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Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise mai Black Ant ka name BERU rakhta hu. Uske baad wo mujhe Queen Ant ke bare me batata hai. Sath hi me wo mujhe batata hai ki abhi bhi 4000 ant's jinda hai. Jo kisi leader ke na hone se JEJU island ke charo taraf yaha waha batakne lage hai. Fir wo mujhse in sare ant's koarne ka order kahta hai. Wahi bache hue Ant's JEJU island ke paas ke sea me khade Warship par Attack kar dete hai. Aur sare backup kr liye khade India ke top 5 Guild ke A aur B Rank hunturs unse mukabla karne lag jate hai.
India bhi kuch ant's pahuch chuke the. Aur usko koi achank se aa kar bina kisi ki najar me aaye maar kar chla gaya.



AB AGEE........


Sare Ant's ko khtam karne me almost 2 din lagte hai.

India ke sea par jab Ant's pahuch gaye to jahir si baat hai ki China ke sea par bhi Ant's fly krte hue pahuch gaye the.
Aur sirf itna hi nahi Ant's to China ke main land me bhi pahuch cuke the.



SEA OF CHINA

China ke sea me last 3 day se JEJU island ki direction me khada Warship abhi bhi ekdam mustaidi se nigrani rakhe hue tha.
Main Dack me Captain khada ho kar samne ke screen ki taraf dekh raha tha. Wo is time bahut hi thaka hua lag raha tha. Yahi haal uske baki sare employe ka bhi tha. Lakin fir bhi sub lage hue tha.

Captain samne screen ki taraf dekhte hue " Hme last ke 2 din se sone ka bhi ab tak time nahi mila hai. "

Ek employee jo ki Screen ki taraf dekh raha tha wo jaldi se kahta hai " Sir Ant's ka ek jund hmari taraf aa raha hai. "

Ye sunte hi Captain ke bagal me unse thode hi piche khada Firstmate captain ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Please Hme inko shoot krne ke liye order dijiye. "

Captain samne dekhte hue " Nahi, 1 minute ruk jao. "
" Quki hamara hero in logo ka khyal kud se hi rakhna chahata hai. "

Fir sare log Warship ke Open areaketaraf dekhne legte hai. Jaha ek tall, fair and handsome sa man khada tha. Uski age 30+ hogi. Usne Red shirt nd Black jeans pahni hui thi. Aur apne kamar tak aate balo ko usne ponny tail banaya hua tha.
Uske Kamar me ek belt laga hua tha. Jisme do bade bade sword latke hue the. Dekhne se hi ye ek bahut hi strong person maalum cahlta tha. Uski height bhi 6 feet + hi thi.
Aur wo Dack par akele hi khada sky me fly karte hue inke hi taraf aa rahe ant's ko bade aaram se dekh raha tha. Ye aadmi koi aur nahi China ka best huntur ek matra 7 Star Rank huntur Liu Zhigang hi tha.

Liu Zhigang sky ki taraf dekhte hue kahta hai " Dekhne se to yahi lagta hai ki yaha bahut sari ant's hai. "
" Lakin kya kar skte hai.... "
" Rest in peace in the ocean. "


Zzzzzzz........

SWOSSSSSS.......
SWOSSSSSS.......

Itna kahte hi Liu Zhigang apne aura ko fully relese karte hue bade hi style me apne dono sword ko apne back se nikal kar usase cross ka nisan banate hue hawa me chala deta hai.
Bs uska itna hi karna tha. Uske body se uski power relese ho kar sword me transfer ho jati hai, aur sword se fire nikal kar sky me cross ka nisan banate hue aage badhati jati hai.


BANG... BANG....

BANG... BANG....
BANG... BANG....


Jaise jaise ye fire aage badhati hai. Ye aur bhi jyada area cover karta jata hai.
Aur ending me ja kar wo idhar ki taraf hi aa rahe Ant's se takra jate hai.
Aur sare ke sare ant's bas is ek matra Attack se jal kar hawa me hi mar jate hai aur unki body kati patang ki tarah nich sea me girne lagti hai.

Aur apne sword ko wapas se apne back me rakhte hue Liu Zhigang sky se girte hue ant's ko dekh kr kahta hai " In choti machliyo ki jagah agar jisne Rider ke sath fight kiya tha wo abhi bhi jinda hai to, uske sath fight karna jyada exciting hoga. "
" Kitni saram ki baat hai. Ye Ant's mera ek Attack bhi thik se nahi khel payi. "




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IN USA

Ek bahut hi aalishan, bada aur khubsurat ghar tha. Jiske living room ko bahut hi khubsurat tarike se sajaya hua tha. sofe ke pura set, uske samne 72 ince ka LED TV, A.C. , proper lights sari chije bokul sahi jagah par bahut hi Karine se sajayi hui thi.

Sofe par ek bahut hi bade body wala aadmi shirtless sirf shorts me baitha hua tha. Ye wahi aadmi tha jo JEJU island ke Raid se pahle Chairman Xabhi se Namit ke matter ke liye Mila tha. Jiske aane se India me halchal machi hui thi.
Ye wahi Aadmi tha. Jiski height almost 7 feet thi. Body Hulk jaisi, jiske samne acha sa acha bodybuilder bhi kisi chote bache jaisa lagta hai. Uske hair gray color ke the. Jo ki uske solder tak aate the.
Uske body par kai sare tattoo bane hue the. Dono solder ko cover karte hue back pr ek bahut hi bada aur khubsurat tattoo. Dono hatho par attractive tatoo.

Aur ye aur koi nahi World ka sbse strongest huntur tha. Jiska name Sandy Nirwan tha. Aur iske Ghuild ka name SCAVENGER GUILD tha.


Aapko Scavenger Guild ke bare me kuch bate bata deta hu :-

1. Ye Guild pure America me kaam karta hai.
2. Is Guild me bahut sare S Rank hunturs hai jinka Guild master Ek national level huntur Sandy Nirwan hai. Jo ki world ka sbse strongest huntur hai.
3. Kabhi kabhi ye apne S Rank hunturs ko Yad national level hunturs ko dusre country me waha ke High Rank DENGEON ko clear karne ke liye bhejate hai. Jab waha hi govt. Inse Request karke inhe inke kaam ke paise pay karti hai.

4. Namit bhi isi Guild ka ek Member hai.

Sandy Nirwan apne living room me sofe par baith kar aaram se TV par JEJU island ki raid me meri aur Black Ant ki fight dekh raha tha. Ki tabhi gate knock hota hai.

Knock.... Knock....

Sandy nirwan TV ki taraf dekhte hue " Ander aa jao. "

Kadak....

Aur Living room ke door se hote hue ek gray hair wali bahut hi khubsurat Lady ander aati hai. Uski bhi height almost 6 feet thi sath hi me wo dikhne me bhi bahut hi jyada hot thi. Usne formal lakin attractive kapde pahle hue the. Ye thi Sandy Nirwan ki secretary. Jiska name tha Laura.

Tap... Tap... Tap...

Chalte hue Laura Sofe ke paas aati hai. Aur TV ki taraf dekhte hue kati hai " Kaisa hai ye ? "
" Mister Namit aur Rider ke bich me kewal ek hi connection hai. "
" Mister Namit me bade bhai Amit, Sayad Rider ke hatho mara gaye the. "

Sandy Nirwan, Laura ko dekhte hue " To mujhe iska badla lena hoga ? "
" Is baat ka kya yahi Matlab nikalta hai ? "

Laura " Lag to aisa hi raha hai. "

Sandy Nirwan TV screen ki taraf isara karte hue " Ye ho jane ke baad Rider se milna ab aur bhi jyada difficult ho gaya hai. "
" Mai usase milna cahta hu. Lakin kitne saram ki baat hai. "

Laura " Aap kya karoge agar dono ke bich fight hui to ? "

Sandy Nirwan halke smile ke sath " Laura, Kya Tum abhi bhi mujhe nahi janti ho ? "
( Apni aura ko halka relese karte hue apne red eye ke sath ) " Mr. Namit, Scavenger Guild ke ander hai. "
" Aur Scavenger Guild mera hai. "


KADAK.....

Ye kahne ke baad Sandy Upar dekhte hue ek evile smile ke sath Apne hatho ki muthi ko kas leta hai. Jisase uske right hath me rakha hua TV ka remote bahut buri tarah tut jata hai.

Fir Sandy Nirwan kahta hai " Mai aise kisi bhi person ko kabhi maaf nahi karunga jisne bhi mere Guild ke ek bhi member ko touch bhi kiya to. "
" Bhale hi wo American Govt. Hi kyu na ho. "



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JEJU ISLAND
3rd NIGHT OF JEJU ISLAND RAID



TAD.... TAD.... TAD...
TAD... TAD..... TAD...


Aaj JEJU island ke Raid ka 3rd night tha. Sky me full moon nikla hua tha. Sath me dher sare starts bhi nikale hue the. JEJU island ke ander bahut year ke baad santi aayi thi. Jise toda waha par aaye military ke aaye hue 4, 360 degree wale helicopters ne.
Wo helicopters JEJU island ke ant's ke TUNNEL ke paas ja kar land hoti hai. Unse Military aur Knight Guild ke members niche utarte hai.

Quki KNIGHT Guild ko hi JEJU island ke Raid ke baad waha se mana aur magic crystals ko collect karne ka kaam diya gaya tha.
Aur wo is time yahi kaam karne yaha aaye hue the. Quki abhi bhi unko ek dar tha ki kahi kuch ho na jaye to jitni jaldi ho sake hm log ye kaam bhi nipta leta hai.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Knight Guild ke sare A aur B Rank hunturs is time yaha maujud the. Aur sabse aage Knight Guild ka Guild Master Manish hi chal raha tha. Uske thik bagal me Vivek aur uske piche baki sare Knight Guild ke hunturs aur sbse last me military ke log chal rahe the.

Manish sigret pite hue niche dekh kar kuch dukhi man se kahta hai " Yaha aisa bhi ek person hai. Jiske paas sayad hi koi luck hai. "

Vivek, Manish ki taraf dekhte hue confusion se " Kya ? "

Manish, Vivek ke sath ab sbse piche chalte hue aage kahta hai " Us Aadmi ne Hmesa apna best diya hai. Taki wo best ban ske. "
" Uska dream tha ki wo ek gold medalist bane."
" Jiske liye usne bahut hi hard tranning ki. "
" Apne weight ko kam kiya taki wo lower weight ke catigray me challenge de sake. "
" Usne bahut hi jyada hard tranning ki, din raat ek kar diya. "
" Sirf Olympics ke liye stage par utarna baki rah gaya tha. "
" Wo apne dream ko bas pane hi wala tha."
" Us raat se phle kabhi bhi use nightmare bhi nahi aaye. "
" Uska condition bhi sbse best tha. "
" Lakin..... "
" Achanak se hue AWAKENING ke karan, Magica masters ne use pakad liya aur wo Olympics me participate nahi kar paya. "

Ye sub kahte hue Manish almost rone hi lag jata hai. Wahi uski ye sari bate sun kr vivek kahta hai " Kya ye aapki story hai bade bhaiya ? "

Manish " Us aadmi ko apna dream chorna pada. Lakin usne apne liye ek new dream banaya. "
" Apne country ka best Guild banane ka dream. "

Vivek, Manish ko incrage karte hue " Mai janta hu aap amazing hai bade bhaiya. "

Tabhi unke piche hi chal rahi ek aur female huntur ek taraf dekhte hue kahti hai " Yaha kuda fekna ban kro. "

Fir Manish aur Vivek ko thoda aur aage Ant tunnel ke ander jane ke baad magic crystals dikhayi dene lagte hai.
Manish aage badh kar magic crystals ko apne dono hatho meek sath utha kar kisi chote bache ki tarah unki chmak ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Dekho in high quality ke magic stones ko. "
" Agar hum apne sath in sare Magic crystals ko le gaye to hum apne country ke sbse bade guild ban jayenge. "

Vivek bhi piche khada ho kar bahut hi excitement se Magic crystals ko dekh raha hota hai.
Wahi unke piche chal rahi wo female huntur halke gusse se kahti hai " Ye thik baat nahi hai. "
" Ye galat hai. "

Waha charo taraf ant's ki kati, mari hui body padi hui thi. ye sub dekh kr Manish Kahta hai " Waise yaha sub bahut hi saaf suthra hai. "
( Military walo ki taraf dekhte hue ) " To chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hai. Aur magic crystals ko collect karna suru kar do. Quki mujhe yaha par koi bhi magic feel nahi ho raha hai. "


SWOSSSSSS.....
SLASHHH......


Tabhi achanak se ek tunnel ke ander se ek jinda Ant Manish ko dikhayi de jata hai. Aur Manish bhi bina koi time gawaye, apne sword se us any ka sir uske body se alag kar deta hai.

Manish " Oops ! Yaha ek bacha rah gaya tha. "

Us Ant ko marne me baad Manish piche mud kar military walo ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Well, aap logo ko jyada chinta karne ki jarurat nahi hai. "
" Bhale hi yaha kuch aur ant's jinda ho skte hai. Lakin hum log yaha hai. "

Military wale log bhi darte darte hi sahi lakin apna kaam, Magic crystals ko collect karna suru kar dete hai.

Tabhi left side ki taraf dekhte hue Manish se darte hue kahta hai " Bade... Bade bhaiya ! "

Manish ( samne ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Kya hua ? "

Ek dusra huntur ( Vivek jis taraf dekh raha tha usi taraf dekhte hue dar ke sath ) " kon ho tum ? "


TAP.... TAP.... TAP....

Aur samne se ek Sandy Nirwan ke jaise hi bahut badi body wala person nage pair hi chalte hue inke hi taraf aa raha tha. Uski upper body open thi. Niche usne gutne tak bas ek fata hua clothes hi pahna hua tha. Jisko usne ek armour type se apne body se tikaye hue the. Uske hair black color ke uske gale tak aa rahe the. Uski 8 abs body aur bahut hi badi badi bhujaye thi. Usne apne solder par ek sher ka khal udha hua tha. Aur uske body par jagah jagah janwaro ke bone se bane hue kai sari chije usne pahn rakhi thi. Uski aakhe yellow color ki thi. Wo dekhne se hi bahut khatarnak lag raha tha.

Ab tak waha maujud sare logo ne use dekh liya tha aur Manish use dekhte hue apne man me sochta hai ' JEJU island par sirf Association hi ek matra hai jo hme mission aur Soldiers de skti hai. '
( Us bande ko dekhte hue jor se ) " Apni pehchan batao ? "

Vivek darte hue " Bade bhaiya, kya ye human hi hai ? "

Wahi Military wale log us Anjan aadmi ko dekh kr uske taraf gun point karte hue use shoot hi karne jate hai to Wo female huntur unke taraf dekh kr kahti hai " Hey use shoot mat kar dena. "
" Wo koi monster nahi hai. "

Military wala ek Soldier us Anjan aadmi ki taraf Gun point kiye hue kahta hai " Tum restricted area me ho. "
" Agar tum hmare order ko follow nahi karoge to hum tumhe shoot kar denge. "

Wo anjan aadmi paas aane ke baad sare logo ki taraf apni yellow eye ke sath ghur kar dekhte hue gusse me na jane kis language me kuch kahta hai.

Manish ye sun kr shocked hote hue apne man me sochta hai ' kya Ye ek Monster hai ? '


SNAP.....

Tabhi pata nahi kaha se koi ek chutki bajata hai. Aur agle hi pal waha par maujud sare log behosh ho kar apne apne jagah gir jate hai.
Aur waha wahi Anjan aadmi abhi bhi khada rahta hai.

Anjan aadmi piche mud kar kahta hai " Tum kya kar rahe ho ? "

Aur ye sunte hi Waha us Anjan aadmi ke piche ek blue skin wala aadmi aa jata hai. Uske hair ekdam snow ki taraf white the jo ki uske kamar tak ja rahe the. Usne pure kapde pahne hue the. Lakin uske kapde bhi niche se fate hue the. Aur un kapdo ke upar usne ek white color ka rob pahna hua tha. Wo dekhne se hi kafi old lag raha tha. Aur ye chutki bhi usi ne bajayi thi. Jise sunane ke baad waha ke sare log behosh ho gaye the.

Anjan old man " Hame yaha koi scene create karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. "
" Maine in sub ko yaha bas thodi der ke liye sula diya hai. "
" kya Tum check karna cahte ho ? "

Anjan aadmi samne ki taraf dekhte hue " Mujhe pura yakin hai ye usi ki power hai. "

Anjan old man, Manish ki taraf dekhte hue " Ye to bada ajeeb hai. "
" Mujhe smjh menahi aa raha hai. Wo aakhir humans ki help kyu kar raha hai ? "

Anjan aadmi TUNNEL me idhar udhar dekhte hue " kon jane ? "
" Agar tum itne hi utsuk ho to, kud hi ja kar usase kyu nahi puch lete ho ? "
( Mare hue ant's ki body ko dekhte hue ) " ye yaha in incests se sade hue chijo ke jaise bahut hi buri badbu aa rahi hai. "
" Agar USNE ye dekh liya. To WO bahut hi jyada gussa karti. "

Anjan Old man " Hunt aise hi plan ke hisab se chalta rahega. "
" Kuch bhi Change nahi hoga. "

Anjan aadmi " Thik hai. "


Buzzzz.....
Buzzzz.....


Ye sun kar wo anjan old man apne right hath aage karta hai. Aur usme se blue color ki energy ka gola niklne lagta hai. Jise agle hi pal us old man me apne hath ko open karke niche gira diya. Aur wo energy ka gola samne ja kar ek bahut bade portal me Change ho jata hai.

Anjan aadmi tabhi kuch sochte hue kahta hai " Oh! Aisa lagata hai ki koi yaha tha. "

Anjan Old man ye sun kar piche mud kar anjan aadmi ko dekhte hue kahta hai " India me ? "

Anjan aadmi ek evile smile ke sath " Ab jabki hum yaha hai. Kya khyal hai ? "
" Kya hum hi uski khatirdari kar de ? "

Anjan Old man " Hume ye jagah uske hatho me chor dena cahiye. "

Anjan man " Tum isme involved nahi hona cahte, hai na ? "

Anjan Old man portal ke ander jate hue " Tum ise aise bhi dekh sakte ho. "
" Mujhe koi problem nahi hai. "
" Tum jaisa chaho waisa sochne ke liye free ho. "

Itna kah kar wo anjan old man portal ke ander chla jata hai. Aur wo portal bhi band ho jata hai.
Anjan Old man ke jane ke baad Anjan aadmi halke gusse se kahta hai " Darpok kahi ka. "

Fir wo ek baad Manish ko dekhta hai aur kahta hai " Well ! Mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai ki hame yaha scene banane ki koi jarurat nahi hai. "


SWOSSSSSS.....

Buzzzz.....
Buzzzz.....

Itna kah kar wo anjan aadmi hawa me hi apna left hath ek baar marta hai. Aur uske samne ek bada sa red portal open ho jata hai.
Aur wo anjan person bhi us portal ke ander chla jata hai. Aur agle hi pal ye portal bhi band ho kar gayab ho jata hai.


















Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
AReeee yrrr ye kya update de diyaa poora dimaagh hi ghoom gaya isse padh kr to.


Jeju Island 🏝️ ki raid bhi ab complete ho gyiii hai almost lagta to yehi hai .


ab ye Sandy ko alag chull machi padi hai or wahan uss Chinese ko bhi Black Ant 🐜 se ladna tha ajeeb hi namoone bhare pade hain yahaan to.


Ab ye 2 namoone kon aagaye aise lag rha hai k mela laga huwaa hai jo har koi aajataa hai ghoomne phirne.

or ye Manish ka kya scene hai jo woh namoone usko aise dekh rhe the.

ab agle update m hi pata chale gaa k kya hogaa 😂 pehle to ap batane se rahe 😁.

shaandaar lekin confusing update 😍😁.
 
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UPDATE NO - 107
ENTRY OF TWO UNKNOWN PERSON





Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise mai Black Ant ka name BERU rakhta hu. Uske baad wo mujhe Queen Ant ke bare me batata hai. Sath hi me wo mujhe batata hai ki abhi bhi 4000 ant's jinda hai. Jo kisi leader ke na hone se JEJU island ke charo taraf yaha waha batakne lage hai. Fir wo mujhse in sare ant's koarne ka order kahta hai. Wahi bache hue Ant's JEJU island ke paas ke sea me khade Warship par Attack kar dete hai. Aur sare backup kr liye khade India ke top 5 Guild ke A aur B Rank hunturs unse mukabla karne lag jate hai.
India bhi kuch ant's pahuch chuke the. Aur usko koi achank se aa kar bina kisi ki najar me aaye maar kar chla gaya.



AB AGEE........


Sare Ant's ko khtam karne me almost 2 din lagte hai.

India ke sea par jab Ant's pahuch gaye to jahir si baat hai ki China ke sea par bhi Ant's fly krte hue pahuch gaye the.
Aur sirf itna hi nahi Ant's to China ke main land me bhi pahuch cuke the.



SEA OF CHINA

China ke sea me last 3 day se JEJU island ki direction me khada Warship abhi bhi ekdam mustaidi se nigrani rakhe hue tha.
Main Dack me Captain khada ho kar samne ke screen ki taraf dekh raha tha. Wo is time bahut hi thaka hua lag raha tha. Yahi haal uske baki sare employe ka bhi tha. Lakin fir bhi sub lage hue tha.

Captain samne screen ki taraf dekhte hue " Hme last ke 2 din se sone ka bhi ab tak time nahi mila hai. "

Ek employee jo ki Screen ki taraf dekh raha tha wo jaldi se kahta hai " Sir Ant's ka ek jund hmari taraf aa raha hai. "

Ye sunte hi Captain ke bagal me unse thode hi piche khada Firstmate captain ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Please Hme inko shoot krne ke liye order dijiye. "

Captain samne dekhte hue " Nahi, 1 minute ruk jao. "
" Quki hamara hero in logo ka khyal kud se hi rakhna chahata hai. "

Fir sare log Warship ke Open areaketaraf dekhne legte hai. Jaha ek tall, fair and handsome sa man khada tha. Uski age 30+ hogi. Usne Red shirt nd Black jeans pahni hui thi. Aur apne kamar tak aate balo ko usne ponny tail banaya hua tha.
Uske Kamar me ek belt laga hua tha. Jisme do bade bade sword latke hue the. Dekhne se hi ye ek bahut hi strong person maalum cahlta tha. Uski height bhi 6 feet + hi thi.
Aur wo Dack par akele hi khada sky me fly karte hue inke hi taraf aa rahe ant's ko bade aaram se dekh raha tha. Ye aadmi koi aur nahi China ka best huntur ek matra 7 Star Rank huntur Liu Zhigang hi tha.

Liu Zhigang sky ki taraf dekhte hue kahta hai " Dekhne se to yahi lagta hai ki yaha bahut sari ant's hai. "
" Lakin kya kar skte hai.... "
" Rest in peace in the ocean. "


Zzzzzzz........

SWOSSSSSS.......
SWOSSSSSS.......

Itna kahte hi Liu Zhigang apne aura ko fully relese karte hue bade hi style me apne dono sword ko apne back se nikal kar usase cross ka nisan banate hue hawa me chala deta hai.
Bs uska itna hi karna tha. Uske body se uski power relese ho kar sword me transfer ho jati hai, aur sword se fire nikal kar sky me cross ka nisan banate hue aage badhati jati hai.


BANG... BANG....

BANG... BANG....
BANG... BANG....


Jaise jaise ye fire aage badhati hai. Ye aur bhi jyada area cover karta jata hai.
Aur ending me ja kar wo idhar ki taraf hi aa rahe Ant's se takra jate hai.
Aur sare ke sare ant's bas is ek matra Attack se jal kar hawa me hi mar jate hai aur unki body kati patang ki tarah nich sea me girne lagti hai.

Aur apne sword ko wapas se apne back me rakhte hue Liu Zhigang sky se girte hue ant's ko dekh kr kahta hai " In choti machliyo ki jagah agar jisne Rider ke sath fight kiya tha wo abhi bhi jinda hai to, uske sath fight karna jyada exciting hoga. "
" Kitni saram ki baat hai. Ye Ant's mera ek Attack bhi thik se nahi khel payi. "




~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

IN USA

Ek bahut hi aalishan, bada aur khubsurat ghar tha. Jiske living room ko bahut hi khubsurat tarike se sajaya hua tha. sofe ke pura set, uske samne 72 ince ka LED TV, A.C. , proper lights sari chije bokul sahi jagah par bahut hi Karine se sajayi hui thi.

Sofe par ek bahut hi bade body wala aadmi shirtless sirf shorts me baitha hua tha. Ye wahi aadmi tha jo JEJU island ke Raid se pahle Chairman Xabhi se Namit ke matter ke liye Mila tha. Jiske aane se India me halchal machi hui thi.
Ye wahi Aadmi tha. Jiski height almost 7 feet thi. Body Hulk jaisi, jiske samne acha sa acha bodybuilder bhi kisi chote bache jaisa lagta hai. Uske hair gray color ke the. Jo ki uske solder tak aate the.
Uske body par kai sare tattoo bane hue the. Dono solder ko cover karte hue back pr ek bahut hi bada aur khubsurat tattoo. Dono hatho par attractive tatoo.

Aur ye aur koi nahi World ka sbse strongest huntur tha. Jiska name Sandy Nirwan tha. Aur iske Ghuild ka name SCAVENGER GUILD tha.


Aapko Scavenger Guild ke bare me kuch bate bata deta hu :-

1. Ye Guild pure America me kaam karta hai.
2. Is Guild me bahut sare S Rank hunturs hai jinka Guild master Ek national level huntur Sandy Nirwan hai. Jo ki world ka sbse strongest huntur hai.
3. Kabhi kabhi ye apne S Rank hunturs ko Yad national level hunturs ko dusre country me waha ke High Rank DENGEON ko clear karne ke liye bhejate hai. Jab waha hi govt. Inse Request karke inhe inke kaam ke paise pay karti hai.

4. Namit bhi isi Guild ka ek Member hai.

Sandy Nirwan apne living room me sofe par baith kar aaram se TV par JEJU island ki raid me meri aur Black Ant ki fight dekh raha tha. Ki tabhi gate knock hota hai.

Knock.... Knock....

Sandy nirwan TV ki taraf dekhte hue " Ander aa jao. "

Kadak....

Aur Living room ke door se hote hue ek gray hair wali bahut hi khubsurat Lady ander aati hai. Uski bhi height almost 6 feet thi sath hi me wo dikhne me bhi bahut hi jyada hot thi. Usne formal lakin attractive kapde pahle hue the. Ye thi Sandy Nirwan ki secretary. Jiska name tha Laura.

Tap... Tap... Tap...

Chalte hue Laura Sofe ke paas aati hai. Aur TV ki taraf dekhte hue kati hai " Kaisa hai ye ? "
" Mister Namit aur Rider ke bich me kewal ek hi connection hai. "
" Mister Namit me bade bhai Amit, Sayad Rider ke hatho mara gaye the. "

Sandy Nirwan, Laura ko dekhte hue " To mujhe iska badla lena hoga ? "
" Is baat ka kya yahi Matlab nikalta hai ? "

Laura " Lag to aisa hi raha hai. "

Sandy Nirwan TV screen ki taraf isara karte hue " Ye ho jane ke baad Rider se milna ab aur bhi jyada difficult ho gaya hai. "
" Mai usase milna cahta hu. Lakin kitne saram ki baat hai. "

Laura " Aap kya karoge agar dono ke bich fight hui to ? "

Sandy Nirwan halke smile ke sath " Laura, Kya Tum abhi bhi mujhe nahi janti ho ? "
( Apni aura ko halka relese karte hue apne red eye ke sath ) " Mr. Namit, Scavenger Guild ke ander hai. "
" Aur Scavenger Guild mera hai. "


KADAK.....

Ye kahne ke baad Sandy Upar dekhte hue ek evile smile ke sath Apne hatho ki muthi ko kas leta hai. Jisase uske right hath me rakha hua TV ka remote bahut buri tarah tut jata hai.

Fir Sandy Nirwan kahta hai " Mai aise kisi bhi person ko kabhi maaf nahi karunga jisne bhi mere Guild ke ek bhi member ko touch bhi kiya to. "
" Bhale hi wo American Govt. Hi kyu na ho. "



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JEJU ISLAND
3rd NIGHT OF JEJU ISLAND RAID



TAD.... TAD.... TAD...
TAD... TAD..... TAD...


Aaj JEJU island ke Raid ka 3rd night tha. Sky me full moon nikla hua tha. Sath me dher sare starts bhi nikale hue the. JEJU island ke ander bahut year ke baad santi aayi thi. Jise toda waha par aaye military ke aaye hue 4, 360 degree wale helicopters ne.
Wo helicopters JEJU island ke ant's ke TUNNEL ke paas ja kar land hoti hai. Unse Military aur Knight Guild ke members niche utarte hai.

Quki KNIGHT Guild ko hi JEJU island ke Raid ke baad waha se mana aur magic crystals ko collect karne ka kaam diya gaya tha.
Aur wo is time yahi kaam karne yaha aaye hue the. Quki abhi bhi unko ek dar tha ki kahi kuch ho na jaye to jitni jaldi ho sake hm log ye kaam bhi nipta leta hai.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Knight Guild ke sare A aur B Rank hunturs is time yaha maujud the. Aur sabse aage Knight Guild ka Guild Master Manish hi chal raha tha. Uske thik bagal me Vivek aur uske piche baki sare Knight Guild ke hunturs aur sbse last me military ke log chal rahe the.

Manish sigret pite hue niche dekh kar kuch dukhi man se kahta hai " Yaha aisa bhi ek person hai. Jiske paas sayad hi koi luck hai. "

Vivek, Manish ki taraf dekhte hue confusion se " Kya ? "

Manish, Vivek ke sath ab sbse piche chalte hue aage kahta hai " Us Aadmi ne Hmesa apna best diya hai. Taki wo best ban ske. "
" Uska dream tha ki wo ek gold medalist bane."
" Jiske liye usne bahut hi hard tranning ki. "
" Apne weight ko kam kiya taki wo lower weight ke catigray me challenge de sake. "
" Usne bahut hi jyada hard tranning ki, din raat ek kar diya. "
" Sirf Olympics ke liye stage par utarna baki rah gaya tha. "
" Wo apne dream ko bas pane hi wala tha."
" Us raat se phle kabhi bhi use nightmare bhi nahi aaye. "
" Uska condition bhi sbse best tha. "
" Lakin..... "
" Achanak se hue AWAKENING ke karan, Magica masters ne use pakad liya aur wo Olympics me participate nahi kar paya. "

Ye sub kahte hue Manish almost rone hi lag jata hai. Wahi uski ye sari bate sun kr vivek kahta hai " Kya ye aapki story hai bade bhaiya ? "

Manish " Us aadmi ko apna dream chorna pada. Lakin usne apne liye ek new dream banaya. "
" Apne country ka best Guild banane ka dream. "

Vivek, Manish ko incrage karte hue " Mai janta hu aap amazing hai bade bhaiya. "

Tabhi unke piche hi chal rahi ek aur female huntur ek taraf dekhte hue kahti hai " Yaha kuda fekna ban kro. "

Fir Manish aur Vivek ko thoda aur aage Ant tunnel ke ander jane ke baad magic crystals dikhayi dene lagte hai.
Manish aage badh kar magic crystals ko apne dono hatho meek sath utha kar kisi chote bache ki tarah unki chmak ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Dekho in high quality ke magic stones ko. "
" Agar hum apne sath in sare Magic crystals ko le gaye to hum apne country ke sbse bade guild ban jayenge. "

Vivek bhi piche khada ho kar bahut hi excitement se Magic crystals ko dekh raha hota hai.
Wahi unke piche chal rahi wo female huntur halke gusse se kahti hai " Ye thik baat nahi hai. "
" Ye galat hai. "

Waha charo taraf ant's ki kati, mari hui body padi hui thi. ye sub dekh kr Manish Kahta hai " Waise yaha sub bahut hi saaf suthra hai. "
( Military walo ki taraf dekhte hue ) " To chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hai. Aur magic crystals ko collect karna suru kar do. Quki mujhe yaha par koi bhi magic feel nahi ho raha hai. "


SWOSSSSSS.....
SLASHHH......


Tabhi achanak se ek tunnel ke ander se ek jinda Ant Manish ko dikhayi de jata hai. Aur Manish bhi bina koi time gawaye, apne sword se us any ka sir uske body se alag kar deta hai.

Manish " Oops ! Yaha ek bacha rah gaya tha. "

Us Ant ko marne me baad Manish piche mud kar military walo ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Well, aap logo ko jyada chinta karne ki jarurat nahi hai. "
" Bhale hi yaha kuch aur ant's jinda ho skte hai. Lakin hum log yaha hai. "

Military wale log bhi darte darte hi sahi lakin apna kaam, Magic crystals ko collect karna suru kar dete hai.

Tabhi left side ki taraf dekhte hue Manish se darte hue kahta hai " Bade... Bade bhaiya ! "

Manish ( samne ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Kya hua ? "

Ek dusra huntur ( Vivek jis taraf dekh raha tha usi taraf dekhte hue dar ke sath ) " kon ho tum ? "


TAP.... TAP.... TAP....

Aur samne se ek Sandy Nirwan ke jaise hi bahut badi body wala person nage pair hi chalte hue inke hi taraf aa raha tha. Uski upper body open thi. Niche usne gutne tak bas ek fata hua clothes hi pahna hua tha. Jisko usne ek armour type se apne body se tikaye hue the. Uske hair black color ke uske gale tak aa rahe the. Uski 8 abs body aur bahut hi badi badi bhujaye thi. Usne apne solder par ek sher ka khal udha hua tha. Aur uske body par jagah jagah janwaro ke bone se bane hue kai sari chije usne pahn rakhi thi. Uski aakhe yellow color ki thi. Wo dekhne se hi bahut khatarnak lag raha tha.

Ab tak waha maujud sare logo ne use dekh liya tha aur Manish use dekhte hue apne man me sochta hai ' JEJU island par sirf Association hi ek matra hai jo hme mission aur Soldiers de skti hai. '
( Us bande ko dekhte hue jor se ) " Apni pehchan batao ? "

Vivek darte hue " Bade bhaiya, kya ye human hi hai ? "

Wahi Military wale log us Anjan aadmi ko dekh kr uske taraf gun point karte hue use shoot hi karne jate hai to Wo female huntur unke taraf dekh kr kahti hai " Hey use shoot mat kar dena. "
" Wo koi monster nahi hai. "

Military wala ek Soldier us Anjan aadmi ki taraf Gun point kiye hue kahta hai " Tum restricted area me ho. "
" Agar tum hmare order ko follow nahi karoge to hum tumhe shoot kar denge. "

Wo anjan aadmi paas aane ke baad sare logo ki taraf apni yellow eye ke sath ghur kar dekhte hue gusse me na jane kis language me kuch kahta hai.

Manish ye sun kr shocked hote hue apne man me sochta hai ' kya Ye ek Monster hai ? '


SNAP.....

Tabhi pata nahi kaha se koi ek chutki bajata hai. Aur agle hi pal waha par maujud sare log behosh ho kar apne apne jagah gir jate hai.
Aur waha wahi Anjan aadmi abhi bhi khada rahta hai.

Anjan aadmi piche mud kar kahta hai " Tum kya kar rahe ho ? "

Aur ye sunte hi Waha us Anjan aadmi ke piche ek blue skin wala aadmi aa jata hai. Uske hair ekdam snow ki taraf white the jo ki uske kamar tak ja rahe the. Usne pure kapde pahne hue the. Lakin uske kapde bhi niche se fate hue the. Aur un kapdo ke upar usne ek white color ka rob pahna hua tha. Wo dekhne se hi kafi old lag raha tha. Aur ye chutki bhi usi ne bajayi thi. Jise sunane ke baad waha ke sare log behosh ho gaye the.

Anjan old man " Hame yaha koi scene create karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. "
" Maine in sub ko yaha bas thodi der ke liye sula diya hai. "
" kya Tum check karna cahte ho ? "

Anjan aadmi samne ki taraf dekhte hue " Mujhe pura yakin hai ye usi ki power hai. "

Anjan old man, Manish ki taraf dekhte hue " Ye to bada ajeeb hai. "
" Mujhe smjh menahi aa raha hai. Wo aakhir humans ki help kyu kar raha hai ? "

Anjan aadmi TUNNEL me idhar udhar dekhte hue " kon jane ? "
" Agar tum itne hi utsuk ho to, kud hi ja kar usase kyu nahi puch lete ho ? "
( Mare hue ant's ki body ko dekhte hue ) " ye yaha in incests se sade hue chijo ke jaise bahut hi buri badbu aa rahi hai. "
" Agar USNE ye dekh liya. To WO bahut hi jyada gussa karti. "

Anjan Old man " Hunt aise hi plan ke hisab se chalta rahega. "
" Kuch bhi Change nahi hoga. "

Anjan aadmi " Thik hai. "


Buzzzz.....
Buzzzz.....


Ye sun kar wo anjan old man apne right hath aage karta hai. Aur usme se blue color ki energy ka gola niklne lagta hai. Jise agle hi pal us old man me apne hath ko open karke niche gira diya. Aur wo energy ka gola samne ja kar ek bahut bade portal me Change ho jata hai.

Anjan aadmi tabhi kuch sochte hue kahta hai " Oh! Aisa lagata hai ki koi yaha tha. "

Anjan Old man ye sun kar piche mud kar anjan aadmi ko dekhte hue kahta hai " India me ? "

Anjan aadmi ek evile smile ke sath " Ab jabki hum yaha hai. Kya khyal hai ? "
" Kya hum hi uski khatirdari kar de ? "

Anjan Old man " Hume ye jagah uske hatho me chor dena cahiye. "

Anjan man " Tum isme involved nahi hona cahte, hai na ? "

Anjan Old man portal ke ander jate hue " Tum ise aise bhi dekh sakte ho. "
" Mujhe koi problem nahi hai. "
" Tum jaisa chaho waisa sochne ke liye free ho. "

Itna kah kar wo anjan old man portal ke ander chla jata hai. Aur wo portal bhi band ho jata hai.
Anjan Old man ke jane ke baad Anjan aadmi halke gusse se kahta hai " Darpok kahi ka. "

Fir wo ek baad Manish ko dekhta hai aur kahta hai " Well ! Mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai ki hame yaha scene banane ki koi jarurat nahi hai. "


SWOSSSSSS.....

Buzzzz.....
Buzzzz.....

Itna kah kar wo anjan aadmi hawa me hi apna left hath ek baar marta hai. Aur uske samne ek bada sa red portal open ho jata hai.
Aur wo anjan person bhi us portal ke ander chla jata hai. Aur agle hi pal ye portal bhi band ho kar gayab ho jata hai.


















Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

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Nice update
Sukriya krish1152 bhai.
Keep supporting ☺️👍
शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update is
Aapka bahut sukriya andyking302 bhai is beautiful review ke liye.
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Bhai kuch bhi samaj Mai nahi aaya
Story ko hero ki point of view se dekna hai na ki dusro ke pura update mai hero lagta hai so Gaya
Bhai koi bhi story sirf hero ke wajah se nahi chalti hai. Hero ke story me grow hone ke sath sath time ke hisab se villains bhi itne hi strong hone cahiye. Side character ko bhi utna hi jyada acha aur damdar hona cahiye.
To un character ko bhi uthna hi time dena hota hai grow hone ke liye.
Baki aapka Sukriya Helssalax bhai.
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Nice updates
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Bhai mast majedar lavely update bhai
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Fabulous excellent out standing update bhai jann superree duperrere update
Aapka bahut bahut sukriya andyking302 bhai itne pyare review ke liye.
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Ye dono kiske sath pange ge lene se mana kar rahe the kya ohh rider hey??
Sayad:hint:
Aur ohh dono kon h the 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
Ye to aage hi pata chlega.
Nice update but somehow iam confused 🤔🤔
Ye update tha hi aisa ki aap hi nahi sare Readers confused ho gaye hai.
Bas aap is Update ko ache se yaad rakhna quki story ke future ki neev maine isi Upadte se rakh di hai.
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Bahut hi shandaar update hai bhai maza aa gaya
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bhut achi update hai bhaii bhut bhdiya ...
Ab aayega mazha nimit ka chapter kab khatam hoga
Raider key father se mulakat ka bhi ....



Jaldi update please wating
Abhi nahi lakin aap kah skte ho ab story us taraf hi aage badhegi.
Baki aapka bahut bahut sukriya ASannd123 bhai itne pyare review ke liye.
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Nice update bro .. But 1 question .
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Raider world ka strongest person bann'na chahta .
Ji bikul bhi nahi. Maine aisa apne kisi bhi UPDATE me nahi likha hai.
Rider itna bas itna Strong banan cahta hai ki wo apne family aur FRND'S ko apne dusmano se safe rakh sake.
Aur quki aisa karne ke liye wo jaise hi ek Enemys se strong hota haim koi usase bhi strong Enemy apne hero ke samne aa kar khada ho jata hai.
Bas ab dekhna hai ki rider aakhir kitna Strong banta hai ?

aap ny raider wala character episode 1 se ley kar episode 106 tak boht achy se wel-build kia hy.....
But 2 unknow persion aaty hain raider ko pata bhi nahi chala .
Kise pata chalta. Aakhir Rider koi god to hai nahi jo earth par kahi bhi kuch bhi hoga use pata chal jaye. :smartm:
in future jub un ki fight ho gi to end my definitely rider hi winner ho ga .To wo loog raider se kabhi bhi strong nhi ho sakty.
Kisne kaha :hint:
To raider ne un unknow person ki energy ko sense keu nahi kia? Jub k hona to ye chahye tha k wo loog Raider ko aata mehsoos kar ky bhag jaty ... But wo to raider ki territory me nazzy se ghoom phir rahy thay .......... To bas ye thoda att-patta sa laga.
Aisa is liye kyuki....
1. Rider abhi JEJU island me nahi hai. Wo baki jagah se Ant's ko khtam karne me laga hua tha.
2. Jaruri thodi hai ki wo rider se dare ? :hint:
Baki maine bahut se hints de diye. Ab aur hint nahi dunga. Bas ab aap aage ke update ka wait kijiye.
Aapka sukriya DEMØN bhai.
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Ye to samajh se pare hi ho gaya
Ye dusre grah ke log hai kya
Kya pata ho bhi skte hai. :hinthint:
Inki takat bhi kuch jyada hi hai
Rider ke pita inhi logon me fase the
Isiliye itne jyada takat thi unme
Kuch bhi ho sakta hai
Sahi kaha kuch bhi jo skta hai.
Aapka sukriya arish8299 bhai.
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Nice update
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Awesome👍👏, mind blowing, :hellrider::hellrider::flamethrower:
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UPDATE NO - 107
ENTRY OF TWO UNKNOWN PERSON





Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise mai Black Ant ka name BERU rakhta hu. Uske baad wo mujhe Queen Ant ke bare me batata hai. Sath hi me wo mujhe batata hai ki abhi bhi 4000 ant's jinda hai. Jo kisi leader ke na hone se JEJU island ke charo taraf yaha waha batakne lage hai. Fir wo mujhse in sare ant's koarne ka order kahta hai. Wahi bache hue Ant's JEJU island ke paas ke sea me khade Warship par Attack kar dete hai. Aur sare backup kr liye khade India ke top 5 Guild ke A aur B Rank hunturs unse mukabla karne lag jate hai.
India bhi kuch ant's pahuch chuke the. Aur usko koi achank se aa kar bina kisi ki najar me aaye maar kar chla gaya.



AB AGEE........


Sare Ant's ko khtam karne me almost 2 din lagte hai.

India ke sea par jab Ant's pahuch gaye to jahir si baat hai ki China ke sea par bhi Ant's fly krte hue pahuch gaye the.
Aur sirf itna hi nahi Ant's to China ke main land me bhi pahuch cuke the.



SEA OF CHINA

China ke sea me last 3 day se JEJU island ki direction me khada Warship abhi bhi ekdam mustaidi se nigrani rakhe hue tha.
Main Dack me Captain khada ho kar samne ke screen ki taraf dekh raha tha. Wo is time bahut hi thaka hua lag raha tha. Yahi haal uske baki sare employe ka bhi tha. Lakin fir bhi sub lage hue tha.

Captain samne screen ki taraf dekhte hue " Hme last ke 2 din se sone ka bhi ab tak time nahi mila hai. "

Ek employee jo ki Screen ki taraf dekh raha tha wo jaldi se kahta hai " Sir Ant's ka ek jund hmari taraf aa raha hai. "

Ye sunte hi Captain ke bagal me unse thode hi piche khada Firstmate captain ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Please Hme inko shoot krne ke liye order dijiye. "

Captain samne dekhte hue " Nahi, 1 minute ruk jao. "
" Quki hamara hero in logo ka khyal kud se hi rakhna chahata hai. "

Fir sare log Warship ke Open areaketaraf dekhne legte hai. Jaha ek tall, fair and handsome sa man khada tha. Uski age 30+ hogi. Usne Red shirt nd Black jeans pahni hui thi. Aur apne kamar tak aate balo ko usne ponny tail banaya hua tha.
Uske Kamar me ek belt laga hua tha. Jisme do bade bade sword latke hue the. Dekhne se hi ye ek bahut hi strong person maalum cahlta tha. Uski height bhi 6 feet + hi thi.
Aur wo Dack par akele hi khada sky me fly karte hue inke hi taraf aa rahe ant's ko bade aaram se dekh raha tha. Ye aadmi koi aur nahi China ka best huntur ek matra 7 Star Rank huntur Liu Zhigang hi tha.

Liu Zhigang sky ki taraf dekhte hue kahta hai " Dekhne se to yahi lagta hai ki yaha bahut sari ant's hai. "
" Lakin kya kar skte hai.... "
" Rest in peace in the ocean. "


Zzzzzzz........

SWOSSSSSS.......
SWOSSSSSS.......

Itna kahte hi Liu Zhigang apne aura ko fully relese karte hue bade hi style me apne dono sword ko apne back se nikal kar usase cross ka nisan banate hue hawa me chala deta hai.
Bs uska itna hi karna tha. Uske body se uski power relese ho kar sword me transfer ho jati hai, aur sword se fire nikal kar sky me cross ka nisan banate hue aage badhati jati hai.


BANG... BANG....

BANG... BANG....
BANG... BANG....


Jaise jaise ye fire aage badhati hai. Ye aur bhi jyada area cover karta jata hai.
Aur ending me ja kar wo idhar ki taraf hi aa rahe Ant's se takra jate hai.
Aur sare ke sare ant's bas is ek matra Attack se jal kar hawa me hi mar jate hai aur unki body kati patang ki tarah nich sea me girne lagti hai.

Aur apne sword ko wapas se apne back me rakhte hue Liu Zhigang sky se girte hue ant's ko dekh kr kahta hai " In choti machliyo ki jagah agar jisne Rider ke sath fight kiya tha wo abhi bhi jinda hai to, uske sath fight karna jyada exciting hoga. "
" Kitni saram ki baat hai. Ye Ant's mera ek Attack bhi thik se nahi khel payi. "




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IN USA

Ek bahut hi aalishan, bada aur khubsurat ghar tha. Jiske living room ko bahut hi khubsurat tarike se sajaya hua tha. sofe ke pura set, uske samne 72 ince ka LED TV, A.C. , proper lights sari chije bokul sahi jagah par bahut hi Karine se sajayi hui thi.

Sofe par ek bahut hi bade body wala aadmi shirtless sirf shorts me baitha hua tha. Ye wahi aadmi tha jo JEJU island ke Raid se pahle Chairman Xabhi se Namit ke matter ke liye Mila tha. Jiske aane se India me halchal machi hui thi.
Ye wahi Aadmi tha. Jiski height almost 7 feet thi. Body Hulk jaisi, jiske samne acha sa acha bodybuilder bhi kisi chote bache jaisa lagta hai. Uske hair gray color ke the. Jo ki uske solder tak aate the.
Uske body par kai sare tattoo bane hue the. Dono solder ko cover karte hue back pr ek bahut hi bada aur khubsurat tattoo. Dono hatho par attractive tatoo.

Aur ye aur koi nahi World ka sbse strongest huntur tha. Jiska name Sandy Nirwan tha. Aur iske Ghuild ka name SCAVENGER GUILD tha.


Aapko Scavenger Guild ke bare me kuch bate bata deta hu :-

1. Ye Guild pure America me kaam karta hai.
2. Is Guild me bahut sare S Rank hunturs hai jinka Guild master Ek national level huntur Sandy Nirwan hai. Jo ki world ka sbse strongest huntur hai.
3. Kabhi kabhi ye apne S Rank hunturs ko Yad national level hunturs ko dusre country me waha ke High Rank DENGEON ko clear karne ke liye bhejate hai. Jab waha hi govt. Inse Request karke inhe inke kaam ke paise pay karti hai.

4. Namit bhi isi Guild ka ek Member hai.

Sandy Nirwan apne living room me sofe par baith kar aaram se TV par JEJU island ki raid me meri aur Black Ant ki fight dekh raha tha. Ki tabhi gate knock hota hai.

Knock.... Knock....

Sandy nirwan TV ki taraf dekhte hue " Ander aa jao. "

Kadak....

Aur Living room ke door se hote hue ek gray hair wali bahut hi khubsurat Lady ander aati hai. Uski bhi height almost 6 feet thi sath hi me wo dikhne me bhi bahut hi jyada hot thi. Usne formal lakin attractive kapde pahle hue the. Ye thi Sandy Nirwan ki secretary. Jiska name tha Laura.

Tap... Tap... Tap...

Chalte hue Laura Sofe ke paas aati hai. Aur TV ki taraf dekhte hue kati hai " Kaisa hai ye ? "
" Mister Namit aur Rider ke bich me kewal ek hi connection hai. "
" Mister Namit me bade bhai Amit, Sayad Rider ke hatho mara gaye the. "

Sandy Nirwan, Laura ko dekhte hue " To mujhe iska badla lena hoga ? "
" Is baat ka kya yahi Matlab nikalta hai ? "

Laura " Lag to aisa hi raha hai. "

Sandy Nirwan TV screen ki taraf isara karte hue " Ye ho jane ke baad Rider se milna ab aur bhi jyada difficult ho gaya hai. "
" Mai usase milna cahta hu. Lakin kitne saram ki baat hai. "

Laura " Aap kya karoge agar dono ke bich fight hui to ? "

Sandy Nirwan halke smile ke sath " Laura, Kya Tum abhi bhi mujhe nahi janti ho ? "
( Apni aura ko halka relese karte hue apne red eye ke sath ) " Mr. Namit, Scavenger Guild ke ander hai. "
" Aur Scavenger Guild mera hai. "


KADAK.....

Ye kahne ke baad Sandy Upar dekhte hue ek evile smile ke sath Apne hatho ki muthi ko kas leta hai. Jisase uske right hath me rakha hua TV ka remote bahut buri tarah tut jata hai.

Fir Sandy Nirwan kahta hai " Mai aise kisi bhi person ko kabhi maaf nahi karunga jisne bhi mere Guild ke ek bhi member ko touch bhi kiya to. "
" Bhale hi wo American Govt. Hi kyu na ho. "



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JEJU ISLAND
3rd NIGHT OF JEJU ISLAND RAID



TAD.... TAD.... TAD...
TAD... TAD..... TAD...


Aaj JEJU island ke Raid ka 3rd night tha. Sky me full moon nikla hua tha. Sath me dher sare starts bhi nikale hue the. JEJU island ke ander bahut year ke baad santi aayi thi. Jise toda waha par aaye military ke aaye hue 4, 360 degree wale helicopters ne.
Wo helicopters JEJU island ke ant's ke TUNNEL ke paas ja kar land hoti hai. Unse Military aur Knight Guild ke members niche utarte hai.

Quki KNIGHT Guild ko hi JEJU island ke Raid ke baad waha se mana aur magic crystals ko collect karne ka kaam diya gaya tha.
Aur wo is time yahi kaam karne yaha aaye hue the. Quki abhi bhi unko ek dar tha ki kahi kuch ho na jaye to jitni jaldi ho sake hm log ye kaam bhi nipta leta hai.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Knight Guild ke sare A aur B Rank hunturs is time yaha maujud the. Aur sabse aage Knight Guild ka Guild Master Manish hi chal raha tha. Uske thik bagal me Vivek aur uske piche baki sare Knight Guild ke hunturs aur sbse last me military ke log chal rahe the.

Manish sigret pite hue niche dekh kar kuch dukhi man se kahta hai " Yaha aisa bhi ek person hai. Jiske paas sayad hi koi luck hai. "

Vivek, Manish ki taraf dekhte hue confusion se " Kya ? "

Manish, Vivek ke sath ab sbse piche chalte hue aage kahta hai " Us Aadmi ne Hmesa apna best diya hai. Taki wo best ban ske. "
" Uska dream tha ki wo ek gold medalist bane."
" Jiske liye usne bahut hi hard tranning ki. "
" Apne weight ko kam kiya taki wo lower weight ke catigray me challenge de sake. "
" Usne bahut hi jyada hard tranning ki, din raat ek kar diya. "
" Sirf Olympics ke liye stage par utarna baki rah gaya tha. "
" Wo apne dream ko bas pane hi wala tha."
" Us raat se phle kabhi bhi use nightmare bhi nahi aaye. "
" Uska condition bhi sbse best tha. "
" Lakin..... "
" Achanak se hue AWAKENING ke karan, Magica masters ne use pakad liya aur wo Olympics me participate nahi kar paya. "

Ye sub kahte hue Manish almost rone hi lag jata hai. Wahi uski ye sari bate sun kr vivek kahta hai " Kya ye aapki story hai bade bhaiya ? "

Manish " Us aadmi ko apna dream chorna pada. Lakin usne apne liye ek new dream banaya. "
" Apne country ka best Guild banane ka dream. "

Vivek, Manish ko incrage karte hue " Mai janta hu aap amazing hai bade bhaiya. "

Tabhi unke piche hi chal rahi ek aur female huntur ek taraf dekhte hue kahti hai " Yaha kuda fekna ban kro. "

Fir Manish aur Vivek ko thoda aur aage Ant tunnel ke ander jane ke baad magic crystals dikhayi dene lagte hai.
Manish aage badh kar magic crystals ko apne dono hatho meek sath utha kar kisi chote bache ki tarah unki chmak ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Dekho in high quality ke magic stones ko. "
" Agar hum apne sath in sare Magic crystals ko le gaye to hum apne country ke sbse bade guild ban jayenge. "

Vivek bhi piche khada ho kar bahut hi excitement se Magic crystals ko dekh raha hota hai.
Wahi unke piche chal rahi wo female huntur halke gusse se kahti hai " Ye thik baat nahi hai. "
" Ye galat hai. "

Waha charo taraf ant's ki kati, mari hui body padi hui thi. ye sub dekh kr Manish Kahta hai " Waise yaha sub bahut hi saaf suthra hai. "
( Military walo ki taraf dekhte hue ) " To chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hai. Aur magic crystals ko collect karna suru kar do. Quki mujhe yaha par koi bhi magic feel nahi ho raha hai. "


SWOSSSSSS.....
SLASHHH......


Tabhi achanak se ek tunnel ke ander se ek jinda Ant Manish ko dikhayi de jata hai. Aur Manish bhi bina koi time gawaye, apne sword se us any ka sir uske body se alag kar deta hai.

Manish " Oops ! Yaha ek bacha rah gaya tha. "

Us Ant ko marne me baad Manish piche mud kar military walo ko dekhte hue kahta hai " Well, aap logo ko jyada chinta karne ki jarurat nahi hai. "
" Bhale hi yaha kuch aur ant's jinda ho skte hai. Lakin hum log yaha hai. "

Military wale log bhi darte darte hi sahi lakin apna kaam, Magic crystals ko collect karna suru kar dete hai.

Tabhi left side ki taraf dekhte hue Manish se darte hue kahta hai " Bade... Bade bhaiya ! "

Manish ( samne ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Kya hua ? "

Ek dusra huntur ( Vivek jis taraf dekh raha tha usi taraf dekhte hue dar ke sath ) " kon ho tum ? "


TAP.... TAP.... TAP....

Aur samne se ek Sandy Nirwan ke jaise hi bahut badi body wala person nage pair hi chalte hue inke hi taraf aa raha tha. Uski upper body open thi. Niche usne gutne tak bas ek fata hua clothes hi pahna hua tha. Jisko usne ek armour type se apne body se tikaye hue the. Uske hair black color ke uske gale tak aa rahe the. Uski 8 abs body aur bahut hi badi badi bhujaye thi. Usne apne solder par ek sher ka khal udha hua tha. Aur uske body par jagah jagah janwaro ke bone se bane hue kai sari chije usne pahn rakhi thi. Uski aakhe yellow color ki thi. Wo dekhne se hi bahut khatarnak lag raha tha.

Ab tak waha maujud sare logo ne use dekh liya tha aur Manish use dekhte hue apne man me sochta hai ' JEJU island par sirf Association hi ek matra hai jo hme mission aur Soldiers de skti hai. '
( Us bande ko dekhte hue jor se ) " Apni pehchan batao ? "

Vivek darte hue " Bade bhaiya, kya ye human hi hai ? "

Wahi Military wale log us Anjan aadmi ko dekh kr uske taraf gun point karte hue use shoot hi karne jate hai to Wo female huntur unke taraf dekh kr kahti hai " Hey use shoot mat kar dena. "
" Wo koi monster nahi hai. "

Military wala ek Soldier us Anjan aadmi ki taraf Gun point kiye hue kahta hai " Tum restricted area me ho. "
" Agar tum hmare order ko follow nahi karoge to hum tumhe shoot kar denge. "

Wo anjan aadmi paas aane ke baad sare logo ki taraf apni yellow eye ke sath ghur kar dekhte hue gusse me na jane kis language me kuch kahta hai.

Manish ye sun kr shocked hote hue apne man me sochta hai ' kya Ye ek Monster hai ? '


SNAP.....

Tabhi pata nahi kaha se koi ek chutki bajata hai. Aur agle hi pal waha par maujud sare log behosh ho kar apne apne jagah gir jate hai.
Aur waha wahi Anjan aadmi abhi bhi khada rahta hai.

Anjan aadmi piche mud kar kahta hai " Tum kya kar rahe ho ? "

Aur ye sunte hi Waha us Anjan aadmi ke piche ek blue skin wala aadmi aa jata hai. Uske hair ekdam snow ki taraf white the jo ki uske kamar tak ja rahe the. Usne pure kapde pahne hue the. Lakin uske kapde bhi niche se fate hue the. Aur un kapdo ke upar usne ek white color ka rob pahna hua tha. Wo dekhne se hi kafi old lag raha tha. Aur ye chutki bhi usi ne bajayi thi. Jise sunane ke baad waha ke sare log behosh ho gaye the.

Anjan old man " Hame yaha koi scene create karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. "
" Maine in sub ko yaha bas thodi der ke liye sula diya hai. "
" kya Tum check karna cahte ho ? "

Anjan aadmi samne ki taraf dekhte hue " Mujhe pura yakin hai ye usi ki power hai. "

Anjan old man, Manish ki taraf dekhte hue " Ye to bada ajeeb hai. "
" Mujhe smjh menahi aa raha hai. Wo aakhir humans ki help kyu kar raha hai ? "

Anjan aadmi TUNNEL me idhar udhar dekhte hue " kon jane ? "
" Agar tum itne hi utsuk ho to, kud hi ja kar usase kyu nahi puch lete ho ? "
( Mare hue ant's ki body ko dekhte hue ) " ye yaha in incests se sade hue chijo ke jaise bahut hi buri badbu aa rahi hai. "
" Agar USNE ye dekh liya. To WO bahut hi jyada gussa karti. "

Anjan Old man " Hunt aise hi plan ke hisab se chalta rahega. "
" Kuch bhi Change nahi hoga. "

Anjan aadmi " Thik hai. "


Buzzzz.....
Buzzzz.....


Ye sun kar wo anjan old man apne right hath aage karta hai. Aur usme se blue color ki energy ka gola niklne lagta hai. Jise agle hi pal us old man me apne hath ko open karke niche gira diya. Aur wo energy ka gola samne ja kar ek bahut bade portal me Change ho jata hai.

Anjan aadmi tabhi kuch sochte hue kahta hai " Oh! Aisa lagata hai ki koi yaha tha. "

Anjan Old man ye sun kar piche mud kar anjan aadmi ko dekhte hue kahta hai " India me ? "

Anjan aadmi ek evile smile ke sath " Ab jabki hum yaha hai. Kya khyal hai ? "
" Kya hum hi uski khatirdari kar de ? "

Anjan Old man " Hume ye jagah uske hatho me chor dena cahiye. "

Anjan man " Tum isme involved nahi hona cahte, hai na ? "

Anjan Old man portal ke ander jate hue " Tum ise aise bhi dekh sakte ho. "
" Mujhe koi problem nahi hai. "
" Tum jaisa chaho waisa sochne ke liye free ho. "

Itna kah kar wo anjan old man portal ke ander chla jata hai. Aur wo portal bhi band ho jata hai.
Anjan Old man ke jane ke baad Anjan aadmi halke gusse se kahta hai " Darpok kahi ka. "

Fir wo ek baad Manish ko dekhta hai aur kahta hai " Well ! Mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai ki hame yaha scene banane ki koi jarurat nahi hai. "


SWOSSSSSS.....

Buzzzz.....
Buzzzz.....

Itna kah kar wo anjan aadmi hawa me hi apna left hath ek baar marta hai. Aur uske samne ek bada sa red portal open ho jata hai.
Aur wo anjan person bhi us portal ke ander chla jata hai. Aur agle hi pal ye portal bhi band ho kar gayab ho jata hai.


















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Nice update bro .. But 1 question .
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Raider world ka strongest person bann'na chahta .
aap ny raider wala character episode 1 se ley kar episode 106 tak boht achy se wel-build kia hy.....
But 2 unknow persion aaty hain raider ko pata bhi nahi chala .
in future jub un ki fight ho gi to end my definitely rider hi winner ho ga .
To wo loog raider se kabhi bhi strong nhi ho sakty.
To raider ne un unknow person ki energy ko sense keu nahi kia? Jub k hona to ye chahye tha k wo loog Raider ko aata mehsoos kar ky bhag jaty ... But wo to raider ki territory me nazzy se ghoom phir rahy thay .......... To bas ye thoda att-patta sa laga.
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