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Fantasy Soul Land

ashish_1982_in

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is duniya mein aane ke baad se, taang sain ko shuroo mein jhataka aur dar laga tha. lekin, baad m uttejana ke saath-saath vartamaan shaanti ke saath, vah pahale se hee sachai ko pooree tarah se sveekaar kar chuka tha. yahaan, vah apane pichhale attet(past) mein sabase badee ichchha ka ehasaas karane mein saksham ho sakata hai.

qunki wo is duniya mein nagn aaya, taang sain ke paas abhee bhee sabase badee(bi sampatti thee: usakee smrti(memory). Aur baharee(outer) taang sampradaay ke sabase genious ke roop mein, taang sampradaay ke vibhinn tantron(mechanism) ke nirmaan ke tareeke, jinamen chhipe hue hathiyaar shaamil the, sabhee uske dimaag mein utkeern the. isake alaava, unhonne inner tang sampradaay kee rare script ke saath band kar diya tha jo ki vah kaee varshon tak uska use karane ke lie taiyaar the aur isake saath, taang sain ne is duniya mein taang sampradaay ke pratibhaashaalee hone kee ummeed kee thee.

"vaapas jaane ka samay ho gya"

taang sain ne aakaash(sky) ke rang par gaur kiya, unaka patala aur chhota shareer uchhal gaya aur vah parvat ke neeche pauch gaya. agar is samay kisee kee najar us par padee, to ve nishchit roop se ascharya mein chaudee aankhon se ghoor rahe honge. uska pratyek kadam chaunkaane vaala tha. pahaad kee daraaren aur asamaan zameen us par koee asar nahin daal sakatee kyonki usane sahajata se chakma diya aur tezee se khulane ke beech aage badhee. yahaan tak ki elders kee tulana mein vah abhee bhee bahut tej hoga.

taang sampradaay ka saar kya tha? chhipe hue hathiyaar, zahar(poison) aur lighteness skill. inner aur outer taing sampraday ke beech sabase bada antar chhipe hathiyaaron ke upayog ke tareekon ka tha. baaharee sampradaay ne tantron(mechanism) ko praathamikata dee, aur aantarik sampradaay ke lie main standard unki techniques thee. zahar ka upayog vaise hee ek baaharee sampradaay kee pratibha thee, jabaki aantarik sampradaay mein, chippe(hidden) hua hathiyaro ko master s student ko dena unki pratibha thi .
very nice update bhai
 

ashish_1982_in

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Mysterious Heaven Treasure Record keval 6 prakaar ke maarshal techniques ka varnan karata hai:
1. Inner strength internal technique Mysterious Heaven Skill (method for training internal qi. This allows to resist extreme pressure, poison and helps with recovering injuries.)
2. hand skill practice technique Mysterious Jade Hand (Mysterious Jade Hand kee vajah se haath kee hathelee behad sakht aur tany ho jaatee hai. isake alaava, yah kisee bhee jahar(poison) ko baadhit kar sakata hai)
3. vision cultivation technique Purple Demon Eye(to improve vision)
4. capturing technique Controlling Crane Capturing Dragon(method of improving his coordination and strength)
5. light body technique Ghost Shadow Perplexing Track(yah ek movement aur balanced technique hai jo taang sain ko extreme speed aur kafi muskhil attack ko dodge karne m madat karti h)
6. hidden weapon use technique, Hidden Weapon Hundred Separation

pahale 5 techniques bahut sadharn theen; sab ke baad, ek majaboot neenv ke bina, taang sampradaay ke chhipe hue hathiyaaron ko kaise saamane laaya ja sakata hai?, yah technique sirf tang sain hi janta tha.

1 varsh kee umr mein Mysterious Heaven Skill ka use shuroo karane ke baad, taang sain, jo abhi lagabhag 6 saal ka tha, abhee bhee starting(foundation) stage m tha..

taang sain ka parivaar Holy Spirit village ke pashchim mein, gaanv ke mukhiya ke sthaan par rahata tha. poore ghar mein teen kamare thn, jo kee mittee ka eent s bane hua thn. isamen daravaaje ke oopar ek meetar kee lakadee kee pattika thee, jise ek saadhaaran hathaude se chitrit(design) kiya gaya tha.

is duniya mein hathauda ek lohaar(blacksmith) ka sabase vyaapak prateek tha. ye sahee hai. taang sain ke pita taang hao ek lohaar the, jo gaanv ke ekamaatr lohaar thn.

is duniya mein, lohaar ko vyavasaayon(profession) ka humble(namr) kaha ja sakata hai. isaka kaaran yah hai ki is duniya ke sarvashreshth hathiyaaron mein se ek h hathauda .

phir bhee, jaisa ki is gaanv ke ekamaatr nipun lohaar hain, pher bhee tang sain ke parivar ki ayy(income) ise jada pravabhit nahi thn ......

ghar mein pravesh karate hue, taang sain ko pahale se hee sugandhit chaaval kee gandh aa rahee thee. vah taang hao naashta nahin bana raha tha; balki tang sain n taang hao ke lie khaana banaaya tha.

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4 saal kee umr se shuroo hone se pahale, taang sain kitchen counter tak pahunchane ke lie kaaphee lamba tha, khaana banaana pahale se hee usaka dainik kaary tha;

yahaan tak ki agar use rasoee counter ke top tak pahunchane mein saksham hone ke lie ek stool par khada hona padta tha. aisa isalie nahin tha kyonki taang hao ne isakee maang kee thee, balki isalie ki agar vah aisa nahin karate to taang sain vyaavahaarik roop se kabhee bhee apana pet nahin bhar paenge.

"pita jee, bhojan."

taang sain n bulaaya.

ek lambe samay ke baad, bheetaree kamare ka daravaaza khatakhataaya, aur ek bada aankada kuchh ladakhadaate kadamon ke ek admi bahar aya.

yah ek madhyam aayu varg ka vyakti tha, usakee upasthiti 50 saal ke kareeb lag rahee thee. unka kad abhee bhee asaadhaaran roop se bada aur kathor tha.

Yah is duniya mein taang sain ke pita taang hao the.

bade hone ke dauraan, taang sain ne kabhee nahin jaana ki pitr prem kya tha. jis tarah se taang hao ne usake saath vyavahaar kiya vah hamesha se ek jaisa tha, shuruaat se hee sahee tha. Haalaanki wo uske khaane ke lie thoda khaana banaana jaanata tha, lekin phir bhee, jaise-jaise samay beetata gaya, taang sain ne khaana pakaane ke lie pahal karana shuroo kar diya.

is tarah unaka ghar itana kharaab ho gaya ki unake paas baithne k lia furniture bhee nahin tha. bhojan bhee ek samaya ka tha, mukhy roop se taang hao k karan jo apna jada tar income sharab peene m laga dete thn.

jabaki taang sain ek bada bachcha tha, usake pita bhee lagabhag 30 saal ke the, 30saal kee umr se pahale hee itanee jaldee shaadee kar lee, lekin taang hao kee tulana kisee bade vyakti se nahin kee jaanee chaahie, balki vah taang sain ke daada se milata julata tha.

taang hao ke vyavahaar ke sambandh mein, taang sain ne koee naaraajagee nahin Jahir karte thn. apane poorv jeevanakaal mein, vah ek anaath tha. is jeevanakaal mein, bhale hee taang hao ne usake saath bura vyavahaar kiya, lekin usake paas kam se kam parivaar tha. taang sain ke lie, yah pahale se hee use chiz ka ehasaas karaata tha. kam se kam yahaan ek vyakti tha jise vah pita kah sakata tha.

taang hao ne katore ko mej se pakada, garam ke baare mein chintit nahin tha, aur bade tezi k sath unhone kahana apne pet m dal lia.

"pitaajee, dheema, yah abhee bhee garm hai."

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taang sain ne apane pita ke haath se katora liya aur ise phir s khane se bhar diya.

usane apana katora bhee uthaaya khane k lia.

taang sampradaay mein, wo bahut kam hee baaharee maamalon ke sampark mein aaya tha.. bahut jaldee, saat ya aath katore ke saath daliya ka ek bartan taang hao ke pet mein pravesh kar gaya. ek saans chhodate hue, unhonne katore ko tebal par rakha.

taang sain ko dekhate hue, jhuki palaken kuchh had tak khul gaeen. unhonne kaha,

“tum apna kaam jaaree rakho, main dopahar mein kaam karoonga. main thodee der so jaoonga. ”

taang hao ke kaam aur aaraam kee aadat ka ek bahut hee niyamit pattern tha: pooree subah sona, dopahar mein khet ke kuchh upakaran banaana, income praapt karana aur shaam ko peena.

"theek hai pitaajee."

taang sain ne sir hilaaya.

taang hao khada ho gaya. aur bheetar ke kamare kee or chala gaya.

"pita jee."

taang sain ne achaanak unhe bulaya.

taang hao ruk gaya, use dekhane ke lie apana sir ghumaya, uski ankhein spasht roop se thoda adheerata ka sanket de rahe the.

taang sain ne ek kone par ishaara kiya jisamen kaale lohe ke chamakate hue tukade rakhe hote hain:

"lohe ke ye tukade, kya aap unhen mujhe istemaal karane ke lie de sakate hain?"

apane pichhale avataar mein vah taang sampradaay ke sabase utkrsht baaharee sampradaay ke shishy the, ve har tarah ke chhipe hue hathiyaar ke nirmaan se sabase adhik parichit the. svaabhaavik roop se, vaapas to taang sampradaay dvaara sabhee prakaar kee saamagree kee aapoorti kee gaee thee.

lekin is naee duniya mein, haalaanki unhonne kaee varshon ka abhyaas kiya, lekin unakee taakat abhee bhee paryaapt nahin thee.

isake alaava, vah sabase unnat chhipe hue hathiyaaron ke nirmaan mein koee kasar nahin chhodana chaahata tha. ab tak usane pahale se hee kuchh chhipe hue hathiyaaron ko banaane kee koshish kee thee, lekin paryaapt saamagree dhoondhana bada mudda tha.

taang hao ne graameenon(villagers) se praapt dhaatu se jaalee krshi(farming) upakaran(tools) banae. thn wo uske bache hua tukde thn,

"huh. kya yah theek loha nahin hai?”

nazar uthaane ke lie chalate hue, usane taang sain ko dekhane ke lie apana sir ghumaaya,

"aap ek lohaar banana chaahate hain?"
nice update bhai
 

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taang sain ne thoda sir hilaaya. chhipe hue hathiyaar banaane ke lie nishchit roop se lohaar banana usake lie sabase upayukt pasha(profession) tha,


“pitaajee, aap budhe(old) ho rahe hain. kuchh varshon tak, jab tak main thoda bada nahin ho jaata, krpaya mujhe rasoee ke aujaar(tools) banaane ke tareeke sikhaen aur mujhe ap apana kaam sambhaalane den. ”

pahale usane jo kuchh banaaya vah sabase sateek chhipe hue hathiyaar the, aur isake vipareet usane kabhee bhee sabase saral form nahin seekha tha.

taang hao thoda dhere, badabadaaya:

"lohaar bura bhee nahin lagata hai, ya to."

ek hee ghise-pite chair ko kheenchate hue, lohe ke us dher se seedhe baithate hue, vah dheere se bola:

"little sain, mujhe batao, kis tarah ka lohaar, sabase achchha lohaar hota h?."

taang sain ne isake baare mein socha, phir kaha:

"sarvashreshth lohaar divine tools(very powerful beings close to the power of Gods) mein saksham hona chaahie."

Graameenon(villagers) ne jo kuchh kaha, usake dvaara divine tools is duniya mein maujood the, bhale hee vah theek se nahin jaanate the ki divine tools kya the.

lekin divine kahe jaane ke kaaran, sambhavatah unhen bahut achchha hona chaahie.

taang hao kee aankhon mein haasy kee ek jhalak milee,

“divine tools? little sain ko divine tools ke baare mein bhee pata hai. phir mujhe batao, divine tools banaane ke lie kya upayog kiya jaana chaahie? "

taang sain ne socha ki yah apratyaashit tha, aur turant kaha:
"sabase achchhee materials, nishchit roop se."

taang hao ne apanee ungli ko badhaaya, aur ise taang sain ke chehare par laharaaya,
“yadi aap ek maastar lohaar(blacksmith) banana chaahate hain, to mere shabdon ko yaad rakhen: jo koee divine tools banaane ke lie sheersh shrenee kee saamagriyon(materials) ka upayog karta hai, wo sabase achchha lohaar nahin hai; adhikaansh mein yah keval ek synthesizer hai. sabase achchha lohaar aam(common) saamagree(materils) ka upayog kar divine tools banata h. "

"divine tools ko banaane ke lie saamaany lohe ka upayog karana?"

taang sain, kuchh had tak chaunka, taang hao ko dekha.

aamataur par, taang hao ne shaayad hee kabhee usase baat kee; yah din pahale se hee kisee bhee samay sabase adhik guna jaada baat ki hai.

khade hokar, taang hao ne kamare ke doosaree taraph lohe ke fifty square centimeter bade block kee or ishaara kiya,
“yadi aap ek lohaar banane ke baare mein soch rahe hain aur mujhase seekhane kee koshish kar rahe hain, to aapako isee das hazaar baar pahale is hathauda s hit karna hoga. tab kahin jake ap yogya ho paynge . ”

yah saadhaaran lohe ka ek block tha, jisamen kaee ashuddhiyaan(impurities) theen. lohe ke srot kee gaanth kee tulana mein, vah yah bhee nahin bata sakata tha ki yah kitana kharaab tha.

"abhee, aap abhee bhee apana man badal sakate hain."
taang hao ne udaaseenata se baat kee,
pahale se hee sone ke lie aantarik kamare mein vaapas jaane kee taiyaaree kar raha tha.

"pitaajee, main ise aajamaana chaahata hoon."
taang sain kee aavaaz spasht aur shaant thee, phir bhee dridh thee.

taang hao, kuchh had tak chintit, use dekha,
"theek hai."

ek shabd ke saath, lohe ke us bade block ko apanee baahon mein le liya, aur seedhe ise bhathee par rakha. jab tak koyale kee aag ko prajvalit kiya gaya, tab tak ise phorjing(shape dene) ke lie istemaal kiya ja sakata hai.

ise khatm karane ke baad, taang hao sone ke lie bheetar ke kamare mein laut aaya.

taang sain ek drdh sankalp vaale vyakti the. shushu shushu. bhathee se uthata hai, koyala bhatthee ke bheetar utsarjit lau, lohe kee us badee block ko jhulasaata hai. haalaanki taang sain ko koee technique nahin pata tha, unhonne taang hao ko har din use karte dekha tha, aur unhen sahee prakriya pata thee.

jis tarah lohe kee block dheere-dheere laal ho gaee thee, usane taang hao ke saamaany hathaude ko kheenchakar jameen par gira diya.

yah lambe samay tak sambhaala hua lohe ka hathauda bhee usase adhik lamba tha, aur ek saadhaaran 5 ya 6 saal ka bachcha ise bilkul bhee utha nahi sakta tha. lekin taang sain abhee bhee ise pakade hue tha. Mysterious hevan skill se poore shareer ko majabootee milatee hai, usake paas pahale se hee ek vayask kee tulana mein shaareerik shakti thee.

jab lohe ka hathauda lohe kee gaanth se baar-baar takaraata tha, to vah ek spasht aur madhur awaj ke saath bajata tha. yah taang sain kee pahalee hammer strike thee. andar ke kamare mein bistar par padee taang hao palat gaee. bhale hee usakee aankhen band theen, usakee chehare kee abhivyakti kuchh hairaan thee, usakee neend mein badabadaate hue
, "wo vaastav mein hathauda utha sakata hai, kya vah alaukik(superhuman) shakti ke saath paida hua tha?"



taang hao aur taang sain, pita aur putr, ne apane samrddh jeevan ko jaaree rakha, lekin ek antar ke saath: is din se shuroo hua, taang hao ne taang sain ko kamare mein ek aur bhatthee ke saath khelane diya, jisase lohe kee us block ko apane svayan ke bathee par rakha. unhonne kabhee bhi taang sain ko nirdesh nahin diya, lekin is din se, taang hao ka peene thoda kam ho gaya, aur parivaar ka bhojan(khana) bhee thoda badh gaya.

Forging(hathoda marna) ek bilkul neeras aur thaka dene wali prakriya thee, lekin taang sain ne abhee bhee ise apane shareer ka gussa karane ka sahee tareeka maana. jab 11 din beet chuke the, to vah pahale hee kaee baar Forging laga chuka tha, aisa mahasoos hua ki lohe ke hathaude se jhoolate hue, vah keval apane shareer kee shaareerik shakti par bharosa nahin kar pa raha tha, aur use Mysteriousheaven skill kee madad lenee padee.

usakee pooree taakat hathaude ko 100 baar jhoolane ke lie paryaapt thee. har baar jab uskee taakat lagabhag samaapt ho jaatee thee, to vah theek hone ke lie jameen par cross leg baithate the, aur ek baar jab unakee aantarik shakti theek ho jaatee thee, to ve turant hathauda marne laut jaate the
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yah keval unake shareer ko gussa nahin tha. baar-baar girana aur ubarana, unakee mysterious hevan skill aur ichchhaashakti ko kam karane ka ek achchha tareeka bhee tha. durbhaagy se, mysterious hevan skill ka pahala tier tootna abhee bhee aisa lag raha tha ki yah ek abhedy avarodh(barrier) tha. taang sain kee practice ko painstaking(mehanti) nahin kaha ja sakata hai, lekin apanee paryaapt praakrtik pratibha(talent) ke saath, vah abhee bhee tootane aur second tier mein pravesh karane mein asamarth tha.

11 din k beet jane k bad,taang sain ne pahale hee 8000 se adhik baar hathaude ko maar diya tha, lohe kee block lagaataar chhotee hotee ja rahee thee. yah pahale se hee orignal ke ek-tihaee(1/3) se bhee kam tha. jaise-jaise unaka training and food quantity kee maatra badhatee gaee, unaka shareer thos ho gaya aur unakee shaareerik shakti dheere-dheere vikasit hone lagee. parinaamasvaroop, forging process ke dauraan, aantarik shakti kee khapat dheere-dheere kam ho gaee. aantarik shakti kee avadhi mein vrddhi ke saath, unakee shaareerik shakti mein bhee kaaphee vrddhi huee.

jab usne hathaude se ek hajaar baar neeche block ko mara, to vah lohe kee block nishchit roop se badal gaee thee; yah ek chhota sa chakr tha, aur bhale hee dhadhakatee aag ka kendr laal garm jal gaya tha, phir bhee vah behichak mahasoos kar sakata tha ki aantarik ashuddhiyaan ek bahut badee kamee aaee hain.

Gussa, yah shabd taang sain dimaag mein dikhaee diya. isane use aur bhee majabootee se das hajaar hathaude ke prahaar ko poora karane ke lie nirdhaarit kiya.aur is uddeshy kee dooree bahut kareeb thee.


taang sain kee drdhata ne taang hao ko bahut chakit kar diya. use yah prateet hua ki bhale hee usaka yah putr alaukik saamarthy ke saath paida hua ho, lekin itne dinon se lagatar kam karna asambhav h. lohe ke hathaude ke haindal ko phisalane se rokane ke lie mota kiya gaya tha, aur anivaary roop se haath kee hathelee par atyadhik choten aaengee. lekin unhen pata chala ki haalaanki taang sain eemaanadaaree se phorj(hathoda marna) kar rahe the, lekin unake yuva aur komal donon haathon mein badalaav nahin dikh raha tha. chhaale bhee nahin dikhaee die.
Awesome update bhai
 

abhiddx1

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kaalee roshanee phailane se , hathauda ka vajan(weight) gaayab ho gaya. taang sain ka dil ko bahut ajeeb laga; yah hathauda nissandeh uski Mysterious heaven skill ki internal(aantrik) strength k sath juda hua tha, lekin wo abhee bhee ise uthaane mein asamarth kyon tha? use aur acharaj hua ki us chhote se hathauda ko bulaane ke baad, vaastav mein usakee aantarik(internal) shakti(strength) lagabhag pooree tarah se upayog ho gaee thee.


taang sain ne kabhee apane pita ke chehare ke bhaav ko itana samrddh nahin dekha tha. har tarah kee jatil(complex) expression taang hao ke chehare par dikhaee dee, aur lambe samay ke baad, vah dheere-dheere ek vaaky bolta hai :,
"yaad rakhen, bhavishy(future) tumhe hamesha baye(left) haath ka istemal karna hai hathode ke liye Takki tum apne daaye(righy) haath wali grass ki suraksha kar sako "

taang sain ne bina kaaran samajhe ha m sir hilaaya. taang hao uth khada hua, seedhe bheetar ke kamare mein chalein gy.

Madhyaahn(afternoon) mein bhojan taiyaar karate samay, taang sain ne is baat par vichaar kiya ki is din vah spirit world ke sampark mein kaise aaya. Twin spirits, is duniya mein prateet hotee hain ki bahut kam logon ka pass hona chaahie, anyatha uske pita us tarah se chaunk nahin sakate the. aisa lag raha tha maano usakee yah hammer spirit use bahut takatwar lag rahee thee.

madhyaahn bhojan mein, taang hao bahut shaant lag raha tha, usee bhookh bhee pahale kee tulana mein bahut jada lag rahee thee. uskee nigaah baar-baar taang sain par padatee thee, kisee baat ko lekar jhijhakane lagatee thee. madhyaahn bhojan samaapt karane ke baad, taang sain ne hamesha kee tarah bartan(utensils) ko saaf karane ke lie taiyaar hua, lekin taang hao ne use rukane ke lie kaha.

“tidy up()सफ़ाई करना karne se pahale ek pal rukie, theek hai. little sain, main aapase poochhata hoon, kya aap spirit maastar banana chaahate hain? "
taang sain kshan(moment) bhar ke lie chakara gaya, taang hao kee or dekh apane pita ko dhokha dene ke lie taiyaar nahin tha.vah ek pal ke lie hichakichaaya, aur ant mein ha mein sir hilaaya.

taang hao ne ek aah bharee, usaka chehara aur bhee older lag raha tha,
"Theek hai….."

unhonne keval yah vaaky bola, phir apane kamare mein laut aae.

taang saan ne mahasoos kiya, jab taang hao ne aah bharee, to unhen laga ki ve niraash hain, lekin phir bhee unakee abhivyakti(expression) adhik khusi ke thee. vah samajh gaya tha ki usake pita ke dil mein kaee chhupee huee baaten hain.
sabhee bartano ko saaf karate hue, taang sain apane kamare mein laut aae aur apana kaam jaaree rakha.


teen month ka samay bahut jaldee beet gaya, in teen month mein usne hathauda chalane ki har technique seekh li thn aur apni Mysterious heaven skill ka bhi use hathauda chalne k lia kia, aur jis din se taang saan hathauda ko terah(13) baar(times) laharaana shuroo kia, taang hao ne use kaise tools bante hain uske lie nirdesh dena shuroo kiya.

taang hao kee teaching method bahut hee pratyaksh(direct) thee: theek jaise pahale vah ek baar kudh karate the, phir taang sain ko karne ko kehte thn aur jab tak unhonne dekha ki kuchh basic seekh lee gaeen theen, unhonne uske abhyaas mein hastakshep nahi kia. is vajah se, har baar jab taang hao ne sanket die, taang sain ne ise aur adhik spasht roop se Learn kiya.
 

ashish_1982_in

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Update 7

choonki taang sain apne pita ko khona nahin chaahata tha, aur vah isake alaava apanee pichhalee pahachaan nahin chaahata tha, svaabhaavik roop se vah taang hao ko yah nahin bataega ki yah taang sampradaay ke Mysterious Jade Hand ka abhyaas karane ke kaaran tha.

haalaanki taang sain ka Mysterious Jade Hand abhee bhee paryaapt level praapt karane se door tha, phir bhee vah apanee hathelee ko gharshan se phaphole se dhankane se bacha sakata tha.

"isake alaava, grasping(samjh) ki taakat ko ab tak poora kaha ja sakata hai."

taang sain ne apane haath mein lohe ka hathauda jhoolate hue koee energy nahi release ki. is sust prakriya mein, usaka dil abhee bhee shaant nahin tha. is duniya se sambandhit unakee samajh abhee bhee asthaayee thee, yah jagah keval ek chhota sa gaanv tha, isase jyaada kuchh nahin.

DOULUO DALu naamak duniya mein, is mahaadveep mein do mahaan saamraajy(empires) the, jinhen shaayad gathabandhan( गठबंधन) ke roop mein bhee kaha ja sakata tha.kyonki do saamraajyon ke bheetar, kshetr(feild) ka ek bada sauda social jaageeradaaron(naukaro) ko diya gaya tha, aur inme s nobles(रईस) ki ginti bhi nahi ki ja sakti thn.

in do saamraajyon mein se, ek taang sain jaha rahte thn wo Heaven Dou Empire tha, doosara southern Star Luo Empire tha.

faasinuo praant donon deshon ke beech kee seema ke paas sthit tha, aur nuoding shahar dvaara Holy spirit Village do sau mile s kam door nahin tha.

taang sain graameenon ke beech baatacheet se jaanate the ki dolooo mahaadveep ke bheetar, unakee duniya kee maarshal aart maujood nahin thee, lekin spirits naamak ek tarah kee cheej thee.

yah kaha gaya tha ki har kisee kee apanee spirit hotee hai, aur unamen se bahut kam logon kee spirits, cultivation ko apana sakatee hai, spirit master ban ne k lia. aur spirit maastar ban na poore mahaadveep par sbse bada kam tha.

aisa kahte hai ki kathao ke anusaar, sau saal pahale holy spirit village ne ek spirit rshi ka utpaadan kiya, doosare shabdon mein ek prasiddh spirit guru; spirit rishi ek sheershak(title) tha spirit maastar rank ke lie.

spirits ko do mukhy shreniyon mein divide kiya gaya tha, ek tool spirits category thee, aur doosaree beest spirits thee. jaisa ki naam se pata chalata hai, jab ek spirit ek bartan(utnsils) thee to use ek tool spirit kaha jaata tha, aur jo spirit ke roop mein ek jaanavar ke saath use ho use beast spirit kaha jaata tha.

jadatar logon ke paas tool spirits the aur wo cultivate karane mein asamarth tool spirits ka ratio beast spirit kee tulana mein bahut bada tha.

taang sain ek baar gaanv ke ekamaatr vyakti se mile the, jinakee spirit tools category kee thee, spasht roop se ek prakaar kee spirit jo cultivate karane mein asamarth thee.

taang sain bhee pooree tarah se samajh gaya tha ki kyonki vah jo bhee use mila tha usakee apanee spirit thee, taang sain bhee jaanana chaahata tha ki usakee maarshal aspirit kya thee. sab ke baad, chaahe tool spirit ho ya beast spirit, donon hee paryaapt the agar ve cultivate kar saken to sahee?

doluo continent ke logon mein, 6 saal kee umr mein spirit jaaagrt hoti thee. kuchh hee dinon mein taang sain 6 saal ka ho jaega.

kisee kaaranavash vah behosh ho gaya tha, jis kaaran se usaka mysterious hevan skill tootane mein asamarth tha, vah kisee tarah usakee spirit se sambandhit tha. spirit maastar banane ke baare mein, taang sain ko vishesh roop se dilachaspee nahin thee, lekin unhonne ek aantarik taang sampradaay ke chhipe hue hathiyaar visheshagy banane ka sankalp liya, chaahe unake paas kitanee bhee aantarik shakti kyon na ho, sahee tha?

dong dong dong dong dong.

Tang sain k ghar k gate ki awaj ay.

"taang hao, tum busy ho?"

taang sain ne das hazaar baar phorjing kee disha mein bahut prayaas kiya, unhonne ek boodhe aadamee kee aavaaz sunee.

vartamaan mein dopahar ho gaee thee, taang hao kaam kar raha tha, khet ke aujaar bana raha tha.

taang sain, balki jigyaasu, apane kamare se baahar aaya, keval ek boodhe aadamee ko dekhane ke lie, 60 saal se adhik umr ke, ek hansamukh vyakti ke saath, kapade pooree tarah se saaph aur suthara, baal sahi s kanghee kia hue.

is vyakti ko , taang sain jaanata tha, Holy spirit village ka gaanv boodha, elder jack tha.

"little sain, aao, Grandpa aap s milne ay h."

elder jaick ne taang sain ka rukh kiya aur apana haath laharaaya.

wo ek dayaalu vyakti tha, sabhee gaanv ke log uska bahut sammaan karata tha, vah aksar kuchh na kuchh khaane ke lie laaya karata tha.

"Grandpa jack, hello."

taang sain elder jack ke saamane chale gae, sammaanapoorvak unhen pranaam kiya. jab koee vyakti usake saath achchha vyavahaar karata tha, to taang sain use hamesha apane dil mein yaad rakhta h.

taang hao ne udaaseenata se kaha:
"main busy hoon, village elder."

elder jack vaastav mein usase das saal se kam umr ka nahin tha, lekin vaastav mein usakee tulana usee peedhee(generation) se kee ja rahee thee, jisane taang hao ke mood ko hamesha ke lie kharaab kar diya tha.

elder jack pahale se hee taang hao ke shishtaachaar ke aadee the,
“taang hao, aah, little sain jaldee se 6 saal ka ho gaya hai. unhen is saal ke awakening ceremony h mein shaamil hona chaahie”.

taang hoo ne taang sain ko ek nazar dekha, udaaseenata se kaha:
“phir jao. Kb jan hai? ”

elder jack ne kaha:
"teen din mein, jab samay aaega main aa jaoonga, theek hai."

taang sain, jo abhee bhee utsuk the, ne poochha:
"Grandpa jack, awakening ceremony kya hai?"

Elder jack ne kaha:
“ham sabhee kee apanee spirit hai, jo ant mein 6 saal kee umr mein awakening ceremony ke saath jaagrt hotee hai. spirit hone par, ham ek nishchit kshetr(feild) mein apanee kshamata(abilities) ko badha sakate hain. yahaan tak ki ek saadhaaran(ordinary) spirit abhee bhee madad kar sakatee hai. agar kisee bhee tarah se aap ek ullekhaneey(remarkable) spirit praapt karate hain, to ham cultivate karane ke baare mein baat kar sakate hain, yahaan tak ki is had tak ki aap sambhavatah ek spirit master ban sakate hain. awakening ceremony har saal keval ek baar aayojit kiya jaata hai, main aapako ise miss nahin karne d sakata. yaha nauding city ke spirit sab-hall ka ek teacher hai, jo vyaktigat roop se hamaare gaanv ke bachchon ko awaken karane mein madad karata hai. Haalaanki us teacher KO spirit graindamaastar maana jaata hai jo ki spirit maastar hain."

jab shabd "spirit graindamaastar" kaha jaata hai, to elder jack kee aankhon mein spasht prashansa(khusi) thee.

taang sain ne keval spirit masters ke baare mein kuchh kahin hui baaten sunee theen, isalie abhee vah
svaabhaavik roop se avasar ko khisakane nahin de sakate the, unhonne baareekee se savaal karate hue kaha:

"spirit grandamaastar ka kya arth hai?"
very nice update bhai maza aa gya
 
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UPDATE 8

ELDER jack ne spasht roop se taang sain ko bade dhairy se javaab diya. unake dil mein, gaanv ka sabase buddhimaan bachcha koee aur nahin balki taang sain tha. yah kalpana karana vaastav mein mushkil tha ki is tarah ke pita ka is tarah ka ek chatur(clever) bete HO sakata hain.

"Spirit grandamaster ek spirit maaster rank hai. Spirit master hamaare douluo continent par shandar profession hai: ve bahut daravne ho sakate hain, unake paas ullekhaneey assisting ability ho sakatee hai. lekin koee phark nahin padata ki kis tarah kee spirit maastar hain, sabhee ko sort kiya jaata hai aur unhe titles diya jaata hai."


" sabhee spirit master ke paas apanee spirit power hotee hai. Spirit power kee teevrata(intensity) ke aadhaar par, inhen das saamaany rank mein divide kiya jaata hai. pratyek title ko das title m sub divided kiya jaata hai. First, keval dahaleej(start) ko paar karane ke baad, jise Spirit Scholar kaha jaata hai. Har kisi ki ek spirit jaagrt(awaken) hotee hai, har koee ek spirit scholar hota hai. is event mein agar spirit cultivation karane mein saksham hai to, spirit power 11 th rank par pahunch jaatee hai, to koee vyakti agale tittle mein pravesh kar sakata hai, jo us sthiti mein spirit master hai. aur spirit grandmaster, yah title ke is kram mein teesara(3rd) hai. Spirit grandmaster ke releam mein pahunchana, pahale se hee ek bahut prasiddh spirit master hai. is tarah kul 10 hain. "


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"Spirit Scholar, Spirit Master, Spirit Grandmaster, Spirit Elder, Spirit Ancestor, Spirit King, Spirit Emperor, Spirit Sage, Spirit Douluo and Title Douluo . yah theek vahee hai jahaan se hamaare Duoluo continent ka naam aata hai. aisa kaha jaata hai ki jab koi 19 th rank ki duouluo power ko praapt kar leta h, wo apne ap ko title de sakta h.”

Tang sain ki aankhen garv se chamak utheen,

"sau saal pahale hamaare Holi spirit Village ne 8 th rank ka spirit rishi ka nirmaan kiya tha, . nauding shahar ke sabhee, yahaan tak ki poore phaseenuo region mein, yah atyant durlabh(rare) hai."

or taang hao ne apane honth ko ghusa diya,
"old jack, yah sirph ek Story hai, isase jyaada kuchh nahin."

jaanaboojhakar galat tareeke se ragad diya, old jack nirankush ho gaya,
“kya aap ise ek story kah rahe hain? yah story facts se aatee hai. taang hao, aapako gaanv mein aae hue 6 saal ho chuke hain, aapako yah mahasoos karana chaahie ki Spirit rishi hamaare itihaas ka hissa hai. yadi aap ,mere saamne spirit rishi ka apamaan karate hue dikhte hain, to main aapako gaanv se bhaga doonga. kya yah little sain ke lie nahin tha, aapako lagata hai ki main aapake dog house, huh mein aana chaahoonga? ”

jack ne us par buree najar daalee aur taang sain ka saamana karate hue kaha:
“aapako bhavishy mein is tarah ke dispirited(मायूस) pita ke baad nahin lena chaahie. theek hai, main chalta hun , aur teen dinon mein, main tumhen lene aaoonga. ”

baat khatm hone ke baad, old jaik ne gusse ko kam karne k lia smailee dee.
"pita g."

taang sain n awaj di.
"hhhh?"

taang hao ne chilled hoke se us par ek nazar daalee.

apane pita kee aankhon mein sard ka drshy dekhate hue, taang sain keval apane shabdon ko vaapas nigal sakata tha. Wo apane kamare mein laut aaya. raat mein, raat ka khaana khaane ke baad, taang hao ne apana munh ponchh liya aur hamesha kee tarah hathauda chalna jari rakha;

teen din bahut jaldee beet gae, taang sain abhee bhee rojaana subah apanee dinacharya ka abhyaas karane ke lie subah pahaadee par jaata tha aur baad mein ghar laut aata tha.

khaana pakaane ke alaava, vah phorjing(hathauda chalna) bhee kar raha tha,, apni strength check karne k lia.
"little sain,elder jack aapako lene aae hain."

old jack sahi time mein aaya, is baar vah andar bhee nahin gaya, keval baahar se taang sain ko bula raha tha. taang sain ne apanee or se apane pita kee or dekha, jo abhee khana kha chuke the. taang hao ne udaaseenata se kaha:

"jao. dopahar ke bhojan ko pakaane mein deree na karen. ”
very nice update bhai
 
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subah-subah, taang sain naashta banaane ke lie mountain top se laut kar tarotaaja mahasoos kar rahe the. choonki unhonne har din purple demon eye ka istemaal kiya, aur subah mein bina cultivation ke bhee, purple demon eye ne pahale kee tulana mein mahatvapoorn pragati kee thee. 10 meter ke bheetar wo ek machchhar(mosquito) ko apane pankhon ko phadaphadaate hue dakne mein wo spasht roop se saksham thee. Agar wo apni Msyterious heaven skill ko agle stage mein break k lia asamarth hain, taang sain ka maanana hai, any pahaluon mein unakee pragati aur bhee adhik hogee.

daravaaje mein pravesh(enter) karane ke baad, halke se apni kalaee(wrist) ko touch karte hue, taang sain ke chehare par ek santusht muskaan phel gayi; unakee kalaee(wrist) par is duniya mein aane ke baad se unaka pahala kaam juda hua tha, aur unake dvaara har kadam apane dam par poora kiya gaya tha.

yah ek spring loaded dart usakee aasteen(sleve) mein chhupa hua tha. pahalee jagah mein taang sampradaay ke baare mein bolate hue, chhupa daart sabase saadhaaran tarah ka chhipa hua hathiyaar hai.

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taang sain kee nirmit aasteen(sleve) daart bhee ek suraksha upakaran(safety device) se susajjit thee, isalie koee aakasmik chot sambhav nahin thee. sleev daarts ka ek set ek aasteen mein fit hone ke lie banae gae teen teeron kee tarah tha, yahaan tak ki ab yah taang sain ke haath par apavaad ke bina tha.


【taang Mysterious Heaven Treasure Record, general principles second point: chhipe hue hathiyaar kya hain: nishchit roop se, dushman ko jeet aur jeet haasil karane ke lie ek vishesh martial hathiyaar. yadi dushman jaanata hai ki aap isaka upayog karana chaahate hain, to jaise, yah ab ek chhipe hue hathiyaar nahin hai, balki ek ordinary hathiyaar hai.]

taang sain nishchit roop se apane chhipe hue hathiyaar ko ordinary hathiyaar nahin banane de sakata tha. taang hao ne bhee kabhee is baat kee jahamat nahin uthaee ki unhonne lohe kee block ke is tukade ka istemaal kis lie kiya tha, isalie yah aasteen(sleve) daart ek rahasy tha jo unaka tha.

ghar mein pravesh karate hue, khanne kee svaadisht khoosbu baahar nikal gaee, usee tarah jaise vah har din banaata tha, aur pahale se hee lambe samay yahi bana raha tha.
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"Dad a jao."
taang sain ne andar ke kamare kee or bulaaya.

asaamaany roop se, taang hao jo har din bhojan k time par a jata tha par aj ab tak nahi aya tha.

tang sain n socha," zadatar jab main dad ko bulata hun khane k time mein tab wo a jate hein, kya uske dad beemaar hein jo abhi tak nahi ay?" Wo jhat s apne dad ke kamre ki aur dodha par, taang hao kamare mein nahin tha.

haalaanki kaee varshon mein, yah pahalee baar tha jab vah abhee bhee so nahin raha tha. jab taang sain is soch ke beech mein tha ki taang hao kahaan ja sakata hai, taang hao laut aaya.

"little sain, aj subh subh tum kaha gy thn?"
taang hao ne cool tareeke se poochha.

taang sain ne kaha:“main meditation ke lie baahar gaya tha. har subah main running ke lie baahar jaata hoon. ”

yah jhooth ke roop mein nahin gina jaata tha, vah vaastav mein meditation ke lie nikalta tha.
"oh."

taang hao ne jada chan-been karne ke kosis nahi ki aur unhone kaha:
"aaj aap phir se phorjing ka abhyaas(hathode chalane ki practice) nahin karenge. taiyaar ho jaiye, kal Elder jack aapako nauding shahar le jaynge. ”

taang sain ek pal ke lia ruka pher,
"nauding shahar? dad par kyon? ”

aakhiree baar jab vah nuoding shahar gaya tha to lagabhag ek saal pahale tha. elder jack kuchh khareedaaree karane ke lie shahar mein gaya, aur use anubhav karane dene ke lie saath l gya thn. taang hao ne use ek nazar dekha, aur kaha:
"kya tum ek spirit master nahi banan cahte? Elder jack tumhe nauding city ke spirit master school mein l jaynge waha par tum jo caho wo seekh paoge..... ”

apane pita ke shabdon ko sunakar, taang sain kee nabj achaanak phail gaee, aur unhonne jo aashchary aur uttejana mahasoos kee, usase bolana mushkil ho gaya.

Mysterious heaven skill ko agle stage mein break karne m wo asamarth thn islia spirit ring hi ek rasta tha unke pass jo nauding city ke school m hi mil sakta tha usne pucha:
"Dad apne ek dum s apna man kasa badal lia?"

taang hao ek savaal karte hua kaha:
"kya aap abhee bhee jaana chaahate hain ya nahin?"

taang sain ne kaha:
"par agar mein chala gya to apke lia kahan kaun banayga?."

ab tak vah pahale se hee is kaaran ko samajh gaya tha ki usake pita ne subah-subah kyon uthe the; apratyaashit roop se, 2o gaanv ke elder jack s milne ke lie kiya gaya tha.

taang hao ne kaha:
“kya tumhe sachmein asa lagta hai ki mein apna kahayal nahi rakh sakta? Apna man aur dimag shant karke vaha jao yeh rasta tumne kudh chuna h. waha jane ke bad un baton ka dhyan rakhna aur jo karigari mane sikhayi hein, unka istaml kar waha kisi lohar(blacksmith) ka student ban jana, takki tum kudh apna kharcha nikalana seekh jao. Par waha jane s pahle tumhe mujhe kuch vadein(promise) aur karne padange ”

bhale hee taang hao ke shabd bahut udaaseen the, lekin taang sain kee aankhon ke kinaaron ko abhee bhee garm mahasoos hua. jo jaanata hai ki kitane maheenon ke lie, bhale hee taang hao ne use is tarah se vyavahaar kiya ki nishchit roop se kabhee nahin kia tha, lekin taang hao ne use faurjing sikhaee.

"me vaada karata hu." taang sain bina kisee jhijhak ke bole.

taang hao ne eye-brow upar karte hua kaha
“Arey, abhi to mane apko vada batya bhi nahi aur tum? ek mard hone ke naate , kabhi bhi apni juban ko jhuti mat hone dena ….Kabhi bhi apne vadein ko halke mein mat lena. Samjh gayee?. "

taang sain ne sahajata se baat kee:
“Mujhe yeh pata hai, ki jo bhi dad mujhse vada lange veh sab meri kudh ki safety k alia honge... ”

taang hao thoda ghabara gaya. taang sain bina soche-samajhe bole, lekin yah theek hai ki bharosa tha, jisase unakee bhaavanaon(feelings) mein thodee halachal huee.

"Badhiya, Mai cahata hoon ki tum mujhse vaada karo ki cahe tum kitni bhi training kar lo soul power k lia tum kabhi bhi ek bhi spirit ring apne hathode wali spirit mein add nahi karoge tum kabhi bhi apne hathode wali spirit soul dusro ko nahi dikahoge aur nahi unhe pata chalna doge… ki tumhare pass 2 martial soul hain… Vaada Karte ho?? ”

taang sain ek pal ke lie stabdh rah gaya,
"aur blue silver grass ka kya?"

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taang hao ne kaha:
“ Tum jitna chaho utna istemal kar sakte ho us apni blue silver grass wali soul ko Do(2) martial souls Jab tak tumhare pass kudh ki spirit rings hain, tabtak apni dono martial soul ki kabliyat aur taakat ek sath badha sakte ho..To kisi ki bat ko lekar yeh mat sochna ki meri ek masrtial soul kamzor reh jaygi ..”

taang sain ne kaha: "to doosare shabdon mein, mujhe ab sirf apni blue silver grass wali martial soul ka hi istemaal karna hain, hai na?"

taang hao sir hilaaya,:“jab tak tumhari jaan(life) p koi khatra nahi ata tab tak hathode ka istemal mat karna . ”

"Theek hai, main tumase vaada karata hoon." taang sain ne pooree tarah se sir hilaaya.

unake drshtikon se, ek spirit ki cultivation karana ya na karana, kuchh spirit ring ka upayog karana, yah sab koee samasya nahin thee, jab tak ki vah mysterious hevan skill ko agle stage mein break karne mein safal ho sakein.

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Anya(other) logon ko yah lag raha tha, shaayad blue silver grass keval ek useless spirit thee, lekin taang sain blue silver grass ke kaaran udaas nahin tha. taang sampradaay ke chhupe hue hathiyaaron ko ek nishchit star(level) tak le jaana, jab phool jhadate hain to pattee bhee chot kha sakatee hai kuchh khaalee shabd nahin the, lekin bas vaastav mein astitv mein the.

Blue silver grass vaastav mein Mysterious heaven skill ki intaranal force thee, jo spirit power ke maadhyam se sanghanit thee. jab tak aantarik bal(strength) paryaapt tha, vyaavahaarik roop se aseem(limitless) chhipe hue hathiyaar the.

"achchha, chalo khana khao." taang hao ne kaha.

 
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