. "
" Iske jagah agar koi normal human hota to wo ab tak bhut phle hi mar cuka hota. "

Namit bhi ye sun kar Shubham ko dekhte hue khijate hue kehta hai " Mujhe smjh me nahi aa raha hai ki ye aakhir jid kyu kar Raha hai. Ye sala masoom sa dikhne wala kamina hai. "
" Tmhara courage to tarif karne layak hai. Lakin tmhara jiddipan tmko sahi end ki taraf nahi le ja raha hai. "

BAAAMMMMM......
Aahhhh....

Aur ye kehte hue Namit, Shubham ke sir ko apne right hath se pakade hue Shubham ke piche ke iron ke mote se pillor me jor se bhida deta hai. Jisase Shubham ki ek baar fir se dard bhari chikh us band pade factory me goonj utati hai. Aur uske sir ke piche se bhi blood nikal kar uske shirt ka back part bhigone lagt hai.

Namit, Shubham ke sir ko pakde hue hi kehta hai " Sun be.... "
" Mai tujhe bikul bhi jaan se marna nahi chahta hu. "
( Shubham ke sir ko us 3rd hunter ki taraf ghumate hue ) " Ye bnda jo mere piche tu hasta hua dekh rah hai. Ye ek kafi ach healer hai. "
" To tu jab bhi bilkul Marne ke kagar par hoga ye tujhe Bach lega. "
" To iska matlb yhi hai ki jab tak tu mujhe, jo mai janana chta hu wo baat nahi bata deta, tab tak mai tujhe yaha hmesa isi tarah torture karta rahunga. "
" Aur tujhe itn bata Diya to ek baat aur bata deta hu ki hum yaha ek aisi factory me hai Jo ki last ke 5 year se bikul band padi hui hai.
" To tu cahe yaha jitni jor se, aur jitni der chillata rahe. Teri aawaj ko sun kar yaha tujhe bachane aane wala koi bhi nahi hai. "
" To ab bata tune kya socha ? "
" Kya ye sub sun kar ab tu mujhe kuch batane ko raji hua ? "

Shubham ( dard bhari kaapti aawaj me ) ".....offf.... "

Ye sun kar Namit ki aakhe glow hone lagti hai wo excited ho jata hai aur kehta hai " Kya ? "

Shubham itna dard hone ke bawjud bhi kisi tarah ek smile karte hue apne left hand ki middle finger ko dikhate hue kehta hai " FUCK OFF. "

BAAAMMMMM......
Aahhhhh.......

Aur ye sun aur dekh kr to Namit ke gusse ki limit Tut jati hai. Aur wo usse me jor se Shubham ke sir ko piche ke iron ke pillor se de marta hai. Ye attack itn jordar tha ki piche ka iron pillor eclipse ki shap me bend ho jata hai.
Aur Shubham ki ab tak ki sbse tej aur dard bhari chikh us factory me goonj jati hai. Aur is baar bllod ki ek moti dhaar uske sir ke piche se nikalne lagti hai.

Ye dekh kr wo Black man kehta hai " Master Namit dhyan se. "
" Mai money ke liye kisi ke murder ke chakkar me nahi padna chahata hu. "

Namit " .......mai Apne mind me ye baat yaad rakhunga. "
( Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Now, to kya hab hum start kre ? "
" Tum ready to ho na ? "


Shubham, Namit ko apni adhkhuli aakho se dekhte hue " T...tum ki..s b..are me baa..t kar ..rahe ho ? "

Namit apni power ko release karte hue apni red colour ki glow hoti aakho se Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue evil smile ke sath kehta hai " Maine to bas abhi shuruwat ki hai. "

Tabhi Namit ko apne left side kuch feel hota hai aur wo apne aakho ko left side krke dekhta hai " Hm.... ?? "

Waha left side me factory ki ek wall tuti hui thi. Jiske bahar ek red colour ka orc chupchap khada ye sub dekh Raha tha.

Ye dekh kar Namit us orc ki taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Ye kya hai ? "
" Ek Orc ? "
" Kya yaha aas paas me koi dengoen break hua hai ya aur koi baat hai ? "

Tap... Tap...

Ye kehta hua Namit apne jacket ko utar kar us orc ki taraf aaram se aage jane lagta hai.

Wo samne khada orc dar se bahut buri tarah kaap rah hota Hain itni dur se bhi dekhne par baki bache dono S Rank Hunturs ko bhi ye baat saaf dikh Raha hota hai.

Unme se ek smile karte hue kehta hai " Kitni ajib baat hai. "
" Master Namit aisa lagta hai aapne is orc ko dekh liya ye baat jaan kar ye bhut jyada Dr gya hai. "

Namit ek jor ka punch us orc ki taraf marte hue kehta hai " Mere paas abhi tmhare sath time pass karne ka wakt bikul bhi nahi hai. "

Jabki us orc ka dar har gujarte pal ke sath increase hota jata hai. Aur jaise hi usko punch padne wala
hot hi usase just kuch micro second phle usko apne maind me ek aawaj sunayi deti hai.

" Exchange. "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

Awesome update

 

[Arvind Sharma]

nice1

 

[arish8299]

welcome back

 

[sorbobhuk]

UPDATE NO - 144(B)
SHUBHAM SHOW HIS TRUE COLOR​

AN UNKNOWN PLACE, USA

Ye area isi City ka ek outer place tha, jaha kuch year phle Tak to bahut cehal pahal hua karti thi. Quki past me ye place is City ke industrial area me se ek hua karta tha.
But jaise jaise civilization hua aur bhi sukh suvidhaon aane lagi samay ki raftar ke sath ye place kud ko morden nahi kar paya aur usi ka natija hai ki ye place ab is City ke remote nd band pade ilako me tabdil ho gaya. Jaha galti se hi kbhi koi dikhayi deta hai.

Is time bhi is jagah bilkul sannata pasara hua tha. Har jagah close ho cuki factory aur wherehouse pade hue the.
Pure jagah electricity bhi naam matr ki thi.

Lakin hmesa ki bikul saant rhne wala ye jagah aaj raat ke samay thoda sa asaant dikh Raha tha. Quki ek band padi badi si factory ke ek bade se hall type jagah par is time kul 4 log maujud the.

Jinme se 3 log to us jagah ke bich me khade the. Lakin unke samne ek lohe ke piller ke sahare ek ladka baitha hua tha. Jo ki koi aur nahi Shubham hi tha.

Shubham ki halat is time bikul bhi thik nahi lag rahi thi. Uske shirt ke kai button khule hue the. Aur sayad 1-2 to tut bhi chuke the. Jis par jagah jagah blood laga hua tha. Aur gale ke paas ki jagah par sbse jyada blood lag hu tha. Jo ki uske muh aur naak se halka halka bhi bhi beh rah tha. Uske pure face me kafi chot ke nishan the. Ek aakh to sujne ke sath bilkul kaali pad gayi thi. Kul mila kar wo bhut buri halat me tha.

Aur uske samne khade 3 log Scavenger Guild ke hi 3 S Rank Huntur the. Jinme jo sbse aage khada tha wo koi aur nahi Namit hi tha. Uske bagal me hi jo S Rank Huntur khad th usne bas ek slivless jacket pehna hu tha jiska chain bhi usne open rakha hua tha jiske karan uske 6 pack abs show ho rahe the. Uske Baal bhi curly thpe ke the. Aur wo ek black man tha.
Sbse piche Jo khad tha usne chasma lagaya hu tha aur usne normal kapde hi pehan rakhe the.

Shubham ki ye halat dekh kr wo Black man thodi fikar ke sath kehta hai " Tmhe pura yakin hai ki ye sub kuch thik hai ? "

Namit, Shubham ki taraf dekh kr ek evil smile krte hue " Mera ise kuch karne ka irada bikul bhi nahi hai. "
" Mai to sirf ek baat janana chahta hu ? "

Itna kehne ke baad Namit apne mind me ye sochte hue evile smile krta rehta hai ' Master Sandy ne mujhe Rider ko touch bhi karne se warna kiya tha..... '
' Lakin mera plan phle se hi tha ki mujhe rider ke sath direct koi pang nahi karn hai. '
' Quki mai janta tha ki ek aur person hai, jo mujhe jo janana hai wo baat bata skt hai. '
' Maine ise starting me hi kaha tha ki us dengoen ke ander mere bhai ke sath kya hu tha agar ye mujhe wo sari baat bikul such such bata de to mai isko bina kisi khroch ke jane dunga. '
' Sirf ek hi baat thi Jo mai sunana cahta hu. '
' Aur wo ye ki us Rider ne mere Bhai ko mara tha. '
' Jitni jldi me ye baat tmhare muh se sun lunga Shubham utni jldi Mera tumse kaam khtam ho jayega. Aur mujhe tmse koi matlb nahi rahega. '

Ye soch kar Namit wapas se Shubham ke aas ja kar apne ghutno ke bal jukh kar Besudh pade Shubham ko hilate hue kehta hai " Oye... uth ja... "
" Chal bahut ho Gaya Tera natak, ab uth ja... "

Lakin Shubham ko Namit ne itna mar th ki wo apni aakhe nahi khol pata hai. Wo bikul besudh hu pad apna sir niche latkaye wahi baitha tha.

BISOOM......

Ab Namit ko gussa aa jata hai aur wo ek jordar punch sidhe Shubham ke chest ke bicho bich Marte hue jor se gusse me kehta hai " Maine kaha utha ja saale.... "

Aaaahhhhhh......
Blurr....

Is jordar mukke se Shubham na cahte hue bhi dard ke karan hose me aa jata hai. Aur dard bhari ek chikh ke sath uske muh se kafi Sara blood bahar aa jata hai.

Ye dekh kar waha par santi se khada wo 3rd S Rank Huntur apne trouser ke pocket me hath Dale hue aaram se kehta hai " Ye kafi Sehanshil lagta hai. Mere khyal se ye ek Tanker hoga tabhi ye utna kuch jhel gaya. "
" Iske jagah agar koi normal human hota to wo ab tak bhut phle hi mar cuka hota. "

Namit bhi ye sun kar Shubham ko dekhte hue khijate hue kehta hai " Mujhe smjh me nahi aa raha hai ki ye aakhir jid kyu kar Raha hai. Ye sala masoom sa dikhne wala kamina hai. "
" Tmhara courage to tarif karne layak hai. Lakin tmhara jiddipan tmko sahi end ki taraf nahi le ja raha hai. "

BAAAMMMMM......
Aahhhh....

Aur ye kehte hue Namit, Shubham ke sir ko apne right hath se pakade hue Shubham ke piche ke iron ke mote se pillor me jor se bhida deta hai. Jisase Shubham ki ek baar fir se dard bhari chikh us band pade factory me goonj utati hai. Aur uske sir ke piche se bhi blood nikal kar uske shirt ka back part bhigone lagt hai.

Namit, Shubham ke sir ko pakde hue hi kehta hai " Sun be.... "
" Mai tujhe bikul bhi jaan se marna nahi chahta hu. "
( Shubham ke sir ko us 3rd hunter ki taraf ghumate hue ) " Ye bnda jo mere piche tu hasta hua dekh rah hai. Ye ek kafi ach healer hai. "
" To tu jab bhi bilkul Marne ke kagar par hoga ye tujhe Bach lega. "
" To iska matlb yhi hai ki jab tak tu mujhe, jo mai janana chta hu wo baat nahi bata deta, tab tak mai tujhe yaha hmesa isi tarah torture karta rahunga. "
" Aur tujhe itn bata Diya to ek baat aur bata deta hu ki hum yaha ek aisi factory me hai Jo ki last ke 5 year se bikul band padi hui hai.
" To tu cahe yaha jitni jor se, aur jitni der chillata rahe. Teri aawaj ko sun kar yaha tujhe bachane aane wala koi bhi nahi hai. "
" To ab bata tune kya socha ? "
" Kya ye sub sun kar ab tu mujhe kuch batane ko raji hua ? "

Shubham ( dard bhari kaapti aawaj me ) ".....offf.... "

Ye sun kar Namit ki aakhe glow hone lagti hai wo excited ho jata hai aur kehta hai " Kya ? "

Shubham itna dard hone ke bawjud bhi kisi tarah ek smile karte hue apne left hand ki middle finger ko dikhate hue kehta hai " FUCK OFF. "

BAAAMMMMM......
Aahhhhh.......

Aur ye sun aur dekh kr to Namit ke gusse ki limit Tut jati hai. Aur wo usse me jor se Shubham ke sir ko piche ke iron ke pillor se de marta hai. Ye attack itn jordar tha ki piche ka iron pillor eclipse ki shap me bend ho jata hai.
Aur Shubham ki ab tak ki sbse tej aur dard bhari chikh us factory me goonj jati hai. Aur is baar bllod ki ek moti dhaar uske sir ke piche se nikalne lagti hai.

Ye dekh kr wo Black man kehta hai " Master Namit dhyan se. "
" Mai money ke liye kisi ke murder ke chakkar me nahi padna chahata hu. "

Namit " .......mai Apne mind me ye baat yaad rakhunga. "
( Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Now, to kya hab hum start kre ? "
" Tum ready to ho na ? "


Shubham, Namit ko apni adhkhuli aakho se dekhte hue " T...tum ki..s b..are me baa..t kar ..rahe ho ? "

Namit apni power ko release karte hue apni red colour ki glow hoti aakho se Shubham ki taraf dekhte hue evil smile ke sath kehta hai " Maine to bas abhi shuruwat ki hai. "

Tabhi Namit ko apne left side kuch feel hota hai aur wo apne aakho ko left side krke dekhta hai " Hm.... ?? "

Waha left side me factory ki ek wall tuti hui thi. Jiske bahar ek red colour ka orc chupchap khada ye sub dekh Raha tha.

Ye dekh kar Namit us orc ki taraf dekhte hue kehta hai " Ye kya hai ? "
" Ek Orc ? "
" Kya yaha aas paas me koi dengoen break hua hai ya aur koi baat hai ? "

Tap... Tap...

Ye kehta hua Namit apne jacket ko utar kar us orc ki taraf aaram se aage jane lagta hai.

Wo samne khada orc dar se bahut buri tarah kaap rah hota Hain itni dur se bhi dekhne par baki bache dono S Rank Hunturs ko bhi ye baat saaf dikh Raha hota hai.

Unme se ek smile karte hue kehta hai " Kitni ajib baat hai. "
" Master Namit aisa lagta hai aapne is orc ko dekh liya ye baat jaan kar ye bhut jyada Dr gya hai. "

Namit ek jor ka punch us orc ki taraf marte hue kehta hai " Mere paas abhi tmhare sath time pass karne ka wakt bikul bhi nahi hai. "

Jabki us orc ka dar har gujarte pal ke sath increase hota jata hai. Aur jaise hi usko punch padne wala
hot hi usase just kuch micro second phle usko apne maind me ek aawaj sunayi deti hai.

" Exchange. "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!

bahut badhiya update hai..........
welcome back bro...........
ummid hai isbar itna gap nhi hoga
waiting for next update

 

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