Hi, Dosto me ek kahani likhne ja rahi hu. and hope that you will support me. Ye ek new story hai but kuch dusre writers ki story me read karti hu isliye un se kuch similar bhi ho sakti hai.
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shukriya...congratulation for your story
Badhiya start hai congratulations for storyye meri apni story nahi h par phir bhi me ise apne bare me hi likh rahi hu aisa aap man sakte hai. jisse aap ko kahani ko batane me aasani hogi.
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Mai ek bahut bade parivar me rahti hu. jiske kuch kirdaro ko me abhi bata rahi hu or kuch kahani ke badhne ke sath samne aa jayenge. Mera naam Sonam hai jise sab pyar se sab Sona kahte h.
Sham hote hi Ammi ne aavaj di. Sona....Sonaaa.. Sonaaa.....
Ammi- Ari kahan mar gayi kambakhat. ye ladki bhi meri hi jan ki musibat hai. jab dekho kahi nikal jati h. ab iss umar me kis kis ka khyal rakhu mai. is ke abbu ko kaha h ki ab Sona bhi jawan ho gayi h. iske liye koi accha sa laska dekh kar iska nikah kar de. par use kya padi h kal ko kahi kuch ho gaya to kya karenge Or phir akele hi badbadane lagi.
Seema (bagal vali padosan)- kya hua Jamila kyo pareshan h. (hanste hue)
Ammi badbadate hue andar chali gayi.
Meri Ammi mujhe lekar badi pareshan rahti hai par bahar ke logo se mere bare me koi bat nahi karti. ab kya batau Meri Ammi h to badi hi sakht jan par mujhe lekar darti h. or phir aajkal ye mobile vala chakkar jisne sabhi ko dance or video ka shouk laga diya h. Aaj mere office ki chutti thi or me thodi der pahle hi bagal vale park me aayi thi bas Ammi ko bataye bina aa gayi thi. ye park Delhi ke lihaj se kaphi bada tha par log kam hi aate the. kyoki is park me jyada safai nahi raahti thi or mujhe yaha par bhuru ke sath ghumna achchha lagta tha. Bhuru ke hote hue koi mujhe chhedne ki himmat nahi karta. Bhuru hamare ghar ka member h jiska khyal me khud rakhti hu. Ab aisa nahi h ki main kisi ladke se ab tak nahi mili ya meri kis ladke se dosti nahi thi. bas itna hi tha ki maine abhi kisi ko apne jyada pas nahi aane diya tha. Bas ek hi baat thi ki mujhe abhi Miss Delhi ke Competition ke liye taiyari karni thi or me aise kisi ladke ke chakkar me pad kar ye sab barbad nahi karna chahti thi. ghar valo ko mere is sapne ke bare me nahi pata tha. Par mere office me mere Boss or do staff valo ko hi iss bare me pata tha.
Aaj jab mujhe mohsin (office staff) ka phone aaya ki us ki ek dost bhi meri tarah competition me hissa le rahi h.
Mohsin- Hi, Sona
Me- Hi,
Mohsin- yar tujhe ek bat batani thi.
Me- kya
Mohsin- vo kya h ki meri ek dost bhi modeling karti h. or maine jab use tumhare bare me bataya to usne mujhe tumse milane ke liye kaha h.
Me- to
Mohsin- to kya tum abhi usse mil sakti ho.
Me- par ab to kaphi der ho chuki h. me ghar se bahar nahi aa sakti.
Mohsin- are me vaha aa jata hu tum mujhe Lal Park me milna.
Me- nahi, tum kal use office le aana.
Mohsin- Actually me or Hina, tumhara park me wait kar rahe h.
Me- kya tum pahle phone nahi kar sakte the, Ab rahne do, me aati hu. (gusse se)
Ab ye bhi koi bat h ki bataya bhi nahi or ek ladki ko mujhe se milane ke liye le aaya. ye ladke sab hote hi gawar h. ab me kaise taiyar hou. Allah is aien moke par tune hi meri khair rakhni h. Kya karu... (Sochte hue) aaj to Ammi hi meri madad kar sakti h. or me jaldi se bahg kar ammi ke kamre me gayi or apne bal thik kiye phir thoda aankho ke kajal lagaya, phir aaine me dekha. Ab bhi mujhe thik nahi lag raha tha. phir Ammi ka hijab ohda or jaldi se park ki taraf bhagi.