main salo se XP me aur ab XF me stories padh raha hu , aur yanha par bahut hi kam writers aise hai jinko padh kar laga ho ki wah kya bat hai ..
kuchh naam main jo main mention karna chahunga , mere kuchh personal favorite
nain11ster bhai .. inki narration skills kamaal ki hai , sach kahu to nihsankoch main ye kah sakta hu ki abhi tak forums me maine jitano ko padha hai inme wo best hai , narration ke sath sath gajab ki creativity , bhasha me pakad aur tufani imagination ye sab dekhkar hi main inka fan ho gaya
iska karan ye hai ki yanha par moujud sabhi wiriter ke pas sabhi chije nahi mil pati , kisi ke ander imagination hai to narration nahi hai , narration hai to creativity nahi dikhti , kisi ki bhasha par hi koi pakad nahi hai .. ye mujhe complete writer lagte hai , hasante bhi hai rulate bhi hai to rongte bhi khade karwa dete hai , kul mila kar story me aapko involve kar dete hai , wo bhi har bar naye tarike se ..
sabse badi takat inka scene create karna hai , ye scene badi hi khubsurati se create karte hai , main to inka student hi ban gaya hu bas sikh raha hu inse
HalfbludPrince bhai ... ye story nahi likhte ye aise likhte hai jaise mano poem likh rahe ho , ek kalatmakta hai inki writing me jisme ek kavita si bahati hai ,(lekin kabhi kabhi jab inka musafir jagata hai tab
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bhasha aur narration dono hi gajab ke hai , aur mujhe ye aur bhi pasand hai kyoki devnagri me likhte hai
iske sath sath jafu , tona , pret , aatma , pyar , judai aur chudai bhi inke stories me kut kut kar bhari rahti hai jo padhne me bhi maja aata hai
jab inka musafir jagata hai to ye jo likhte hai wo to bas wah type ka hota hai , padhkar apne ander ka bhi chutiya jaag jata hai
Pritam.bs ... pritam bhai ki ek story bhi main complete nahi padh paya hu abhi tak
lekin fir bhi jitana bhi inko padha hu mujhe ye bahut hi achche lage , writing skills kamaal ki hai inki , aur writer ki writing skills ko parakhne ke liye puri story padhne ki jarurat nahi hoti ek do scene me hi samjh aa jata hai ... emotional scene inke bahut hi pyare hote hai ,aur XP ke time se mere fav rahe hai
sorry dada main koi to rok lo abhi tak puri nahi padh paya hu , bahut hi lambi story likh diye ho aap
inke alawa kuchh aur bhi writers the XP ke english section me , khaskar bahut hi behtreen erotica likhne wale log the , abhi kahi dikhai nahi dete