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Fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota haiUpdate 14
besahaara se bahut alag ghar mein, taang sain ke paas taiyaaree ke lie kuchh bhee achchha nahin tha.
Kapadon ki packing khatam karne mein unhe ek pal laga. Jada kapde nahi thn unke pass.
haalaanki, is din unhonne taang hao kee baaton ko keval kram mein rakhane ke lie nahin suna; forging ki awaj abhee bhi unke kamre mein gunj rahi thn, wah abhi bhee hathoda chala rahein thn. bhavishy mein har tarah ke chhipe hue hathiyaar ka utpaadan karane mein saksham hone ke lie, taang sain ne samajha ki vah keval sab kuchh ke lie khud par nirbhar ho sakata hai.
yadyapi unake pita ne use forging technique sekhayee thn, lekin nishchit roop se ise aur adhik abhyaas mein laana aavashyak tha. jab chhipe hue hathiyaaron ke adviteey(unique) skill ko isake shikhar tak nahin pahunchaaya gaya tha, to chhipe hue hathiyaaron kee quality ka apana nirnaayak prabhaav tha. vishesh roop se Buddha Fury Tang Lotus jaise supar chhipe hue hathiyaar mein sabse takadwar mana jata hain.
subah-subah, taang sain ne pahaadee ke shikhar par ek badee chattaan ko dekha. apane haath mein unhonne ped kee pattiyon ko uthaaya, unakee aankhon mein ek bainganee chamak thee. yah nahin jaanate ki kya yah isalie tha kyonki haal hee mein unaka shareer pahale kee tulana mein adhik majaboot aur majaboot hua tha, lekin purple demon eye ki bahut tejee se unnati(progress) hua; unake haath mein patta(leaf), bhale hee vah sabase chhotee lines hon, vah unhen vishesh roop se dekh sakate the. vah jaanata tha ki usakee parpal demon eye pahale se hee bahut behatareen vivaran ke daayare mein pravesh karane lagee thee.
wo ghar ki aur chala gya.
(Purple demon eye:
The Purple Demon Eye is divided into 4 stages.
1. Survey
2. Detailed
3. Mustard Seed
4. Boundless
In Survey realm, tang sain apni vision power ko improve kar sakte thn aur use uska alag tareeke s vistaar bhi.
In Detailed realm(Dayarein), vision ko aur bhee behatar kiya ja sakta hain aur ek maanasik sthiti(mental state) pradaan kee jati hain jaha sab kuchh dheema ho jata hain, jise wo kam samay mein react kar sakte hain.
The Mustard Seed iski madad s wo apni as pass ki surroundings ko control kar sakte hain, aur kuch bhi dakh sakte hain jasa ki mosquito ya makhee ke panhk(wings) ko bhi move karte hua.
)
gaanv se jaane se pahale, apane pita ke lie khana banana yah aakhiree baar tha, isalie taang sain svaabhaavik roop se aalasee nahin ho sakate the.
stove ke neeche jalee lakadee kee jaanch karana, khane par thoda paanee jodana, is prakaar jab usake pita baad mein uthate hain to vah garm khana kha sakata hai.
Elder jack pahale hee aa chuka tha. shaayad isalie ki vah nuoding shahar ke lie jaana chaahata tha, aaj jo kapade elder jack pahane hue the, vishesh roop se nae the, jisase vah aur bhee adhik aakarshak lag rahe the.
Elder jack na kaha:
“Little sain, kya ap tayar hain”
taang sain ne jack ke nirdeshan mein ek chuppi ka ishara kiya,
“Elder jack , krpaya shaant rahen. Dad uth jaynge. ”
bolate samay, unhonne choolhe(stove) se jale hue chaarakol ka ek hissa nikaala aur jameen par kuch linenen likheen.
vah phir se apane pita ke kamare kee or muda, bag lene ke lie anichchhuk, aur usake baad usane apanee peeth(back) par ek kapada baandh liya aur chupachaap jack ke saath nikal gaya.
is duniya kee likhit(written) bhaasha(language) ke baare mein, taang sain ko jyaada samajh nahin thee. jab gaanv ke scool mein bachchon ke charitron(character) ko padhaaya jaata tha, to vah ek baar dekhane gaye thn. aakhirakaar unake paas apane poorv jeevan se ek aadhaar tha, isalie unhonne basic texts ko bhee thoda samajh liya.
daravaaje ka parda utha, aur kamare se ek badee parachhaee nikalee. taang hao kee aankhon mein neend ka koee nishaan nahin tha. jab vah chaukhat(doorway) par chala gaya, tab wo tang sain aue ledr jack ko jate hua dekh sakta tha.
taang hao vaheen khada tha aur jab taang sain aur gaanv ke elder jack uski ankhon ek puri tarah se dur chalein gaye, tab bhee vah kaaphee der tak vaheen khada raha.
jaise ki kuchh yaad karate hue, taang hao achaanak se ghar mein vaapas aa gaya, tang sain ke likhe hua lines ko usne dekha.
kuchh bahut hee saral shabd,
“dad, main elder jack k sath jar aha hun . APna Dhyan Rakhna, khana plate mein rakha , khaane ke lie mat bhoolana. "
jameen par lekhan se disha badalakar lohe ke khaana pakaane vaale bartan kee taraph, taang hao ne tejee se kadam badhaaya aur ek haindal se bartan ke dhakkan ko khol diya. donon haathon se usane seedhe lohe ke bartan ko utha liya.
road par chalate hue, taang sain chupachaap elder jack kee or se peechha karata hai, aksar gaanv kee disha mein dekhane ke lie apana sir ghumaata hai.
"little sain, ap dukhi kyun hain ganv chod ke janee ki vajah s ya apne piyakad dad ko chode ke jane ki wajah s?"
jack ne taang sain ke sir ko thapathapaaya, aur muskaraate hue poochha.
Tang sain ne dhimmi awaj me kaha:
“Dono wajah s”
Tang sain ne elder jack s pucha:
“Elder Jack, Mujhe us school ke barein mein aur batao na? kis tarah ki jagah h wo? ”
Elder jack ne halka haste hua kaha:
“academy beshak padhaee ke lie ek jagah hai. haalaanki main kabhee nahin gaya, lekin adhikaansh bhaag ke lie main abhee bhee samajhata hoon. hamaare gaanv mein har saal ek kaam karane vaale student ko bhejane ke lie ek quota hai, lekin ham pahale se hee kaee varshon se kaamakaajee(working) student ko padhane ke lie nahin bhejate hain. kaamakaajee students ke bahut benefits hain:, tutuion aur accommodation(rahna k lia ’hostel’) se chhoot(free); keval bhojan ke lie bhugataan(pay) karana hee paryaapt hai. campus mein aap khane ke badale mein saral kaary(work) kar sakate hain. udaaharan ke lie, classroom ko saph karna, kul milaakar, ek student ke lie jo anshakaalik kaam(part time work) kar raha hai aur academy mein study kar raha hai, yah muft hone se bahut alag nahin hai. academy mein study ke lie funding ke roop mein, yah aisa kuchh nahin hai jise ham gareeb log sahan karane mein saksham ho sakate hain.”
Tang sain n kaha:
“dad ne mujhse kaha tha ki main ek lohar(blacksmith) ki dukan dundhun aur waha kam karun academy pahuchne ke bad”
“Usne tumse yeh sab karne ko kaha?!! Mujhe lagta hain tang hao vastav main pagal hain”
Elder Jack ne gusse main kaha.
“tumhari abhi kitni umar hain?Tumhe thik s abhi hathoda pakadna nahi ata hoga!! Tumhe bas academy mein apne padhai pe dhyan dena hai Par dekha jay agar tum academy main ache number s pass hua toh tum apne dad ke lia kuch pasia ka intzam kar dena unka khayal rakhne ke lia…Wasa bhi academy pahucne ke bad tumhe jadatar saman ki jarurat nahi hogi…Par tumhe bahut sara paisa chaiye hoga Spirit master college mein jane k lia..”
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Update 15
Tang sain ne jack ke aur dekha aur kaha:
“TO kya waha ache teacher bhi honge?”
Jack ne haste hua kaha:
“Bilkul hain”
Ase hi raste bhar bat karte karte wo dono nauding city pauch gy thn.
Nauding city pauch ke elder jack ne tang sain s kaha:
“little sain, Ek baar main tumhe academy tak le jaunga pher main ghar chala jaunga…jab tum academy mein honghe to ek bat hamesha yad rakhna apne teacher ki har bat manni hain..tumhe bina unki permission ke academy ke bahar nahi jana h..mein tumhe aka le jaunga jab tumahara semester khatam ho jayga…”
Yeh pahli bar tha jab tang sain ne ghar choda tha, islia uske dil mein abhi bhee kahin ghabraahat thn.. usne jack s pucha:
“ Huh? Grandpa ap itni jaldi ghar wapas chale jaoge?!”
Elder jack ne smile karte hua kaha:
“ Hum jasa gareeb log hotel mein nahi ruk sakte. Jab grandpa apko agli bar dakhange, to mujhe umeed h ki ap ek spirit master ban chuke honge, jab ap wapas ganv jayange tb log apki izzat karange.”
Nuoding primary spirit master academy wese nauding city mein sthith hain. Elder jack ne raahageeron se kaee baar disha-nirdesh maange, aur lambe samay ke bad wo tang sain ke sath waha pauch gaye.
Wo dono nauding academy ke gate ke samne kadhe thn.
Dhanushaakaar(arched type) gate ke beech mein chaar bade paatr(charcter) the, "Nauding Academy".
Wo dono gate ke pass pahuche. Lekin gatekeeper ne turant use rok lia:
“Eh? Kya chaiye? Yeh koi asi wasi jagah nahi hain jaha beekharee(beggars) a sakein?”
Elder jack ko holy spirit village mein ujjawal aur nay ke roop mein gina jata tha. Lekin naudung city mein ake, ye bilkul badal gaya tha, gatekeeper kee ankhon mein disdainful(घमण्डी) look thn.
Elder jack ne haske maffi mangte hua kaha:
“Hello, hum spirit ganv se aye hain ,yeh bacha is sal hamare ganv ki taraf se working student hain, kya tum humein bata sakte ho ki registration ki samay kitna bacha hua hai?”
Gatekeeper badhak gya, aur kaha:
“Mazak kar rahe ho kya? Kya chote s ganv ke full soul power wala baccha? Kayi salon se koi part time working student yaha nahi aya hain ..Mujhe tum log fraud lagte ho…”
Elder jack ke cahare(face) pe gussa tha, unhone spirit hall certificate gate keeper ko dikhate hua kaha:
“yeh hai wo certificate jo master sam ne banaya hain spirit temple se ”
Gatekeeper ne certificate lete hua kaha:
“Martial soul blue silver grass, but full soul power ke sath paida hua hai yeh? Ha.. kya majak hai mein yaha 4 sal s naukari kar raha hoon! Aur maine aj tak koi aisa bacha na to dekha hai na hi uske barein me suna hai!! Mujhe to lagta hain yeh certificate bhi nakli ha, na?”
Elder jack ne gusse mein bola:
“Tum bas haemin andar jane dena nahi cahate! Mein abhi jaake kisis master se tumhari complain karta hoon. Tnag sain chalo chalein!!”
Gatekeeper ne haste hua kaha:
“Holy spirit Villaga? Mujhe lagta hain yeh kisis beekhari ganv ke sman hona chaiyee…”
“Kya kaha tumne?”
Elder jack ne ghumte hua bahut gusse mein kaha.
Ek pal elder jack ke gusee ko dakhte hua gate keeper dar gya lekin pher sambhalte hua kaha:
“Kya? Yakin nahi hua kya…hahaha..mane kaha tum beekhari ganv se ay ho. Tang sain ko dekhte hua, iske kapde dakho, mujhe lagta h ap bheek mangne ke lia koi jagah dundh rahe hain , no? hamari nauding academy koi charity nahi hai. Bhaag jao yaha se”
Bolte smay gatekeeper ne haath uthake elder jack ko peeche ki taraf dhakel dia..
Tang sain se ye dacha nahi usne apni inner strength use karte hua apne palm se gatekeeper ko dakhel dia wo dur jake ground pe gira..
Gatekeeper uth te hua kaha:
“tumhari himmat kasa hui?”
Apne ap ko bache se dakhel jane ke bad ..gatekeepr gusse se utha aga badha hi tha ki…
“Thik hai, bs bahut hua”
tabhee getakeepar kee harakat ko rokate hue, balki ek karkash aavaaj goonj uthee.
Gatekeeper pahle to ek pal ke lia chakra gya. phir turant peechha karate hue, usake poore chehare par gussa achaanak aag mein badal gaya. parivartan itanee jaldee tha, yah kalpana karana mushkil tha. Usne jhukte hua greeting karte hua kaha:
“Grandmaster, aap wapis a gay!”
taang sain ne apana sir mudane ke lie dekha: ek ausat(average) aakrti(figure), kuchh had tak patala dikhane vaala vyakti pahale se hee unake paksh mein tha. aisa lagata hai, yah vyakti chaalees se pachaas saal ka dikh raha hai, chhote kaale baal hain, bahut hee saadhaaran dikhate hain, donon haath usakee peeth ke peechhe. unake shareer mein ek tarah ka ajeebogareeb tareeka tha,donon aankhen aadhee khulee hone ke kaaran vah thoda sust aur vivaadit(उदास) lag raha tha.
‘Grandmaster’ ne keval getakeepar kee taraph dekha, bina kisee notice ke, elder jack kee or ishaara karate hue kaha:
"Sir, kya mein apka spirit hall certificate dekh sakta hun?”
Elder jack aakhir ek gaanv ka bujurg tha aur abhee bhee ek vyakti ke mood ko padh sakata tha. Gate keeper kee expression se vah dekh sakata tha ki is madhyam aayu varg ke vyakti ko is academy mein bilkul ucha sthan dia gya tha aur sath mein grandmaster ka title.
graindamaastar ne certificate ko dekha, usakee nigaah phir se taang sain par ja rahee thee,wo use oopar aur neeche maap raha tha.
kisee kaaran se, haalaanki graindamaastar kee nigaahen nishchit roop se tej nahin theen, taang sain ko aisa lag raha tha jaise yah pooree tarah se unake maadhyam se dekha gaya ho.
Grand master ne kaha:
“yeh certificate asli hai! Sir, hamari academy ki taraf se iske lia main maffi chahaunga, ab ap yeh ladka mujhe sambhalne dijiye. "
jab ek spirit master star(level) ke vyakti ne usake prati maaphee maangee, to elder jack kee ghamand ko bahut badhaava mila, aur usane jhat se donon haath hilaakar kaha:
“Nahi koi bat nahi.. hamari bhi galti thn..To mein yeh ladka apke bharose chhodta hoon tang sain grand master ki har bat man na aur acche bache banker rehna..”
taang sain ne sir hilaaya, lekin munh nahin khola.
(
New Character Intro: main character
name: Jhon
rank 30
title: Spirit Grandmaster
no. of spirit rings: 2
)
Tang sain ne jack ke aur dekha aur kaha:
“TO kya waha ache teacher bhi honge?”
Jack ne haste hua kaha:
“Bilkul hain”
Ase hi raste bhar bat karte karte wo dono nauding city pauch gy thn.
Nauding city pauch ke elder jack ne tang sain s kaha:
“little sain, Ek baar main tumhe academy tak le jaunga pher main ghar chala jaunga…jab tum academy mein honghe to ek bat hamesha yad rakhna apne teacher ki har bat manni hain..tumhe bina unki permission ke academy ke bahar nahi jana h..mein tumhe aka le jaunga jab tumahara semester khatam ho jayga…”
Yeh pahli bar tha jab tang sain ne ghar choda tha, islia uske dil mein abhi bhee kahin ghabraahat thn.. usne jack s pucha:
“ Huh? Grandpa ap itni jaldi ghar wapas chale jaoge?!”
Elder jack ne smile karte hua kaha:
“ Hum jasa gareeb log hotel mein nahi ruk sakte. Jab grandpa apko agli bar dakhange, to mujhe umeed h ki ap ek spirit master ban chuke honge, jab ap wapas ganv jayange tb log apki izzat karange.”
Nuoding primary spirit master academy wese nauding city mein sthith hain. Elder jack ne raahageeron se kaee baar disha-nirdesh maange, aur lambe samay ke bad wo tang sain ke sath waha pauch gaye.
Wo dono nauding academy ke gate ke samne kadhe thn.
Dhanushaakaar(arched type) gate ke beech mein chaar bade paatr(charcter) the, "Nauding Academy".
Wo dono gate ke pass pahuche. Lekin gatekeeper ne turant use rok lia:
“Eh? Kya chaiye? Yeh koi asi wasi jagah nahi hain jaha beekharee(beggars) a sakein?”
Elder jack ko holy spirit village mein ujjawal aur nay ke roop mein gina jata tha. Lekin naudung city mein ake, ye bilkul badal gaya tha, gatekeeper kee ankhon mein disdainful(घमण्डी) look thn.
Elder jack ne haske maffi mangte hua kaha:
“Hello, hum spirit ganv se aye hain ,yeh bacha is sal hamare ganv ki taraf se working student hain, kya tum humein bata sakte ho ki registration ki samay kitna bacha hua hai?”
Gatekeeper badhak gya, aur kaha:
“Mazak kar rahe ho kya? Kya chote s ganv ke full soul power wala baccha? Kayi salon se koi part time working student yaha nahi aya hain ..Mujhe tum log fraud lagte ho…”
Elder jack ke cahare(face) pe gussa tha, unhone spirit hall certificate gate keeper ko dikhate hua kaha:
“yeh hai wo certificate jo master sam ne banaya hain spirit temple se ”
Gatekeeper ne certificate lete hua kaha:
“Martial soul blue silver grass, but full soul power ke sath paida hua hai yeh? Ha.. kya majak hai mein yaha 4 sal s naukari kar raha hoon! Aur maine aj tak koi aisa bacha na to dekha hai na hi uske barein me suna hai!! Mujhe to lagta hain yeh certificate bhi nakli ha, na?”
Elder jack ne gusse mein bola:
“Tum bas haemin andar jane dena nahi cahate! Mein abhi jaake kisis master se tumhari complain karta hoon. Tnag sain chalo chalein!!”
Gatekeeper ne haste hua kaha:
“Holy spirit Villaga? Mujhe lagta hain yeh kisis beekhari ganv ke sman hona chaiyee…”
“Kya kaha tumne?”
Elder jack ne ghumte hua bahut gusse mein kaha.
Ek pal elder jack ke gusee ko dakhte hua gate keeper dar gya lekin pher sambhalte hua kaha:
“Kya? Yakin nahi hua kya…hahaha..mane kaha tum beekhari ganv se ay ho. Tang sain ko dekhte hua, iske kapde dakho, mujhe lagta h ap bheek mangne ke lia koi jagah dundh rahe hain , no? hamari nauding academy koi charity nahi hai. Bhaag jao yaha se”
Bolte smay gatekeeper ne haath uthake elder jack ko peeche ki taraf dhakel dia..
Tang sain se ye dacha nahi usne apni inner strength use karte hua apne palm se gatekeeper ko dakhel dia wo dur jake ground pe gira..
Gatekeeper uth te hua kaha:
“tumhari himmat kasa hui?”
Apne ap ko bache se dakhel jane ke bad ..gatekeepr gusse se utha aga badha hi tha ki…
“Thik hai, bs bahut hua”
tabhee getakeepar kee harakat ko rokate hue, balki ek karkash aavaaj goonj uthee.
Gatekeeper pahle to ek pal ke lia chakra gya. phir turant peechha karate hue, usake poore chehare par gussa achaanak aag mein badal gaya. parivartan itanee jaldee tha, yah kalpana karana mushkil tha. Usne jhukte hua greeting karte hua kaha:
“Grandmaster, aap wapis a gay!”
taang sain ne apana sir mudane ke lie dekha: ek ausat(average) aakrti(figure), kuchh had tak patala dikhane vaala vyakti pahale se hee unake paksh mein tha. aisa lagata hai, yah vyakti chaalees se pachaas saal ka dikh raha hai, chhote kaale baal hain, bahut hee saadhaaran dikhate hain, donon haath usakee peeth ke peechhe. unake shareer mein ek tarah ka ajeebogareeb tareeka tha,donon aankhen aadhee khulee hone ke kaaran vah thoda sust aur vivaadit(उदास) lag raha tha.
‘Grandmaster’ ne keval getakeepar kee taraph dekha, bina kisee notice ke, elder jack kee or ishaara karate hue kaha:
"Sir, kya mein apka spirit hall certificate dekh sakta hun?”
Elder jack aakhir ek gaanv ka bujurg tha aur abhee bhee ek vyakti ke mood ko padh sakata tha. Gate keeper kee expression se vah dekh sakata tha ki is madhyam aayu varg ke vyakti ko is academy mein bilkul ucha sthan dia gya tha aur sath mein grandmaster ka title.
graindamaastar ne certificate ko dekha, usakee nigaah phir se taang sain par ja rahee thee,wo use oopar aur neeche maap raha tha.
kisee kaaran se, haalaanki graindamaastar kee nigaahen nishchit roop se tej nahin theen, taang sain ko aisa lag raha tha jaise yah pooree tarah se unake maadhyam se dekha gaya ho.
Grand master ne kaha:
“yeh certificate asli hai! Sir, hamari academy ki taraf se iske lia main maffi chahaunga, ab ap yeh ladka mujhe sambhalne dijiye. "
jab ek spirit master star(level) ke vyakti ne usake prati maaphee maangee, to elder jack kee ghamand ko bahut badhaava mila, aur usane jhat se donon haath hilaakar kaha:
“Nahi koi bat nahi.. hamari bhi galti thn..To mein yeh ladka apke bharose chhodta hoon tang sain grand master ki har bat man na aur acche bache banker rehna..”
taang sain ne sir hilaaya, lekin munh nahin khola.
(
New Character Intro: main character
name: Jhon
rank 30
title: Spirit Grandmaster
no. of spirit rings: 2
)
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Fantastic update bhaiUpdate 15
Tang sain ne jack ke aur dekha aur kaha:
“TO kya waha ache teacher bhi honge?”
Jack ne haste hua kaha:
“Bilkul hain”
Ase hi raste bhar bat karte karte wo dono nauding city pauch gy thn.
Nauding city pauch ke elder jack ne tang sain s kaha:
“little sain, Ek baar main tumhe academy tak le jaunga pher main ghar chala jaunga…jab tum academy mein honghe to ek bat hamesha yad rakhna apne teacher ki har bat manni hain..tumhe bina unki permission ke academy ke bahar nahi jana h..mein tumhe aka le jaunga jab tumahara semester khatam ho jayga…”
Yeh pahli bar tha jab tang sain ne ghar choda tha, islia uske dil mein abhi bhee kahin ghabraahat thn.. usne jack s pucha:
“ Huh? Grandpa ap itni jaldi ghar wapas chale jaoge?!”
Elder jack ne smile karte hua kaha:
“ Hum jasa gareeb log hotel mein nahi ruk sakte. Jab grandpa apko agli bar dakhange, to mujhe umeed h ki ap ek spirit master ban chuke honge, jab ap wapas ganv jayange tb log apki izzat karange.”
Nuoding primary spirit master academy wese nauding city mein sthith hain. Elder jack ne raahageeron se kaee baar disha-nirdesh maange, aur lambe samay ke bad wo tang sain ke sath waha pauch gaye.
Wo dono nauding academy ke gate ke samne kadhe thn.
Dhanushaakaar(arched type) gate ke beech mein chaar bade paatr(charcter) the, "Nauding Academy".
Wo dono gate ke pass pahuche. Lekin gatekeeper ne turant use rok lia:
“Eh? Kya chaiye? Yeh koi asi wasi jagah nahi hain jaha beekharee(beggars) a sakein?”
Elder jack ko holy spirit village mein ujjawal aur nay ke roop mein gina jata tha. Lekin naudung city mein ake, ye bilkul badal gaya tha, gatekeeper kee ankhon mein disdainful(घमण्डी) look thn.
Elder jack ne haske maffi mangte hua kaha:
“Hello, hum spirit ganv se aye hain ,yeh bacha is sal hamare ganv ki taraf se working student hain, kya tum humein bata sakte ho ki registration ki samay kitna bacha hua hai?”
Gatekeeper badhak gya, aur kaha:
“Mazak kar rahe ho kya? Kya chote s ganv ke full soul power wala baccha? Kayi salon se koi part time working student yaha nahi aya hain ..Mujhe tum log fraud lagte ho…”
Elder jack ke cahare(face) pe gussa tha, unhone spirit hall certificate gate keeper ko dikhate hua kaha:
“yeh hai wo certificate jo master sam ne banaya hain spirit temple se ”
Gatekeeper ne certificate lete hua kaha:
“Martial soul blue silver grass, but full soul power ke sath paida hua hai yeh? Ha.. kya majak hai mein yaha 4 sal s naukari kar raha hoon! Aur maine aj tak koi aisa bacha na to dekha hai na hi uske barein me suna hai!! Mujhe to lagta hain yeh certificate bhi nakli ha, na?”
Elder jack ne gusse mein bola:
“Tum bas haemin andar jane dena nahi cahate! Mein abhi jaake kisis master se tumhari complain karta hoon. Tnag sain chalo chalein!!”
Gatekeeper ne haste hua kaha:
“Holy spirit Villaga? Mujhe lagta hain yeh kisis beekhari ganv ke sman hona chaiyee…”
“Kya kaha tumne?”
Elder jack ne ghumte hua bahut gusse mein kaha.
Ek pal elder jack ke gusee ko dakhte hua gate keeper dar gya lekin pher sambhalte hua kaha:
“Kya? Yakin nahi hua kya…hahaha..mane kaha tum beekhari ganv se ay ho. Tang sain ko dekhte hua, iske kapde dakho, mujhe lagta h ap bheek mangne ke lia koi jagah dundh rahe hain , no? hamari nauding academy koi charity nahi hai. Bhaag jao yaha se”
Bolte smay gatekeeper ne haath uthake elder jack ko peeche ki taraf dhakel dia..
Tang sain se ye dacha nahi usne apni inner strength use karte hua apne palm se gatekeeper ko dakhel dia wo dur jake ground pe gira..
Gatekeeper uth te hua kaha:
“tumhari himmat kasa hui?”
Apne ap ko bache se dakhel jane ke bad ..gatekeepr gusse se utha aga badha hi tha ki…
“Thik hai, bs bahut hua”
tabhee getakeepar kee harakat ko rokate hue, balki ek karkash aavaaj goonj uthee.
Gatekeeper pahle to ek pal ke lia chakra gya. phir turant peechha karate hue, usake poore chehare par gussa achaanak aag mein badal gaya. parivartan itanee jaldee tha, yah kalpana karana mushkil tha. Usne jhukte hua greeting karte hua kaha:
“Grandmaster, aap wapis a gay!”
taang sain ne apana sir mudane ke lie dekha: ek ausat(average) aakrti(figure), kuchh had tak patala dikhane vaala vyakti pahale se hee unake paksh mein tha. aisa lagata hai, yah vyakti chaalees se pachaas saal ka dikh raha hai, chhote kaale baal hain, bahut hee saadhaaran dikhate hain, donon haath usakee peeth ke peechhe. unake shareer mein ek tarah ka ajeebogareeb tareeka tha,donon aankhen aadhee khulee hone ke kaaran vah thoda sust aur vivaadit(उदास) lag raha tha.
‘Grandmaster’ ne keval getakeepar kee taraph dekha, bina kisee notice ke, elder jack kee or ishaara karate hue kaha:
"Sir, kya mein apka spirit hall certificate dekh sakta hun?”
Elder jack aakhir ek gaanv ka bujurg tha aur abhee bhee ek vyakti ke mood ko padh sakata tha. Gate keeper kee expression se vah dekh sakata tha ki is madhyam aayu varg ke vyakti ko is academy mein bilkul ucha sthan dia gya tha aur sath mein grandmaster ka title.
graindamaastar ne certificate ko dekha, usakee nigaah phir se taang sain par ja rahee thee,wo use oopar aur neeche maap raha tha.
kisee kaaran se, haalaanki graindamaastar kee nigaahen nishchit roop se tej nahin theen, taang sain ko aisa lag raha tha jaise yah pooree tarah se unake maadhyam se dekha gaya ho.
Grand master ne kaha:
“yeh certificate asli hai! Sir, hamari academy ki taraf se iske lia main maffi chahaunga, ab ap yeh ladka mujhe sambhalne dijiye. "
jab ek spirit master star(level) ke vyakti ne usake prati maaphee maangee, to elder jack kee ghamand ko bahut badhaava mila, aur usane jhat se donon haath hilaakar kaha:
“Nahi koi bat nahi.. hamari bhi galti thn..To mein yeh ladka apke bharose chhodta hoon tang sain grand master ki har bat man na aur acche bache banker rehna..”
taang sain ne sir hilaaya, lekin munh nahin khola.
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New Character Intro: main character
name: Jhon
rank 30
title: Spirit Grandmaster
no. of spirit rings: 2
)