Fantasy Soul Land

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Hello Friends! Me apni ek story likh raha hun jo basically ek anime s related h, umeed karta hun y story pasand aygi

 

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Chapter 0

ba-shu , itihaas ke maadhyam se bahut se logon kee bhoomi ke roop mein prasiddh hai, aur isake bheetar, sabase prasiddh sampradaay(samaj) jise kabhee bhee paar nahin kiya ja sakata hai: taang sampradaay.

taang sampradaay ka sthaan ek rahasyamay sthaan tha. jyaadaatar log keval yah jaanate the ki yah ek pahaad se aadha oopar tha, aur vah pahaad jahaan taang sampradaay sthit tha, ek bhayaanak naam ke saath ek sthaan tha, —Hell’s Peak .


Hell’s Peak ke shikar ke oopar se phenkee gaee ek pathar, 19 kee pooree ginatee letee h, isase pahale ki neeche se takaraane kee goonj sunaee de, is prakaar isakee oonchaee(height) dekhee ja sakatee thee.

ek grey kapade pahane yuvak Hell’s Peak ke shikhar par khada tha, kaatane vaalee thandee pahaad kee hava usake shareer ko thoda jhakajhorane mein saksham nahin thee. usake pet ke gaddhe par ek vishaal taang charitr dekha ja sakata tha; vah taang sampradaay se tha, aur bhoore rang ke kapade taang baaharee sampradaay ke ek student ka pratinidhitv karate the.

is varsh wo 29 varsh ka tha, kyonki vah paida hone ke lambe samay baad bhee taang sampradaay mein nahin aaya tha, vah baaharee(outer) sampradaay ke shishyon mein teesara sabase senior tha, aur parinaamasvaroop baaharee sampradaay ke student ne use thard young maastar naam diya. beshak, aantarik(inner) panth ke shishyon ke munh mein yah taang sain ban gaya.

taang sampradaay tha, kyonki yah neenv , do aantarik(inner) aur baaharee(outer) sampradaayon mein vibhaajit hai. baaharee sampradaay ke student baaharee parivaaron se the ya shaayad taang naam se sammaanit kie gae the, aur aantarik sampradaay sabhee seedhe taang sampradaay ke sadasyon se sambandhit the, parivaar ke maadhyam se jane gae.

abhee, taang sain k face par kafi expression thn, kabhee hansate hue, kabhee rote hue, lekin sabhee maamalon mein apane dil se upjee uttejana(exictement) ko naakaam karane mein asamarth hain.
unatees saal pahale, jab 29 saal pahale uske daadaa jee elder taang lain ne unhen shishu ke roop mein taang sampradaay mein laaya tha, taang sampradaay unaka parivaar tha, aur taang sampradaay ke chhipe hue hathiyaar unake lie sab kuchh the.

achaanak, taang sain kee abhivyakti(expression) achaanak badal gaee, lekin phir bahut jaldee phir se aaraam se, kuchh had tak khud se kah raha hai: "ant mein, jo hona chaahie vah abhee bhee hoga."

17 silhoot(shadow), 17 white silhoot, parvat se aadhe raaste tak oopar uthate hain, jaise shooting star, ye shadow masters thn, yahaan tak ki sabase chhote master's paanch dashak(50 years) ke the, har ek gambheer bhaav ke saath, unake white gown aantarik(inner) panth ka pratinidhitv karate the , aur unakee chest par sunahare(golden) taang, taang sampradaay ke elders ke prateek the.

sampradaay ke pramukh(chief) taang da , sahit kul 17 elders the, aur abhee pahaad par 17 elders chadhaee kar rahe the. yahaan tak ki martial soceity kee ek aam sabha bhee ek hee samay mein sabhee taang sampradaay ke elders ko rijhaane mein saksham nahin rahee hogee, kisee ko yah jaanana chaahie ki taang sampradaay ke elders ke beech, oldest elder pahale hee 60 saal se aage nikal chuka tha.

ye sabhee taang sampradaay ke elders pahale se hee cultivation ke top tak pahunch chuke the, aur keval ek pal ke jump mein ve pahale hee pahaad kee top par pahunch gae the.

 

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Chapter 0

ba-shu , itihaas ke maadhyam se bahut se logon kee bhoomi ke roop mein prasiddh hai, aur isake bheetar, sabase prasiddh sampradaay(samaj) jise kabhee bhee paar nahin kiya ja sakata hai: taang sampradaay.

taang sampradaay ka sthaan ek rahasyamay sthaan tha. jyaadaatar log keval yah jaanate the ki yah ek pahaad se aadha oopar tha, aur vah pahaad jahaan taang sampradaay sthit tha, ek bhayaanak naam ke saath ek sthaan tha, —Hell’s Peak .


Hell’s Peak ke shikar ke oopar se phenkee gaee ek pathar, 19 kee pooree ginatee letee h, isase pahale ki neeche se takaraane kee goonj sunaee de, is prakaar isakee oonchaee(height) dekhee ja sakatee thee.

ek grey kapade pahane yuvak Hell’s Peak ke shikhar par khada tha, kaatane vaalee thandee pahaad kee hava usake shareer ko thoda jhakajhorane mein saksham nahin thee. usake pet ke gaddhe par ek vishaal taang charitr dekha ja sakata tha; vah taang sampradaay se tha, aur bhoore rang ke kapade taang baaharee sampradaay ke ek student ka pratinidhitv karate the.

is varsh wo 29 varsh ka tha, kyonki vah paida hone ke lambe samay baad bhee taang sampradaay mein nahin aaya tha, vah baaharee(outer) sampradaay ke shishyon mein teesara sabase senior tha, aur parinaamasvaroop baaharee sampradaay ke student ne use thard young maastar naam diya. beshak, aantarik(inner) panth ke shishyon ke munh mein yah taang sain ban gaya.

taang sampradaay tha, kyonki yah neenv , do aantarik(inner) aur baaharee(outer) sampradaayon mein vibhaajit hai. baaharee sampradaay ke student baaharee parivaaron se the ya shaayad taang naam se sammaanit kie gae the, aur aantarik sampradaay sabhee seedhe taang sampradaay ke sadasyon se sambandhit the, parivaar ke maadhyam se jane gae.

abhee, taang sain k face par kafi expression thn, kabhee hansate hue, kabhee rote hue, lekin sabhee maamalon mein apane dil se upjee uttejana(exictement) ko naakaam karane mein asamarth hain.
unatees saal pahale, jab 29 saal pahale uske daadaa jee elder taang lain ne unhen shishu ke roop mein taang sampradaay mein laaya tha, taang sampradaay unaka parivaar tha, aur taang sampradaay ke chhipe hue hathiyaar unake lie sab kuchh the.

achaanak, taang sain kee abhivyakti(expression) achaanak badal gaee, lekin phir bahut jaldee phir se aaraam se, kuchh had tak khud se kah raha hai: "ant mein, jo hona chaahie vah abhee bhee hoga."

17 silhoot(shadow), 17 white silhoot, parvat se aadhe raaste tak oopar uthate hain, jaise shooting star, ye shadow masters thn, yahaan tak ki sabase chhote master's paanch dashak(50 years) ke the, har ek gambheer bhaav ke saath, unake white gown aantarik(inner) panth ka pratinidhitv karate the , aur unakee chest par sunahare(golden) taang, taang sampradaay ke elders ke prateek the.

sampradaay ke pramukh(chief) taang da , sahit kul 17 elders the, aur abhee pahaad par 17 elders chadhaee kar rahe the. yahaan tak ki martial soceity kee ek aam sabha bhee ek hee samay mein sabhee taang sampradaay ke elders ko rijhaane mein saksham nahin rahee hogee, kisee ko yah jaanana chaahie ki taang sampradaay ke elders ke beech, oldest elder pahale hee 60 saal se aage nikal chuka tha.

ye sabhee taang sampradaay ke elders pahale se hee cultivation ke top tak pahunch chuke the, aur keval ek pal ke jump mein ve pahale hee pahaad kee top par pahunch gae the.

Update small hai.... But good update ..

keep it up

 

[Ajay]

Chapter 0

ba-shu , itihaas ke maadhyam se bahut se logon kee bhoomi ke roop mein prasiddh hai, aur isake bheetar, sabase prasiddh sampradaay(samaj) jise kabhee bhee paar nahin kiya ja sakata hai: taang sampradaay.

taang sampradaay ka sthaan ek rahasyamay sthaan tha. jyaadaatar log keval yah jaanate the ki yah ek pahaad se aadha oopar tha, aur vah pahaad jahaan taang sampradaay sthit tha, ek bhayaanak naam ke saath ek sthaan tha, —Hell’s Peak .


Hell’s Peak ke shikar ke oopar se phenkee gaee ek pathar, 19 kee pooree ginatee letee h, isase pahale ki neeche se takaraane kee goonj sunaee de, is prakaar isakee oonchaee(height) dekhee ja sakatee thee.

ek grey kapade pahane yuvak Hell’s Peak ke shikhar par khada tha, kaatane vaalee thandee pahaad kee hava usake shareer ko thoda jhakajhorane mein saksham nahin thee. usake pet ke gaddhe par ek vishaal taang charitr dekha ja sakata tha; vah taang sampradaay se tha, aur bhoore rang ke kapade taang baaharee sampradaay ke ek student ka pratinidhitv karate the.

is varsh wo 29 varsh ka tha, kyonki vah paida hone ke lambe samay baad bhee taang sampradaay mein nahin aaya tha, vah baaharee(outer) sampradaay ke shishyon mein teesara sabase senior tha, aur parinaamasvaroop baaharee sampradaay ke student ne use thard young maastar naam diya. beshak, aantarik(inner) panth ke shishyon ke munh mein yah taang sain ban gaya.

taang sampradaay tha, kyonki yah neenv , do aantarik(inner) aur baaharee(outer) sampradaayon mein vibhaajit hai. baaharee sampradaay ke student baaharee parivaaron se the ya shaayad taang naam se sammaanit kie gae the, aur aantarik sampradaay sabhee seedhe taang sampradaay ke sadasyon se sambandhit the, parivaar ke maadhyam se jane gae.

abhee, taang sain k face par kafi expression thn, kabhee hansate hue, kabhee rote hue, lekin sabhee maamalon mein apane dil se upjee uttejana(exictement) ko naakaam karane mein asamarth hain.
unatees saal pahale, jab 29 saal pahale uske daadaa jee elder taang lain ne unhen shishu ke roop mein taang sampradaay mein laaya tha, taang sampradaay unaka parivaar tha, aur taang sampradaay ke chhipe hue hathiyaar unake lie sab kuchh the.

achaanak, taang sain kee abhivyakti(expression) achaanak badal gaee, lekin phir bahut jaldee phir se aaraam se, kuchh had tak khud se kah raha hai: "ant mein, jo hona chaahie vah abhee bhee hoga."

17 silhoot(shadow), 17 white silhoot, parvat se aadhe raaste tak oopar uthate hain, jaise shooting star, ye shadow masters thn, yahaan tak ki sabase chhote master's paanch dashak(50 years) ke the, har ek gambheer bhaav ke saath, unake white gown aantarik(inner) panth ka pratinidhitv karate the , aur unakee chest par sunahare(golden) taang, taang sampradaay ke elders ke prateek the.

sampradaay ke pramukh(chief) taang da , sahit kul 17 elders the, aur abhee pahaad par 17 elders chadhaee kar rahe the. yahaan tak ki martial soceity kee ek aam sabha bhee ek hee samay mein sabhee taang sampradaay ke elders ko rijhaane mein saksham nahin rahee hogee, kisee ko yah jaanana chaahie ki taang sampradaay ke elders ke beech, oldest elder pahale hee 60 saal se aage nikal chuka tha.

ye sabhee taang sampradaay ke elders pahale se hee cultivation ke top tak pahunch chuke the, aur keval ek pal ke jump mein ve pahale hee pahaad kee top par pahunch gae the.

Nice update bhai