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Fantasy Soul Land

ashish_1982_in

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ba-shu , itihaas ke maadhyam se bahut se logon kee bhoomi ke roop mein prasiddh hai, aur isake bheetar, sabase prasiddh sampradaay(samaj) jise kabhee bhee paar nahin kiya ja sakata hai: taang sampradaay.

taang sampradaay ka sthaan ek rahasyamay sthaan tha. jyaadaatar log keval yah jaanate the ki yah ek pahaad se aadha oopar tha, aur vah pahaad jahaan taang sampradaay sthit tha, ek bhayaanak naam ke saath ek sthaan tha, —Hell’s Peak .


Hell’s Peak ke shikar ke oopar se phenkee gaee ek pathar, 19 kee pooree ginatee letee h, isase pahale ki neeche se takaraane kee goonj sunaee de, is prakaar isakee oonchaee(height) dekhee ja sakatee thee.

ek grey kapade pahane yuvak Hell’s Peak ke shikhar par khada tha, kaatane vaalee thandee pahaad kee hava usake shareer ko thoda jhakajhorane mein saksham nahin thee. usake pet ke gaddhe par ek vishaal taang charitr dekha ja sakata tha; vah taang sampradaay se tha, aur bhoore rang ke kapade taang baaharee sampradaay ke ek student ka pratinidhitv karate the.

is varsh wo 29 varsh ka tha, kyonki vah paida hone ke lambe samay baad bhee taang sampradaay mein nahin aaya tha, vah baaharee(outer) sampradaay ke shishyon mein teesara sabase senior tha, aur parinaamasvaroop baaharee sampradaay ke student ne use thard young maastar naam diya. beshak, aantarik(inner) panth ke shishyon ke munh mein yah taang sain ban gaya.

taang sampradaay tha, kyonki yah neenv , do aantarik(inner) aur baaharee(outer) sampradaayon mein vibhaajit hai. baaharee sampradaay ke student baaharee parivaaron se the ya shaayad taang naam se sammaanit kie gae the, aur aantarik sampradaay sabhee seedhe taang sampradaay ke sadasyon se sambandhit the, parivaar ke maadhyam se jane gae.

abhee, taang sain k face par kafi expression thn, kabhee hansate hue, kabhee rote hue, lekin sabhee maamalon mein apane dil se upjee uttejana(exictement) ko naakaam karane mein asamarth hain.
unatees saal pahale, jab 29 saal pahale uske daadaa jee elder taang lain ne unhen shishu ke roop mein taang sampradaay mein laaya tha, taang sampradaay unaka parivaar tha, aur taang sampradaay ke chhipe hue hathiyaar unake lie sab kuchh the.

achaanak, taang sain kee abhivyakti(expression) achaanak badal gaee, lekin phir bahut jaldee phir se aaraam se, kuchh had tak khud se kah raha hai: "ant mein, jo hona chaahie vah abhee bhee hoga."


17 silhoot(shadow), 17 white silhoot, parvat se aadhe raaste tak oopar uthate hain, jaise shooting star, ye shadow masters thn, yahaan tak ki sabase chhote master's paanch dashak(50 years) ke the, har ek gambheer bhaav ke saath, unake white gown aantarik(inner) panth ka pratinidhitv karate the , aur unakee chest par sunahare(golden) taang, taang sampradaay ke elders ke prateek the.

sampradaay ke pramukh(chief) taang da , sahit kul 17 elders the, aur abhee pahaad par 17 elders chadhaee kar rahe the. yahaan tak ki martial soceity kee ek aam sabha bhee ek hee samay mein sabhee taang sampradaay ke elders ko rijhaane mein saksham nahin rahee hogee, kisee ko yah jaanana chaahie ki taang sampradaay ke elders ke beech, oldest elder pahale hee 60 saal se aage nikal chuka tha.

ye sabhee taang sampradaay ke elders pahale se hee cultivation ke top tak pahunch chuke the, aur keval ek pal ke jump mein ve pahale hee pahaad kee top par pahunch gae the.
Fantastic update bhai
 

ashish_1982_in

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Chapter 0

ba-shu , itihaas ke maadhyam se bahut se logon kee bhoomi ke roop mein prasiddh hai, aur isake bheetar, sabase prasiddh sampradaay(samaj) jise kabhee bhee paar nahin kiya ja sakata hai: taang sampradaay.

taang sampradaay ka sthaan ek rahasyamay sthaan tha. jyaadaatar log keval yah jaanate the ki yah ek pahaad se aadha oopar tha, aur vah pahaad jahaan taang sampradaay sthit tha, ek bhayaanak naam ke saath ek sthaan tha, —Hell’s Peak .


Hell’s Peak ke shikar ke oopar se phenkee gaee ek pathar, 19 kee pooree ginatee letee h, isase pahale ki neeche se takaraane kee goonj sunaee de, is prakaar isakee oonchaee(height) dekhee ja sakatee thee.

ek grey kapade pahane yuvak Hell’s Peak ke shikhar par khada tha, kaatane vaalee thandee pahaad kee hava usake shareer ko thoda jhakajhorane mein saksham nahin thee. usake pet ke gaddhe par ek vishaal taang charitr dekha ja sakata tha; vah taang sampradaay se tha, aur bhoore rang ke kapade taang baaharee sampradaay ke ek student ka pratinidhitv karate the.

is varsh wo 29 varsh ka tha, kyonki vah paida hone ke lambe samay baad bhee taang sampradaay mein nahin aaya tha, vah baaharee(outer) sampradaay ke shishyon mein teesara sabase senior tha, aur parinaamasvaroop baaharee sampradaay ke student ne use thard young maastar naam diya. beshak, aantarik(inner) panth ke shishyon ke munh mein yah taang sain ban gaya.

taang sampradaay tha, kyonki yah neenv , do aantarik(inner) aur baaharee(outer) sampradaayon mein vibhaajit hai. baaharee sampradaay ke student baaharee parivaaron se the ya shaayad taang naam se sammaanit kie gae the, aur aantarik sampradaay sabhee seedhe taang sampradaay ke sadasyon se sambandhit the, parivaar ke maadhyam se jane gae.

abhee, taang sain k face par kafi expression thn, kabhee hansate hue, kabhee rote hue, lekin sabhee maamalon mein apane dil se upjee uttejana(exictement) ko naakaam karane mein asamarth hain.
unatees saal pahale, jab 29 saal pahale uske daadaa jee elder taang lain ne unhen shishu ke roop mein taang sampradaay mein laaya tha, taang sampradaay unaka parivaar tha, aur taang sampradaay ke chhipe hue hathiyaar unake lie sab kuchh the.

achaanak, taang sain kee abhivyakti(expression) achaanak badal gaee, lekin phir bahut jaldee phir se aaraam se, kuchh had tak khud se kah raha hai: "ant mein, jo hona chaahie vah abhee bhee hoga."


17 silhoot(shadow), 17 white silhoot, parvat se aadhe raaste tak oopar uthate hain, jaise shooting star, ye shadow masters thn, yahaan tak ki sabase chhote master's paanch dashak(50 years) ke the, har ek gambheer bhaav ke saath, unake white gown aantarik(inner) panth ka pratinidhitv karate the , aur unakee chest par sunahare(golden) taang, taang sampradaay ke elders ke prateek the.

sampradaay ke pramukh(chief) taang da , sahit kul 17 elders the, aur abhee pahaad par 17 elders chadhaee kar rahe the. yahaan tak ki martial soceity kee ek aam sabha bhee ek hee samay mein sabhee taang sampradaay ke elders ko rijhaane mein saksham nahin rahee hogee, kisee ko yah jaanana chaahie ki taang sampradaay ke elders ke beech, oldest elder pahale hee 60 saal se aage nikal chuka tha.

ye sabhee taang sampradaay ke elders pahale se hee cultivation ke top tak pahunch chuke the, aur keval ek pal ke jump mein ve pahale hee pahaad kee top par pahunch gae the.
Fantastic update bhai
 

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Douluo Continent

Holy Spirit Village, yadi koee keval isaka naam sunata hai, to ek aashcharyajanak(wonderful) gaanv kee tarah lag sakata hai. vaastav mein, yah phaseenuo praant ke nuading shahar ke dakshin mein 300 gharon ka ek hee gaanv tha. Holy Spirit kahe jaane ka kaaran yah tha ki ki kahaniyo mein, 100 saal pahale ek sprit sadhu ne Spirit Master rank hasil kee thee . yah Holy Spirit Village ka lia shaashvat garav ki baat bhee tha.

Holy Spirit Village ke baahar, bina kisi rok ke, khet ka ek vishaal vistaar jahaan anaaj aur sabjiyon ka utpaadan kiya gaya tha aur nuading shahar kee aapoorti ke lie bheja jata tha. nuaading shahar phaasinuo praant ke madhy mein sthit tha, aur jab ise ek pramukh shahar nahin maana jaata tha, to yaha ek aur saamraajy kee seema thee, aakhirakaar, bahut kareeb aur svaabhaavik roop se, donon mahaan saamraajyon ke vyaapaariyon ne vahaan kaarobaar kiya. nateejatan, nuading shahar ka vikaas hua aur shahar ke aasapaas ke gaanvon mein aam logon ka jeevan kaheen aur se behatar tha.

bamushkil pralay ke samay, door poorv mein, Mausam grey rang ka tha. Holy Spirit se sate ek chhote se 100 meetar lambe pahaadee par ek patalee aur chhotee silhoot(shadow) thee.

yah keval 5 ya 6 saal ka bachcha tha. jaahir hai, har din ki tarah usane sooraj kee garmee ko sahan kiya. uski skin ek white gehuna(wheat) rang ki thee, uske kaale chhote baal bahut saaph-suthare dikhaee dete the, aur uske kapade, haalaanki saral the, saaph the.

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is umr mein ek bachche kee lia, is 100 meetar lambee pahaadee par chadhana aasaan kaam nahin ho sakata, lekin ajeeb baat hai, jab vah shikhar par pahuncha to usaka chehara sabase kam laal nahin tha, na hee wo haaf raha tha.usakee abhivyakti sthir aur akarshak dikhaee dee.

ladka pahaadee par baith gaya, usakee do aankhen anaayaas poorv kee or dekh rahee thee jahaan bhor ka aakaash dheere-dheere chamak raha tha. dheere-dheere usakee naak ke maadhyam se saans lena shuroo karana, dheere se usake munh ke maadhyam se saans chhodana; nirantar saans lena aur saans chhodana, ant mein, ek shaanadaar cycle ban gaya.

is prakriya ke dauraan, usakee aankhen achaanak chaudee ho gaeen. Bainganee(purple) qi(purple spirtual energy) ka ek kamjor nishaan door kshitij(horizon) mein badhatee ujjval grey subah kee roshanee mein chamakata dikhai de raha tha. Aashcharyajanak drshti aur ekaagrata ke bina, purple light notice karana asambhav hoga.

bainganee qi(spirtual energy) ko dekhate hue, ladake kee soul(spirit) pooree tarah se dhyaan kendrit kar rahee thee. vah ab bhee pura focused tha, keval ek prakaash aur dheemee saans lena. ek hee samay mein do aankhen jhilamilaatee bainganee roshanee mein ekaagrata se majabootee se ghooratee theen.

bainganee qi(spirtual energy) lambe samay tak nahin raha; poorvee prakaash dheere-dheere din ke ujaale mein badal gaya, tab tak bainganee qi pahale hee pooree tarah se gaayab ho gaya tha.

tabhee ladake ne lambee saans ke saath, dheere-dheere apanee aankhen band kar leen. White qi usake munh ke maadhyam se baahar nikalata hai jaise ki resham ke ek ball ko dheere-dheere phailaaya jaata hai.

bahut der tak chup baithane ke baad, ladake ne ek baar aur aankhen kholeen. usakee aankhon ke kendr mein aashcharyajanak roop tha, shaayad us ashuddh(impure) bainganee qi ke kaaran, halke bainganee rang kee jhalak. yah bainganee shanti s gaayab hone se pahale lambe samay tak nahin rahata tha, phir bhee yah bahut alag tha.

Dhuki hote hua, ladake ne apanee umr ke mutabik ek bure bhav dikhaee. usane apana sir hilaaya aur khud se kaha,

“phir bhee asambhav hai. Meri mysterious heaven skill(method of training internal qi) abhee bhee first stage se second stahe mein todane mein asamarth hai. yah pahale se hee poore 3 maheene ka hai, isalie yah parinaam kyon? yahaan tak ki bainganee demon eye(vision power), jo poorv se bainganee qi par nirbhar tha, jo keval subah hi cultivate kee ja sakatee thee, ne behatar progress dikhaee hai. Mysterious heaven skills adachan ke maadhyam se todane mein asamarth hone ke saath, mera Mysterious Jade Hand(Mysterious Jade Hand kee vajah se haath kee hathelee behad sakht aur tany ho jaatee hai. isake alaava, yah kisee bhee jahar ko baadhit(rok) kar sakata hai.) bhee aage badhane mein asamarth hai. jab mool roop se pahalee aur doosaree category ke beech kee seema par cultivation kee jaatee hai, to mujhe is tarah kee paristhitiyon mein nahin aana chaahie tha. kaise hote , hain, jab mysterious heaven skill pooree tarah se nau tier hotee hai, to yah pahala tier hai jo is pareshaanee ka kaaran hai? kya isalie ki yah duniya meree orignal duniya se alag hai? ”

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yah bachcha, jo paanch saal pahale is duniya mein aaya tha, vah vaastav mein taang sampradaay ka taang sain tha jo apane aadarshon ke lie ek chattaan se chhalaang lagaata tha. jab use hosh aaya, to usane paaya ki garm sanasanee ke alaava, vah hil bhee nahin pa raha tha. lekin apekshit mrtyu nahin huee, aur vah bahut jaldee is duniya mein paida hua.

taang sain spasht nahin tha ki bahut baad tak kya chal raha tha. vah mar nahin gaya tha, lekin vah bhee ab poorv taang sain nahin tha.

punarjanm taang sain ko duniya kee is language ko seekhane ke lie lagabhag ek varsh kee jarurat thee. use abhee bhee yaad hai ki, jis samay vah paida hua tha, haalaanki vah abhee bhee apanee aankhen kholane aur dekhane mein asamarth tha, usane ek aadamee ke dil kee dhadakan vaale tadap ki aavaaz sunee.aga chal k, jab usne apanee utkrsht memory par bharosa karake is duniya kee bhaasha seekhee, to vah yah yaad karane mein bhee madad nahin kar sake ki vah aadamee chillaaya tha, "third sister, mujhe mat chhodo," aur vah aadamee usaka pita, taang hao [9] tha. us samay is duniya mein usakee maan pahale se hee ek kathin prasav se mar chukee thee.

chaahe devataon kee kaalee(black) ichchha ya saral sanyog ke kaaran, taang hao ne chamatkaarik roop se use apanee mrt(dead) patni ke yadein ke chinh ke roop mein taang sain naam diya.

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(Tang hao)

is vajah se, usakee umr ke aasapaas ke gaanv ke bachche usaka upahaas karane ke lie har din ikattha hote the. phir bhee, unake dil mein, taang sain pooree tarah se santusht the. yah, aakhirakaar, vah naam tha jo usane doosaree duniya mein lagabhag 30 varshon tak istemaal kiya tha. vah keval apane pichhale jeevan kee yaad dilaane ke lie ek naam rakhane ke saath santusht tha.
Awesome update
 

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Mysterious Heaven Treasure Record keval 6 prakaar ke maarshal techniques ka varnan karata hai:
1. Inner strength internal technique Mysterious Heaven Skill (method for training internal qi. This allows to resist extreme pressure, poison and helps with recovering injuries.)
2. hand skill practice technique Mysterious Jade Hand (Mysterious Jade Hand kee vajah se haath kee hathelee behad sakht aur tany ho jaatee hai. isake alaava, yah kisee bhee jahar(poison) ko baadhit kar sakata hai)
3. vision cultivation technique Purple Demon Eye(to improve vision)
4. capturing technique Controlling Crane Capturing Dragon(method of improving his coordination and strength)
5. light body technique Ghost Shadow Perplexing Track(yah ek movement aur balanced technique hai jo taang sain ko extreme speed aur kafi muskhil attack ko dodge karne m madat karti h)
6. hidden weapon use technique, Hidden Weapon Hundred Separation

pahale 5 techniques bahut sadharn theen; sab ke baad, ek majaboot neenv ke bina, taang sampradaay ke chhipe hue hathiyaaron ko kaise saamane laaya ja sakata hai?, yah technique sirf tang sain hi janta tha.

1 varsh kee umr mein Mysterious Heaven Skill ka use shuroo karane ke baad, taang sain, jo abhi lagabhag 6 saal ka tha, abhee bhee starting(foundation) stage m tha..

taang sain ka parivaar Holy Spirit village ke pashchim mein, gaanv ke mukhiya ke sthaan par rahata tha. poore ghar mein teen kamare thn, jo kee mittee ka eent s bane hua thn. isamen daravaaje ke oopar ek meetar kee lakadee kee pattika thee, jise ek saadhaaran hathaude se chitrit(design) kiya gaya tha.

is duniya mein hathauda ek lohaar(blacksmith) ka sabase vyaapak prateek tha. ye sahee hai. taang sain ke pita taang hao ek lohaar the, jo gaanv ke ekamaatr lohaar thn.

is duniya mein, lohaar ko vyavasaayon(profession) ka humble(namr) kaha ja sakata hai. isaka kaaran yah hai ki is duniya ke sarvashreshth hathiyaaron mein se ek h hathauda .

phir bhee, jaisa ki is gaanv ke ekamaatr nipun lohaar hain, pher bhee tang sain ke parivar ki ayy(income) ise jada pravabhit nahi thn ......

ghar mein pravesh karate hue, taang sain ko pahale se hee sugandhit chaaval kee gandh aa rahee thee. vah taang hao naashta nahin bana raha tha; balki tang sain n taang hao ke lie khaana banaaya tha.

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4 saal kee umr se shuroo hone se pahale, taang sain kitchen counter tak pahunchane ke lie kaaphee lamba tha, khaana banaana pahale se hee usaka dainik kaary tha;

yahaan tak ki agar use rasoee counter ke top tak pahunchane mein saksham hone ke lie ek stool par khada hona padta tha. aisa isalie nahin tha kyonki taang hao ne isakee maang kee thee, balki isalie ki agar vah aisa nahin karate to taang sain vyaavahaarik roop se kabhee bhee apana pet nahin bhar paenge.

"pita jee, bhojan."

taang sain n bulaaya.

ek lambe samay ke baad, bheetaree kamare ka daravaaza khatakhataaya, aur ek bada aankada kuchh ladakhadaate kadamon ke ek admi bahar aya.

yah ek madhyam aayu varg ka vyakti tha, usakee upasthiti 50 saal ke kareeb lag rahee thee. unka kad abhee bhee asaadhaaran roop se bada aur kathor tha.

Yah is duniya mein taang sain ke pita taang hao the.

bade hone ke dauraan, taang sain ne kabhee nahin jaana ki pitr prem kya tha. jis tarah se taang hao ne usake saath vyavahaar kiya vah hamesha se ek jaisa tha, shuruaat se hee sahee tha. Haalaanki wo uske khaane ke lie thoda khaana banaana jaanata tha, lekin phir bhee, jaise-jaise samay beetata gaya, taang sain ne khaana pakaane ke lie pahal karana shuroo kar diya.

is tarah unaka ghar itana kharaab ho gaya ki unake paas baithne k lia furniture bhee nahin tha. bhojan bhee ek samaya ka tha, mukhy roop se taang hao k karan jo apna jada tar income sharab peene m laga dete thn.

jabaki taang sain ek bada bachcha tha, usake pita bhee lagabhag 30 saal ke the, 30saal kee umr se pahale hee itanee jaldee shaadee kar lee, lekin taang hao kee tulana kisee bade vyakti se nahin kee jaanee chaahie, balki vah taang sain ke daada se milata julata tha.

taang hao ke vyavahaar ke sambandh mein, taang sain ne koee naaraajagee nahin Jahir karte thn. apane poorv jeevanakaal mein, vah ek anaath tha. is jeevanakaal mein, bhale hee taang hao ne usake saath bura vyavahaar kiya, lekin usake paas kam se kam parivaar tha. taang sain ke lie, yah pahale se hee use chiz ka ehasaas karaata tha. kam se kam yahaan ek vyakti tha jise vah pita kah sakata tha.

taang hao ne katore ko mej se pakada, garam ke baare mein chintit nahin tha, aur bade tezi k sath unhone kahana apne pet m dal lia.

"pitaajee, dheema, yah abhee bhee garm hai."

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taang sain ne apane pita ke haath se katora liya aur ise phir s khane se bhar diya.

usane apana katora bhee uthaaya khane k lia.

taang sampradaay mein, wo bahut kam hee baaharee maamalon ke sampark mein aaya tha.. bahut jaldee, saat ya aath katore ke saath daliya ka ek bartan taang hao ke pet mein pravesh kar gaya. ek saans chhodate hue, unhonne katore ko tebal par rakha.

taang sain ko dekhate hue, jhuki palaken kuchh had tak khul gaeen. unhonne kaha,

“tum apna kaam jaaree rakho, main dopahar mein kaam karoonga. main thodee der so jaoonga. ”

taang hao ke kaam aur aaraam kee aadat ka ek bahut hee niyamit pattern tha: pooree subah sona, dopahar mein khet ke kuchh upakaran banaana, income praapt karana aur shaam ko peena.

"theek hai pitaajee."

taang sain ne sir hilaaya.

taang hao khada ho gaya. aur bheetar ke kamare kee or chala gaya.

"pita jee."

taang sain ne achaanak unhe bulaya.

taang hao ruk gaya, use dekhane ke lie apana sir ghumaya, uski ankhein spasht roop se thoda adheerata ka sanket de rahe the.

taang sain ne ek kone par ishaara kiya jisamen kaale lohe ke chamakate hue tukade rakhe hote hain:

"lohe ke ye tukade, kya aap unhen mujhe istemaal karane ke lie de sakate hain?"

apane pichhale avataar mein vah taang sampradaay ke sabase utkrsht baaharee sampradaay ke shishy the, ve har tarah ke chhipe hue hathiyaar ke nirmaan se sabase adhik parichit the. svaabhaavik roop se, vaapas to taang sampradaay dvaara sabhee prakaar kee saamagree kee aapoorti kee gaee thee.

lekin is naee duniya mein, haalaanki unhonne kaee varshon ka abhyaas kiya, lekin unakee taakat abhee bhee paryaapt nahin thee.

isake alaava, vah sabase unnat chhipe hue hathiyaaron ke nirmaan mein koee kasar nahin chhodana chaahata tha. ab tak usane pahale se hee kuchh chhipe hue hathiyaaron ko banaane kee koshish kee thee, lekin paryaapt saamagree dhoondhana bada mudda tha.

taang hao ne graameenon(villagers) se praapt dhaatu se jaalee krshi(farming) upakaran(tools) banae. thn wo uske bache hua tukde thn,

"huh. kya yah theek loha nahin hai?”

nazar uthaane ke lie chalate hue, usane taang sain ko dekhane ke lie apana sir ghumaaya,

"aap ek lohaar banana chaahate hain?"
Fabulous update Bhai
 

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taang sain ne thoda sir hilaaya. chhipe hue hathiyaar banaane ke lie nishchit roop se lohaar banana usake lie sabase upayukt pasha(profession) tha,


“pitaajee, aap budhe(old) ho rahe hain. kuchh varshon tak, jab tak main thoda bada nahin ho jaata, krpaya mujhe rasoee ke aujaar(tools) banaane ke tareeke sikhaen aur mujhe ap apana kaam sambhaalane den. ”

pahale usane jo kuchh banaaya vah sabase sateek chhipe hue hathiyaar the, aur isake vipareet usane kabhee bhee sabase saral form nahin seekha tha.

taang hao thoda dhere, badabadaaya:

"lohaar bura bhee nahin lagata hai, ya to."

ek hee ghise-pite chair ko kheenchate hue, lohe ke us dher se seedhe baithate hue, vah dheere se bola:

"little sain, mujhe batao, kis tarah ka lohaar, sabase achchha lohaar hota h?."

taang sain ne isake baare mein socha, phir kaha:

"sarvashreshth lohaar divine tools(very powerful beings close to the power of Gods) mein saksham hona chaahie."

Graameenon(villagers) ne jo kuchh kaha, usake dvaara divine tools is duniya mein maujood the, bhale hee vah theek se nahin jaanate the ki divine tools kya the.

lekin divine kahe jaane ke kaaran, sambhavatah unhen bahut achchha hona chaahie.

taang hao kee aankhon mein haasy kee ek jhalak milee,

“divine tools? little sain ko divine tools ke baare mein bhee pata hai. phir mujhe batao, divine tools banaane ke lie kya upayog kiya jaana chaahie? "

taang sain ne socha ki yah apratyaashit tha, aur turant kaha:
"sabase achchhee materials, nishchit roop se."

taang hao ne apanee ungli ko badhaaya, aur ise taang sain ke chehare par laharaaya,
“yadi aap ek maastar lohaar(blacksmith) banana chaahate hain, to mere shabdon ko yaad rakhen: jo koee divine tools banaane ke lie sheersh shrenee kee saamagriyon(materials) ka upayog karta hai, wo sabase achchha lohaar nahin hai; adhikaansh mein yah keval ek synthesizer hai. sabase achchha lohaar aam(common) saamagree(materils) ka upayog kar divine tools banata h. "

"divine tools ko banaane ke lie saamaany lohe ka upayog karana?"

taang sain, kuchh had tak chaunka, taang hao ko dekha.

aamataur par, taang hao ne shaayad hee kabhee usase baat kee; yah din pahale se hee kisee bhee samay sabase adhik guna jaada baat ki hai.

khade hokar, taang hao ne kamare ke doosaree taraph lohe ke fifty square centimeter bade block kee or ishaara kiya,
“yadi aap ek lohaar banane ke baare mein soch rahe hain aur mujhase seekhane kee koshish kar rahe hain, to aapako isee das hazaar baar pahale is hathauda s hit karna hoga. tab kahin jake ap yogya ho paynge . ”

yah saadhaaran lohe ka ek block tha, jisamen kaee ashuddhiyaan(impurities) theen. lohe ke srot kee gaanth kee tulana mein, vah yah bhee nahin bata sakata tha ki yah kitana kharaab tha.

"abhee, aap abhee bhee apana man badal sakate hain."
taang hao ne udaaseenata se baat kee,
pahale se hee sone ke lie aantarik kamare mein vaapas jaane kee taiyaaree kar raha tha.

"pitaajee, main ise aajamaana chaahata hoon."
taang sain kee aavaaz spasht aur shaant thee, phir bhee dridh thee.

taang hao, kuchh had tak chintit, use dekha,
"theek hai."

ek shabd ke saath, lohe ke us bade block ko apanee baahon mein le liya, aur seedhe ise bhathee par rakha. jab tak koyale kee aag ko prajvalit kiya gaya, tab tak ise phorjing(shape dene) ke lie istemaal kiya ja sakata hai.

ise khatm karane ke baad, taang hao sone ke lie bheetar ke kamare mein laut aaya.

taang sain ek drdh sankalp vaale vyakti the. shushu shushu. bhathee se uthata hai, koyala bhatthee ke bheetar utsarjit lau, lohe kee us badee block ko jhulasaata hai. haalaanki taang sain ko koee technique nahin pata tha, unhonne taang hao ko har din use karte dekha tha, aur unhen sahee prakriya pata thee.

jis tarah lohe kee block dheere-dheere laal ho gaee thee, usane taang hao ke saamaany hathaude ko kheenchakar jameen par gira diya.

yah lambe samay tak sambhaala hua lohe ka hathauda bhee usase adhik lamba tha, aur ek saadhaaran 5 ya 6 saal ka bachcha ise bilkul bhee utha nahi sakta tha. lekin taang sain abhee bhee ise pakade hue tha. Mysterious hevan skill se poore shareer ko majabootee milatee hai, usake paas pahale se hee ek vayask kee tulana mein shaareerik shakti thee.

jab lohe ka hathauda lohe kee gaanth se baar-baar takaraata tha, to vah ek spasht aur madhur awaj ke saath bajata tha. yah taang sain kee pahalee hammer strike thee. andar ke kamare mein bistar par padee taang hao palat gaee. bhale hee usakee aankhen band theen, usakee chehare kee abhivyakti kuchh hairaan thee, usakee neend mein badabadaate hue
, "wo vaastav mein hathauda utha sakata hai, kya vah alaukik(superhuman) shakti ke saath paida hua tha?"



taang hao aur taang sain, pita aur putr, ne apane samrddh jeevan ko jaaree rakha, lekin ek antar ke saath: is din se shuroo hua, taang hao ne taang sain ko kamare mein ek aur bhatthee ke saath khelane diya, jisase lohe kee us block ko apane svayan ke bathee par rakha. unhonne kabhee bhi taang sain ko nirdesh nahin diya, lekin is din se, taang hao ka peene thoda kam ho gaya, aur parivaar ka bhojan(khana) bhee thoda badh gaya.

Forging(hathoda marna) ek bilkul neeras aur thaka dene wali prakriya thee, lekin taang sain ne abhee bhee ise apane shareer ka gussa karane ka sahee tareeka maana. jab 11 din beet chuke the, to vah pahale hee kaee baar Forging laga chuka tha, aisa mahasoos hua ki lohe ke hathaude se jhoolate hue, vah keval apane shareer kee shaareerik shakti par bharosa nahin kar pa raha tha, aur use Mysteriousheaven skill kee madad lenee padee.

usakee pooree taakat hathaude ko 100 baar jhoolane ke lie paryaapt thee. har baar jab uskee taakat lagabhag samaapt ho jaatee thee, to vah theek hone ke lie jameen par cross leg baithate the, aur ek baar jab unakee aantarik shakti theek ho jaatee thee, to ve turant hathauda marne laut jaate the
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yah keval unake shareer ko gussa nahin tha. baar-baar girana aur ubarana, unakee mysterious hevan skill aur ichchhaashakti ko kam karane ka ek achchha tareeka bhee tha. durbhaagy se, mysterious hevan skill ka pahala tier tootna abhee bhee aisa lag raha tha ki yah ek abhedy avarodh(barrier) tha. taang sain kee practice ko painstaking(mehanti) nahin kaha ja sakata hai, lekin apanee paryaapt praakrtik pratibha(talent) ke saath, vah abhee bhee tootane aur second tier mein pravesh karane mein asamarth tha.

11 din k beet jane k bad,taang sain ne pahale hee 8000 se adhik baar hathaude ko maar diya tha, lohe kee block lagaataar chhotee hotee ja rahee thee. yah pahale se hee orignal ke ek-tihaee(1/3) se bhee kam tha. jaise-jaise unaka training and food quantity kee maatra badhatee gaee, unaka shareer thos ho gaya aur unakee shaareerik shakti dheere-dheere vikasit hone lagee. parinaamasvaroop, forging process ke dauraan, aantarik shakti kee khapat dheere-dheere kam ho gaee. aantarik shakti kee avadhi mein vrddhi ke saath, unakee shaareerik shakti mein bhee kaaphee vrddhi huee.

jab usne hathaude se ek hajaar baar neeche block ko mara, to vah lohe kee block nishchit roop se badal gaee thee; yah ek chhota sa chakr tha, aur bhale hee dhadhakatee aag ka kendr laal garm jal gaya tha, phir bhee vah behichak mahasoos kar sakata tha ki aantarik ashuddhiyaan ek bahut badee kamee aaee hain.

Gussa, yah shabd taang sain dimaag mein dikhaee diya. isane use aur bhee majabootee se das hajaar hathaude ke prahaar ko poora karane ke lie nirdhaarit kiya.aur is uddeshy kee dooree bahut kareeb thee.

taang sain kee drdhata ne taang hao ko bahut chakit kar diya. use yah prateet hua ki bhale hee usaka yah putr alaukik saamarthy ke saath paida hua ho, lekin itne dinon se lagatar kam karna asambhav h. lohe ke hathaude ke haindal ko phisalane se rokane ke lie mota kiya gaya tha, aur anivaary roop se haath kee hathelee par atyadhik choten aaengee. lekin unhen pata chala ki haalaanki taang sain eemaanadaaree se phorj(hathoda marna) kar rahe the, lekin unake yuva aur komal donon haathon mein badalaav nahin dikh raha tha. chhaale bhee nahin dikhaee die.
 
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choonki taang sain apne pita ko khona nahin chaahata tha, aur vah isake alaava apanee pichhalee pahachaan nahin chaahata tha, svaabhaavik roop se vah taang hao ko yah nahin bataega ki yah taang sampradaay ke Mysterious Jade Hand ka abhyaas karane ke kaaran tha.

haalaanki taang sain ka Mysterious Jade Hand abhee bhee paryaapt level praapt karane se door tha, phir bhee vah apanee hathelee ko gharshan se phaphole se dhankane se bacha sakata tha.

"isake alaava, grasping(samjh) ki taakat ko ab tak poora kaha ja sakata hai."

taang sain ne apane haath mein lohe ka hathauda jhoolate hue koee energy nahi release ki. is sust prakriya mein, usaka dil abhee bhee shaant nahin tha. is duniya se sambandhit unakee samajh abhee bhee asthaayee thee, yah jagah keval ek chhota sa gaanv tha, isase jyaada kuchh nahin.

DOULUO DALu naamak duniya mein, is mahaadveep mein do mahaan saamraajy(empires) the, jinhen shaayad gathabandhan( गठबंधन) ke roop mein bhee kaha ja sakata tha.kyonki do saamraajyon ke bheetar, kshetr(feild) ka ek bada sauda social jaageeradaaron(naukaro) ko diya gaya tha, aur inme s nobles(रईस) ki ginti bhi nahi ki ja sakti thn.

in do saamraajyon mein se, ek taang sain jaha rahte thn wo Heaven Dou Empire tha, doosara southern Star Luo Empire tha.

faasinuo praant donon deshon ke beech kee seema ke paas sthit tha, aur nuoding shahar dvaara Holy spirit Village do sau mile s kam door nahin tha.

taang sain graameenon ke beech baatacheet se jaanate the ki dolooo mahaadveep ke bheetar, unakee duniya kee maarshal aart maujood nahin thee, lekin spirits naamak ek tarah kee cheej thee.

yah kaha gaya tha ki har kisee kee apanee spirit hotee hai, aur unamen se bahut kam logon kee spirits, cultivation ko apana sakatee hai, spirit master ban ne k lia. aur spirit maastar ban na poore mahaadveep par sbse bada kam tha.

aisa kahte hai ki kathao ke anusaar, sau saal pahale holy spirit village ne ek spirit rshi ka utpaadan kiya, doosare shabdon mein ek prasiddh spirit guru; spirit rishi ek sheershak(title) tha spirit maastar rank ke lie.

spirits ko do mukhy shreniyon mein divide kiya gaya tha, ek tool spirits category thee, aur doosaree beest spirits thee. jaisa ki naam se pata chalata hai, jab ek spirit ek bartan(utnsils) thee to use ek tool spirit kaha jaata tha, aur jo spirit ke roop mein ek jaanavar ke saath use ho use beast spirit kaha jaata tha.

jadatar logon ke paas tool spirits the aur wo cultivate karane mein asamarth tool spirits ka ratio beast spirit kee tulana mein bahut bada tha.

taang sain ek baar gaanv ke ekamaatr vyakti se mile the, jinakee spirit tools category kee thee, spasht roop se ek prakaar kee spirit jo cultivate karane mein asamarth thee.

taang sain bhee pooree tarah se samajh gaya tha ki kyonki vah jo bhee use mila tha usakee apanee spirit thee, taang sain bhee jaanana chaahata tha ki usakee maarshal aspirit kya thee. sab ke baad, chaahe tool spirit ho ya beast spirit, donon hee paryaapt the agar ve cultivate kar saken to sahee?

doluo continent ke logon mein, 6 saal kee umr mein spirit jaaagrt hoti thee. kuchh hee dinon mein taang sain 6 saal ka ho jaega.

kisee kaaranavash vah behosh ho gaya tha, jis kaaran se usaka mysterious hevan skill tootane mein asamarth tha, vah kisee tarah usakee spirit se sambandhit tha. spirit maastar banane ke baare mein, taang sain ko vishesh roop se dilachaspee nahin thee, lekin unhonne ek aantarik taang sampradaay ke chhipe hue hathiyaar visheshagy banane ka sankalp liya, chaahe unake paas kitanee bhee aantarik shakti kyon na ho, sahee tha?

dong dong dong dong dong.

Tang sain k ghar k gate ki awaj ay.

"taang hao, tum busy ho?"

taang sain ne das hazaar baar phorjing kee disha mein bahut prayaas kiya, unhonne ek boodhe aadamee kee aavaaz sunee.

vartamaan mein dopahar ho gaee thee, taang hao kaam kar raha tha, khet ke aujaar bana raha tha.

taang sain, balki jigyaasu, apane kamare se baahar aaya, keval ek boodhe aadamee ko dekhane ke lie, 60 saal se adhik umr ke, ek hansamukh vyakti ke saath, kapade pooree tarah se saaph aur suthara, baal sahi s kanghee kia hue.

is vyakti ko , taang sain jaanata tha, Holy spirit village ka gaanv boodha, elder jack tha.

"little sain, aao, Grandpa aap s milne ay h."

elder jaick ne taang sain ka rukh kiya aur apana haath laharaaya.

wo ek dayaalu vyakti tha, sabhee gaanv ke log uska bahut sammaan karata tha, vah aksar kuchh na kuchh khaane ke lie laaya karata tha.

"Grandpa jack, hello."

taang sain elder jack ke saamane chale gae, sammaanapoorvak unhen pranaam kiya. jab koee vyakti usake saath achchha vyavahaar karata tha, to taang sain use hamesha apane dil mein yaad rakhta h.

taang hao ne udaaseenata se kaha:
"main busy hoon, village elder."

elder jack vaastav mein usase das saal se kam umr ka nahin tha, lekin vaastav mein usakee tulana usee peedhee(generation) se kee ja rahee thee, jisane taang hao ke mood ko hamesha ke lie kharaab kar diya tha.

elder jack pahale se hee taang hao ke shishtaachaar ke aadee the,
“taang hao, aah, little sain jaldee se 6 saal ka ho gaya hai. unhen is saal ke awakening ceremony h mein shaamil hona chaahie”.

taang hoo ne taang sain ko ek nazar dekha, udaaseenata se kaha:
“phir jao. Kb jan hai? ”

elder jack ne kaha:
"teen din mein, jab samay aaega main aa jaoonga, theek hai."

taang sain, jo abhee bhee utsuk the, ne poochha:
"Grandpa jack, awakening ceremony kya hai?"

Elder jack ne kaha:
“ham sabhee kee apanee spirit hai, jo ant mein 6 saal kee umr mein awakening ceremony ke saath jaagrt hotee hai. spirit hone par, ham ek nishchit kshetr(feild) mein apanee kshamata(abilities) ko badha sakate hain. yahaan tak ki ek saadhaaran(ordinary) spirit abhee bhee madad kar sakatee hai. agar kisee bhee tarah se aap ek ullekhaneey(remarkable) spirit praapt karate hain, to ham cultivate karane ke baare mein baat kar sakate hain, yahaan tak ki is had tak ki aap sambhavatah ek spirit master ban sakate hain. awakening ceremony har saal keval ek baar aayojit kiya jaata hai, main aapako ise miss nahin karne d sakata. yaha nauding city ke spirit sab-hall ka ek teacher hai, jo vyaktigat roop se hamaare gaanv ke bachchon ko awaken karane mein madad karata hai. Haalaanki us teacher KO spirit graindamaastar maana jaata hai jo ki spirit maastar hain."

jab shabd "spirit graindamaastar" kaha jaata hai, to elder jack kee aankhon mein spasht prashansa(khusi) thee.

taang sain ne keval spirit masters ke baare mein kuchh kahin hui baaten sunee theen, isalie abhee vah
svaabhaavik roop se avasar ko khisakane nahin de sakate the, unhonne baareekee se savaal karate hue kaha:

"spirit grandamaastar ka kya arth hai?"
 
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